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Reviewer: LysergicGirl (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 06:25 AM · On: Friends
Great read! I adore EPOV, especially when they seem to be in character for what I imagine he is like. I can't wait to read more of these. I think you should do the first kiss scene (I never tire of what people think he is thinking during it) next or sometime soon :)
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Friends
My favorite parts! Excellent! Please write more :)
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Joining My Angel
Very wel done!
Reviewer: paolo (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Friends
this story started off really good, but the third chapter - why go backwards??? If you put your mind to it you can write it better. sorry.
Author's Response: I appreciate what you're saying, I just want you to understand that I have no intention of writting this as a story. When I originally started this, I was just writting the first one from Edward's point of view. I had intended for it to be a one shot. The reason I went backwards is because I'm taking requests, and there were several people who wanted this scene.
Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 03:06 PM · On: My Way is Wrong
I think this chapter is way too much like the book. But, I still want to see where you go with this...
Author's Response: I'm not sure what you mean by TOO much like the book. I meant for it to be like the book because it's the scenes from Edward's point of view.
Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Joining My Angel
Absolutely beautiful!! This is exactly how I would expect Edward to describe the scene. Excellent work!
Reviewer: Jodie Ryan (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Joining My Angel
I think your witting is beautiful. Fantasic
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Friends
So great to know this is where Edward realized he is in love! Enjoyed how playful Edward was with Bella, how much of a tease he can be when he lets his guard down a bit. And poor Mrs. Cope.....I would say she doesn't live up to her name if she's trying to mentally undress Edward!!! lol
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 07:07 AM · On: My Way is Wrong
I love this chapter....it sort of defines Edward's character and his overall need to do the right thing for Bella. The fact that he allowed her the time to be with Jacob, agonizing over possibly losing her but resigned to let her make her own decision no matter the outcome for him. That just does me in right there.
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Joining My Angel
Loved this chapter because you write with so much detail and emotion. To have a sense of Edward's longing and heartbreak for Bella is almost too difficult to read. I love any EPOV but this is by far one of the best I've ever read. Would love to read about the meadow or Edward's first night in Bella's bedroom watching her dream about him. Thanks for writing this.
Reviewer: mistyann1978 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Joining My Angel
Excellent chapter!
Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 10:41 AM · On: My Way is Wrong
You did it again. Another fantastic chapter. I love your use of words and the poetry they flow with. I have read several versions of views from Edward and yours is by far the very best I have come across. It flows smoothly with the theme and goeswith the grain instead of against it. Keep up the great work. I was wondering if you have ever read the Midnight Sun version of twilight that is on S. Meyers web site. I would love to see how creative you would be with the day Edward shows up at Bella's house and takes her to the Meadow and of course the kiss and then stays the night. Please let me know.
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Author's Response: The meadow scene is definately on my list and I have gotten other requests for them. But as the blood typing scene, it will be hard for me to get into his head, because he wasn't the same person.
Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Joining My Angel
I liked this chapter very much. Your wording is terrific very poetic and very in the mind frame of Edward. Im going to read chapter 2 but I wonder if you would be open to writing about what went through Edwards head when he found out about the cliff diving,motorcycles, and werewolves from Alice when she came to assist.
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Author's Response: Thank you, I feel like because of the time that Edward was born in, his language would flow better than those around him.
I'm currently working on the blood typing scene right now, which is taking a bit more time than I anticipated because Edward was a different person then than he was after leaving her. But this definately a scene that I would like to persue.
-ECB
Reviewer: sarah21 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 02:14 AM · On: My Way is Wrong
thank you this chapter was a greal i always wanted to read it from edward POV .
so please could write a chapter from edward pov when bella run from alice and jasper to meet james unril he saved her.
Author's Response: I'm currently working on the blood typing scene right now, which is taking a bit more time than I anticipated because Edward was a different person then than he was after leaving her. Like the blood typing, it will be hard to get into his head, but this is definately a scene that I would like to persue.
-ECB
Reviewer: sailormoon (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 05:28 AM · On: My Way is Wrong
Wow, this is great, loved it, Edward is great! Especially in the first chapter in Volterra, his pain and his impression that he is dead was very well done.
I would love to read your Edward POV on the meadow scene, I read a lot of Edward POV from NM or Eclipse, but there are not so many on Twilight.
Author's Response: I'm currently working on the blood typing scene right now, which is taking a bit more time than I anticipated because Edward was a different person then than he was after leaving her. Like the blood typing, this will be hard for me to do because it's hard for me to get into his head. But I will do this one because I have gotten many requests for it
-ECB
Reviewer: memepam (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 09:25 AM · On: My Way is Wrong
very good
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 02:52 PM · On: My Way is Wrong
:) Loved it!
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Joining My Angel
I felt like I was reading something from SM herself. Everything stayed true to what I think he would be thinking to himself. I would be interested to read about how he reacts when he finds out exactly what Bella went through emotionally and physically when he left.
Author's Response: Thanks, I try really hard to not stray from what was going on.
I'm currently working on the blood typing scene right now, which is taking a bit more time than I anticipated because Edward was a different person then than he was after leaving her. But this is definately a scene that I would like to persue.
-ECB
Reviewer: emckinney (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 10:20 PM · On: My Way is Wrong
Oooh, I love EPOV! I hope you write more.
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 02:36 PM · On: My Way is Wrong
I really enjoyed this chapter. This is one of my favorite scenes, and I loved hearing it from Edward's point of view. He's so wonderful, isn't he? The way he'd let her go to Jacob if that was what she wanted. Sigh...
Reviewer: Aksrds1 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Joining My Angel
I love this! It's SO Edward!!
Reviewer: clareita (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Joining My Angel
Well, as long as you are taking requests, I vote for the trip from Bella's house to Ewards house at the end of New Moon. Also, the Edward's reaction to Bella going to LaPush for the first time in Eclipse.
Great story. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm currently working on the blood typing scene right now, which is taking a bit more time than I anticipated because Edward was a different person then than he was after leaving her. But these are definately scenes that I would like to persue.
-ECB
Reviewer: Mimi Lettuce (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 01:16 AM · On: Joining My Angel
When they were on the plane coming home and the arrival of them at the airport. THIS WAS LOVELY!!!!
Author's Response: I'm currently working on the blood typing scene right now, which is taking a bit more time than I anticipated because Edward was a different person then than he was after leaving her. But this is definately a scene that I would like to persue.
-ECB
Reviewer: BlueBella (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 12:25 AM · On: Joining My Angel
Good job. I'd love the meadow scene from EPOV. Wash he trying to scare Bella or was a part of him already think ing of her as a potential mate and he was showing of, much as a stallion does for a mare in heat?
Author's Response: I'm currently working on the blood typing scene right now, which is taking a bit more time than I anticipated because Edward was a different person then than he was after leaving her. It will be the same with this scene. I definately want to try it, I'm just afraid that it won't come out as well as my past ones.
-ECB
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Joining My Angel
Wow, this is very good. You have captured Edwards tone very well. As for sceenes I would like to see, how about from Eclipse, after Bella broke her hand punching Jacob?
Author's Response: I'm currently working on the blood typing scene right now, which is taking a bit more time than I anticipated because Edward was a different person then than he was after leaving her. But this is definately a scenes that I would like to persue.
-ECB
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