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Penname: DaSrO [Contact]
Real name: Daniela Salas
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Member Since: September 15, 2009
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Hypothesis: Vampires are capable of vertical inheritance.

 

Objectives:

 


  1. Finish knocking Jasper up, for the third time. Why? Because a story is not complete without a parity for Jasper.

  2. Knock up Emmett and Rosalie too. Why? Because it’s their way of dealing with the loss of a child.

  3. Rebuild vampire society after the war, including the transition to an egg-laying society and the adoption of eggs that were orphaned by the war.

  4. Move the Cullens back into human civilization and send the kids to middle school, so that they can learn to interact with humans and blend in.

  5. Send Masen to speech therapy with the humans so that he can learn to talk.

  6. Send Jasper back in time, with the aid of his time-traveling twins, to meet his human family and resolve any lingering issues he still has from his convergence.

  7. Accuse Jasper of being sexually attracted to his grandmother and bring up this accusation as many times as possible. Why? Because it’s the new running gag.

  8. Make entire story one hundred percent biologically accurate, despite the vampires.

  9. Tell a bunch of Cullenesque stories and make it funny, because that which is funniest is best.

Nominated for multiple iSparkle Awards!

Nominated for Best Drama/Angst/Hurt/Comfort WIP and Best Supernatural/Fantasy/Horror/Spiritual Sci-Fi WIP in the Emerging Swan Awards!

I have now been nominated for Oldie but Goodie Author in the Emerging Swan Awards!


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Post-Breaking Dawn, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 64 Completed: Yes Word count: 237551
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2012 Updated: January 08, 2014


Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Book 3- Jasper- Chapter 5

Awwww...I would have though an 'I love you' was the last thing one said to one's dying mother after such long time...still, it was lovely.

How is it that Jasper's so far back in the past? I forgot how was the wormhole thing...well,

Happy GallStoneversary! hope you're doing great :)

Daniela



Author's Response:

Jasper's not quite at the "I love you" stage...

And he can move freely into the past because he fell into Kare's wormhole and that's her power.

Happy GallStoneversary! I'm doing great and I hope you are too :)

 
Labels by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 212]
Summary:

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“Everyone has labels attached to them that they acquire over a lifetime... mother, daughter, wife, lover, friend, co-worker.  I happen to have all of those labels attached to me, plus one in particular that I’m not happy about…widow.  I have a daughter who never met her father, and parents who try to help me out but drive me crazy, along with a father-in-law who I take care of in the absence of his son.  Along with the label of “widow” came another label that I’m not happy about and it’s one I assigned to myself…crazy.  The reason I’m crazy is because every night in my dreams, I talk to my dead husband as if he was still alive.  I was perfectly content to live with those labels until someone showed up in my life that caused me to add another label to my seemingly never ending list…screwed." –Bella Black

 

AH/OOC.  Canon couples, eventually.  This is a story of a woman trying to deal with a devastating loss, so there will be sadness, but there will be humor and there will be love.  There’s foul language, eventual lemons, and it’s told in Bella’s POV.  It’s rated NC-17 for a reason.  It’s a love story at its heart, but it’s not an easy one.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 125316
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2012 Updated: June 19, 2012


Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww the sweetest thing Ive read in a long time :)

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed
Date: April 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I really enjoy your story, but it just broke my heart to read you casual mention of Venezuela. It's awful to be reminded that every scumbag think they can hide here, and it's even worse to know that thanks to Chavez its true. I dont know if you know, but the government in Venezuela has not been a democracy for the last 10 years, and it has taken a huge toll on everybody, specially the body count. Common people is really suffering from lack of security and the highest levels of poverty in all of my country's history. I guess it just made me really sad, and I don't mean aything by telling you all of this, just though that you should know that almost all of Venezuelan people is not on board with all the bad things going on in here.

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think it was mean of you to leave it hanging like that hehe hope 5th chapter its on the way. Too bad the thing with Jasper didnt last 12 hours until he meet Alice.

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Really nice story so far. I must confess Im guilty of chrges for doing the same you do, Im reading today cause you posted the fourth chapter. But is really good and I'll stick around and promise to reiew from now on hehe

Have a nice weekend,

Daniela

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Hi! I just realized you updated this story. Thank you for the author note, it wasn't necessary to apologize (after all, is not untrue what you're saying) but I really appreciate it :). As I told you before, I didnt mean anything by telling you how things are in Venezuela, I just thought you should know that is not a bad country per se, just a really bad goverment causing a really bad temporal situation (we all have our hopes on October 7th for the most peaceful way out of this goverment possible). Regarding the story, so nice that things are looking up for them; it was a good chapter and I'm happy that I got to read the next one right away hehe

Have a great week,

Daniela

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

The perfect end to a lovely story :)

 
Summary:

Sequel to Open Up Next to You, this is the story of Bella meeting her true vampire mate. How the Whitlock Coven adjusts and how she comes to open her heart again remain to be seen.

Liam/Bella Post-Eclipse, Non-BD-compliant AU.

Banner by the amazing evieeden. Thank you SO MUCH!

 

This story has been nominated for The Non-Canon Fic Award!

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Thank you so much for your votes!

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: Undeniable: Vampire Mate Bond Series
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 37671
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2012 Updated: March 15, 2012


Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Dreaming of the One

What a mean lil cliffie I must say...

Call me cheesy, but almost the entire chapter had me thinking abut the song 'what if I do' by the foo fighters...I think it fits perfectly.

Have a great weekend



Author's Response:

Good afternoon!

Mean? Me? *blink* lol

I have never heard that song, so I will go look them up. :) 

Thank you for reading and for the scintillating rating!

LJ

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: What a Woman

Pretty good!

I must tell you, I though about the whole asking Alistair a thousand times...what if the guy died ten years ago in a car crash three miles away from Bella?

Well,I'll be waiting to see where you take this story

Have a nice week,

Daniela



Author's Response:

Good morning, Daniela!

Ah, with Alistair?  If he started focusing on his gift in terms of Bella's mate, and he couldn't find one – he would have known. He might have taken time to travel a great deal first, to orient himself in several distant locations (or if he were awesome, he might use an database), but if the person who was to be Bella's mate was not walking on the earth, he would not have felt anything to trigger his "finding" gift.

Which would have been really sad, in a lot of ways, but IN that event, Bella would have still had a loving, vibrant relationship with Alice and Jasper.

Hope you like the rest of the story!

Thank you for reading and for the scintillating rating!

LJ

 
Cloud Cover by Annalori Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Bella, Edward

Emily invites Bella to spend the last day of Spring Break with her. Bella does not cliff dive, but instead, dives into her own psyche. Emily and Sam are making it work despite the fact Sam maimed Emily. Bella decides to be as persistant with Edward as Sam was with Emily. Now the pesky task of finding a Vampire in a haystack. Will Alice's vision be a help or hindrance? Will Jacob follow Bella? Can she afford all this travel on her measly college fund and Newton's paycheck?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 30532
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2012 Updated: May 20, 2012


Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Redheaded Leeches

btw, I've been looking for The Book Thief in pdf but I cant find it anywhere....if you have it could you please send it to me? my email is dasro1987@hotmail.com

I'm afraid that as I live in Latin America if I dont find it online I wont be able to read it and Im really curious about it, could you please help me out?



Author's Response:

Sorry,  I read The Book Thief in hardback form, borrowed from a friend.  It's one of the few books made of paper I've read in the past few years- since I got my Kindle.  I know it is available on the Kindle though, I just checked!   I found a site that might help you and am e-mailing you the link!

-Anna

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Redheaded Leeches

Is Tanya's last name in anyway related to Kashcheeva Vera S. (15/09/1922)? if not, I have no idea hehe really nice chapter, I like your Bella better than canon, yours have more spine. Hope chapter 7 is finished and uploaded soon.

Have a nice week,

Daniela



Author's Response:

No, I researched Russian sur names and their meanings.  So, it's not in direct relation to any living or deceased person.  I think S. Meyer wrote Bella kind of two dimentional.  Why do guys like her so much?  Phermones?  I liked her better after reading the partial draft of Midnight Sun and you get to see her from someone else's point of view.  The first 3 Twilight books are all Bella POV and she doesn't think she's interesting or extraordinary, and her good deads aren't mentioned.  In Midnight Sun, Edward follows her around in other people's minds for months and only sees the best of humanity in her.  That's the Bella I want to write about.  Like the movie Pretty Woman, sometimes the "prince" needs to be saved right back.  Bella wants to save him from his own doubts about his self worth. 

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 B & E

I already had your story on favorites!

Great chapter =) I can also tell you're getting better controlling the run-on sentences and paragraph lenght. Hope you can update soon, it's really interesting to read what will come next.



Author's Response:

This is first fan fiction endeavor.  I wrote an original round robin story a few years ago, but didn't enjoy sharing so much...  My husband is my favorite beta but it's the end of the school year & he's really busy right now.  He's a high school English teacher and adjunct college literature professor.  I"m trying to write a chapter a week, but the validation process sometimes makes it take longer to show up on the website, and we can only have 1 chapter in the queue at a time!  Thanks for reading ;)

 
Summary:

 

Big adoring thanks to Lisa254 who surprised me with this little beauty:)

Bella's parents die and suddenly her world is upside down. A beautiful, clearly insane man claims she's a wealthy heiress and he's her personal, very efficient butler and that she's his world. What's a girl to do? Inspired a bit by Mei-Chan No Shitsuji


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 40735
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2012 Updated: April 16, 2014


Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I enjoy it...but Im really looking forward to the chapter that will not be so cryptic and will allow me to understand this fic hehe



Author's Response:

lol:D ---sorry for the crypticness, I guess? :D

But even though it's slow going, I promise that all will be revealed eventually, but I will try to get more info about the Butler world thrown in if that helps a little? :D

Thanks for the lovely rating and comment!

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Interesting, nice job. Hope to read more from you soon.

Take care,

Daniela



Author's Response:

Thank you Daniela:D

I'm trying to get another chapter validated but so far I'm also knee deep in the search for a dependable beta so we'll see what happens:D

Have a great weekend,

D.

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Really good chapter! I just wish there were more chapters of this story already uploaded hehe Im really curious about these butlers. Maybe Edward should repaint the helcopter while Bella sleeps

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed
Date: August 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

really good, and i enjoy it...but im still praying for the day i will understand this situation...thank you anyway for the time and dedication you put into writing :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

As for the confusion, it's meant to be that way because Bella is simply too overwhelmed at the moment to really take advantage of Edward's knowledge to gain more insight...will she ever get past that hurdle? We'll see.:D

Thanks for the kind words!

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Mmmmm...for some reason, the more I read the less I understand about this scenario...still, I enjoy it a lot.

Thanks for updating! i like your story



Author's Response:

lol:D

That's great actually:) This story isn't really about making sense to be honest, it's about fun and things like that, but I will try to (eventually) make a little more sense - I hope at least.

Thanks for rating and commenting, it brightens my day:D

 
Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2048]
Summary:

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan. They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats. There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 176 Completed: Yes Word count: 253104
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2012 Updated: August 16, 2014


Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

The joke with the pictures has been around since 1880's. But I bet the dimwit Tanya wouldnt even know it, so its fine xP how I would love to read her reaction LOL

Really nice of Bella to send a care package for a stranger. 10+ for that alone, 10+ extra for baking cookies! xD



Author's Response:

Hahaha Yeah, but the first time I heard it was a few months ago. haha Thank you!

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

Would you believe me if I told you I got a 'Dear Jane' text message last week? LOL

The whole story its actually kind of hilarious, but it can simply be sum up as: the guy who was my boyfriend decided 'we lived in different worlds' and it was too complicated because we're living 600kms apart (as he's working with his mommy in the family bussines, its a lot of easy money and apparently thats more important). Actually, the thing is that we graduated together -even tough I started 4years later, I'm a bit younger- he couldnt find a job after college and I got offered position at several great places. He couldnt get into the postgrad he wanted, Im starting my postgrad this week. So, the big issue was that I wasnt willing to drop a nice job,the chance to keep on studying and my family to move accross the country to live with him and his family on a farm. As you girls can imagine, Im devastated. Not. LOL

So, if I can see things clearly, accept that is for the best and move on with peace of mind and heart; all the more Edward. We're better off without the selfish pompous asses ;-) so pretty please dont make Edward mop around, they dont deserve it.

Im really looking forward to read what you will come up with,

Have a great week,

Daniela



Author's Response:

Oh man... That's rough! But no, no moping for Edward! :) Thank you for your review & for sharing your story. :)

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 9: Bella

Oh my...there's so much flirting on that email that it felt like something private that I shouldnt be reading! LOL

what was the boycott about?

have a nice day,

Daniela



Author's Response:

Hahaha It gets better. ;)

It was to protest FFn letting a group of preteen & teenage girls police the site for stories they believe don't follow the T&C FFn has set. heh

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 10: Edward

I already voted!wish you the best luck :)

I hope that with skype interaction the chapter lenght will at least double xD its not to preassure you girl or anything, its just that it feels like having a really delicious slice of lemon pay one teaspoonful at a time LOL

Have a nice day,

Daniela



Author's Response:

Thank you for voting! :) Hehe We'll see. ;)

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

I dont have cookies to share, but I did bake an awesome mango pay last night xD the hardest part would be the shipping LOL

Under any other circunstances I would say it was unnatural the too friendly animated Edward is already talking, but since he's lonely, bored and pretty far away I guess he treasures every human interaction he can get.

Would it be too much to ask that, since you already have several chapters written, you girls could post maybe 2 per day? I mean, they're nice and good, but they're really really short! hehehe. Think about it.

Take care,

Daniela



Author's Response:

Hahaha Yeah, shipping might be difficult! :)

Yeah, he's kind of connected to Bella because of the human interaction...and she's so sweet, he's just drawn to her. Plus, this Edward IS a bit OOC, but that's how we wanted him. :D

Heh Well, we're posting this story 3 places: FFn, here, and TWCS. On FFn, the chapters are separate. But since Twilighted doesn't allow chapters shorter than 500 words, I have to combine them to post here (so I'm just doing that at TWCS, too, because it's easier to do these 2 sites the same). So unfortunately, we'll stick to 1 post her a day. I promise, they do get longer. :)

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

Nice and short. Im putting this on favourites to get the update alerts :)

I went to your profile, but I cant see your favourite authors, so I couldnt read you prequels. I would love to read them, if you could post some links it would be great.

Take care,

Daniela



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

Oh! Yeah, sorry... lol I pretty much just copy & pasted from FFn. The prequels are posted on here, though. ;) I posted them as the first 2 chapters.

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 8: Edward

It was really nice te email and all, but why Carlos Mendez? isnt it too cliche to always kill off the "blacks & latins" LOL...Im not, by any means, offended and I hope not to offend you girls. It simply made me laugh (not what happened, just the usage of a latin name as a resource, its actually nice that you at least used it under a good light) and got me curious, and didnt really get the chance to comment on that before xP

Have a nice day,

Daniela (yes, Im from Venezuela-Latin America)



Author's Response:

Hey, this is Jenny, but Deb said that she lives in Florida, so Latin culture is EVERYWHERE down there. Her pre-reader is from Puerto Rico. So Carlos & Mendez are commonplace names down there, much like Smith or Jones elsewhere. :) We're glad you'r enjoying it! :)

 
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 7: Bella

Nice chapter...but made me feel a bit of regret with the end author's note. Made me think about so many stuff that could have but didnt happen with my ex that now Im feeling kind of dissapointed. No doubt Im happy for you, but Im also a tiny bit jealous (in a good no-lime-green way) hehehe

Well, nevermind it; glad you finally can upload your separate chapters. Im thinking about sending Bella my banana & chocolate cookie recipe hehe

Have a nice day,

Daniela



Author's Response:

Aww, I'm sorry! But we're glad you still enjoyed the chapter. :)

 




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