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Penname: twilightelle99 [Contact]
Real name: Elle
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Member Since: September 09, 2009
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30-something mother of three who is completely and totally useless due to her addiction to fan fic!


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Summary:

When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.

What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2008 Updated: July 05, 2009


Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Flying

Love it already!

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is twenty-seven years old, newly single, and mom to an adorable Kindergarten student with a knack for accidents. On a typical, fall afternoon, she experiences the shock of her life during a casual conversation with her son. When an unexpected revelation leads to the most emotional reunion imaginable, how will Bella reconcile the path her life has taken with the past she never chose? Takes place nearly ten years post New Moon. Canon - AU. ExB


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 61197
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 28, 2011


Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Im loving this! Cant wait for more!

 
Summary:

 

 

"In a moment’s time, I’d be his, entirely. The one thing I’d wanted more than anything itself. The pain, the pleasure- it was worth it knowing I’d be able to claim to be his…at long last.

 

"The silence in the room was deafening. The intimacy of this moment made the world hold its breath in anticipation. Time ceased to exist; the only fathomable concepts were Edward and me."

For all of us who read Breaking Dawn, closed the back cover and said; "Yeah...not what I expected..."

This is my version, my ending of the Twilight Saga. In short, it's purpose is to show how Edward and Bella meet the trials and tribulations of being newlyweds, Bella being a newborn as well as other things life has to offer. It's meant to highlight their love, devotion, the strengthening of their bond as well as how they grow together emotionally and physically.

Rated NC-17 for Mature themes, language and adult and sexual content.

WARNING: quite a few lemons here ;]

 

ON HIATUS!! LOOK FOR MY NEWEST WORK AND THE FOCUS OF MY ATTENTION, "Love Story" !!


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Beginning
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 132794
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2009


Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Preparations

You did an AWESOME JOB! I love your take on Bella as a newborn...and I REALLY LOVE all of the B on E action! ;

 
Mind Over Matter by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1377]
Summary:

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Bella challenges Edward's limits of self control by insisting that he build up his tolerance level to intimacy.

Set in the 6 week 'blank period' at the end of Eclipse / beginning of Breaking Dawn, between the battle, and the wedding.  Bella and Edward expand and deepen their physical relationship in preparation for their impending marriage.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 70976
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: August 16, 2009


Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: At Last

I LOVED THIS!! Thanks for sharing your talent with is! I started reading it yesterday and finished up this morning. It was just TOO GOOD! ;) I absolutely love SM's Edward, but yours makes him and Bella even better. Can't wait to read your other fanfics! :)

 
Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: At Last

I LOVED THIS!! Thanks for sharing your talent with is! I started reading it yesterday and finished up this morning. It was just TOO GOOD! ;) I absolutely love SM's Edward, but yours makes him and Bella even better. Can't wait to read your other fanfics! :)

 
Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: At Last

I LOVED THIS!! Thanks for sharing your talent with is! I started reading it yesterday and finished up this morning. It was just TOO GOOD! ;) I absolutely love SM's Edward, but yours makes him and Bella even better. Can't wait to read your other fanfics! :)

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5322]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2008 Updated: January 02, 2010


Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Arriving

I love your B&E so much that I about to start re-reading it! Can anyone say SEQUEL???PLEASE!!!

 
Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Finally

Glad to see you back! :)

 
Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Reunion

It has to be the Twister mat!! I can't wait for you to finish! Thanks to both of you for such an amazing story!

 
Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Burning

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE give us some more! I NEED MORE!!! :)

 
Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Reunion

Please, please update soon!! I'm going crazy waiting for more! :) Thanks for writing such a captivating story.

 
First Kiss by Char Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

It has been six and a half years and Nessie is sick of waiting for Jacob to make a move. The Cullens are away hunting and Nessie grabs her chance. What will happen? And how will a certain Edward Cullen go down with the news?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Nessie, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 3863
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2008 Updated: January 04, 2009


Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Edward POV

I'd love to see this as a full length story. You're an awesome writer! :)

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13659]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 19, 2010


Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Teasing

I know you said you were worried about the whole blood thing, but I personally think it adds a lot to B&E s insanely hot lust for one another...BTW...I think we've all done a few things in the name of getting our partner off that might seem crazy to less ~creative~ people! ;)

 
Aro's Heir by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1916]
Summary:

Aro's Heir

 

Edward, Bella and Alice are drawn into a no-win scenario in Volterra after Edward's attempted suicide-by-Volturi in the Palazzo dei Priori .  Aro confronts Edward to make an impossible choice, with Alice as Aro's unwitting accomplice.  How will Edward's choice affect his reunion with Bella, and what future can they hope to salvage in the aftermath?

Story begins in New Moon, during Chapter 21, "The Verdict," but enters the AU when Aro reads Alice's mind...

AU, but canon through New Moon, with canon pairings.

~*~ warning ~*~  story contains very dark themes, including a sexual assault in the first chapter.  if this subject is a trigger for you, please do not continue. 

If you are a survivor of sexual abuse and need assistance, please contact RAINN http://apps.rainn.org/ohl-bridge/

Disclaimer:  I do not own the Twilight series, nor any of the characters created by Stephenie Meyer. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Twilighted Supervisory Beta: psymom        Twilighted Validation Beta: Lion_in_the_Land

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 95553
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: November 26, 2012


Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Aro's Heir

Love this fic...Your Jake is absolutley wonderful.

Author's Response:

thank you thank you thank you!!!!!   sooo many jake haters out there, but i LOVE him.  glad you do too.

 
Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Aro's Heir

Great as always...such a heartfelt chapter

 
Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Aro's Heir

Great story...I really like your Jacob. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

i'm so glad!  i love jake - hate to see him always made a villain.

 
Summary:

Special thanks to mellyfrisco6 for this new and improved banner.

Post Eclipse.  Breaking Dawn never happened.  Bella and Edward are engaged to be married, but Bella can't seem to ignore the feelings she still has for Jacob.  Will she stay with the vampire who broke her heart, or will she run to the werewolf who put it back together?

Coming Full Circle has won praise from The Wolfpack Awards:

MOST SUSPENSEFUL

MOST ORIGINAL PLOT

BEST IMPRINT

Winner of "Most Loved Imprint Character" in the Summer JBNP Awards!

 

*And special thanks also go out to precioustandi for this banner as well.

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 46 Completed: No Word count: 415372
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2009 Updated: September 25, 2012


Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Seven

I can't wait for the rest & I'm crossing my fingers there will be a sequel! Thank you for sharing your talent...you've really added incredible depth to all of the characters...PLEASE GIVE US MORE SOON!! :) :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  You'll be happy to know that I'm definitley doing a sequel.  It's going to be a little crazier than this story...but all the elements that you have come to like will definitely be included.  I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.  It's taken me a little longer than originally planned, because I got some inspiration from a recent Taylau photo shoot.  ;)  But, now I feel the chapter will be better than I thought it would be.  Anyway, hopefully I'll have something posted next week.  Thanks again for all of your positive feedback. :)

 
Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Thank you for such beautiful chapter! I absolutely love your style of writing & the fact that your chapters are always so long and interesting. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the wonderful compliments.  To think, the very first chapter was only 5 pages long...and now I'm averaging 20 pages!  It's crazy.  But, I'm excited about the next chapter, so hopefully you won't have to wait to long for the update. :)

 
Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Thirty

Glad you're back! Thanks for the super-long chap. It was awesome, as always! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing.  I'm going to be submitting my next chapter tonight, so hopefully you'll be able to read it soon.  I can't wait to hear what you have to say about it.  Thanks again. :)

 
Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty-One

Thanks for the super quick update! I started re-reading yesterday & just can't stop! So glad to have you back!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.  For some reason, I got on a roll last week and was able to get this chapter out pretty quickly.  Of course, there's no guarantee that that will happen again so soon.  You just never know.  Either way, I hope to avoid another 2-month long hiatus.  Anyway, thanks again. Erin

 
Incubus by EJ Santry Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 430]
Summary:

Incubus

Edward has been filling his thirst for blood with an insatiable appetite for flesh for the last 80 years. A new girl arrives at Forks High School that baffles him, and just might turn his world upside down and break him of his rapacious behavior.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 39573
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2009 Updated: March 20, 2009


Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Music

Really liking your twist on the story....Now back to reading... :)

 
Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: New Beginnings

I'd love to see a sequel. You're an excellent writer & did a wonderful job establishing the characters' personalities. It would have been great to see where you could take them.

 
Moonshadow by diamondheart Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 641]
Summary:

What if Edward kept his promise and Bella never heard from the Cullens again?  Jacob was more than willing to console her, but would she have the sense to let him?

"You know what your problem is, Bells? You're in love - with the wrong thing. You think you're hung up on a guy who left you, but you're not. You're hung up on the idea of yourself as the heartbroken heroine."

Alternate ending to New Moon...just a nice love story, with monsters. Rated for certain chapters, at a sultry 108 degrees!

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Many thanks to Sassenach Wench for the stylish story banner!

~*~A finalist in The Indie TwiFic Awards Winter 2010: Best New Moon Complete & AU that knocks you off your feet! Thanks for all the love and support! ~*~

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Be sure to read the follow up fics '93 Million Miles' and 'Jacob's Ladder' posted here on Twilighted!

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Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles, The Moonshadow Continuum
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 76998
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009


Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

This was WONDERFUL!! I started reading it on my cell and couldnt stop!! Thank you for all of the time and effort you put in...it was worth it! Gotta be honest here...I am 100% Team Edward but always hoped J & B would hook up at least a few times! Thanks for granting that wish!!;)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, that's a real compliment! Kinda nic to take a walk on the wild side, huh? <><3

 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 02, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way

I just love this story! Thanks for updating, & I can't wait for more!! :)

 
Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Every Breath You Take

James is such an ass! Thanks for updating. You're one of my fav writers! I love your version of these characters...they seem like old friends. Can't wait to see where this one's going!

 




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