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Reviews For The Storm

Reviewer: babylou23 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 3

aww ethan is so cute, brave wee man

Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 6

this...is....GREAT! very well written :) can't wait for another update.

Reviewer: kayjanna (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 6

Your story is wonderful. I'm so glad I found it! Thank you for sharing. I'll be checking for updates often.

Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 6

Another great chapter! Looks like Esme, the super-matchmaker prepares to strike. And I don't think she'll leave E and B completely alone.. ;)

Author's Response:
Let's just say this Esme is ready to have some grandchildren . . . :-) Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 3

Love the way you are portraying all the Cullen.

Reviewer: joy_1 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 6

I am always amazed at how military return to NC after they serve. Nice weather, nice people and a respect for those who serve. I love living here.

Author's Response:
Same here - want's not to like about NC - we have the beaches, wine country, and the mountains. I don't think I'm ever leaving. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 6

LOL. Super cute. Ahhh, I can't wait for more. Update soon, pleaseeee?

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 6

Hey this was another great chap =] lol i love esmes match making

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 6

I read all 6 chapters of your story & really love it! Looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 6

No one gets in between Esme and her way!

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love the interactions between Edward and Ethan - they are so very tender. Also it is nice to see Esme taking a larger role in the story - she doesn't usually get alot of attention. I hope to soon see interaction between Bella and Edward. thanks for the post

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 6

dun dun dun! and so we'll have B*E under the same roof....with the cute little boy...and Jalice running into one another....say, when's Rosie gonna make an appearance?? Esme is setting the stage for l'amour alright....a was Carlisle takin' her upstairs for some schmexin'???

It's time for Bella to wakey wakey!!!

Thanks for the update. They rock! :)

Author's Response:
Rosie is showing up soon - Bella will be waking in the next chapter or 2, and yes, Carlisle and Esme did get it on (they have needs too!)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 6

i hope she wakes up soon, she's gonna freak when she doesn't see Ethan

(formally njdevil30718)

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hey great chap oooh i hope alices dream comes true =] wow edward was a bit shallow about bellas apparence but great with ethan

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 5

I love Edward and Ethan's interactions. I just want to hug Ethan lol

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

Haha. So cute. Can't wait for more. XD

Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 5

First Jane, now Lydia...Ethan seems to be a great judge of character. And he does not speak to b*tches.

Reviewer: njdevil30718 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 5

he's just so freaking cute and sweet with him. i think he'll be a big part of help Ethan come out of his shell

Reviewer: twoonia (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved how this story is progressing....update soon

Reviewer: depper57 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 5

Love it, looking forward to more!!

Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 5

I love the Ethan Edward bonding. Too cute.

Reviewer: Carlie_Cullen91 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 4

again another great chapter! i love seeing edward and ethan together, its really sweet. i hope they spend alot more time together including bella, i hope she isnt unconcious for to long but understand healing takes time, keep going your amazing! =D xx

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love the Ethan and Edward interaction.

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 4

I really love this story i smile every time there is an update =] awww i love ethan and i am glad he seems to be ok and that bella reached her goal and i love that u mentioned the sacrifice mothers always make for their children

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 4

hello again! i am sad....I'm out of chapters!

I've fallen in love with Edward, who had fallen in love with Ethan, and vice versa!! Ethan is chating up a storm (no pun intended!) - what gives? maybe he just likes the Cullens?? Hmmm, Hero Edward in his boxers!! a tasty, snow-covered morsel!!

please oh please - do continue with this story. I am intrigued! I want to read about Bella's reunion iwth Ethan, and the ZING when they meet!! :)

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