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Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2011 03:39 PM · On: The Boss

Lol sugary sweet, loved it!!! :)

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 09:11 AM · On: The Boss

Eating cake off of her before the first time? Nice! Lol.

It's a nice little one shot, thanks for writing it!

Spikey

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 02:52 PM · On: The Boss

i loved it
it was very cute and i loved how you characterized bella and edward
gotta love alice and charlie lol
well i look forward to reading more form you i love your writing
well until next time
mbellaandedwardm

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 12:08 PM · On: The Boss

pretty good story but i dont get why if she liked him so much then why didnt she go out with him in the beginning??

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review! I have a few ideas floating around in my head, so I might just add some more to this if the occasion arrives!

So, if you liked it, please make sure to put it on alert! I'm totally focused on Parachute on the moment since I update every Friday and it takes a lot of my time right now!

Thanks again for your support!

You specific comment is one of the reasons that I want to expand this a little. They both liked each other, but it was a case of mixed signals. Both tried to flirt a little, but backed off once they got the idea that the other wasn't interested, even though they totally were, lol. Then at some point, they both decided that their friendship was worth more than trying to ask the other other and potentially making their relationship awkward.

XoXo

Shel

Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 01:44 PM · On: The Boss

When I read the title of your o/s I HAD to read it!! I love the TV show 'The Cake Boss'. In fact, I kept reading Edwards lines outloud w the thick New Jersey accent..and lets just say that is pretty damn hilarious considering I'm from IL. I had to ask my husband if I sounded like a New Jersian (huh? yeah, i dunno) and he said I sounded like I was Australian so I don't think I got it right, but I still had fun!

Great o/s !! I love the 'E and B have the hawwwwts for eachother, but neither realizes it' stories. Its also always nice to picture Edward smeared in icing..especially right before bed. Hoping for sweet (and yummy!) dreams tonight!

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review! I have a few ideas floating around in my head, so I might just add some more to this if the occasion arrives!

So, if you liked it, please make sure to put it on alert! I'm totally focused on Parachute on the moment since I update every Friday and it takes a lot of my time right now!

Thanks again for your support! My 6 year old son loves Cake Boss and we're always watching it. It's adorable, lol! I live about an hour's drive away from Carlo's Bakery and I totally want to go one day!

XoXo

Shel

Reviewer: luvtwilightff (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 12:19 PM · On: The Boss

That was a great one shot!! I usually dont read them, but because you are the author of Parachute and an extraordinary writer, I couldnt pass this up, and you didnt disappoint! great job!!

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review! I have a few ideas floating around in my head, so I might just add some more to this if the occasion arrives!

So, if you liked it, please make sure to put it on alert! I'm totally focused on Parachute on the moment since I update every Friday and it takes a lot of my time right now!

Thanks again for your support!

XoXo

Shel

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 10:21 AM · On: The Boss

great job! loved it! yeah, i bet Charlie and Alice were in cahoots

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review! I have a few ideas floating around in my head, so I might just add some more to this if the occasion arrives!

So, if you liked it, please make sure to put it on alert! I'm totally focused on Parachute on the moment since I update every Friday and it takes a lot of my time right now!

Thanks again for your support! Oh, and Alice and Charlie were totally in cahoots, lol!

XoXo

Shel

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