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Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 02:54 PM · On: Edward Comes Around

How is it this fic has only 16...well now 17, reviews? Great job Laurel. I love how awkward you made Edward, makes the story more real if he doesn't walk on water right off the bat. Make him earn his godlike status! Can't wait for your next chapter!

Reviewer: Eddielover (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 02:33 PM · On: Jessica Demands Details

I love this!! Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!! 

Author's Response:

Thanks! Next one is extra-long.

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2012 10:25 AM · On: Zesty

Glad to see they're makinf progress. I love Charlie

Author's Response:


Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2012 04:56 PM · On: Ditching gym again

It will be interesting to see how their relationship goes

Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 11:27 AM · On: Violence

That was awesome! Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks! Just submitted another chappie, waiting for me beta!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 01:14 PM · On: La Push

i wonder if edward will throw caution to the wind and be bellas boyfriend? or will he go all utah on her and stay super far away?

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2011 07:40 AM · On: Tyler Issues

will tyler get the hint that his advances are unwanted? so bella and edward have a connection..... i think they're cute!

Author's Response:

Just like in the book, it'll take a while.

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2011 05:14 PM · On: What's Up Doc?

i think that would have been worse! im glad that everything is starting to look up for bella

Author's Response:

Things will be going up and down, of course. Just wait....

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 04:32 PM · On: No Mushroom Ravioli

i wonder if alice can find bella a slammin dress? and that edward stops being repressed and get with bella!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 12:02 PM · On: Balls

im sorry about your phone! i had to get a new one too! and i think that no matter what edward should at least get to know bella!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 01:28 PM · On: Girl Time

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Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 11:36 AM · On: Girl Time

so where is edward during all of this? is he hiding? and im sure that alice will be fine without jasper!

Author's Response:

Heh. Hope you enjoyed the newest chapter!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 09:06 AM · On: Alice Comes Around

is edward going to find out about the tyler thing and freak out? and maybe not let alice hang out with bella anymore?

Author's Response:

Good questions! Although he can't control Alice of course.

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 04:47 PM · On: Good times, Bad times

was is edwards deal?

Author's Response:

Oh you know, he wants to get all up in that, and is afraid he'll scare her off if he comes on so strong.

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 08:39 AM · On: Favors p. 2

and its funny, cause im mormon! we prefer LDS though. i like the story, why didn't edward take bella?

Author's Response:

yeah, I was raised LDS too, heheh.

Reviewer: kayariley (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 04:04 AM · On: Favors p. 1

edward is totally goung to look yp what it means to be an AA sponsor, isn't he? he seems to be the 'thorough' type.

Reviewer: andrew6807 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 05:06 PM · On: Beginnings

i really like the whole badass, slightly depressed bella. sounds like this is gonna be a pretty intense story. i'm excited. you got me hooked.

Author's Response:

Wow, thanks! It starts out a bit slow; I have up to chapter 12 written out though, so I'll probably update MWF till I catch up.

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