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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
Status: Member
Member Since: July 01, 2009

Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!

I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.

I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.

10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Pretending by lindseyfair Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 506]

Edward and Bella have known each other since birth. After one moment at a party just months before their college graduation, Edward sends them on a journey that begins with a little pretending. Where it ends? No one knows. NC-17 for language and sexual content. AH/AU/OCC



Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 52003
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2010

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The First Twenty-four Hours

Holy Hale and then my dear certainly wentthere and ya know what?... I couldn't be more pleased. There is no way Rose wouldn't have known i mean her and Emmett tell each other everything...totally exciting...and Emmett better watch out cuz now both of them are gonna corner him,,,

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Revelations (V)

Congrats on baby Gavin!!! Wow you are one dedicated writer...I was pretty much a zombie when my kids were always took me a week to get back into my groove. I loved this last chapter...some surprises threw me for a loop but was well worth it

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Sometimes Good Things Come in Threes (V)


Tanya the Bitch: 0

Bella and Rose the Awesome: infinity

Glad to see those two girls take Tanya down it was great and I was cheering the entire time...I absolulty loved it.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Changes

Holy Hell THAT was intense!!! Yay they are gonna get married and about damn time too. Alice of course will kill them but what's a girl to do!!!

Seven days in Edwardland...DAMN Bella is one lucky girl

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Man and Wife

Wow my dear we share alot of the same stories and I am just as excited as you for Updates!!!

Please don't tell me that bitch Tanya hasn't gone stalker and is on the plane with the newlyweds...Ugggg

My pervy hat was left at home as I am in my office but have my pervy visor with me and I say if possible do a swimming trist...ever done it in the moonlight. The sheer excitement of the darkness, water, and mystery add to the pleasure, and the moonlight makes it magical. It definatly is euphoric

Author's Response:

Water and moonlight. Very good idea. I'll have to see if I can come up with something good. So far most readers have assumed it's a woman on the plane. I'll let the cat out of the bag, it's not.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Do Over (VJGM)

Wow...feels a warmth in her heart...I am happy to see that these two are working thier way back to each other and can't help but wonder that they will be the stronger for it. Berkley sounds like a little chocolate dream and am sure will bring back more joy to thier lives. I can't wait to see what you do for them on vacation...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: The Things We Do for Love (VJGM)

Ohh this is fabulous...thier Honeymoon was fantastic! James is such an uber ass it's not funny, so glad Sam got a piece of him. Sorry but my mind is drawing a blank as to what would blow Bella's mind away?

No worries about the update as I will faithfully follow this to the end. H1N1 hit our house as well so completly sympathize with ya.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: What Happens Next (VJGM)

WHAT THE FUCK DID JACOB DO!!??!! Oh dear lord please tell me that he did not suceed in doing what I think he did! Please don't leave me hanging to long as this is just a hell of a cliffie.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Waiting (V)

* Cries tear of Joy!* I am so happy that Jacob's plans failed!! So now Bella and Edward have three beautiful babies and I couldn't be more thrilled for them. It must have been a complete shock to find out that Jacob could be the father and I can't believe that jackass had the nerve to imply that he would make a better father...makes my stomach turn at the idea. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: At Long Last (VJGM)

I am thrilled that Jacob didn't succeed! The babies sound adorable and three cheers for Daddy E!! So glad Jake got busted.

I am happy with things as they are and will accept you ending it in the next few chapters but will leave that to your discretion. I loved this journey and will support whatever you ultimately decide.


Edward is the retired right hand man for the infamous mob boss, Charlie Swan. When asked to train a woman to help to protect herself and her daughter, he had no idea the trouble he'd find himself in. She's the boss's daughter, can he keep his hands off?  OCC/AH

banner by: emerald_rosalie

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Rosalie
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 59124
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2009 Updated: October 24, 2010

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Trainer

Well hot damn .... let the games begin.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Assessment

Nope don't blame the girl one bit...on the contrary I am surprised she lasted that long. That bastard James better not find her if he knows what's good for him...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Tease

Well well well...our little Bella is quit the tease alright...poor Edward is so screwed...LOL

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Wet

Yup those two are dead, dead, DEAD! But what a way to go eh...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Story Time

Jesus! Charlie is sucha crime boss...kind of a nice change for his character...LOL

Alice is Bella's half sister huh...should be really interesting when Jasper gets to meet her...


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Babes and Toys

Well all Ican say is...It's about damn time that Edward gave in...LOL yes the look on Edward's face was priceless to say the least

Pads off to read more....

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Temptations

Ahhh the pack is back...mmmmm gotta love the pack.

Time with Ellie is just the sweetest thing...and that little girl is definatly one smart cookie...

Wonder if Jasper has got Mr. Jenks to start singing...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Sweat, Blood and Tears

Wow what an emotional chapter...I felt so many things at once...

I look forward to the next chapter...


Under a Killing Moon banner

Bella goes to Forks to complete some omnious task her mother says she "must do on her own."  Edward struggles with his grip on humanity.  They both harbor secrets, but she knows his.  She's about to learn that her mother is a big, fat liar.  He's about to learn that Alice and Carlisle are capable of keeping secrets from him.  These two might be the best thing for each other; the only way they can come to terms and move forward.  And for once, Bella is Edward's equal.  In will and ability.
OOC, AU, canon pairing


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 16808
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: November 24, 2009

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 can't help but laugh at emoward...

If he only knew just how special Bella was he'd have a coronary. Don't worry I'm gonna be with you to the bitter end no matter how long it takes...until we meet again my dear...

Author's Response:


I call him Broodward behind his back.  Can vampires have coronaries?  LOL.

Thanks for sticking around. 

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Well Bella knows more than usual...still can't quit pick out all her abilities yes,,,this should be interesting

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Sounds like Renee is not tellin Bella something...

Wonder what is goin to happen next




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"His agony defines him. His memories destroy him.

But his hope is what sustains him, feeds him, encourages him. It's his purpose. And he doesn't deny it.

Offered the chance to leave all pain and misery behind, Edward knew that it was better to suffer his loss than to forget it. For in having it, Bella remains his and only his.

To forget would be the ultimate betrayal, abandoning her once again to a world of lonliness and despair. He had already done that once upon a time, and he did so spectacularly.

He'll find her. He has to. 


- icrodriguez (the most beautiful review I have ever received.  THANK YOU for allowing me the honour of displaying it here.  It sums up the tone of this story beautifully, hearts, Erin)


Left in the woods, an unfortunate run-in with Laurant and 45 years later - Bella finds herself facing everything she has ever wanted.  Does it want her back?  What will she discover about how Edward has been spending his time...


Rated for later chapters.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 140624
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2012

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Alone

*Gasp* Oh she has suffered over the last 40some years. I am glad she at least found someone to "run" with...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Unforgiven

Ohhh I just found this story and can't believe what I am's bee 45 years...he never came back?!?  Must read more...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Immortal

Holy Hale...I don't have words for the anticipations that this chapter has just instilled in me...pads off to read next chater ASAP..

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Trembling

How could Edward say those thing to Bella?!? *inwardly seeths* That boy has no clue as to the hell he put that girl thru...I sure hope he pulls his head out of his ass and finds the truth before he accuses...



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