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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
Status: Member
Member Since: July 01, 2009

Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!

I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.

I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.

10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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daybreak by SirenSongx Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1100]

It's basically a retelling of Twilight, with a few twists. Edward isn't the only one who can hear thoughts. Bella can also, but like Edward there is that one exception...him. What happens when she learns their secret? And what happens when the Cullen's find out that she already knows? Written from Bellla's point of view.


Set during early 2006.

Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Series: The Daybreak Saga
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 89577
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: 3: White

Don't worry about the lenght of the chapter...for me the longer the better =)

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: 6: Legends

You know the more i think about it...Bella reading minds is a stroke of genius! If she could read minds in human form what would she be like as a vampire?!? Snap! She'd be so kick ass!

Author's Response:

*wink* My thoughts exactly, she would be almost scary as a vamp. lol

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: 7: Three

Wow you story seriously Rocks!! The confrontation with Mike and Bella was poetry in motion! Great Job!! Can't wait or the next chapter...the Big one ehh. Until next time!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: 8: Killer

Wow this is definatly picking up...LOL...seems like it took Edward long enough to figure that one out.

“Which of us is the predator and which is the prey?” Hmmm I think Edward better watch out, If Bella can already hear minds as a human, I bet dollar to pesos that she'll be the predator.

I can't wait to read the next installment of your excellent writing skills. =)

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: 9: Trust

Chapter is so well written, I was smiling quite a bit while reading it. I wouldn't mind if you tossed in a wrestling match bewteen the Cullen boys...that should be quit entertaining to read. Again can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: 10: Proof

OH. MY. GOD. Your are a freakin genius! I love this chapter to pieces...soon to be my favorite I'm sure! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: 11: Dazzle

I would just love to read about Emmett holding Edward so Bella can kiss him...brings tears to my eyes just thinking about it

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: 12: Dream

Ahhh bad that was just a dream. Excellent descriptions of what's going on in her head. Will her dreams indicate that when they are togeter her sheild drops to the point where he'll hear as well? Can't wait to read what happens.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: 13: Reality

Wow Bella's dream was real! That's awesome! You never cease to amaze me!

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Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: 14: Torture

Well if the right words aren't coming...take a step back, relax, and in time the will come to you. I love this story so take you time. I am so glad Edward is so forthcoming. Bella cracks me up. I will patiently await your next chapter.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: 15: Interruptions

Wow...Excellent work my dear...I am completly riveted

I do hope Edward changes her mind about the whole marriage thing...LOL should be an interesting ride.

PS: Hope your hand feels better...take a break and let it heal.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: 16: Plans

Well I think the date went well and I laughed like crazy about the was great

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: 17: Complications

Damn Bella fights dirty...poor Edward doesn't stand a chance with her distracting him like that...LOL

I can't wait for the meeting with the nomads....with Bella being able to hear everything this is gonna be so exciting.....*bouncing around deliriously happy*

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: 18: Prey

Don't hide behind your hands my dear, I think it was a brilliant alternative. It leave so much to possibilites...I found it hilarious that she threatened him by stripping...way to funny. Bella is also James is singer! HOLY HALE...that is just to cool (well not for Bella) I can't wait to see how you take it from here...I will anxiously await it all. 

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: 20: Visions

Ya I have to agree that chapter in Twilight was kind of boring  but I like how you have livend it up a bit...I can't even imagine who would be at the airport except maybe her mom but have no clue why her mom would even be there to begin with. I will anxiously await your next chapters.

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Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: 21: Goodbyes

My dear this chapter was captivating to say the least...there are no words. I can't wait for the showdown to come...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: 22: Sacrifice

Si los palabras era bien...yes the words were right.

James is one sadistic SOB...poor Bella to have to hear his thoughts no less. It was a hard chapter to read since it is of Bella getting hurt. I can't wait to see how this all works out.

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Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: 24: Stalemate

Acck spasing computer keeps kicking me off...


Bella is reunited with her childhood friend Alice under unlikely circumstances. When sparks fly between Bella and Alice's older brother, will she be able to resist? And what secrets is he hiding?



Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie, Seth
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 132141
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010

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Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: House of Cards

*Stares at screen speechless...* seriously stunned here...

Author's Response:

Hang in there bb. Thanks for your reviews so far :)

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Shiny Happy People

Wow that was definatly  a good way to shift things between them. I am super excited to see how things work out between them...

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Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Magnetic

Happy New Year is right!!! This is awesome!! It's freakin 2am but can't stop reading...but may have to quite for the night so I can see straight tomorrow...snicker

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Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: You'll Poke Your Eye Out

Hmm sledding ... EXCELLENT!!

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Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Pick ups and Spares

Game night just keeps getting better and better.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Moments

Oh dear Lord! Alice KNOWS...heaven help Bella now...

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Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: K.O.

HOlY HALE!! I can't believe he gave her a bloody nose...LOL however this is Bella we are talking about...



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