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Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Strangers in My House
okay so I've figured out Phil is gay and I'm now wondering if he is a Dom and Bella's old BF is his sub or something... you said samething about BDSM si I'm just wondering if that is where this will fit in... pretty good so far... lobe all the info on Edward but ready for sex on legs to show up... :-)
Author's Response: no, there's no dom or sub. i'm not really into that, so i don't write it :)
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Beefcakes and Job Interviews
great chapter
Author's Response: thanks!!
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Day One
really good slow build but good!!! Liked the pics that went along with your inspiration
Author's Response: thanks!! :)
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 Going to California
looks good and very much a fan of wandb as well... on to more chapters!!!!
Author's Response: if it weren't for wandb, this story would have never gotten off the ground. not only is she an amazing writer, but a really sweet woman. she helped me polish off my first chapter so i could submit it and was encouraging when i thought that this might be a stupid idea. i owe her big!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 15 Christmas Time Is Here
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response: thanks! :)
Reviewer: cgooden (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 15 Christmas Time Is Here
I'm glad to see that you are well and was able to update. Can't wait to read the next update
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2011 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Thanksgiving
Well, I for one, would never complain if Edward pressed his junk against my back! But, gee, the lemons are few and far between, aren't they? Hopefully, we'll get some more action soon. Bree is getting on my nerves and yes, she does need a shrink, or something. Anyway, complicated story, isn't it? Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: i'll warn you now, i'm not going to write a ton of lemons. they'll only be in if i feel the story is at a point where they will enhance the story. if you're a person who likes a ton of lemons, you may not like this story too much. bree's a little shithead, yeah? she's based off my sister, and believe me, my sister can be the biggest pain in the ass, EVER! LOL
the story is about to get crazier. yes, it's possible! LOL thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Thanksgiving
good luck with your moce and job!! i can't wait to see what bree thinks of professional help? i hope that it helps!
Author's Response: thanks! we move on saturday! *eek!*
yeah, we'll have to see what bree does with the help, huh? ;)
thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Thanksgiving
Edward should know it's not polite to point...if you know what I mean ;) Bree needs a good ass-kicking/reality check. Nothing like a tryptophan coma lol.
Congrats on the job, my Twitter BFF!
Author's Response: yes, a turkey coma is usually the highlight of any thanksgiving celebration, is it not? :)
and thanks! i'm excited/nervous/FREAKING THE FUCK OUT...but mainly...happy as hell about it!
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Uninvited
GOOD START.. SECOND TIME
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Thanksgiving
Welcome to Tennessee! I live in Memphis and have good friends in Nashville. I hope you love it as much as we do.
Author's Response: i'm not down there yet, but will be soon! every time i go down, i find something else new to love about it! i have family in kentucky, and we debated about which to move to. in the end, the kids decided tennessee lol. i'm sure we'll love it there!
thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: alaskancoppertop (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Thanksgiving
Good Luck in TN and with the move (I just moved from GA to CO - going thru IN to visit family, too! - and still don't have a place to live!!)
Author's Response: hope your stay in indiana was good :) and thanks for the well wishes. and, you know, for reading and reviewing, too ;)
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Thanksgiving
Good Chapter...
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 06:57 PM · On: Outtake #2 - In Bella's Shadow - Bree's View
It's interesting to see things from Bree's POV. I like that you can get into her messed-up little head.
Author's Response: yeah, she's a little piece of work, huh? we'll look in to her head again later. thanks for continuing to read and review!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2011 08:39 PM · On: Outtake #2 - In Bella's Shadow - Bree's View
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: cgooden (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 11:14 PM · On: Outtake #2 - In Bella's Shadow - Bree's View
This story is intersesting. I'm putting it on alert so I can read more.
Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 09:31 PM · On: Outtake #2 - In Bella's Shadow - Bree's View
First, Daria reference...love it! Second, My So-Called Life....love it! Lastly, Bree needs an intervention and maybe rehab with Dr. Drew because that bitch in trouble lol
Author's Response: there was a daria ref in chapter 1, too ;) and if this wasn't based in 2008, the dr drew treatment could have been a possibility! lol
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Simply Irresistible
I love that your love scene wasn't perfect. Life isn't perfect, and I think sometimes those perfect scenes people write create unrealistic expectations. Real life is messy, and noses really do get smacked at the worst possible time.
Author's Response: thanks for enjoying the imperfection :) that idea was brought on by a suggestion from one of my beta's and i think it worked out rather well. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Simply Irresistible
HELL YES FOR THE FUN TIME! It's about DAMN time! The part were Edward is trailing his hands down Bella's arms and gets to her armpits...totally reminded me of the scene in Dirty Dancing. Kind of fitting as seeing they were doing a bit of dirty dancing between the sheets :)
Author's Response: oh, johnny! LOL actually, my arms are super tickelish, and that's happened to me more times than i like to admit. that's my little piece of my inside bella :)
so glad ya liked it! i figured ya'll would get a good laugh at it!!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Simply Irresistible
Good Chapter......
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: shannabanana1 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Simply Irresistible
I have missed this. Thanks for posting
Author's Response: thanks!!
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Simply Irresistible
Bree is such a little shit.. sorry for not reviewing ever.. you're on my alert!
Author's Response: it's all good....thanks for reading!!!! (and now, reviewing lol)
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Simply Irresistible
that was too funny! i loved bellas attitude about just laughing it off,and not letting anything ruin her mood! im glad that they finally got together. if i were bella i think i would try to make it work with her mom and sister one more time before i just washed my hands of them till they got their heads out of their butts!
Author's Response: thanksgiving will be interresting, for sure. thanks for readsing, and reviewing!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2011 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Catch Me
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response: thanks! :)
Author's Response: thanks! :)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Catch Me
Whoa...Bree Badass got caught. I can't wait for Thanksgiving. It's going to be an interesting family affair. Oh, where do I sign up to have Edward in my bed? I would like that very much.
Author's Response: yes, thanksgiving will be....interesting ;) and i've got edward chained up in the basement, but jasper's free! lol!!
Author's Response: yes, thanksgiving will be....interesting ;) and i've got edward chained up in the basement, but jasper's free! lol!!
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