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Penname: olsson82 [Contact]
Real name: Amanda Olsson
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Member Since: August 13, 2009
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Incredible Banner by readergoof...she even found a white bikini!!  Thank you!!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

 

 

 

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 57554
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2011 Updated: October 20, 2011


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: October 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

Good Chapter......

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two

Good Chapter.....

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Connections

Good Chapter.....

 
Summary:

He thought he had it all. The perfect job, the perfect house, the perfect girl, the perfect life. After almost five years together, she can no longer stand by and be taken for granted. She warned him...and now she's left him. Sometimes being in love isn't always enough.

Hang on for the ride!

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***Rated for language and sexual content.***

Inspired by the song "She Wouldn't Be Gone" by Blake Shelton. Take a listen.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 69188
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2011 Updated: December 19, 2011


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: September 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 :: Show Me

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks babe!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 :: Treasure

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: October 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 :: Run Interference

Good Chapter...



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 :: Fight or Flight

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! :)

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 :: Journey

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I'm so happy to see you back for another story with me!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: October 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 :: Don't Fight It

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thanks love!! xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: December 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 ­:: Crazy Dreams; Sordid Reality

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: September 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 :: Gestures

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thanks babe!!!!!  xoxoxoxo  

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 :: Home

Good Chapter...



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 :: Broken

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: August 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 :: Hazy

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  xoxo

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: September 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 :: Break Down or Break Through?

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks love!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: December 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 :: Daddy's Girls

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!! xoxox

 
Always Mine by seh314 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Bella Swan has a past that she tried to change. Along the way, she lost a friendship. Now, eight years later, she's a third grade teacher at Forks Elementary. When a new student arrives on the first day of school, Bella's world is changed entirely.

New friendship, possible love, and a reunion that makes her realize what she had really missed out on.

(Any similarities to true events, past or present, are merely coincidental)

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Leah, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 5796
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2011 Updated: November 25, 2011


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: October 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: First Day of School

Good Chapter....

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: November 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: All About Me

Good Chapter......

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: November 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Parent/Teacher Conferences

Good Chapter......

 
Summary:

Power, greed, lust, & murder. The Irish mob clashes with the Italian mafia in the streets of Chicago. Can Edward and Bella survive FBI tails, jealous brothers, and a slew of people ready to knock them out of power?

Romeo and Juliet meets Goodfellas and The Godfather with a dash of Kill Bill.

Warnings: This is a mafia/mob story. There will be a lot of violence, sometimes very graphic violence. There will also be mentions of drug use and sexual assault.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, James
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 7409
[Report This] Published: August 27, 2011 Updated: October 11, 2011


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: October 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Ain't That a Kick in the Head

Good Chapter....

 
Summary:

Bella and Mike wed four years ago and their marriage hasn't exactly been the picture of bliss. A carefully guarded secret surfaces, destroying an already fragile Bella. Everything she knew was a lie, everything she wanted for her life, wiped out with the click of a mouse. An E x B story.

Warning:
There is mention of past sexual assault, crappy childhoods, an even crappier marriage, and some very prevalent social issues (that I’m not going to mention here, because it would defeat the purpose of reading the story).

 

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Excerpt: I looked at the clock again, 5:44.  Jesus Christ, did time stand still? Those fourteen minutes felt like fourteen hours.  As the moments ticked by, my palms began to sweat and a nervous pressure mounted in my chest. It's not the end of the world Bella; just the end of your marriage...and everything you knew. God, how was I going to do this? People up and left their spouses on a daily basis and never looked back. Of course, how many of them were under these same circumstances, I wondered.  How many women were faced with leaving the man they loved because he'd woven a lie so hurtful? When it finally surfaced, did it kill them?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 171435
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2011 Updated: November 27, 2012


Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: May 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19; On The Line

Good Chapter.......



Author's Response:

THANKS BUNCHES!!!!

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: December 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9:The Pixie Walks

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks olsson!  Good to see your still with me friend!~MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: April 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Swing Life Away

Good Chapter......



Author's Response:

Thanks olsson, catch ya in the next one.

~Jen

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: April 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Is Yummier a Word?

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you my friend, and thank you for reading. 

~MissJanuary

 
Reviewer: olsson82 Signed
Date: January 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Past Nevers, Future Firsts

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks Olsson!

 




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