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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Rabbit Hole by profmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 329]
Summary:

Summary: Edward leaves Bella in Forks before revealing that he and his family are vampires.  Bella’s curiosity gets the best of her, and she spends years researching her theories and suspicions about Edward and his kind, drawing attention from unwanted and dangerous sources.  Can Edward find a way to save Bella from the Rabbit Hole she’s fallen into?  Set at the beginning of Twilight and then alternate universe. Like New Moon, he leaves to protect her. Unlike NM, he doesn't leave her to her own devices. AU

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 107008
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: December 20, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: The Mock Turtle

It would seem Bella is doing to Edward what he did to her. Is she wanting him to feel the pain and hopelessess she went thru? I guess it is ironic. I am absolutly thrilled with the turn of events and hope Edward can save her.

 

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: After this I Should Think Nothing of Falling Down the Stairs

Wow my mind is just reeling at all the possibilites that this trip to Volterra has brought to light...Bella is not there! Where in sam hill did she run off too.

*Alice like bouncing around* I will await your next chapter

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Bella's Blog Oct 10, 2008

OH the contact Bella spoke of...what a tragic story...I am anxious to learn more of him. Perhaps that is where Bella is...helping her contact. Ohh I can't wait until you update agian....

 
Summary:

Awesome Banner by Anne Cullen!

Awesome Banner by Anne Cullen!!

 

Edward's POV of Bella's pregnancy, burning and awakening in Breaking Dawn.  Covers all the missing moments with Edward, Bella, Renesmee and the Cullens, and everything that they went through. Starts when Edward and Bella arrive home from Isle Esme and meet the Cullens at the airport. Find out what happened after Bella ran into Rosalie's arms...  

In a fraction of a second, I was at Bella's side, the rest of my family still frozen. I put my hands on Bella's shoulders.

"Let her go, Rose," I said, my voice deadly.  She just stared back at me grimly. I searched her mind, trying to get a hold of her plans.  There was a resolve, a plan to protect the baby at all costs.  And an aching desire she couldn't hide to have that baby as her own....

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Her face was so deathly still, no response.  She was unearthly pale, and there was the slightest blue tinge to her skin, the sky pale at dawn.  As I pressed my lips to hers, they were too cool.  I blew in gently twice, watching her chest rise and fall mechanically. I moved my mouth to her ear as my hands began to move again.

"Come on, Bella, love," I whispered.  "Come on, sweetheart.  I'm right here.  You did it. You've got a healthy baby. She's so beautiful. You were strong enough.  Now it's time for you to come back.  She's waiting.  I'm waiting, love.  I'm waiting for you, always...

 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 191547
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Resolve

I think I hear the twilight zone theme song...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Love

I can't thank you enough for writing this story...I am glad i am no the only one to wonder what was goin on at this time

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Confession

Does anyone ever wonder why Edward tortures himself needlessly

 
daybreak by SirenSongx Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1100]
Summary:

It's basically a retelling of Twilight, with a few twists. Edward isn't the only one who can hear thoughts. Bella can also, but like Edward there is that one exception...him. What happens when she learns their secret? And what happens when the Cullen's find out that she already knows? Written from Bellla's point of view.

daybreak

Set during early 2006.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Daybreak Saga
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 89577
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: 23: Voices

How can I not be just a bit sad that this is ending. Sigh...however i am conforted you are going to write New Moon. I am happy that the others were able to get to Bella in time and have to wonder what they will tell Charlie about this little episode. I can't wait to find out.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: 19: Flight

Just let us know when you post your new story and i will sprint with vampire speed to read it...*excited giggles* I feel like I've been given an early Christmas present.

I love the new chapter and can't wait to see what happens in Mexico...are we going to get lucky and read of a new marriage? Well if not then well I will be happy to visit Mexico with the Cullen's...please update soon.



Author's Response:

LOL, no, no marriage, thats not till the 4th book. If you have me as a fav author then it will send you an email my new story is available. But I'll also put up a notice on my chapter notes if you like.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1: Gifted

New to the site, but already loving your twist on things...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: 3: White

Don't worry about the lenght of the chapter...for me the longer the better =)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: 6: Legends

You know the more i think about it...Bella reading minds is a stroke of genius! If she could read minds in human form what would she be like as a vampire?!? Snap! She'd be so kick ass!



Author's Response:

*wink* My thoughts exactly, she would be almost scary as a vamp. lol

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: 7: Three

Wow you story seriously Rocks!! The confrontation with Mike and Bella was poetry in motion! Great Job!! Can't wait or the next chapter...the Big one ehh. Until next time!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: 8: Killer

Wow this is definatly picking up...LOL...seems like it took Edward long enough to figure that one out.

“Which of us is the predator and which is the prey?” Hmmm I think Edward better watch out, If Bella can already hear minds as a human, I bet dollar to pesos that she'll be the predator.

I can't wait to read the next installment of your excellent writing skills. =)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: 9: Trust

Chapter is so well written, I was smiling quite a bit while reading it. I wouldn't mind if you tossed in a wrestling match bewteen the Cullen boys...that should be quit entertaining to read. Again can't wait to see what you come up with next.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: 10: Proof

OH. MY. GOD. Your are a freakin genius! I love this chapter to pieces...soon to be my favorite I'm sure! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: 11: Dazzle

I would just love to read about Emmett holding Edward so Bella can kiss him...brings tears to my eyes just thinking about it

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: 12: Dream

Ahhh man...to bad that was just a dream. Excellent descriptions of what's going on in her head. Will her dreams indicate that when they are togeter her sheild drops to the point where he'll hear as well? Can't wait to read what happens.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: 13: Reality

Wow Bella's dream was real! That's awesome! You never cease to amaze me!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: 14: Torture

Well if the right words aren't coming...take a step back, relax, and in time the will come to you. I love this story so take you time. I am so glad Edward is so forthcoming. Bella cracks me up. I will patiently await your next chapter.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: 15: Interruptions

Wow...Excellent work my dear...I am completly riveted

I do hope Edward changes her mind about the whole marriage thing...LOL should be an interesting ride.

PS: Hope your hand feels better...take a break and let it heal.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: 16: Plans

Well I think the date went well and I laughed like crazy about the purring...it was great

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: 17: Complications

Damn Bella fights dirty...poor Edward doesn't stand a chance with her distracting him like that...LOL

I can't wait for the meeting with the nomads....with Bella being able to hear everything this is gonna be so exciting.....*bouncing around deliriously happy*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: 18: Prey

Don't hide behind your hands my dear, I think it was a brilliant alternative. It leave so much to possibilites...I found it hilarious that she threatened him by stripping...way to funny. Bella is also James is singer! HOLY HALE...that is just to cool (well not for Bella) I can't wait to see how you take it from here...I will anxiously await it all. 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: 20: Visions

Ya I have to agree that chapter in Twilight was kind of boring  but I like how you have livend it up a bit...I can't even imagine who would be at the airport except maybe her mom but have no clue why her mom would even be there to begin with. I will anxiously await your next chapters.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: 21: Goodbyes

My dear this chapter was captivating to say the least...there are no words. I can't wait for the showdown to come...

 




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