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Reviewer: TVicki (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2016 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
O-M-G (pant...pant)
Reviewer: Lessa13 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow!!!!!!!!
EPIC!!!!
Reviewer: karolsp (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it!! Still sweet but sensual and a bit funny too! Bella was soooo bold and Edward was and always is perfect *sigh*!!!
Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Reviewer: twimom1960 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2011 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
very very sweet thank you I enjoyed it. I bet there could be more to this. Thank you!
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
i dont understand this obsession with edward biting bella when she is changed if i have read the book right, vampires are meant to be able to see bites clearly as jasper is covered in them. if im wrong i will have to read the books some more lol
Author's Response: I think the obsession with the "biting" is a territory and sexual marking thing like a hickey would be. That's how I see it anyway. :-)
Cheers for reading.
Reviewer: tpol (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved this one! Very well written and in character!
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2011 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was fun and really beautiful!!!
Reviewer: ElvaFae (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
this was awesome! just like I imagined their first time, not that the timing really mattered!! loved it!
thnx!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was exquisite.
Author's Response: Thank you :-) I'm so pleased you liked it :-)
Reviewer: shecater (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved this!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)
Reviewer: Charlotteleew (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
awesome!!!
Reviewer: shecater (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very well written!
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nicely done! And you included the feathers! Excellent!
Reviewer: greeneyes69 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
EXCELLENT
Reviewer: VampNessa (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 1
wow that was awesome!!! I sorta wish my first time was like that!! lolage
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
really enjoyed reading your story till near the end, kinda like the idea of waiting for marriage have a feeling it actually means more
Reviewer: Uglybear23 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
oh my gosh, i really love this. you're a great writer and i think you captured the characters really well. i'd love to read anything else you've written. once again, i loved this :) <3
Reviewer: Uglybear23 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
oh my gosh, i really love this. you're a great writer and i think you captured the characters really well. i'd love to read anything else you've written. once again, i loved this :) <3
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very HOT!!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
loved it! so hot
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nicely done. Beautiful and loving.
Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
Is it weird of me that I love the whole pillow biting thing? I think it's the intensity of it... I'm glad you worked it in. :p
Reviewer: LisaDawn75 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hot damn! That was great, and I loved how you added the lines with the bits of confusion on Bella's and Edward's part. And the pillow. And Bella's thoughts on Jessica's advice. Those just totally made for a perfect piece. Great job.
Reviewer: Nessarie (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
You should SO continue with this! It's awesome! :)
~Ness
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