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Reviews For Growing Pains
Reviewer: RebeccaJ1973 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2018 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 19

This story has been the best of the four in this series.  I soooo wish you'd finish it.  Normally I won't even begin a story that is not complete, but having read the first three, I figured I'd go ahead... never realizing that this one would be much, much more attention-grabbing.  **sigh** Now I won't get to find out how the Volturi situation plays out. :(

Reviewer: sarahaimee (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2014 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 19

When are you posting the next update??? 

I'm loving what you're doing with the story, and mixing canon with au. 

Very well written :) 

Reviewer: Black Poyzen (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2012 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 19

hi! i just found ur series n have read all of them in about aweek so could u pretty please finis this story i cant wait to see what happens next! and actually this is one of my fav chapters since charlie gets to meet nessie. thanks

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 19

There's one thing Lizzy and I have in common: We both hate shoes.

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 18

IT'S ABOUT TIME, ADAM!!!! We've beenwaiting for, what? Three books now?

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 17

I translated the Italian words and, well, someone needs to wash out Felix's mouth with soap! I'm sure Adam would be more than happy to volunteer! ;)

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 15

Did Jake seriously just... I mean, he really... What was he?... Why did he?... Oh, I need to sit down!... *mumbles incoherently about stupid boys*

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 14

Thank you SO MUCH for keeping it PG-13! I've made the mistake of reading several NC-17 stories before checking the ratings, and, um, yeah... Anyways, LeiaXAdam "FOREVER AND ALWAYS" LOL

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 12

Are they gonna call her Lizzy or Renesmee? Cuz so far in this story they've used both names, and, well, yeah...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 11

I was all "Grrrrr! Really!" When she didn't start having contractions when she dropped the cup! Seriously, Edward! Why'd you have to hold her back?

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 10

Daaaaaaawwwwww! I just hope they don't get too smutty...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 9

I swear to God that if I had been in the room when Alice said that about Adam and Leia, I would have smacked that spikey-haired head right off her shoulders. You know, if I were capible of doing such a thing...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 7

The least you could have done was make Bella ask Leia to get Rosalie on board with it! I mean, seriously! I just had a thought! If Bella actually had Renesmee in Alaska, then Irina will know that it's not an immortal child. So where will the Volturi come in? I'm confused. Also, funny you should mention orange juice in your end notes, cuz I'm drinking some right now, LOL.

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh! Question! Does Seth imprint on Renesmee? That would be cool!

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 4

"Ooh! Strawberries!" I love straberries, too! Why don't I get strawberries? But I really like your story. I'm obbsessed with the Baby Sister series! No joke!

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 2

That last bit made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! Which is a rare feeling fo r me because I'm not a very mushy person, so...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

There is a line between selflessness and stupidity, and I think Bella has crossd that line way to many times...

Reviewer: laurieglory (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2012 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 19

Hello~ I have read all of the Little Sister stories in the past week. SO GOOD!!! Noticed in the AN that you mentioned possibly finishing by Christmas. Its June 2012 now so I was wondering if you were on hiatus or maybe not finshing the story?? Thanks for writing such a wonder series :)

Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 19

It's nice to hear from you! Sorry about taking forever to review. I read it awhile back on my iPhone but could not review from there so....


Great chapter! I glad you finally got to this part with Charlie. That was one of my favorite scenes in the book as well as one of the ones I look forward to the most in Part 2. I liked Part 1 better than I thought I would. I was a little scared to see it, actually, but my family forced me to over Thanksgiving. Gotta love 'em. 


I hope you are well!


Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2011 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 19

  'Edward, Adam and I had taken Bella and Lizzy into Fairbanks to the little diner where I had almost eaten Amy over a decade ago.'        I imagine they checked if Amy was still working there before going.        ;)

  'I had only participated in two, and I had won three months of silence from Emmett on the 'final test' bet. Silence as in no sexual comments or blatant innuendo about Adam and me. It was killing him, but it was making things so much more relaxing around the house.'        HAHAHAAAHH!!  Poor Emmett...        :-P

  'Not to mention Alice was determined to help organize my wedding, despite the fact that Adam and I had most of the simple ceremony planned out already.(...)  Adam and I wanted to get married in Forks, at Christmas.'        More than Edward and Bella's, this is a wedding no one ever saw before.  I imagine it being a little weird, at least, for some Quileutes, even if they are more used to Leia by now.        :)

  'Lizzy was already well aware that humans were not now, nor ever would be on her menu. She admitted freely that humans did smell tempting, but she didn't seem to have any trouble resisting the call.'        Ah.  I see why they got her along in Bella's "graduation exam".        :-]

    Damn!  I'm a bit disappointed that Charlie is still on the need-to-know basis.  Despite the fact he had some good insights.  I thought that, with all he saw and after Jacob talking to him, he was going to be more aware this time.  Maybe need-to-deny-what-deep-down-I-already-know is more accurate...        :-/

  That said, Bella keeping Charlie close is always a good thing, no matter how.        :)

Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 19

Oh Charlie! His POV is absolutely wonderful, especially his assessment of Alice. I love how he forces himself to cut down his own inquisitive nature with the 'need to know' approach. And how he sometimes fails.

Really great chapter.

Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 19

Aww! How cute! And appropriate, considering Thanksgiving was just last week. I always love your updates. :)

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 19

This was very sweet!  Such a nice thanksgiving present.


Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 18

I just re-read your whole story. :) I miss your updates, so I hope there's one soon!

Reviewer: LittleMissAbigail (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2011 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 18

Aw, cuteness! I wish I would see a picture of her jewelry. It sounds beautiful. The proposal completely fit their characters. I find it funny, I usually can't stand stories about characters not in the Saga but yours always go along so seamlessly that I forget they're not. Lizzie is growing up so fast! I loved how concerned she was when Leia passed out and took her joke literally. Such a little kid thing. Are we really going to get to see Charlie next chapter? Yay, I can't wait!


Thank you for sharing this with us and I hope to be more diligent in my reviewing.


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