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Polar by Witch Hazel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 287]
Summary:

Jackson Rathbone has turned his world upside down and is attracted to a woman who is his polar opposite in every way. Life and outside sources try to tear them down and pull them apart. Is magnetic attraction stronger than vice?

* Lemons ahead. *


Categories: AU-Human, Other Characters: Jackson Rathbone
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 96589
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2009 Updated: March 26, 2010


Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow!  You took me back to college.  I'm not much a drinker, but I still played all the drinking games.  Oh the memories...

Katilynn was so comfortable with the cast like she's known them for years and they all clicked.  I have a feeling she's not done with Kellan yet! 

 

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm so sorry I hadn't responded earlier.  The Thanksgiving holiday put me behind on everything.

Wow!  That chapter was awesome!  Kate has all these responsibilities at home, she just wants to be free.  That last romp?  OMG!! I don't even know what to say...except, that I can't wait for more!

Question:  Is Jackson gonna meet Brett at some point?

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I have to tell you that every time I see that you have updated, I have to read it, no matter what time it is.  I love this story.

Jackson is so sweet to Kate and I love the way you created the two of them together.  When she arrived in Vancouver, he was such a gentleman.  When is she gonna meet Kellan, Rob, and Ashley?  That ought to be interesting.

I can't wait until you update again!

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I knew it!  I knew Brittney did, because she brought both her and Brett the drinks that night, and she was being really friendly. 

I didn't see Bree turning into a skank-slut supreme.  I knew she was jealous, but WOW.  You think you know people.   

 

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awww! How sweet, Jackson and Kate are falling in love! 

I loved that Jackson stood up for Kate in front of Brittany.  That bitch had it coming!  It's about time someone told her where she could go!

Great job, once again!

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn!  That was hot!  This is your first shot at writing?  Great decriptions and great detail!

Jackson sounds incredibly sexy.  So sweet, he calls her pretty girl (hopefully it's not because he can't remember her name)

Great job!  I'm looking forward to reading more.

 



Author's Response:

This is my first shot at writing, but I'm not one of those little girls who does it for attention. I enjoy writing so I decided to do something new. I'm glad you like it and even though pretty girl might go towards baby-you're-hot-and-I-can't-remember-your-name-but-I-want-in-your-pants, it's just a really sweet nickname he thought up for her. Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What!! I didn't know it was that Jackson! Damn!

Once again, great detail and great descriptions!  I wonder how Jackson is going to feel when he wakes up and finds that Kate has flown the coop.  And how will they meet again!

Oh, and one more thing.  I understand Bree is trying to be a good friend and all, but Jeez give the girl a break!  You're killing her buzz!  She just had the most amazing sex with Jackson Rathbone!  Let her enjoy that for a moment!

I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I felt the same way on Bree, but someone had to be the buzzkill, you know. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yes, it was very good!  My heart goes out to Jackson.  He needs to find her and I can't wait for that reunion.  It's great to know that he wants to get to know her, even after the one night stand, but Jackson seems like a cool guy.

I like that you added Ashley in this chapter?  You wrote her as a sweet and caring friend, which is how I see her, not that I've met her.  Are any other Twilight actors going to make  appearances?

I think Jackson would be proud of the story you have written about him.

Keep it coming!

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

How cute!  She's still wearing his shirt!  To be honest though, I'd be wearing that thing everyday too. 

It seems like Katilynn's life is all set for her.  She has her husband picked out, her sorority is planning her senior year to help get it out of debt.  One would think she has nothing to worry about.  But what about what she wants.

And it seems like Brittney's main purpose their senior year is to taunt Kaitlynn.  It's obvious that she's jealous.  I wonder how she would feel if she knew that Kaitlynn slept with Jackson Rathbone!  Just sayin.

Great job again!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

You are so on point it hurts. P.S., I would totally keep the shirt too.

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ashley is such a great friend.  How sweet of her to try and arrange a meeting between Jackson and Kate.  Hopefully that will be soon.

My favorite line:

'Hey Katilynn! I know this is weird and kind of random, but I know you had a little rendezvous with Jackson over the summer. & THEN LEFT!!!

Too funny!  I liked seeing the other Twilight cast members too.

Okay, off to read the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

What?!?  That was awesome!

How cool was that?  She was looking at Kellan, Rob, and Ashley and they were talking to her!  I think I would have fainted.  WOW! And she got a chance to talk to Jackson.

Brittney would have been kicked down the stairs if it was me.  Please tell she's going to get hers.

And tell me she's going to Vancouver!  This is a once and a lifetime chance!  And she gets to meet the cast of Twilight.  Do it girl!

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ohh How sweet!  I want them to be back together soon!  Is Jackson gonna make a surprise visit to see Katilynn?  I hope he surprises her and takes her away from the madness.

Brittney is getting on my damn nerves.  I understand her frustration with saving the sorority, but give Katilynn a break.  Tell me Katilynn will tell her to fly a kite and soon!

Looking for more!

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That chapter was hilarious! Kellan cracks me up?

Favorite line: Rob won't because he fights like a girl, but he can slap like a bitch.


And Brett. For a while, I felt sorry for him, but he doesn't deserve Kaitlynn. He's an ass. Sarah and Bree are such good supportive friends, but Kaitlynn seems like she would do the same for them.

I can't unitl Kate gets her presents, especially what's in that taped box from Kellan and Rob. That should be interesting.

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good Stuff!  He surprised her on her birthday!  How sweet!  And he's gonna meet Sarah and Bree.  I can't wait until he meets Brett, that should be interesting. 

What's the compass mean?

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow, you're really good at those lemons!  That was hot!

I liked that Sarah approved of Jackson, and who wouldn't. But she was being a great friend though.  My best friend would do the same.

Brett, Brett, Brett.  He doesn't know what an ass he's being and doesn't understand why he can't get what he wants.  Typical. 

Good stuff!

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Okay, somehow I got really behind.  I think I missed the email updates, but I'm here now.

OMG!  That has to be the steamiest, hottest, lemon(s) I think I have ever read.  I'm speechless!

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

What the hell?  Who did it?  And they took pictures!  OMG, I can't believe I missed all this!  Okay, reading the next chapter, right now!!

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow, this just gets better and better!  I'm dying to know who drugged Kate's drink.  I have a feeling that Brett was tricked too, and I have my theories as to who did this, but I will wait and see.

Another great chapter!

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Very sweet chapter. 

I'm still trying to guess who drugged Kate.  Was it Brittney?  I thought maybe Brett was drugged too, but who knows?  Some of the things she remembered didn't add up.

And Bree, she's not a real friend.  If my friend was that drunk, I would have kept a better eye on her, no matter what fight we were having.  But she just let her go.  Sarah's right, she's so jealous and it sounds like she always has to be right! 

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter again! 

I loved the part where Jackson's mom caught Jackson and Kate in his room.  That was hilarious.  His mother sounds so cool, and his sisters too. 

I wonder what's going to happen when the unexpected family members come in.  Are they going to like Kate or cause problems.  Probably cause problems. 

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

How sweet!  Jackson slept with his sister and Kate.  What a Kodak moment! 

Jackson's a great big brother looking out for his younger sister.  I also liked that Brittney was able to call her big brother for help and he was nothing but supportive. 

So, I'm dying to know who is sending the pictures to Jackson.  I had my theories before, but I'm starting to second guess them.  Who is it?

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Man, that little kid is horrible!  They all handled that better than me.  A smack against the back of the head would have stopped a lot of that, especially with that snake.  I wonder why he's like that.  Is it just bad parenting or something deeper.

So more of the mystery of that night was revealed.  I'm glad she has Sarah to watch out for her.  I know she feels bad for not making Kate go with her, but I've had friends that were sloppy drunk too, and they can be hard to control.

 

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter!  So we get more clues, but who is calling from the Michigan number!  I loved Sarah in this chapter!  She really took charge of things.

 

 
Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: March 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh this is kinda sad!  It's over!  I get this feeling every time I finish reading a great book, and this was excellent.

You have such a great talent, especially for have never written anything before.  Some people got it, though. 

I can't wait for the sequel!

 
Summary:

 

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Kisses to sangrealfire for her beautiful banner!

Welcome to the city of Miami.  Where the days are hot & the nights are even hotter.  Beautiful beaches, beautiful bodies.  Fake tans.  Strong drinks.  The hottest clubs.  Fast cars, fast women.  The city where money buys you everything.  Where the divorce rate is high, silicone is a necessity & sex is a game.  Let's Play.

Bella Swan 'Newton' is living in Miami.  Her days are filled with her two best friends, sisters Alice and Cynthia Brandon, her boss Jake, and her pending divorce from her high school sweetheart Mike.  After a one night stand with  Miami playboy Edward Cullen, Bella is thrust into what Miami has to offer.  The most beautiful clubs, luxurious dinners, and more money than she could ever image.   There's only two problems.  One, Edward is married.  Two, he's Mike's lawyer.  What happens when the best sex of your life comes from a man who is wanting to destroy you?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 60361
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: February 03, 2011


Reviewer: Shae Shae Signed
Date: March 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Ch. 3 - Play

I'm just catching up with this and OMG!  It is so amazing and so hot, and I'm not just talking about the weather. 

Edward is such a dick, but at the same time he's hot while he's being one.  I can't wait for Bella to set him straight, though.  That should be interesting.

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for stopping in and reading!!!

We're glad you not only talking about the weather!  I see a a forecast for hotter weather in the future!

 




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