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Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 04:24 PM · On: 7: Someone else finds out...
How long will it be before Alice spills Bella's secret? Is Bella going to slip up and reveal her secret on her own? Will Emmett be able to break Ms. Hale? (I have the feeling that's not gonna happen) So many questions. :) I agree with Jasper that blushing and stuttering are not good ways to convince someone you are lying. lol
Author's Response: Um.... if everyone knows about her being a girl by the next five chapters then there wouldn't be much to expand on, would there? So no, she isn't going to be completely found out soon :D Haha thanks for reading!!!
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:54 AM · On: 1: First Bell
Use away ^_^ I can't wait to see what you do with it. It'll definitely be fun to read, haha.
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Reviewer: cristynd (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 05:05 AM · On: 7: Someone else finds out...
Now we're getting to the good stuff! Naw, it's all been good, I'm just excited for the progression of the story. I love Alice and Jasper in your story. Good chap.
Author's Response: Hahaha! Thanks a lot! :D
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 10:08 PM · On: 7: Someone else finds out...
she must be look like a tomboy/gay/mismatched kind of person. I can't imagine how she look liked without her long hair
Author's Response: Yeah, I think with Bella's "heart-shaped" face and those eyes/lips it would be hard to pass off as a boy. But, well, it's fiction! :D
Reviewer: shyne61 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:12 PM · On: 7: Someone else finds out...
I LOVE YOUR STORY !!!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter !!!!
Please update soon !!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try :D
Reviewer: thedramabean (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 11:39 AM · On: 7: Someone else finds out...
Such an interesting twist! I love all of the plot twists you take that make the story your own, FF! It's almost too bad that Jasper's already with Alice; it would have been funny if he'd tried seducing her anyways, lol. But then, that's for the creeper at the beach place! -- OMG, is that JAMES?! I guess we'll just have to find out... gahh! But then, you ARE mixing things up; that means that ANYTHING could happen and anything could NOT happen, as well. Ah, each chapter gets me more excited about where the story is going! I can't wait for Edward and Bella to become best friends... and for him to find out (if he does in this story?) :D. That was one of the things I loved most about Hana Kimi; Sano, who is so painfully awkward and indifferent, manages to find out who he is with Mizuki's help. He finds a best friend in her and a soul mate -- even if he's not willing to admit it for a long time. But that's why their romance is so great -- friendship and being comfortable with one another is what happens before any potential romance happens. :D
Anyway, this was an awesome chapter! Please update ASAP!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D Hehehe Jasper seducing Alice! Priceless XD And yes, I loved that about Sano/Mizuki as well, but I don't know if I'll be able to write it out as well. I'm not quite sure where things are going yet, taking them one step at a time. Except for the characters, at least half of them have been planned out. James will be in, and of course Jacob and Carlisle...
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:19 AM · On: 7: Someone else finds out...
hahahahaha, poor Eddie, out of the loop. It would be hilarious if Bella and Edward started spending boodles of time together and Edward and Emmett wonder why Jasper is so cool with Alice hanging all over another guy ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Haha :D Ohhh that's a great thoughtflow... can't wait to execute :D You wouldn't mind me using that? Because I think it would be hilarious and I hadn't even thought of that! Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:00 PM · On: 7: Someone else finds out...
this is good!! thanks for the cool story!!!
love it!! can't wait for the next chapter!! =)
Author's Response: No problem! Thanks for reading!! :D
Reviewer: CharzP (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 03:39 PM · On: 7: Someone else finds out...
lmao write faster! this story is fantastic :)
Author's Response: Hahaha thanks! I'll try :D
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 02:01 PM · On: 1: First Bell
I am sooooooooo enjoying this fic!
I have one word for you: YENTL!!!
hahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
I can already imagine Edward so confused that he will think he is gay!!
hahhahahah
Thanks for that! very creative
Author's Response: Haha :D Thanks so much!
wait, what's YENTL?
Reviewer: Hollyhysteria (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:58 PM · On: 7: Someone else finds out...
Haha at Alice..
Author's Response: Hehe! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:16 AM · On: 7: Someone else finds out...
I'm glad we got to meet Alice. And Jasper sounds pretty cool, too, and a good friend for Bella. Wonderful chappy!
Author's Response: Thanks!! :D:D
Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:12 AM · On: 7: Someone else finds out...
Oh damn! THREE PEOPLE KNOW. That sucks, considering Bella's only been in school for a few days. Oi vae.
Author's Response: Well.... yeah. Haha. Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: Bluenoserbaby (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 06:41 AM · On: 7: Someone else finds out...
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: No problem :)
Reviewer: Several Ways (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 05:24 AM · On: 7: Someone else finds out...
Can I just have a shout out at how amazingly amazing this story is? Not to mention how fabulously awesome Hana Kimi is. I mean, I watched the Taiwanese humanised drama version, and it was awesome! The bit where she went into the guys' hot springs and HE was there! Whoa, classic. Oh, and the bit where the other dude, began with an N, but can't remember the name, kept on having nose bleeds because he was in love with her, and then thought he was GAY. OMG I'm laughing right now!
Anyways, keep up with this! You have to include the funny moments from Hana Kimi as well!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! :D:D
Reviewer: Paige6 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:12 PM · On: 6: Medusa
I LOVE this story!!! Please hurry up and update...PLEASE?
Author's Response: Next chapter is up already! I'm excited about it P: Still awaiting validation... Thanks for reading!!!
Reviewer: VeggietarianVampire (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:34 PM · On: 6: Medusa
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING IT!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Of course I will! :D I'm only 500+ words into the next chapter, though... Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: 143Jacob (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 02:48 AM · On: 6: Medusa
After reading the available chapters you wrote before, which were the first six, i decided to read Hana Kimi and WOW!! just finished it and absolutely LOVED IT! Made me cry, laugh and ugh wow its all thanks to ur story and reviews that i found out about that amazing story, I was devastated when it was over! and HAHA Rosalie, Umeda, love it! Genius to make a Twilight version! And i still dont like Jacob being the bro haha i think e would REALLY be a PERFECT role for Nakatsu! OMG im guessing something, Alice- Rio?! but really, im so happy to have found out about Hana Kimi but i am really sadd bout it ending. So, im looking forward to ur story! Ugh im just really sad that ashiya didnt say bye to umeda and three years passed without details in the end! Thats like as long as the time she spent at osaka, it could have told more! ugh, but yea just really disappointed, i hope urs is better! haha :D
Author's Response: Haha that's awesome!! I love Hana Kimi! The Jap drama ending made me cry, but the manga's ending didn't. I didn't like the slightly-vague-ified ending either, but at least they were together in the end :) I would have liked more of Sano/Mizuki before she left, so that's prolly coming in in my fanfic :)
Haha, Rio, really? Hahaha nope, Jasper and Alice really are dating :D... I love AxJ as much as I love BxJ P: Wooohoooo another Hana Kimi fan :D:D Hope my fanfic won't disappoint :)
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:33 PM · On: 6: Medusa
Okay, this story is great. You're an awesome writer.
It's original, and refreshing. So, could you please hurry and update, because I can't wait to see what happens next!
I want to know what she's gonna say to Jasper! :)
Author's Response: Hehe thanksss but I just want to say that this story isn't original, the storyline is from a manga/Jap-drama/Taiwanese-drama called Hana Kimi (I think you can watch it/read it online.. unless it's illegal). I did make some character/plot changes but mostly the idea is from the manga. But thanks for reading!! :D
Reviewer: Roo-san (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 08:26 AM · On: 6: Medusa
Noooooo! please, dont leave it there for long, the suspense will kill me! :D
Author's Response: Hehehe :D Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: DevilishAngoOl (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 10:45 PM · On: 6: Medusa
Great and all, but really? Rosalie the lesbian? What happened to Emmett and Rosalie? And since she's been there for at least three years... how old IS she? Are they going to get together in the end? You know, maybe you could've made Emmett the photographer.
Note: Bella is also too Ella like. And well, no offense if you like the Taiwanese version but I really hate it, its too over-acted. Japanese or the manga is much better. That's just my opinion.
Author's Response: Geez, hold your horses! Em/Rose action WILL be there, just not yet :D:D:D (heehee i love em/rose too P:) hmm, in my mind Rose should be about 20-23, and Emm is 17, so... the age difference isn't all that great.
Also, REALLY? I didn't much like the Taiwanese version, but I didn't know Bella was acting all.. Ella. But I don't hate it. It's cute and funny, in a way, and it makes it a much lighter read than if all the characters behave as they should 100% of the time. Also, just my opinion :)
Thanks for reading!!!
Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 06:28 PM · On: 6: Medusa
It seems to be realize Cameron is a girl day. lol I wondered how long it would be before someone said something. I can't wait to see how she gets out of this one as she was so successful with Rosalie. I'm waiting for the day that Edward realizes it. I get the feeling it will be a while.
Author's Response: LOL Yeah XD Maybe she'll get lucky again... lol ;) Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: ny88 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 02:34 PM · On: 6: Medusa
O.O!!!
Wow, didnt see that coming. Great chapter, keep up the great work
:D
Author's Response: :D Thankssss!!
Reviewer: goflyakite (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 01:40 PM · On: 6: Medusa
OMG! UPDATE! PRONTO
Author's Response: Hahaha :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: ShandyAnn (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 12:53 PM · On: 1: First Bell
..she should tell him about being a girl, the southern glory was a referance to his sexy southerness..i like jasper..alot.
srry for the confusion, i can be a little vauge..ok i can be alot vauge. :)
Author's Response: LOL. okay :D
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