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Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2014 01:47 PM · On: From chapter 10 to chapter 13
HMPFH that's all huh! I really would like to know what becomes of these two.... Thanks for posting! I don't suppose you've completed this fic somewhere else?
cheers,
Chyla
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2014 01:24 PM · On: From chapter 7 to chapter 9
Whoa! Edward is falling fast huh?!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2014 01:12 PM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
She must've been talking in her sleep! Lol
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2014 12:47 PM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
I really like,how this is starting out. Like the brief chapters too.. I know this is not A finished work but I'm curious nonetheless.
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2013 03:26 PM · On: From chapter 10 to chapter 13
Lol, so a drunk Bella is a chatty Bella who just loves to share even if it is a bit too much information. I'm sure she'll dream of him again and maybe she might just remember telling him that at some point, hahahaha!! Oh I think it's well and truly too late. It started when he was twelve and didn't recognise the feelings he was having, by the time he was twenty and Bella was fourteen the dye was well and truly caste. Like recognises like and these two recognised each other at the tender ages of six and twelve.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2013 01:15 PM · On: From chapter 7 to chapter 9
Bella certainly recognises the Dom to her submissive even if it is subconsciously. Jake really does have it bad for her and she's going to need to find a way to talk to him and let him down, especially as she still wants Edward. She could never settle for Jake, he's be second best. Edward is ping ponging between being a nervous teenager asking a girl for a first date to the cocky Dom plotting to get rid of the pretender to his throne, Captain Cardboard. Lol, brilliant nickname.
I can't wait to see how dinner turns out, what with Edward making his special lasagne.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2013 02:20 AM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
I love stalker Edward, he's really funny second guessing himself all the time and ducking down under windows. He's a man obsessed just as Bella is with him. Jake's certainly lusting after Bella and I think it's safe to say that Bella either gave a running commentary in her sleep about dancing with Edward or there were a few choice moans escaping her lips along with Edward's name. Lol, I can't believe Edward went to the library to spy, yes spy, on Bella!
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2013 11:18 PM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
I like this. It looks as though both Edward and Bella are both hiding things, wanting more but are scared of rejection. Just like the majority of us really. I'm looking forward to the rest and hoping that you carry this on.
Jane x
Reviewer: susolgi2004 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 11:44 AM · On: From chapter 10 to chapter 13
love your story. Keep on!
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2013 08:52 PM · On: From chapter 10 to chapter 13
I really like it, I must say it resembles MotU a little bit (this is a compliment). Well, it's a lot less dramatic and intense. I hope that he doesn't have to change who he is for her. She wants it too (unlike bella in MotU).
Author's Response: No worries, I did take it as a compliment. MotU and TDNT share the same themem (D/s) and of course the characters have much in common (though her Edward/Christian) is a lot darker. There are a lot of differences too, of course. Mainly the tone of the story; I like writing romantic comedy, or close to it.
If you want to read where the story is at now, go look for it at FF.net. It's up to date there.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 05:53 PM · On: From chapter 10 to chapter 13
squeee love love love an update cant wat for more bring it on lol!!! post again soon please please pretty please!!!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 05:37 PM · On: From chapter 10 to chapter 13
wait till he finds out about her secret fantasies...lol
Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 02:47 PM · On: From chapter 10 to chapter 13
great fun to read your very interesting storyline - don't stop! looking forward to the rest of the story
Reviewer: modyog (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 01:03 PM · On: From chapter 10 to chapter 13
Your story has me wanting more and more. Please keep writing it!!
Reviewer: floribelle (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2012 07:32 AM · On: From chapter 7 to chapter 9
I love this story pretty please update! I like that she is cahnging him without knowing and I love that he is clueless as to how she still feels about him. The fact that Bella is having dreams of being Dominated uuufff love love this story please do not abandon
Reviewer: gracedout (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 06:07 AM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
please dont abandon this story! it's wonderful and i have been anxiously awaiting a new chapter!
Author's Response: Hi! This is not abandoned, but the summer has been too busy and HOT (heat wave!!) for me to be able to write. I will continue this as soon the weather gets better and I have more time again. Although - you should check this out on FF.net instead. I don't have a beta again, and it is updated more (often) there. And spread that around, if you know anyone else reading my stories here. Thanks for your interest :))
Reviewer: arccandice (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 04:41 PM · On: From chapter 7 to chapter 9
please update
Reviewer: arccandice (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 04:28 PM · On: From chapter 7 to chapter 9
please update
Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 07:28 AM · On: From chapter 7 to chapter 9
I can't wait for dinner and Wine with Edward.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 04:59 PM · On: From chapter 7 to chapter 9
great story! can't wait for the next chapter!!! she's gonna spill her guts at the dinner....did Jacob hear her talking about Edward in her sleep????
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 06:29 AM · On: From chapter 7 to chapter 9
Wow. I hope he works fast. Alcohol is a very good idea.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 06:21 AM · On: From chapter 4 to chapter 6
I wonder if Jake heard Bella speak of Edward?
In consequently. I wonders are you a Brit or Aussie? I've noticed the uses of "s" as apposed to "z" in words like cozy and recognize.
Author's Response: Actually I'm neither, I'm finnish :D Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 06:11 AM · On: From prologue to chapter 3
I wonder if Jasper ever saw through Edward. I wonder how Edward had been introduced to the life style in the tiny town of Forks at the ripe young age of 23.
Author's Response: I'm not sure how much of Edward's D/s history will be explained in the story, but suffice to say he went to college and saw the world a bit before the ripe young age of 23 :D It's a good question though. Jasper was a bit clueless, I think...
Reviewer: maykruvi (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 04:47 AM · On: From chapter 7 to chapter 9
I love it! You're a wonderful writer and I hope to read some more soon :]
May
Author's Response: Thank you kindly :)) And thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 02:36 AM · On: From chapter 7 to chapter 9
So, let me get this straight, Edward has harbored thoughts of Bella all along? It'll be intersting watching this relationship unfold.
Author's Response: If not ALL along, then for a very long time... Thanks for reviewing!
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