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Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
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Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: Sasha Signed
Date: January 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Shakespeare

I was going to wait until I finished the story until I reviewed, but after reading this chapter I couldn't wait.  This is really well-written, and I loved your analysis of Romeo's character.  The links between Bella and Romeo, Juliet and Edward, and Rosaline and Jacob were such a clever and creative take on the comparisons taken in New Moon.  Can't wait to keep reading.

 
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So Nessie is a hormone-charged teenager who happens to notice the hotness that is Jacob Black. But then, (because life just sucks that way) a shady vampire enters the picture, determined to make Nessie his. So in summary: constant sexually charged banter between Ness and Jacob, Daddy-Edward on the fritz, sexy vamp stalker, and Nahuel squaring off with Jake. Around chapter six or so, the pace picks up very quickly. So read on!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Nessie, Renesmee
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Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 65711
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009


Reviewer: Sasha Signed
Date: December 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Visions from Within

Love your story - so creative! I totally agree with the last reviewer.  Would love to see Jake and Edward's reactions. Looking forward to the next chapter!





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