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Reviewer: dazedlvr07 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 15

I love that his parents know, although the way they found out was a little strange but good job... keep it up.. I'm proud of you!

Reviewer: dazedlvr07 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 14

I love this chapter such great perspectives reading it through both their eyes..

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 14

I was wondering when Rob's family was going to come into this.  They should tell them as soon as, especially with Rob having been kept in the dark and Taylor's parents already knowing, sometimes people need time to get their heads around things, just like Taylor did.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 10

Oooooh majorly pissed, just like I said.  He'll come round.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 8

OMG...I'm saying that alot in this story...Rob's going to need a chair, I hope there's one nearby, I hope she's going to make him get dressed first.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 7

Aaaaggghhhhh she still hasn't told him - I get it - she really doesn't want to tell him over the phone but will she actually see him before she has he baby and tell him, mind you if she does, she won't have to say a word, the big bump will speak volumes, assuming he doesn't think she's been seeing someone else, OMG this could be such a mess.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 6

I know I should have raised this after the last chapter, but I left the laptop to catch up with a bit of RL and got to thinking.  If Rob told her that he wouldn't be seeing anyone else and he didn't want her to either, does that not scream at her that he wants them to be together?  Taylor talks about not hearing from Rob, but why has she not called him?  I am assuming she hasn't called him as she doesn't mention that he is avoiding her calls.  All things being equal these days a girl does not have to wait for the boy to call.  Aaagghhh when is she going to speak with him she is over half way through her pregnancy and he doesn't have a clue, he is going to be majorly pissed off at not being told or having been able to have been involved.  You've got me hooked.   Jane x

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hmmm....will be interesting to find out what reaction Rob's family have to Taylor & their baby. Seems like Taylor's family certainly took the news well considering.

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 12

Uh oh.....sprung by Taylor's Dad it would appear! :P I'm guessing he's worked out Rob & Taylor are expecting given his comment about how she looked 'different' and then saying that he expected the had some news for the family they'd want to share during breakfast?

Either way, I'm glad the pair have sorted out their initial differences - that Rob was able to get Taylor to understand he loves her, wants to be with her and be a part of his child's life, but that he was initially overwhelmed by the news that he was going to be a Daddy to a baby girl.

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 11

Awww.....wonder whether Taylor's going to be so quick to forgive him for reducing her to tears over hiding the pregnancy from him. Glad that Rob's come to his senses and realised how much he loves his girl and his unborn daughter.

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 11

Sorry I have been absent! School started and I have been living and breathing 8th grade Science!

This was good, but so short! I so wanted to keep reading. I like the POV idea.



Author's Response: thanks!...i thought it would be good to get both of their sides :)...I'll post more soon!

Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 10

Ooh, girl, I'm lovin' this story! I just found it this mornin' and wanted to read through what you have so far, before reviewin'! Great job!

I love RPfics and, although I'm Team Kellan, Rob is special, too!

At least he's not denyin' his paternity and I hope that things run smoothly in the end. But, I know that there has to be conflict to make a good story. Keep it comin', darlin' because I really need....MORE PLEASE!

Loves ya!

Ellen

PS. I KNOW what it's like to crave reviews! I will always review for you!



Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'll update as soon as possible...I have a lot written out! Thanks for the support ;)

Reviewer: dazedlvr07 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 9

Great Job

Reviewer: dazedlvr07 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 8

YOU ROCK!!!

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oooh, the moment of truth has arrived...regardless of how much she tries to stall! She's not going to be able to put of Robert much longer (he's obviously craving her touch & their physical connection) and there won't be any hiding of that baby belly when that happens. Is she going to just give him the 'it's a girl' ultrasound picture?

I guess I'm just not going to be surprised if Rob reacts the way I expect he will - why wouldn't he be upset? She's kept the secret from him while he's been away and he's the kind of guy who would not only want to the right thing but wouldn't want to miss any parts of the pregnancy.

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 7

Short, but good! I hope he gets to see her soon. I am dying for him to find out and see what happens then!

Reviewer: dazedlvr07 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 6

Yeah you go girl!!!!!

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 6

Okay, I really enjoyed this chapter now that I have figured out the format.



Author's Response: Sorry...I was doing a lot of the background stuff through flashbacks...sorry if it was super confusing...I'll use better transitioning in the future :)...thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 5

Okay, maybe I am dense, but is the first part of the chapter about the present and the last part like a flashback to when they were first together?

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

I like this story or I would not be reading it. I am wondering about something, though. Taylor has not heard from Rob in weeks, then he is suddenly with her. It is just a little too choppy. I find myself going back and re-reading to try to figure out if I missed something.

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hmmm...I feel a little confused. I feel like I missed too much. They went out and got drunk, then he was about to kiss her. Then, months later she is at the doctor's office finding out she is pregnant and it is not mentioned the rest of the chapter. Maybe it comes up next chapter.

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 2

Well, they had a busy, interesting night! Will they remember it in the morning?

We found out a little more about her in this chapter. They seem to have an easy time talking with each other.

Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

Again, liked it, but the pace of the story is pretty fast. And again, theres not much explanation of their location or details on clothing, hair ect. Update soon though '') 

Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like it, but there's not much detail. It would also be easier to understand if you put different tenses in italics or bold. Great opening chapter though '')

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is a great start! I want to read more.

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