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Penname: AbIeMzXxX [Contact]
Real name: Abi
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Member Since: August 17, 2009
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Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5322]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Reunion

I bet the thing she doesnt like is the twister mat!:) its really good!

 
Summary:

 

Laurent manages to bite Bella before the wolves can stop him.  Now she is changed and alone and wants to find her way back to the Cullens.  She immerses herself in the music industry hoping that someone will hear her message.

Thanks to readergoof for the awesome banner!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Laurent, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 4672
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: August 12, 2009


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

WOW! amazing chapter and story!

plz write more!

 
Summary:

 

Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.

 

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All canon couples!


Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33:Izzy Learns To Hunt

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

i have emmett on speeddial!:P

 
Summary:

 

 

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"His agony defines him. His memories destroy him.

But his hope is what sustains him, feeds him, encourages him. It's his purpose. And he doesn't deny it.

Offered the chance to leave all pain and misery behind, Edward knew that it was better to suffer his loss than to forget it. For in having it, Bella remains his and only his.

To forget would be the ultimate betrayal, abandoning her once again to a world of lonliness and despair. He had already done that once upon a time, and he did so spectacularly.

He'll find her. He has to. 

HE HAS TO."

- icrodriguez (the most beautiful review I have ever received.  THANK YOU for allowing me the honour of displaying it here.  It sums up the tone of this story beautifully, hearts, Erin)

 

Left in the woods, an unfortunate run-in with Laurant and 45 years later - Bella finds herself facing everything she has ever wanted.  Does it want her back?  What will she discover about how Edward has been spending his time...

 

Rated for later chapters.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 140624
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2012


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Touch Me

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing! didnt expect the ending!

 
Total Eclipse by bleachgirl4 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

Bella decided it would be too selfish to ask Edward to stay with her during Victoria's attack. What would happen?

 

Preview:

I sat on the sleeping bag, staring at the walls of the tent. My arms were wrapped tightly around my knees, trying to keep warm. Alice had been right when she said it would be unseasonably cold. I wore several layers of clothing and still my body was shivering uncontrollably in the frigid air.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1245
[Report This] Published: May 27, 2009 Updated: August 15, 2009


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Newborns and the Volturi

Please continue. This is amazing! you are such a talented writer!!!!!!!!!!

 
Summary: Feature

Note from Admin: The blue ribbon awarded to this story means that it is a "featured" piece, recognized for excellence in content. It is one of the most culturally relevant, seriously deep, moving, unique, and important pieces of fanfiction that I have ever read.  -Roo, Validation Beta 

Bella Swan is homeless in one of the worst winters Seattle has ever seen. When trouble arises, she is saved by a knight in shining armor.

In his endeavor to help her, will he simplify her life, or complicate it beyond anything she could have ever foreseen.

Pairings are all part of the mystery . . .

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Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 61244
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2009 Updated: March 16, 2010


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Mansion Exploration

:D

 
Summary:

A story about pain... patience... depression... desire... addiction... passion... healing... hope... and above all, love.

Bella moves to Alaska after a devastating accident tears her life apart, leaving her depressed and alone.  Consumed by her loss, she spirals into a deep depression.  At her new high school, she meets Edward Cullen and her life will never be the same. 

Edward moves to Alaska to start over with his coven - as he has been doing for the past four centuries.  Spending hundreds of years alone on the fringes of society has turned him into a pessimistic, sarcastic rebel who has lost hope of ever finding a mate.  The moment he sees Bella Swan, his life is turned upside down.

As friendship and obsession grow into love, Edward helps Bella overcome her crippling grief and teaches her how to live again. 

 RFTA Alternate

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**Warning** This story deals with mental health issues. Please be warned if this is a theme which may bother you in any way.  

 

Nominated for an Indie TwiFic - AU story that knocks you off your feet

Indie TwiFic Awards


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 71573
[Report This] Published: July 03, 2009 Updated: June 22, 2010


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Preternatural Revelations

:D please update again! i just found this story in my favorites again!



Author's Response:

New chapter coming soon!  Should be submitted by the end of this weekend... :o)

 
Winter by Sagie14 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 336]
Summary:

It's been a hundred years since Bella was changed in the meadow. Now she sees Edward for the first time...


Categories: New Moon, AU, Other Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 16983
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2009 Updated: October 16, 2010


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Bitter

:D pleaseeeeeeeeeee continue.............

 
Summary:

The story is built upon canon, going AU at the point of the battle with Victoria and the newborns. This time, the battle is not so simple, and Esme, Edward, Jacob, Leah, and Paul are killed.  

This is the story of how Bella and the Cullens pick up the pieces after the terrible tragedy and find a way to live again. It's quite emotional and slow-building, and I've done my best to keep it as realistic as possible (for the Twilight world, lol) and keep everyone in character.

Here's a preview:

"Bella, everything you heard in those letters was true. You are a Cullen, no matter what. We love you, and we want you to stay."

She looked up at me, her eyes brimming with tears. "How, Carlisle? How can you want me to stay?"

I took her face between my hands and looked directly into her eyes. "Because Bella, I can't make it if you don't. I need you now. You are the only one who can understand the pain I'm in, and I yours. We all need each other. This family will fall apart if we separate now. Please, Bella, say you'll stay with us."

 

"But since we lost Esme and Edward, I've felt his feelings toward her - he thinks of her as a friend. A best friend, perhaps. He has loved her in that way since the battle. And she feels for him in the same way. And I've noticed, especially in the last few months, that the connection they feel for each other seems stronger somehow. When they are not together, they both feel incomplete, but together, they both feel secure. They really rely quite heavily on each other." 

 

 

 

 

 

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 140263
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2009 Updated: January 07, 2010


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 The Big Gesture

Plz make more!

pretty plz?

 
Wonderwall by tuleangel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 297]
Summary:

This takes place after Edward leaves in New Moon.  Jacob and Bella get married and then after 5 years together, Jacob imprints and leaves Bella heartbroken. While at her dad's house Bella finds the items Edward left under her floorboards that Bella thought were gone forever.  All of this drives her to take charge and go after Edward.  But after 5 years, what will happen when she finds him?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 25624
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2009


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Welcome to New Hampshire

WOW!!!!!!!! i love this story! please make more! u r soo talented:)

making more makes me a happy bunny:-)

 
Split Second by ggf83 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 394]
Summary:

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It only takes a split second of hesitation to turn Edward's world upside down. Because of that coupled with Jasper's intense bloodlust, Bella's birthday will now be known as the anniversary of the day she was changed. He needs to find it in himself to both help his girlfriend, and forgive his brother.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: Early Turnings
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 37084
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Acceptance

WOW! please write more! its amazing!

 
Summary:

Bella was a world-class rider before an accident left her seriously wounded. After 15 months of physical therapy, Bella can walk again and Carlisle adopts her. There she meets the mysterious Edward Masen, who was also adopted by the Cullens. Surrounding him and his best friend Jasper Hale are rumors of the most extreme kind. Bella is determined to find out what the truth is...and find a little horsey love along the way.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 5761
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: January 09, 2010


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Prelude

Wow! plz make more!

I thought that was amazing.

at the end bella should ride again!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reveiw! (Trust me I loovvee reveiws ;) And you've gotten one thing right, Bella will ride again. It'll take sometime (most of it being alone with Edward and some fabulous horses! ;)

The next chapter should be up around October (getting things posted here takes sooo much time. It's madness, I tell you, madness! :)

Evil Black Poppies

 
Summary:

One and a half years. That’s how long it's been since Edward Cullen had banished himself and his family from Isabella Swan’s life, from Forks, from the one place they truly felt at home. 

A lot can change in that small amount of time, and it becomes painfully apparent to the Cullen’s when they come face to face with the girl they left behind, only she’s not the same girl anymore.

In an effort to protect herself from the pain of her past, she has become more confident, self assured and fierce. She’s a fighter now and their fate, along with many others, now rests in her hands.

Will she save them or punish them for past grievances?

AU set during New Moon

Let me set everyones mind at ease about the coupling in this story. It IS completely CANON. That means that no matter what I may make it look like between Bella and Marcus by the end of this fic Edward and Bella will be together again...well sort of. 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: The Eyes Series
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 83819
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2012


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Trouble

WOW!!!! please make more! i love this story!

 
Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Truths

Pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeee write more!:) it's realy good... i think bella should b with markus

 
Summary:

Could she bear to live out eternity knowing the one person she had trusted above all else had never actually cared for her? No, she didn’t think so… Fifty years later, Edward, Rosalie, and Emmett are captured by the Volturi. Guess who’s there to greet them?


AN:


Ok, so I know I haven’t updated in forever, (my sincerest apologies), but I’ve had the worst case of writer’s block and I have just been going through kind of a rough time in my life, and am just now starting to get over it. I know that’s not an original excuse, but it’s the truth. To top it off, I wasn’t sure of the direction this story was headed in, but now I think I have a pretty good idea. I just need to take some time to write it. So I promise that I’m not giving up, but it’s going to take a bit of time before anything new is posted. I haven’t even completely finished the first chapter. I’m sorry! But here’s a teaser from the prologue of the new version to hopefully make it up to you! (Or at least tide you over.)


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“They have finally sent in their spies.”


Gasps and hisses sounded from the small grouping behind him, tensed and preparing to attack.


“Patience, my friends. We have a plan, remember?”


“Who is it, master?” a female guard asked, an almost resigned tone contradicting her questioning phrase.


He hesitated for only a moment, trying and failing to find a way to avoid this question. There was simply no other way. She was a key part of the plan. Finally, with a sigh, he answered, “Edward, Emmett, and Rosalie Cullen.”


Something twisted in her gut, but she had been anticipating this. Of course it was bound to happen. That was just the way things worked out for her, and she had long ago accepted that. So there was no outward reaction to his words; only a simple nod.


“Edward, as in the mind reader?” the first guard wondered. Aro’s confirmation caused another hiss to rise up from amongst the guard.


“We must proceed with great caution.” He turned to face his followers. They had anticipated the rebellion’s every possible move and had prepared intensely for them all. He turned to face the female guard who had spoken. “You know what to do.”





 


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It’s not the final draft, but I felt you all deserved a sneak peek! I'll be posting the new version as a new story, and once it's up I'll probably delete this one. I want to have a big chunk of the new version written before I post it, so it'll be a while. Sorry! But good things do take time. And a big thank you to anyone who hasn’t given up on me! You’re patience will be rewarded, I promise!


~Jazz~


 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 20107
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2009 Updated: January 02, 2010


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: There's Just More For Me Out There

Thats really good, well written! :c)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! And that is a very interesting smiley.

~Jazz~

 
Summary:

When Bella overhears Jessica Stanley plotting to worm her way into Edwards' affections, and push best friend Bella out of his life for good, she knows she must do something- but what? She's just one of the boys.

Right?

 

One of the Boys

 

AU/AH  OOC


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jessica
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 16193
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: October 17, 2009


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed
Date: September 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Pre-Birthday (or The Calm Before)

:)

 
Summary:

Set two years after that fateful night in the forest except Edward never came back. Bella is away at college trying to pick up the pieces of her life. What happens when she runs into the one Cullen she never thought she could ever have anything in common with? A Team Jasper story.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 92438
[Report This] Published: September 12, 2009 Updated: February 28, 2010


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Plz write more! this is amazing!

 
Another Life by ash_1212 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

After Edward left, Bella was changed by another vampire and joined his coven. 30 years later her coven meets the Cullens. Canon pairings. Disclaimer - Twilight belongs to Stephenie Meyers. I'm just playing with her world.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 19507
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2009 Updated: March 06, 2010


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Change

Wow! thats sooo good!

plz write more and soon

XxXxXxX



Author's Response:

Yay! Glad you like it. More up soon :). Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Thirty Years Later

Thats realy good! please write more! if not i  may have to get emmett to come and get u!:P



Author's Response:

Although Emmettt coming after me isn't exactly a bad thing ;). LOL. Glad you're liking the story - more up soon :D. Thanks for the review

 
Summary:

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Jacob stopped Bella from jumping off the cliff in New Moon and Edward never returned.

After 22 years, the Cullens move to Seattle for yet another fresh start and Edward winds up with yet another surprising lab partner... Bella's daughter.

She's so like her mother and yet so different. Is it possible to love both a memory and its reincarnate?

And does Bella's daughter have a few secrets of her own?

 

*Rated for language, sexuality and awesomeness.

SM owns Twilight but check me out if you're into sex and sarcasm.

Sloppy wet kisses to Kris (aka Mkystich) for the new banner!


Categories: AU Characters: Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 86339
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2009 Updated: January 16, 2011


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Scented.

WOWWOWWOWWOWOWOWOWOWOW

plz write more if not ill get emmett to hunt you down!:P

lol



Author's Response:

haha no need for the beating, chapter 2 is in the queue and should be up shortly. thanks so much for your interest, i hope you stick with me!

 
Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: If music be the food of love, play on.

Please make more! it is sooo good! i hardly ever reveiw so ur specil!:D



Author's Response:

I'm honored. More is on the way, just for you :)

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella alone in the woods after telling her he didn’t want her any more. As she is lying on the cold forest floor; Bella remembers three important things. Edward made a promise not to leave her, and Edward never broke a promise, and third it was her body, her heart, what right did he have to decide what was good for her? All in all Bella realizes that Edward was covering up his true feeling about her. Bella goes to bring Edward home.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 57466
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2009 Updated: September 14, 2011


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dark Abyss

Wow that is amazing! that suits bellas personality brilliently!



Author's Response:

It's good to hear that you think I did such a good job with Bella that was my goal.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 

 
No Safe Harbor by none Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

A virus is unleashed on Seattle by a passenger on a plane landing from another country. How will Edward react to save Bella? Will his plan work?  Will Bella believe him and come willingly?

 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Renee, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 6144
[Report This] Published: October 08, 2009 Updated: November 04, 2009


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Pleading and Paranoia

WOW! i luv new stories almost as much as i luv edward!

 
Captured by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 324]
Summary:

What if Victoria had gotten a hold of Bella in New Moon? What was she planning to do to her? What if what happens to Bella changes her life and the Cullens' lives forever?

captured

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 49091
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1: A Not So Happy Birthday

Its a great start!

 
Summary:

It's been fifty-three years since Edward left Bella in the woods. Since then, the Cullens have added two new members to their coven, and have moved back to Forks. Feeling compromised, the Volturi travel to Forks to dispose of the Cullens. As war is about to commence, the newest Volturi member suffers an onslaught of memories of her human past. The Cullens' saving grace may also mean the end of Edward. Or will Bella Volturi have a change of undead heart. 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 33135
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2009 Updated: December 13, 2010


Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The (e)X-Files

WOW!!!!!!!! pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeee write some more!!!!!!!!!!

 




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