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Reviewer: Bella MacLeod (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2011 03:19 AM · On: 1. The Beginning and The End

More please,I love to read and this is one of the best so far...Please post more as it is written. I love the idea of Carlisle and Bella,there's something between them that is more than father daughter,somethig transcendant of time like two souls connecting on a higher level than just love,marriage,and intimacy.Most people don't look at things like me and they miss what is actually out there.You're onto something,let it flow.I hope to see what you come up with!!!!!!

You will notice that this is my first review to your work and you will see that I never rate below a 7.I feel you must know I like the concept you have come up with.

Reviewer: jesserkerr (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 11:09 AM · On: 1. The Beginning and The End

Plan on writing any more?

Reviewer: jesserkerr (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 02:26 PM · On: 1. The Beginning and The End

I will admit, reading about Bella looking at Carlisle like this is a bit weird. But I am fully intrigued. I love your writing style & your words. I was apprehensive but you've pulled me in! Can't wait to read what's next :)

Reviewer: cherrypie0192 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 04:35 PM · On: 1. The Beginning and The End

That was a fantastic meeting of two souls!! In the midst of sadness two ppl can recognize the beauty the other holds even though it seems taboo. I can't wait for more!!! Thank you for sharing your amazing story.

Reviewer: cullenetc (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 12:58 AM · On: 1. The Beginning and The End

I love the idea of a Carlisle and Bella pairing, but Bella seems very odd. I'm anxious to see ow this comes together.

Reviewer: bellacullen81 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 01:45 PM · On: 1. The Beginning and The End

Dying for the next update! Please please please update soon

Reviewer: Claresta (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 11:25 AM · On: 1. The Beginning and The End

The way you write is just lyrical. This is fantastic.

Reviewer: gr8k8 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Prologue

I love Carlisle/Bella stories. But 16 years? Okay, I get it.....it's a story. I'll just sit back and enjoy it. Update often, though. I am almost to the point of not reading anything that isn't complete. I have about 15-20 stories that I check everyday just hoping someone will slip up and update, for crying out loud!

Reviewer: rkpainter87 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 08:38 AM · On: 1. The Beginning and The End

Oh I certainly hope next time happens soon. I am astounded at your descriptions and back stories. You are being very descript which feeds my obsession with covering all angles and knowing the characters.

How sad that Charlie's mother dies the first chapter but you did that very well. I loved the first look at Carlisle. How very special. . Now I am going to go favorite this story and wait for the next chapter. . .Great Work!

Reviewer: rkpainter87 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Prologue

Yay! I love Carlisle/Bella stories. I am writing one myself! There is something so basic and chemical about these two that I just plain love. I am digging the first chapter! The angst and honesty and the description you give is just amazing. Now on to the next chapter!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 01:18 AM · On: Prologue

Ur AN cracked me up! I agree with u! I dont mind a little b and c. And u always write so well.......cant wait for more!

Reviewer: drcullensgirl (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Prologue

whoo hoo! I love anything with Bella/Carlise. Thank you for writing this!

Reviewer: writegina2 (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Prologue

I have just this to say... Carlisle/Bella. Yummy! But you gotta make Esme (if the wifey is Esme) a nasty, hideous witch or something so I won't feel sorry for her...

Reviewer: cherrypie0192 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Prologue

This is gonna be GREAT!!!! Can't wait for more!! Favoriting this one for sure.

Reviewer: bellacullen81 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Prologue

I love it! I've always wanted a Bella and Carlisle fic. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Jacquelyn Swan (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Prologue

Dude!!!! Awesome. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 02:27 AM · On: Prologue

love all ur stories!!! keep up the good work:P

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