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Reviewer: cakes4547 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Entry Two: I'm Not Giving Up

Great Chapter! I loved how you really looked at Jacob's feelings about wolves and vampires mixing together, and how he thinks it will never happen. And we seem him transition from hating her to actually thinking that he might come aroudn years later when she's had a chance to calm down and get over her newborn stage. And I loved that he compared Bella to what Edward is to him, and his thougths about them being the same kind...very well done!

Reviewer: cakes4547 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Entry One: The Last Few Days

Wow! What a beautifully written chapter...I almost felt a little depressed after I ready it - I had to remind myself that it was just fiction and I didn't have to actually be sad haha!

But really, you did an excellent job describing the pain he felt and was going through, especially when he got the wedding invitation! I almost cried that was so sad for poor Jacob. What a horrible horrible time for him, the poor guy. Love it so far, off to the next chapter!

Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Entry One: The Last Few Days

Wow, this is a really angsty Jacob. I personally think he would be stronger than that. But you capture a lot of strong emotion and I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Dr3a_Cullen89 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Entry One: The Last Few Days

WOW!!! *Wipes Tears from eyes* This is so sad and depressing. As I read i can feel the pain, the torture, and confusion. You can see the hurt Jacob has for Bella decision. The raw emotion that Jacob feels is what i can feel as i close my eyes and picture the scenario. Well written and told. in a good mindset. Looking foreword to read more

Reviewer: GiftfromtheGods (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Entry One: The Last Few Days

Well written..but...this is so depressing and sad. poor Jake!

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