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Penname: DaSrO [ Contact]
Real name: Daniela Salas
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Member Since: September 15, 2009
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Summary: 

New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the attractive and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story, From Hate to Heat, develops so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Who, exactly is reading Bella's/bellybeans' fanfic? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Hilarity/UST/Love and lemons.

Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 59 Completed: No
Word count: 399617
[Report This] Published: June 21, 2011 Updated: May 21, 2013
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: November 12, 2012
Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Dirty Laundry
'Every language has bimbos' LOL omg, between that and the correct usage and labeling of all the variation from the root 'fuck', you just made my day xD LOL
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: February 13, 2012
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
I laughed so hard people at my work starting to come into my office to ckeck on me!!! BEST CHAPTER OF ALL I'VE READ THIS MONTH!!!
have a nice week! Author's Response: Hi DaSrO!
Glad you got a kick out of that last chapter of FFSGSG. ;) Poor Edward...he never saw it coming. Poor Esme. Then again, she can just go home to Carlisle in his red-hot daddy silk pants. So that's a good thing.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: March 23, 2012
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
LMFAO!!!!!!!
Incredibly funny chapter, as always. Just seeing the mail that says that this story's been updated makes me smile. Im gonna need a new inhaler, the ones you gave away at xmas are over.
2 things I wanted to comment: is this story taking place at Punxsutawney? cause it's been the longest fullest week ever LOL and, Im sorry to say this, but everytime Edward reviews or with his profile he gives me this creepy feeling like he's a man saying what he thinks a women wants to hear for his own gain, or that he's a closet gay.
Thank you for the laughs, have a great weekend
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: April 09, 2012
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
LOL great chapter, but it was too short!!!
Hope that means a quick update on the way? ;)
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: May 09, 2012
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Conversation Pieces
ROTFL
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: October 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
LOL I did listen to the song =-P oh,how I wish your story wouldnt go to make those two neighbors fall in love, I really wish...but we all know that wouldnt be the point hehe its just that I have had that neighbor, and that asshole will always be an asshole,he's such an asshole that he went and made friends with my family and friends and remained their friend after breaking my heart. I've such hilarious stories with that guy that I would give you a run for yur money LOL. Next time your story makes me cry from laughing I'll tell you one of my RL stories with my exneighbor asshole hehe really freat story, so funny I didnt take to review the first chapters, sorry for that, but in a way its a compliment: thats just how engrossing and funny your story is =-)
Have a great weekend
Daniela
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: October 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse
^"You just can't canoodle with a dick like…a noodle." LOL owe you a story, right now I got to get up and make dinner for my parents..I know, what a wild Friday night =-P
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: November 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Distractions
I knew that strawberry was going to cause a scene like this hihihi I bet my arm and leg that Esme is young at heart...which gave the towel hanging feat a whole new dimension LOL
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: December 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Angela Weber and the Mexican Mandate
Wait...what?Does Emmet knows something we dont? I mean,is any of the two bi...?cause it would be just hysterical to have Edward and Alice fighting over Edward LOL I love your story and drop everything to read as soon as I realize theres an update,and this was a really nice chapter. Author's Response: Hi DaSrO!
You're going to die...or maybe "bi-" when you read the update. LOL
I wanted to let you know I have updated FFSGSG over on another site (FFN) and maybe you would like to check out my holiday post. Same penname there. ;) Thanks for the review and love for chapter 22! I think you will really like 23! ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: December 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: McCarty Party of Five
LOL oh God,what a perfect xmas present, thank u LOL funniest chapter I've read in a while. Some may think is farfetched that Edward kind of intoxicated figured out the whole bellybeans thing; but that people ignore the epiphany inducer power of real tequila LOL
best wishes for ur holydays n u wish u the best next year. Dont drink and drive ;)
Summary: Isabella an assistant to a high society lawyer, Edward, seems so meek and innocent. But after her 9-5 Isabella works at a tattoo studio, inking people who only know her Bells. What happens when Edward, drunk and out with friends on New Year's Eve, decides to blow off some steam and runs in to the ink covered and pierced Bells?

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 7076
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2011 Updated: June 26, 2011
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: June 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Night and Day
hey, why a one-shot when this could be the first chapter of a really nice fan fic?okey, it developed really fast, but there could be at least one more chapter hehe :) think about it
Summary: 
Banner by MegsD. Thanks!
For All You Wolf Lovers! What happens when a wolf is separated from his imprint?
Jacob knows that Nessie is his eventual future. He attempts to live without her and the Cullens after selflessly agreeing to give her uniquely short childhood to Bella and Edward. Racked by boredom and loneliness, he meets and befriends a girl who has an abusive and controlling step-father. Will another heart be broken? And what sinister forces are stalking Jacob and the other wolves, and why?
Keep reading and you'll discover who Embry's father is, if Leah ever finds happiness, and how Sam and Jacob deal with having two separate packs.
He Never Suspected...
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob
Challenges: Series: The Wolfpack Chronicles
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 58052
[Report This] Published: August 01, 2011 Updated: February 03, 2012
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: November 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chances Are
So nice! Leah deserves to be happy Author's Response: Aw, I always thought so =) Thanks for the review!
Summary: 
Incredible Banner by readergoof...she even found a white bikini!! Thank you!!
A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons. When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts? Can you start over on your honeymoon? What do they each bring to the table? It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?
AH/Canon couples. NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!). Language (again, it’s me). Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists. Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Word count: 57554
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2011 Updated: October 20, 2011
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: October 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Lure of a White Bikini
HI! I just stumbled accross your story. Reallu nice first chapter, the only odd thing was the last paragraph. No straight man would think that, much less about a girl they've just met and have been oogling on the beach hehe
Summary: Bella and Mike wed four years ago and their marriage hasn't exactly been the picture of bliss. A carefully guarded secret surfaces, destroying an already fragile Bella. Everything she knew was a lie, everything she wanted for her life, wiped out with the click of a mouse. An E x B story.
Warning: There is mention of past sexual assault, crappy childhoods, an even crappier marriage, and some very prevalent social issues (that I’m not going to mention here, because it would defeat the purpose of reading the story).

Banner thanks to Forthelongestday
Excerpt: I looked at the clock again, 5:44. Jesus Christ, did time stand still? Those fourteen minutes felt like fourteen hours. As the moments ticked by, my palms began to sweat and a nervous pressure mounted in my chest. It's not the end of the world Bella; just the end of your marriage...and everything you knew. God, how was I going to do this? People up and left their spouses on a daily basis and never looked back. Of course, how many of them were under these same circumstances, I wondered. How many women were faced with leaving the man they loved because he'd woven a lie so hurtful? When it finally surfaced, did it kill them?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 171435
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2011 Updated: November 27, 2012
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: January 14, 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Past Nevers, Future Firsts
Your surrender by neon trees? awww,Im kind of sad I ran out of chapters. It was a really full day, but reading your story filled well the little blanks.
Hope to read an update soon, take care
Daniela Author's Response: Don't worry the next will be up soon. I think.
~MissJanuary
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: January 14, 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Dear Aunt Emmy
Hi! Im a new reader to your story (way to be obvious,right?) so dont be surprised if I end up reviewing old chapters. Since you asked in the author notes' of this chapter, Im in Barquisimeto-a small city in Lara, Venezuela. Today's a religious holiday, actually, the biggest procession of Latin America. My whole family is there, but Im in bed with my laptop reading your fanfic :) lets see if I can catch up with your story today. So far we seem to listen to some of the same music, does your Bella 'feel like scream' list include weak and powerless or passive from A Perfect Circle? They're in mine and they fit this.
Have a great weekend,
Daniela Author's Response: Hi Daniela!
Always glad to have a new reader. Venezuela, wow. I'm always amazed by how far reaching fan fiction truly is. It's like the great equalizer. And Weak and Powerless is most definitely on that Feel Like Screaming play list. I love A Perfect Circle. My dog is named after one of their songs, Brena.
Thanks for the review and thanks for taking and interest in my fic. I enjoy hearing from you.
~MissJanuary
Summary: 
From the ashes of North America Volterran Empire has emerged. Divided into twelve districts, some of the horrors the opressed humans are forced to endure are universal, the weekly blood donations, the fear of being carted away for even a hint of treasonous behavior.
Others are unique to each District. In District 2, the children of the wealthy are given the best possible education money can buy. But they're educated for only one purpose: violence.
Violence they can use in the annual Morphing Games, in which two adolescents, sixteen through twenty, are sent to the capitol to fight for their lives and the ultimate prize: immortality.
My name is Bella Swan, and I'm a Prospective in the 100th Morphing Games. There's only one problem: I don't want to win.
Hunger Games/Twilight X-Over. Vamps galore!
For those curious about the Morphing Games:
more can be found here:
http://orringtonrose.wordpress.com/
Categories: AU, Crossover Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Ben, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Mike, Renee, Renesmee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 38783
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2011 Updated: November 26, 2011
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: October 31, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: EPOV OUT-TAKE
Nice, in a way -Edward being a mindreader- it was a little from the poit of view of most characters til now, so it was really complementary and clarifying to the story so far. Hope another BPOV comes soon, cant wait to see the games prep unfold. Author's Response: He's a useful narrative tool that way! And BPOV is on the way!
-OR
:)
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: November 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: [8]
Good luck with all your projects, hope to read next chapter soon.
Have a great weekend :) Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed.
New chapter should be up soon!
-OR
:)
Summary: 
Five hundred years. Four past lives. Three lost souls. Two lovers. One last chance.
Bella has spent the last twenty-five years of this life knowing of her soul's past quests and heartache. When passing a familar stranger on a busy New York street has her spiraling into the past, she must push through to insure a future with her soul's counterpart.
To fail would be to die.
Rated for some dirty time in the beginning and probably later on, language, violence. Also a heads up if you're touchy on slight religion about reincarnation.
One more note - There will be some talk of suicide. Nothing too detailed, but there none the less.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 28554
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2011 Updated: April 26, 2013
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: November 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Reincarnation
There's one thing I dont like about your story: the lady's sucha quiter...she doesnt deserve to be reborn as a lady after 3 suicides...the rest I love. On to the next chapter...
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: January 29, 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Any Other Day
Its starting to be cruel the pace at which you develop this story...still,I enjoy it and I'll keep reading it.
Have a nice weekend,
Daniela
Summary: 
After Edward left in New Moon something changed in Bella. When faced with her past she decides to fight back against her own demons. Unfortunately, that catches the attention of the "agency". They recruit her and train her to hunt vampires. But when a familiar family is brought to the agency's attention Bella must make a choice.
How much would you risk to save the one you love?
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 63822
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2011 Updated: March 14, 2012
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: January 03, 2012
Title: Chapter 6: City Of Blood
So nice when one gets what one desired from a story...she really des want to save him t kick him around Italy's streets =)
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: January 03, 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Mission Impossible
I like the goal, but not the motives. The only good reason to rescue Edward's sorry ass is to kick him all over Europe...and, I really hope she calls his dad soon, preferable with those disposable cel phones Alice got before leaving for Europe
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: January 03, 2012
Title: Chapter 4: The Plan
You're right, this story is too good for the little reviews it has. So, here I am reviewing a chapter that's been up for months now just to tell you how thrilling and enjoyable your story is. Your story should have won the 'Bella I dont mind sharing air with' prize hehe
BTW, Happy New Year Author's Response: Thank you! By the way, do you know where I can enter those types of contests? Or do they just give out the awards as they see fit?
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: January 20, 2012
Title: Chapter 20: Concern in Delay
I have your story on favourites =) nice chapter. I still think everything is a bit too much, but I want to see where will you take the story.
Have a nice weekend
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: January 03, 2012
Title: Chapter 15: Explanations and Experiments
I really liked your story, but the last two chaptes have been just too much. I'll keep reading and tell you then...anyway,it's been well written and entertaied so I thank you for the time ad effort you've put into this story Author's Response: Hopefully the next few chapters will be better to you. I know I lagged a bit in the previous ones but I'm getting it back. Promise!
Reviewer: DaSrO Signed    
Date: January 03, 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Ecstasy
“Just please try not to make Edward so whinny and corny, so many authors do that and make him so cheesy and pathetic…” - Mynet (FF)
Agreed.
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