What was Edward seeing? Didyme's murder at Aro's hand? Will he try to get Marcus on their side?

hhmmmmm.  interesting.

Maybe....i think it needs a Edward POV!  Good story so far- I had to remember what the story was about...it's been awhile :)  Good Story though!

Author's Response:

Thanks.

Great chapter--you should be proud of this one.  I particularly enjoyed Alice's POV and her insecurity and jealousy over Maria. 

Hell, yes, I think you can do an Edward POV for Twilight--go for it!!

Author's Response:

thanks. i've already got "the hunt" and "goodbyes" done. i don't think i'll start posting it until this one is finished, though.

So good. I'm so anxious for whattever comes next. I feel all knotty inside.

 

~Mia

I am excited about the new things in this chapter and of course relieved that Bella and Edward have reconciled...as for Edwards POV...I always love it =o) Thanks for your hard work!

I love that you used that bit of a poem. Perfectly tacticianly.

 

~Mia

HOLY CRAP!! Die to Self has to have been one of my favorite fanfics ever. I just finished the whole thing yesterday afternoon. I read If All Were As It Should Be and now reading this, I am really starting to understand your pull towards sadism. Although frustrating at first, it ultimately gives the story a much better kick. I really think you are very talented in writing, especially for your age. I will continue reading your stories. :)

Love it!  I hate seeing Bella and Edward argue, but you know, no couple has it perfect all the time.  Well done!

I'd be happy to make you a banner if you like!  Just PM me on the forum with any ideas you have in mind!

I like this story and am really looking forward to seeing everything play out!

This line got a reaction out of me: "I said all sorts of terrible things, and I don't regret it."

Even if you think you're right about something, it's shouldn't be okay in a mature relationship to say anything you want without regard for your partner's feelings.  Edward was being stubborn and close-minded, but it came from an honest place of love and concern for his partner.  It doesn't seem okay for Bella to act just as immature as Edward did, and without regret.

I'm looking forward to the two of them having an honest and mature conversation about this and growing together.  Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I really appreciate your input. But we have to remember that mentally, Edward is a seventeen-year-old boy, albeit a very mature one, and Bella is an eighteen-year-old girl. We love them both to death, but shit happens, dearie. I do agree with you, and I wasn't sure I could make it work.

Oh, love the new developement!!!  I am anxious to see what happens next! Keep up the fabulous work!!! =o)

Great chapter.  I think you're doing a terrific job with this fic.  I liked the different POVs, and especially enjoyed Bella's enjoyment of the sun making her skin sparkle, and Edward's views of himself changing as he observes Bella as a vampire.  I liked the Bella/Irina encounter a lot--how Bella empathized with Irina on her loss even though Laurent had wanted to kill her, and her kindness and restraint.  Can't wait for more!