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Penname: olsson82 [Contact]
Real name: Amanda Olsson
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Summary:

He thought he had it all. The perfect job, the perfect house, the perfect girl, the perfect life. After almost five years together, she can no longer stand by and be taken for granted. She warned him...and now she's left him. Sometimes being in love isn't always enough.

Hang on for the ride!

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***Rated for language and sexual content.***

Inspired by the song "She Wouldn't Be Gone" by Blake Shelton. Take a listen.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 69188
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2011 Updated: December 20, 2011


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: October 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 :: Don't Fight It

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thanks love!! xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 ­:: Crazy Dreams; Sordid Reality

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: September 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 :: Gestures

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thanks babe!!!!!  xoxoxoxo  

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 :: Home

Good Chapter...



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 :: Broken

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 :: Hazy

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  xoxo

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: September 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 :: Break Down or Break Through?

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks love!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: December 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 :: Daddy's Girls

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!! xoxox

 
Always Mine by seh314 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Bella Swan has a past that she tried to change. Along the way, she lost a friendship. Now, eight years later, she's a third grade teacher at Forks Elementary. When a new student arrives on the first day of school, Bella's world is changed entirely.

New friendship, possible love, and a reunion that makes her realize what she had really missed out on.

(Any similarities to true events, past or present, are merely coincidental)

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Leah, Renesmee
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Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 5796
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2011 Updated: November 26, 2011


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: October 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: First Day of School

Good Chapter....

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: November 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: All About Me

Good Chapter......

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: November 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Parent/Teacher Conferences

Good Chapter......

 
Summary:

Power, greed, lust, & murder. The Irish mob clashes with the Italian mafia in the streets of Chicago. Can Edward and Bella survive FBI tails, jealous brothers, and a slew of people ready to knock them out of power?

Romeo and Juliet meets Goodfellas and The Godfather with a dash of Kill Bill.

Warnings: This is a mafia/mob story. There will be a lot of violence, sometimes very graphic violence. There will also be mentions of drug use and sexual assault.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, James
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 7409
[Report This] Published: August 27, 2011 Updated: October 11, 2011


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: October 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Ain't That a Kick in the Head

Good Chapter....

 
Summary:

Bella and Mike wed four years ago and their marriage hasn't exactly been the picture of bliss. A carefully guarded secret surfaces, destroying an already fragile Bella. Everything she knew was a lie, everything she wanted for her life, wiped out with the click of a mouse. An E x B story.

Warning:
There is mention of past sexual assault, crappy childhoods, an even crappier marriage, and some very prevalent social issues (that I’m not going to mention here, because it would defeat the purpose of reading the story).

 

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Excerpt: I looked at the clock again, 5:44.  Jesus Christ, did time stand still? Those fourteen minutes felt like fourteen hours.  As the moments ticked by, my palms began to sweat and a nervous pressure mounted in my chest. It's not the end of the world Bella; just the end of your marriage...and everything you knew. God, how was I going to do this? People up and left their spouses on a daily basis and never looked back. Of course, how many of them were under these same circumstances, I wondered.  How many women were faced with leaving the man they loved because he'd woven a lie so hurtful? When it finally surfaced, did it kill them?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 171435
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2011 Updated: November 28, 2012


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: May 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19; On The Line

Good Chapter.......



Author's Response:

THANKS BUNCHES!!!!

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: December 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9:The Pixie Walks

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks olsson!  Good to see your still with me friend!~MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: April 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Swing Life Away

Good Chapter......



Author's Response:

Thanks olsson, catch ya in the next one.

~Jen

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: April 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Is Yummier a Word?

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you my friend, and thank you for reading. 

~MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: January 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Past Nevers, Future Firsts

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks Olsson!

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: October 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: What Lies May Come

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks olsson82!! Hope I can keep you coming back for more.

~MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: October 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: This Love is Over

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thanks olsson, hope you stick around for more. ~MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: February 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Tuesday's Gone

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thanks olsson, glad to see you're still with me.

~MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Confessions...

Good chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks olsson!

Here's your sneak peek, but be warned, this is not yet beta'ed and subject to me fucking with it more than a few times before posting. Enjoy.
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BPOV

The smell of French toast and sausages wafted into the room and my mouth watered. "I smell yummy stuff," I murmured, untangling my body from the mess of sheets.

"You smell yummy." Edward nuzzled his face to the crook of my neck.

"I smell like sex."

"Like I said, yummy."

I pushed myself up. I gathered my clothes, got dressed, and kissed Edward on the forehead before heading to the bathroom. I had planned on heading down to the kitchen to steak my claim on the meaty goodness that was cooking before the boys had the chance to devour it, but I didn't make it past the bathroom's threshold.

I giggled when Edward closed the bathroom door behind me and pinned me to it. "Isabella Marie Cullen...fuck that sounds so good, kitten. So good." His voice was low and his head was buried between my boobs, but there was little about the action that was sexual. He was listening to my heart. Ear pressed to the gentle valley between my not so mountainous breasts.

I pulled my fingers through his hair and sighed. I could practically feel the happy coming off him in waves. My soft smile grew. When Edward had proposed last night, initially I'd froze. My blood had run cold, and I wanted so very much to run from the room. Then I took a deep breath and listened to the sound of his heart beating. Feeling it beating under my palm, the ice began to melt, and my own heart beat faster. The thought that he really wanted me, wanted me forever made me warm and all girly-fuzzy kind of happy.  But I'd been there and done that, and I knew it wasn't about the production, it was about forever. It was about finding that one person to love for the rest of your life and giving them everything you are.

I wanted Edward to have all of me. I wanted him to take away my name and history and rewrite it all. I suddenly felt guilty for putting limits on it. Edward never got his wedding; his fairytale night never happened. "Baby, if you want a big wedding, I...I can do that for you if that's what you want. I'm sorry I got all weird last night. You surprised me...and scared me." I cupped his beautiful face and brought him to my eye level. "What do you want?"  

"You," he said, his eyes intense and a little on the glassy side.

I smiled and kissed his nose. "You have me. But what do you want? I've done this before, but you haven't. It was selfish of me to try to take that away from you."

His arms snaked around my waist and pulled me. "You, Bella. I want you. I want simple and easy and relaxed and fun. But I have one request..."

"Anything."    

 

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: November 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Shut up and Drive

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing, MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: November 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Rear View Mirror

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thanks olsson, I'm glad you enjoyed the read and thank you for the review. ~Jen

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: December 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11:Seattle Play by Play: Part One

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing, enjoy your holidays!

~Jen

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: March 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Shades of Blue

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Why thank you.

 




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