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Reviewer: JasmineCullen328 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 03:11 PM · On: What Death Can Do

So far so good. I like it and can't wait to see what else you've got planned..

Reviewer: samanthawatts (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 04:55 PM · On: What Death Can Do

i like it so far are you going to continue with it?

Reviewer: PreciousRubies (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 12:04 PM · On: What Death Can Do

I like the first chapter immensely, and Lorraine seems like a good character. But your summary confuses me...WHY would Jackson through a strawberry dacari in a girls face? What did she do, or WILL she do? lol

Reviewer: buhblack (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 08:47 AM · On: What Death Can Do

hi! I was really happy to see a new fic with jackson! I was happier still to see how I liked this first chapter. very sad, but it is pretty cool, gives a good material for developing a wonderful depth to lorraine. I can not wait for the next chapter and see the two coming together. I LOVE stories about characters developed tormented HAHAHAHA. hope you do not take too long to update, would be a lot of torture. ._.

congratulations on the beginning of the fic! I believe the rest of it will be wonderful!

kisses!

[sorry my bad english. I'm from brazil and I suck to write in english]

Reviewer: Nata (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:11 AM · On: What Death Can Do

Aw, can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! :)

Reviewer: meldisil (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 07:13 AM · On: What Death Can Do

it`s a very sad beginning. but i really like it so far. can´t wait for the next chapter.

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