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Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2011 04:48 AM · On: North of Heaven
nooooo...this is wrong
Author's Response: Oh, and it gets so much better! (More wrong? Whichever...)
Reviewer: shadowbride (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 05:24 AM · On: North of Heaven
It could only be Bella!!!!!!
Oh crap.....a hundred years of torment and she`s shacked up with Jasper! That must hurt! No wonder Alice had gone nuts! So will Edward return and fight? Does he really stand a chance against Jasper? Will that send Edward over the egde...down the precipice and into the firiery pits...mmmmmm
Looking forward to the next update....once again...this is a great story....I wish more people would review and rec it!
Author's Response: Oh, don't blame poor Jasper. (I actually have a slight crush on him.) But yes, it did drive Alice mad. More on that next chapter.
And even if no one else writes a review, I will continue to write this story for you...and the three or four other regular readers...and my sanity. :-)
Reviewer: 1joy13 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 03:53 PM · On: The Silent Pipes
I soooo love this story! Can't wait for more. It's a very interesting premise.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 08:28 AM · On: The Silent Pipes
hooked but please let Bella be alive (vamp)
Author's Response: See new chapter. :-)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 08:25 AM · On: Chasing a Butterfly
Great writting. Great chapter.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 08:22 AM · On: Just Like a Crow
Great twist with Alice
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 08:17 AM · On: Beyond Dreams
really like this!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 08:12 AM · On: The Sweet Drink of Life: Part Two
Jake always ruins everything.
Good story
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 08:10 AM · On: The Sweet Drink of Life
great job
Reviewer: shadowbride (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 05:45 AM · On: The Silent Pipes
wonderful and sad. I so love this story. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for sticking around.
Reviewer: Nekabie (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 11:43 PM · On: The Silent Pipes
This is a wickedly delicous tale! I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for the read.
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 06:27 PM · On: A Hundred Years to Live
I am sending this review without having read a line of the story, because I have two preliminary questions.
First. (the most important). In describing the world 100 hundreds yeard from now did you consider how would the world chave hanged in such a long time? I am rather old and not a hundred, but just 40 years ago, I did not have a credit card, a cell phone and a lap top, just to name 3 things that have changed my life a LOT. Not to speak of the changes in world politics... It really annoys me deeply when authors set the story decades in the future, but the world has not changed a bit from Twilight. If, on the contrary, you considered it (thus inserting Sci Fi elements), I would be most interested in reading.
The second question is about a HEA. You say there will be one. With Bella who has been changed, with somebody who is her descendant, with somebody else? I am a E&B person, but I can stand a different HEA for Edward, only I need to prepare myself. If you don't want to post public spoilers you can PM me trough my profile, here or on ff net (I am Camilla10 there).
Thanks a lot
Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 12:31 PM · On: Chasing a Butterfly
uuuggghhh....finish...more please!
Author's Response: I will! I'm just healing up from a rapid infection, but I hope to submit the next two chapters within the next week or so.
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 04:19 AM · On: Chasing a Butterfly
yes i'm sad alice is gone. I've never seen that in a story before. However all I can think about is what happened between her and Jasper? Where did he go?? That's just weird. I could see rose and emmet breaking up b4 alice and jasper. There's a lot of uncovered dirt here.
Author's Response: Her hurt runs deep, and does her feelings of betrayal. She just can't get over what happened. You might not be able to, either.
But don't worry...you'll find out before long.
Reviewer: shadowbride (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 07:07 AM · On: Chasing a Butterfly
Oh God. So sad.
Where does the verse, `" I took all your pictures...."` come from? It`s haunting.
Author's Response: Those are the opening lines to Shinedown's "The Crow and the Butterfly." Haunting song in general.
Reviewer: 1joy13 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 10:34 AM · On: Chasing a Butterfly
I completely love this story! It's delightful in a dark way, and insanely fresh! We know that vampires are tortured souls, wandering, alone. Poor, sad Alice. I'm trusting the rule that allows one to bring them bad from the dead if it's believable! I believe! I believe! I know you'll satisfy our sense of right one day. I trust you. And I love your story!
Author's Response: Your comment reminds me of the old Mary Martin version of Peter Pan where she asks the audience to clap their hands and say "I do believe in fairies!" (Good memories!) Although I'm not sure you should trust me. I'm not Mary Martin. :-)
Reviewer: Bleeding_Mascara_Tears (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 01:39 PM · On: Chasing a Butterfly
You know what...I teared up there at the end...I RARELY ever do that....great chappie!
Author's Response: Thank you. Your tears bring me honour.
Reviewer: 1joy13 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Just Like a Crow
I love it! I feel like a child clapping my hands!
Author's Response: Wow...Alice attacks Edward, and you clap your hands?
I thought I was the only warped one around here. :-)
Reviewer: shadowbride (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 07:42 AM · On: Just Like a Crow
WOW. That was completly unexpected!....Alice gone all mad again.
This story is why fanfiction should come with a health warning...." warning; this product is addictive".
Reading this has cheered me up, I`d had such a rubbish day; now Edwards brooding and self loathing has cheered me up no end - bizarre or what!
Author's Response: I hope you enjoyed the irony! When I thought of Alice, it was the only way I knew to reintroduce her...completely mad.
Fanfic always cheers me up. Reading (and writing) it serves as an escape. It surely brightens up my day!
Reviewer: 1joy13 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2011 02:47 PM · On: Beyond Dreams
OMG! I cannot believe there is no more for the moment! It's like having only one bite of chocolate and being ravenous for more. I cannot wait for an update! This story is well written and wonderful. But, poor Edward!
Author's Response: Aye...poor, sweet Edward.
Another chapter is already in the queue. You won't wait long, my dear.
Reviewer: 1joy13 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2011 02:31 PM · On: The Sweet Drink of Life: Part Two
This story is by far the most imteresting I've read in a while. Poor Edward, we all feel his torment.
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 01:35 PM · On: Beyond Dreams
Bella???.....can't wait 4 the update!!!
Author's Response: Oh, the update is coming...soon.
I just have to finishing writing one!
Reviewer: shadowbride (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 02:55 AM · On: Beyond Dreams
another update! :) Oh you do treat your readers well :)
"silence a problem". Oh how many ways this could be read..."literally"?, "turn of phrase"?
Curious about Bella....So he didn`t hear her last heartbeat then?
Shadowbride.
Author's Response: Oh, the twisted web we weave!
And your final assumption may be correct.
Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 09:05 AM · On: Beyond Dreams
I was hoping that Bella was alive...somwhere, somehow. I guess not! Poor Edward - what a crappy situation to be in with the Volturri & no family!
Author's Response:
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 09:01 AM · On: The Sweet Drink of Life: Part Two
Love the diary entries! Poor Edward; still in pain after all these years!
Author's Response: Bella...alive? Naw...not "alive."
But then again, if we carry people around in our minds, they never truly die.
So...perhaps?
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