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I love to read. I read everyday, because I love to escape to a different world. That purpose also applies to listening to music and writing. I love to go into different worlds and lose myself for a while.


I am an 21 year old student and I love the Twilight books  as well as the movies. I also love many other books, such as the classics.


I hope that you enjoy my stories, as I enjoy writing them.


**For those who read my story Prophecy, please know that it has not been abandoned. My previous beta, Elizabeth, had to step down and I've been looking for a replacement. I promise that once the chapters are beta'ed, I will update! I will not abandon this story!


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Victim by Tima83 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1091]
Summary:

She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, until he becomes abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she fakes her own death, escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered? 

When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?

Rated for future lemons, some scenes of violence, and cursing.

(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)

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 (thanks to CrimsonIceGoddess for the wicked new banner!!)


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Jacob, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 167140
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2009 Updated: November 04, 2011


Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Talking About The Past

Poor Bella. Edward is right. She's a strong person to stay and put up with James.

Edward is such a sweet guy, promising to take care of her like that. :)

I know I've said this before, but I still think that Carlisle and Esme are his parents. XD

I can't wait for your next chapter! Please update soon?



Author's Response:

hmmm...your speculations may just be right, but we're a few chapters away from finding out once and for all about that...

The next chapter should be done pretty soon...the words are flowing!! :)

Thanks for reading, reviewing, and enjoying (as it is quite obvious that you are!! ^_^)

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: A Cross Country Trip

Awesome chapter.

It was great that Esme and Carlisle gave her all of that. Now, she can start over...I wonder who she has to call to teach at Forks Elementary....hmmm

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

I love how everyone is guessing who will be at the school to help her! (tents hands like Mr. Burns) **Excellent**...

Thanks for reviewing and reading the story thus far! More to come very soon!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Welcome to Forks

Awesome chapter....I wonder why Esme giggled when Bella told her where her new house was....Hmm Could it be that Edward lives in the neighborhood?

I love Alice and I loved it when Bella thought her and Alice would be friends.

I think it was a bad idea to call her parents and tell them her new name. That was really bad. But, she needed to talk to them and I understand that. We don't think clearly sometimes when it comes to those we love.

Who was it that said, "There you are"? I hope it's not James. But, her jaw dropping to the floor could be in a good way, such as, "Wow. He's hot." Or in a  bad way like, "I'm dead." Which one is it?? I can't stand the suspense!

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

hmmm...interesting theory...chapters 6 and 7 are already written, so you'll just have to wait a little bit to find out...

Sorry about keeping you in suspense, though...it is necessary! I love your insights. Keep 'em up!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Anxiety

Awesome chapter. I And it looks like Edward likes her....Bella shouldn't feel bad about her behavior. She went through something terrible and it will take time to trust someone like that. Edward will forgive her. I know he will.

 I hope that she trusts him soon, though.

Please update soon?

 



Author's Response:

Me thinks you are a mind-reader, madam...

;)

Thanks for the review, and for reading thus far. It means so much to know that people are enjoying this story!!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The 4th of July BBQ

Great chapter!

Edward is so sweet, wishing her a Happy Canada Day!

I'm glad that she told him what was going on. Now, he can understand why she acts the way she does.

Please, please update soon?



Author's Response:

so sorryfor the delay in replying to your review!!! hahaha at least I know that you've reviewed after this, so I know you're still reading!! Thanks for that!!

And yes, I will update soon, just for you!! :)

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday Surprises

It's Carlisle and Esme! I know it!

This was an excellent chapter! Edward is sweet, being gentle and patient. :)

Please, please update soon? Please? I can't wait for the next chapter! :D



Author's Response:

well, since you asked three times for an update soon, how can I deny you anything??? :)

And thanks for the compliment. I am pretty happy with the way this chapter turned out, too!

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: On the Move

This was a great chapter! Everything about it was excellent!

I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks! So glad you enjoyed! And I'm glad that you're still with me! Thanks so much for all your reviews! I will try to get the next chapter out before Christmas.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Promise of Things to Come

Awesome chapter and welcome back (Congrats on everything XD)!

I still think that Esme and Carlisle are Edward's parents....I guess I'll see when they come to town.

I'm glad that Bella is trying to put the past behind her and trust those around her. It's going to be good for her.

The James look alike was creepy. I have a feeling that it was James and he just had make-up on.

Please update soon?

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Dinner at Edward's

Great chapter!

Poor Edward. He felt so bad for that song, but he shouldn't since he didn't know. And I feel bad for Bella, with James still controlling her.

I hope when she talks to Edward, it will help her. :)

I still think that Edward's parents are Carlisle and Esme. XD

Please update soon??



Author's Response:

Edward is always a self-depricating sort of guy, so this wasn't that far-fetched to write...lol

I think it will definitely help her to talk to Edward about the situation...

Your thoughts are quite interesting...hehe I can't reveal anything...but you may have something there!

The update should be ready soon.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Safe Distance

Great chapter!

Poor Bella...Due to her feelings, I think she knows on some level that she's being watched.

I can't wait to see creepy James get what he deserves...

Looking forward to your next update!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: The Big Reveal

Great chapter!

I knew that it was Carlisle and Esme!

I can understand Bella's behavior. I would be like that too, if I had lived the way she did.

It is time for Bella tell Edward everything. He'll understand. I know he will. :)

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hey there, hehe it was a bit too predictable that it would be Carlisle and Esme, but hey, I like a bit of predictability! :)

Hope you're still reading! Take care, and thanks for your review! :)

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Fear

This was a great chapter!

You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time I read it!

I can not wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! So happy you think so!

The next chapter will be up momentarily!

As always, thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Similarities

I loved this chapter! The family feeling in this chapter was remarkable!

Poor Esme. Bella is a lot like her more than she thought. At least they both have wonderful men in their lives. =)

I can't wait to see when everyone gets together...Hopefully Rosalie will be better behaved this time?

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Please update soon? *begs*

 



Author's Response:

Exactly the reason behind the chapter; I wanted to demonstrate how similar Bella really is to Esme, and how she can learn to overcome her past by taking a page out of Esme's book. Everyone will be getting together for lunch in the next chapter, and yes, Rosalie will get over her bitchy side and make amends...

It won't be too long, I promise (a week, tops, since 3000 words are already written for it!).

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Family Ties

Excellent chapter!

I'm glad that Rosalie was nice. Bella doesn't need anyone else being mean or rude to her.

I can't wait to see the winery tour! =)

Can't James stay gone....forever? xD

Looking forward to your next chapter! Please update soon? -pleading-



Author's Response:

exactly my feeling about Rosalie. Her being mean is the last thing Bella needs.

Yes, the winery tour should be great! ;)

Haha @ James comment. Trust me. You aren't alone in your thought...however, he is necessary. :)

Thanks for your review! I've taken your pleading into consideration hehe...

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Best Laid Plans

This was a great chapter!

I hope James gets what is coming to him...Soon.

I hope the only reason Bella said no was because she thinks that she's still married to James...I really hope that's the case. =(

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

oh, he will...give me another six or seven chapters, but he'll DEFINITELY get his...

And she has a good reason for saying no...at least temporarily... ;)

The next update should be within the hour ! Finally!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing as always!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Goodbyes

Great chapter!

Carlisle and Esme leaving was so sweet! You really had the family feel in this chapter. Excellent job!

I can't wait to see Bella and Edward's trip! =D

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

I agree. I tried to show just how attached they are, even though Esme and Carlisle live across the country.

The trip will definitely be worth the wait! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Weekend to Remember

Great chapter! I loved everything about it!

Their trip was perfect! Really, perfect. -swoon-

James is around the corner? Can he take a wrong turn somewhere? Things are going great for Edward and Bella. (I know, he has to make a reappearance. Still...)

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Aww thanks! I tried to make the weekend as realistic and perfect (for them) as possible.

Hehe he might take a wrong turn, but it might lead him to other loved ones instead... not to worry, he'll be around in another chapter or so, so you can rest easy for another chapter... :)

Stay tuned!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Uh-Oh

This was great!

I have a feeling that those pictures will be what James to her...Maybe.

It sounds like Bella is pregnant, but she could have the flu...I can't wait to find out!

Please update soon?

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Inevitabilities

Great chapter!

I'm so glad that Edward is happy that Bella is pregnant. =) I can't wait until Carlisle and Esme find out!

I thought for a moment that James wouldn't find out about Bella being alive. Even after his comment of her being full of life....But, he found out due to that picture. =(

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

hehe yeah that scene was a bit deceptive until the very end...I'm happy that she's preggers, too, just because she needs something good in her life (besides Eddie) and being a mother is a happy surprise for her now!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Christmas with the Cullens

I loved this chapter!

I was kind of hoping something would fall on James while he was walking around, but my wish was not granted. =(

I loved the family feel when Bella was with the Cullens. It made me smile.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Unfortunately, no such luck with the piano landing on James' head, or a meteor crashing into his car...but he'll get his, don't you worry!

Always a pleasure reading your reviews! They make me smile! ^_^

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The News

I loved the part with Bella and the family...The part with a worried Carlisle and that dirtball James, not so much. But, I trust that you won't let anyone we care about get killed....right? *worried face*

Looking forward to your next update!!



Author's Response:

No one will get killed that doesn't deserve to be killed (except for the funeral home director...he was just unlucky)...

Thanks for reading!

~Fátima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: The End

I'm glad that James is gone and can't hurt anyone again.

Now, I hope that Bella and the baby will be okay. It will kill Edward and everyone else if something happens to them.

I can't wait to see what happens next!!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: All-Time Low

James is something else....I can't wait to see him get what he deserves.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Congratulations & Preparations

I loved this chapter!

It was so sweet for everyone to help out and take care of Bella: mommy to be.

(By the way, I loved the name!)

I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I really enjoyed writing it too. And I'm happy the name is being so well received! I was a bit anxious about that. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Justified Paranoia

You have me on the edge of my seat, I swear.

I hope someone decides to go over and realize something is wrong...

I can't wait to see what happens next!

(Excellent chapter, by the way!)

 




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