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Reviewer: One way (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2015 07:36 PM · On: Epilogue
This is really good! Ray is moved in his heart from watching
the true love between Edward and Bella as I have been. I've been married
20 years and twilight has rekindled in me the loving closeness we had when we started
out. It reminded us how to love again, not just be together! Thank you again!
Author's Response: You are quite welcome... and that's great that the tale of Edward and Bella, created by Stephanie Meyers, proved so powerful. She most definitely created a tremendous universe, and it was neat to borrow it for this tale.
Reviewer: One way (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2015 02:56 PM · On: Epilogue
That was really fun! Thank you for your insight!
Author's Response: Thanks! Had started a long sequel to this... but I kind of ran out of time. Anyway, I appreciate your rating. :-)
Reviewer: Phb4367 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2015 09:35 PM · On: Epilogue
Great story
Author's Response: Thank you... glad you liked it! :-)
Reviewer: Kateration (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 04:52 AM · On: Epilogue
Yep, nailed it! So awesome! It was an interesting perspective, very interesting because a point of view like that is very prominent in my story and reading this is inspiring. You should write more.
Author's Response: Thanks Kateration. Glad you found my little tale entertaining. I have been reading your story, which is also very unique, and I'm very interested to see what direction you go in. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Kateration (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 2
That was precious. I'm really liking this Ray, he's very perceptive and sweet.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: Kateration (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2013 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love this! How wonderfully original!
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate your note!
Reviewer: SCWillson (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2013 11:20 AM · On: Epilogue
Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the note!
Reviewer: Vamp Chick (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 12:55 AM · On: Epilogue
I really loved the entire concept of this story! It was wondefful from beginning to end!
Author's Response: Thanks Vamp Chick - I may be late in responding, but I appreciate the note and the stars. :-)
Reviewer: bfk1122 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2012 03:07 PM · On: Epilogue
I loved it! I didn't think I would but i did. I always wondered why Bella's friends didn't see more than they did with the whole situation. I guess you only see what you want to.
Author's Response: Thanks for the note - and thanks for giving it a try, given you went into the tale skeptical. Although it's stalled at the moment, I am in the process of writing another story in this universe. While this one was light and good natured, the one I'm working on is very dark. Anyway, thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wow! You packed a lot of SM's books into these 2 chapters; it was great fun reading this! Chapter 3 must be delicious; now you get to have free reign and show us Ray's view of the Cullens' and Jacob's unchanging appearances and newest adventures. I have a feeling Renesmee figures into all of this more; poor Ray, he doesn't know how close he is to the truth!
Author's Response: Glad to see that this little tale picked up for you. :-) Thanks for the five stars. Hopefully that 3rd chapter, which is really an Epilogue, also works for you. As far as having a free reign on showing you Ray's POV - that would have to come in the sequel to this story. I've started working on it... stalled... worked on it more... and stalled again. But I see it happening before Breaking Dawn, Part Two hits the theatres. :-)
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
So, this was a cute start; however, I don't see Ray's suspicions enough yet! I guess I'll just have to wait to see more!
Author's Response: Ouch... be patient! :-)
Reviewer: JennBunn (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 10:53 PM · On: Epilogue
Oh mann.... this story was an amazing read. It really showed the other side of the culllens and how they were percieved by others. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a note! The Kulp story may continue some time in the future - about six chapters have already been written, but I won't post it until I've completed the story. Thanks again!
Reviewer: tabbycat627 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 06:49 AM · On: Epilogue
You should have made it longer! lol. I loved it
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating! And for taking the time to make a comment! :-)
Reviewer: Sattinson (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2011 06:35 PM · On: Epilogue
I absolutely loved it. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, Sattinson... I appreciate you leaving comments and the solid rating. :-) Yes, it was fun writing the Bella and Edward Show, and I've actually been derailed from my intentions of continuing the Kulp story. It's dark in nature and I have mixed emotions about it... but I've already written a lot of it and outlined a great deal. So, maybe some day you'll read about the Kulp family crisis where Ray had to travel to Forks to seek Cullen help. :-)
Reviewer: Sattinson (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2011 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
Raymond has such a wonderful personality. I love the way this turned out.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Sattinson (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2011 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very creative! I loved reading this!
Reviewer: CarrieW (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 06:31 AM · On: Epilogue
Thank you for this outside perspective of a relationship we all love to eavesdrop on. I also enjoy your happiness and think every ending should be that way :)
Author's Response: Hi Carrie,
Thanks for your review, and yeah - I love this kind of tales, and couldn't resist writing my own. As it is, I've started another tale in this particular Bella and Edward Show universe, whereas Ray, who resides in Seattle with his family, must rush back to Forks in hopes of contacting the Cullens. The Kulps are undergoing trauma in their life when their oldest daughter Jessica, and her best friend, are abducted for a horrific reason. It's dark and will be either R or NC 17, and it will take the entire family to come to Ray and Julie's aid.
Reviewer: arocha27 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Epilogue
Thank you, ur story actually brought smiles and tears tp my face, you are really good at writting and I think you actually cought the twilight scent, which is true love and understanding, thank you so very much fot this great story.
Author's Response: I'm not sure how I missed your review, but I wanted to thank you for the touching words... the universe created by SM is a fascinating one, and has the ability to invoke such emotion. I'm glad my characters, especially Ray, was able to invoke such emotion from you. :-)
Reviewer: annicullen (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Epilogue
Loved it! Great idea and well written.
Author's Response: Thank you for shooting me a note. Glad you found it entertaining. I recently read "Priority Client" and found myself itching with a desire to write more in this AU of mine. :-) Who knows...?
Reviewer: xiolaperry (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 04:55 AM · On: Epilogue
I really enjoyed your story. You made the different POV work. It made the story of Bella & Edward have a fresh newness that is missing from some other stories. Thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! :-)
Reviewer: irisp4 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Epilogue
Very touching tale.
Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Epilogue
This was quite a charming story and I really enjoyed it. I plan on checking out the other stories you mentioned in your comments above since I have read some amazing stories due to other authors' suggestions just like yours.
Author's Response: Thanks for the note - I appreciate it... and yeah, the other tales are of the same vain, so you should enjoy them. :-)
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Epilogue
I really liked this story... I thought that I could happen... ya know... Edward always seemed to have a soft spot for anytone with kind thoughts regarding his Bella... beautifully written... I really liked how you brought Jacob into the story... ya know, let him see that relationship change... its great!
Author's Response: Thanks for the note - I appreciate it. Yeah, I really do think Edward and Alice would have combined forces to ensure Ray was good... wished the absolute best... and was not a threat to their secret.
Reviewer: mousekitty (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
Since we are all so familiar with the inside story, it's fun to see pieces of it from the outside.
Author's Response: Glad you found it entertaining and thank you for dropping a note. :-)
Reviewer: redvampee (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Epilogue
Wow! Totally loved this story! I think it was just lovely and I could just see it playing itself out. I simply loved Ray's character and I liked how he was like Bella in away, liked the Cullens and while he knew something was off, he didn't shy away and he was in their corner. I wish you could revisit them one more time, have Ray smile at seeing them just one more time. I see him like Charlie in away, he is just happy to see them and see them happy. In many of the Post Breaking Dawn stories, I'm obssessed with their family growing for whatever reason, why just have 5 mated/married couples, what about the vamp/werewolf and their mate that makes the choice and gets turned like Bella. anyway, again loved and I can just see them further down the road while I'm not great tale weaver here, I could see them going to a baseball game to see Ray's son playing in the majors and of course knowing he would be there because Alice saw it
Author's Response: Thank you very much for dropping me such a great review and of course the stars. :-) Trust me... I have thuoght abuot revisiting Ray's story for a short one shot - but I'd have to come up with the ultimate premise for the tale wouldn't allow for anything less. I can't say it'll happen, but who knows down the road. :-)
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