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Reviews For That Summer
Reviewer: RedSummer (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

Esme & Edward? Good call, Jen! I love the song that inspired this - have done for many years and I think you managed to capture the essence of it really well. I found myself feeling happy that Esme was able to move on and find some peace, but oddly, sad for Edward. She was clearly important to him and he was able to put her first and give up his own desire to see her again. A beautiful, sweet and touching piece. x



Author's Response:

Thanks, Hayley!

I debated back and forth for days whether Esme should have been the one at the house in the end...but it didn't feel right. It was more about following the music, and the song wasn't really a HEA, but more of a healing process. I'm glad you think I captured what it's about!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

i loved it ,,,hope you can write a rose and edward or alice and edward story bthat would be different forsure



Author's Response:

Thank you! I do have an idea for a R/E fic, but I'm currently working on my original fiction for publication so fanfic may take a backseat for awhile. Glad you enjoyed this though!

Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well I was a little nervous to read this, but it turned out great! I love the hope and promise of a future and the way it all came full circle. Esme indirectly brings Edward to Bella- nice! Love it :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I figured a little E/B hope at the end would sooth some who had the ewwww feeling throughout the Esme/Edward smexing ;)

Reviewer: ebonyjorgieriggs (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

Once again I have fell in love with one of your stories!  Thank you for posting this!  This is a beautiful one shot that I'll be sure to get my friends to read.  Your writing is just amazing!



Author's Response:

Thanks, babes! I was hoping you were one of the ones that would enjoy it. Glad I didn't disappoint!

Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was lovely!

Kathie



Author's Response:

Thank you! Open minded readers like you make it worth writing non canon pairings

Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

OK... have to admit I had the EWWWWW moment there during the smexin's.  But I got better.  :)

It was well written and enjoyable, and I love that song which made it even better.



Author's Response:

Sadly, I'm sure there will be many people with the ewww moment between these two...if they even read that far lol I admit I was one of them when I thought of the pairing at first, too.

So glad you found it enjoyable nonetheless! Thanks for taking the time to read and review xo

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