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Reviewer: sweetnees75 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 4
loving your story hope u write more
jules
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 4
I scanned the earlier chapters to refresh before I read this new one. Yes, way to go but I have to question the way Bella is trying to get his attention? She's going to end up being one of Edward's one nighters like this, isn't she? Poor Mike Newton... always the pudgy faced wanna be hot guy. lOL I really want to know what's going to happen now that Edward's curiosity is peeked. Will he treat her like a one nighter or will he want more?? Nice!
Author's Response: Well, I think she doesn't know what she wants yet. She wants to be his one-nighter but she also wants a real relationship. So she'll have an internal dialogue with herself when she gets into the situation. It's all mapped out in my head! Thanks so much for the input! And just as a little note, I believe Edward might have his entire world view changed. Just maybe ;]
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 4
I still think you should make her a virgin - either she was drunk and Mike confesses they never did it, or he just didn't have it in him to get the job done. I think it would be funny for her to be a V and then down the road Edward having to deal with that.
I like the story. Glad to see the update.
Author's Response: Wow it's litterally like you read my mind. I had a story line in mind with this last chapter, but it would've ended up being 50 pages long. So in the upcoming chapters we'll see this twist come up and Mike will definitely reappear in the story. ;]
Thank you so much for the input!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 4
Great story.... hope she turns the tables on Edward
Author's Response: Oh I think she might... Even though he may not like it. ;]
Reviewer: amber_v (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 4
Go get him Bella! Great story ;)
Please update soon...
Author's Response: Thank you! The update will definitely NOT take forever this time. The next chapter is in the works as we speak. Thank you so much for reading! :]
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 4
loved it can't wait to read more and see if edward makes his move to meet her
Author's Response: Thank you! I have a feeling it might get a little hot in here.... ;]
Thank you so much for reading!
Reviewer: foxster70 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 4
Good story so far, looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! The update shouldn't be long, it's in the works as we speak. :]
Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 4
I want some awkward interactions :)
Author's Response: Oh, trust me... Things will be getting a little steamy in here... ;]
Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: martha (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 3
more please!
Reviewer: sexcii (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 3
coool!! i cant wait to see what the plan is! when is your next chapter coming up:(
Emily*
Author's Response: Hopefully it won't take forever this time, I'm looking forward to writing this chapter. ;]
Reviewer: iris67 (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
Ohhhhh boy! Can't to hear what the plan is! Well, you've definitely got me intrigued....and oh my does he sound sexy!!!! Cocky, but very sexy indeed. So what, I'll bet he doesn't know what's gonna hit him when they finally meet! Oh, I'm so excited!!! I'll be looking out for your next chapter. Can't wait!
Author's Response: Why thank you! And sexy is definitely what I was going for... If there really is a guy out there like him I think I might just die right here! We'll see what his reaction is! Hopefully this update won't take so long. :]
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 3
Bella's growing some balls, huh? lol
Author's Response: Well she's trying at least. ;]
Reviewer: cherrypie0192 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 3
Can't wait to hear about "the plan"!! Sounds like it should be AWESOME and sexy...... ya I definetly think sexy!!
Author's Response: Definitely! Let's jope Edward feels the same... ;]
Reviewer: brown eyes (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 3
I think you have a great start to a story here. I am dying to know how plain Bella is going to tempt manwhore Edward. I think I might try whatever it is myself....
Keep up the great writing. And gives big puppy dog eyes here...longer chapters, please???? :D
Author's Response: Hopefully this next chapter will give you some inspiration. ;]
And yes, the next update should be longer... I can't resist puppy dog eyes!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 3
Get with updating! LOL. Can't wait for more ( still think it would be fun if you made her had her v-card. I know u discussed it in the first chapter, maybe Mike or Tyler (can't remember) didn't do it right LOL and she still has it. Your story - just thinking a innocent Bella would make for some great humor when she is trying to seduce the seducer).
Author's Response: On it! ;]
Yes, actually, I have a plan in motion. Your first review gave me an idea for a good plot twist and you're on track. Thanks for the suggestion! I'll mention you when I introduce the twist. :)
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 3
RL has a way of doing that. After reading the last chapter, I hope Bella knows what she's getting into. ;) Of course she does. Edward needs the right girl to bring him to life and Bella is just the girl to do it. Can't wait to see what happens in the club when Edward sees her standing there, all glamoured up. Write!
Author's Response: Don't you know it. And I have a feeling Bella might be a little over her head... But we'll see. ;]
Yes, I'm on it! :D
Reviewer: courtney1022 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great story more please
Author's Response: Next update shouldn't be too long here, I'm working on it now. :]
Reviewer: stilly001 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 2
eeewwww.
Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 2
oh he is a shallow pig and i hope Bella tears him to shreds !! cant wait to see : )
Author's Response: Oh it will be fun.... ;]
Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
i cant wait to read his POV... just to see if he is worthy of Bella : )
Author's Response: Oh trust me he's not... yet. ;]
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 2
Forgot - I will be pimping this out to my friends. I love assward stories - I want to see Bella bring him to his knees lol.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 2
lol regarding Tanya. I really like this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! And trust me, I love douchy Eddie too. ;]
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 2
Sounds like arrogant Edward is in for a surprise. Bella is going to wrap around his heart like an ivy vine and he's not going to know what hit him. casual sex really isn't much and he's finally realizing that? good! Nice writing! I hope you write fast! ;)
Joan
Author's Response: Wow, you catch on fast! But there will be a little twist... you'll see. ;] And I'm having too much fun to write this slowly, trust me. :D
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
OMG, what I wouldn't do to be in that bar in Bella's place. *hehe* Great little scene you conjured up for us!! Love this!! Edward is HOT as always and I always love Bella. :)
Author's Response: Oh we share the same wish, trust me. ;]
Thank you so much! I'm having so muxh fun writing this.
Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh wow...he really is an ass. Good job, it worked! LOL!
I'm anxious to see how Bella will get his attention. It sounds like he's going to be looking for something more wholesome and natural very soon.
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks! Good to know I didn't go overboard on that one.
Oh, I am having fun writing this next chapter, trust me. ;]
And thank you so much, it gives me inspiration to keep writing. :)
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