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Penname: TwilightLuver127b [Contact]
Real name: Hannah
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Vesper by dapixam_q Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 91]
Summary:

E/B alternate universe. The Cullens stayed in Alaska for three more years than in the books, so Bella spends the end of her junior year in Forks without Edward. How will she deal with her inevitable feelings for him when she's already dating Jacob and mostly happy with her life?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 85699
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2008 Updated: December 28, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13: The Hunt

Amazing story I really liked it please write more it is fantastic

 
Summary:

Bella Swan meets a beautiful stranger, lawyer Edward Masen on a holiday in Rome. The chemistry is palpable, the sex passionate - and a physical relationship grows into something more. The days fly in a whirlwind of clothes, sand, sex and wine. After a painful realisation that the fantasy has come to an end, Bella returns apprehensively to Seattle, heartbroken at the loss of her love. 


But, little does she know that the 'beautiful stranger' isn't such a stranger, after all.

 

A surprise awaits Bella Swan in Seattle.

 

 

Rated for explicitly detailed sex scenes and language.

 

 

Beautifully accurate banner by the beautifully talented MrsC. Thank you!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 65735
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: January 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Cocktails with Jalice (shabbyapple)

good story please write more.

 
Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: January 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Cocktails with Jalice (shabbyapple)

good story please write more.

 
Summary: Bella's life was a fairytale until tragedy struck not once, but twice, changing the course of her life forever.  No matter what life throws her way, Bella accepts her life and trudges on.  Now, as she starts college, Bella meets some new friends who try to help her regain her fairytale life.  Will she meet prince charming in the process? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 51114
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: First Spat

Great story please write more.

 
Summary:

NEW SUMMARY 

AU.

Bella, an outspoken young lady of the 1800's, is haunted by a horrible accident of the past. She shuts herself off from the rest of the world after that fateful day, but soon she finds herself captivated by a new family to town. The Cullens are intriguing, especially a certain bronze haired boy with golden eyes.


Thanks xsecretxkeeperx for the summary & beta skills!


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 21139
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: March 19, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

great story interesting please write more.

 
Can't Let Go by madeleinejade Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 589]
Summary:

Bella ruins her friendship with Edward by confessing her feelings to him which he doesn't return. She goes back to Arizona for college but returns to Washington after graduation due to Charlie's illness. Can she and Edward be friends again?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 112590
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2008 Updated: March 24, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: O Captain! My Captain!

My brothers friend, My best friends ex boyfriend. my brother tried to read twilight he got bored on the 14th page it was so funny.

 
String Theory by H83Wun Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Bella Swan is just living her life-- at home with her brother Jacob, and her parents Charlie and Renee, at school with her friends Mike and Jessica, in her bedroom with...well. She doesn't like to talk about that.
But Dr. Carlisle Cullen knows-- even if he can't explain why--he knows nothing is the way it should be.

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 29809
[Report This] Published: December 27, 2008 Updated: April 16, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great story please write more it is very interesting

 
Dying By Degrees by Reamhar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 664]
Summary:

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What if Bella’s thoughts on the plane flying back to Seattle from Italy take her in a different direction from the plot in New Moon? Just where could a little twist of fate take the characters? An indepth look at Bella's thoughts and feeling at the end of New Moon and into an AU Eclipse.

Canon couples, and rated NC17 just to be safe. I am Bella and Edward all the way, so if you like Bella and Jacob, then I am afraid this is not the story for you.

Dying By Degrees on discussion forum.  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=19&t=9136

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 106997
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: June 19, 2010


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: December 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

PLEASE WRITE MORE IT IS REALLY GOOD

 
Summary:

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 (banner by the awesome m81170)

When Bella moves to Forks, she's surprised that there's someone living in the house across from hers... and even more so that her window faces directing into someone else's! Will these two window buddies be able to get over their naivity and shyness to discover that they're meant to be? AU, AH BxE all the way... enjoy!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 62092
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2009 Updated: April 13, 2010


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I love this story when are you going to write more. you have captured the characters personalities really well. Write more xoxoxoxo

 
In His Head by angelsmg Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 180]
Summary:

We all know that Edward Cullen has the ability to read everyone's thoughts, except for Bella's.

This story is about Bella having the same gift, as a human, and being able to read even Edward's thoughts.

Takes place during the timeframe of Twilight.

 

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 7454
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2009 Updated: August 14, 2012


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Hospital

It is good can you write more it is really interesting

 
Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Let's Try This Again

Love it please write more.

Author's Response:

i will soo thanks for reviewing!

 
Lucid Dreams by verlore Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 233]
Summary:

 

 

 "Bella smiled warmly at me then, unaware of my secrets and the silent threats they made on her life..."

 

 

Lucid Dreams

 

 

Bella Swan is a highly eccentric art student in Seattle.

 

Edward Cullen is a mind-reading vampire, who is instantly drawn to her creative and colorful thoughts. (Yes, he can read her mind! Sort of.)

 

When devious little Alice catches a glimpse of their future, she'll do anything to get them together, including moving Bella in behind Edward's back!

 


Come play in the forums!

http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=2677

 

Rated NC-17 for swearing, drinking, violence, & later chapters.Totally AU.

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 30602
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Seven - Part Three

It awesome Write more

 
Summary:

Found unconscious after four years of being held captive by two nomadic vampires, Bella is rescued by three members of the Cullen family. When she awakens, the family is apalled to find how deeply she's withdrawn into the roll of an abused pet. In time, she begins to trust and find comfort again but the Cullen's worry if she will ever regain her full humanity.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 33925
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: June 04, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This story is sad but amazing please write more.

 
Summary:

Edward is adopted by the Cullens after living a nightmare.  He meets Bella, and she tries to fight his inner monster.  AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 104014
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Alternate Ending pt. 2

i cried so many times i didnt really like alternate ending it was way too sad no offense.

 
Persistence Pays Off by Twitch Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 446]
Summary:

Bella's having a bad day. Edward's the telemarketer who so happens to cross her path on that day. How does Edward react when Bella gives him a piece of her mind?

 

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AU/AH, all canon couples. Varying POV between Edward and Bella.

Fantastic banner by Danger_Magnet


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 48348
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2009 Updated: June 15, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Call Me... Please?

I love this story it is tacky but hilarious at the same time i love the little pictures at the end of each chapter please write more it is awesome.

 
Summary:



Bella makes the decision to leave Phoenix forever after a tragic accident. Seeking a fresh start, she heads to the small town of Forks to live with Charlie. The cold numbness that has imprisoned Bella's heart begins to subside when she finds herself falling for the only person at Forks High School capable of tearing down her walls.



Canon pairings, AU for loosely following Twilight original plot. Some angst -- especially in the beginning.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 110901
[Report This] Published: March 21, 2009 Updated: October 26, 2011


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Redemption Song

Love this story please add the next chapter such a great story. Love it xoxoxoxoxoxo

 
Summary:

 

Summary: Bella Swan moved from her home in Phoenix to join Charlie in Forks, Washington. Immediately, she is drawn to the strange, reclusive Edward Cullen, but at the advice of her friends Alice Brandon and Rosalie Hale, she decides not to tempt fate by approaching him. However, what she witnesses one afternoon changes all that, as she delves deeper into his world and learns his shocking secret.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 7955
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2009 Updated: April 17, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Hey it is a great idea for a story please add more i find that most fan fics i read i just get glued to them i can spend hours just reading them please write more.

 
Summary:

Four strangers meet in an elevator and quickly become friends.  A serires of concedences keep bringing them together as those friendships become something more and as someone's dark past comes back to haunt them all.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 37109
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2009 Updated: July 21, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Piano Man

The story is so sweet please write more.

 
Summary:

Alice and Bella are in high school, and to celebrate the commencement of their junior year, Alice is throwing an end of the year party. After much begging, she gets Bella to attend. Unfortunately, someone spiked the drinks, and Bella gets drunk. She ends up being seduced by a beautiful bronze haired boy, who she can't remember ever seeing before. A couple weeks later, her mother, Esme, announces that she's remarrying. Bella's going to have a new stepbrother. This stepbrother is none other than the handsome stranger she fell in love with at Alice's party. And to top it off, she discovers that she's pregnant...  

Rated NC-17 for teenage drinking-nothing explicit

Thank you to TaintedDarkInuShemeeko for the awesome banner!!!!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Nessie, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 44596
[Report This] Published: March 30, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2010


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: At Last!

It is really good awesome ways for suspense please write more.

 
Summary:

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There is real life, then there's Real Life.

 

We all know that Rob and Kristen belong together. So what happens when that finally happens, just years down the road? Enter Ever After . . .

 

A series of one-shots, that are tied together by the moments that make up a couple's life together. Add a few 'sex-haired' babies and some Twilight friends for fun.

 

Rated NC-17 because you just never know when the lemon muse will show up.

 

A new series from  jakeward and the shrew.

 

*stories will not be necessarily be in chronological order. Cause that's how we roll. :)

 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kellan Lutz, Kristen Stewart, Other Character, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: Ever After . . ., The Robsten Files
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 118030
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2013


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Addiction

Pretty hilarious on most chapters it is a great story. awesome use of characters personalities write more please.

 
EverClear by Chandler Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 870]
Summary:

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It's been almost 5 years since that terrible day in the woods. Bella and Edward have both struggled with the devestating aftermath of their last conversation. Both have found solice in music, only in ways neither of them could have imagined. Can they find their way back to one another or is there just too much that time will not erase?


Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 119923
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2010


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14-Emotional Eruption

Please Please get to when Edward actually talks to Bella you are killing me with anticipation

 
Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17Bar Side Reunion

OMG it was so sweet i loved it please please say they get together in the end.

 
Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Hard Questions and Soft Dances

Um wow didnt expect that to happen is she ever going to forgive him? Man Edward swears a bit not so used it to it lol. Great story please say it ends with a happy ending. xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22-Anniversary Performances

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I loved it please please please write more i adore this story. How many chapters are left?

 
Victim by Tima83 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1092]
Summary:

She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, until he becomes abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she fakes her own death, escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered? 

When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?

Rated for future lemons, some scenes of violence, and cursing.

(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)

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 (thanks to CrimsonIceGoddess for the wicked new banner!!)


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Jacob, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 167140
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2009 Updated: November 04, 2011


Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b Signed
Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: The Big Reveal

Great cliffe please write more it is good.

Author's Response:

will do, thanks for your review, and for reading!

Happy New Year!

~Fatima

 




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