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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up

Aww watching poor Edward break down made me teary...I agree with Carlisle in that they all had an active part in making mistakes that are attributed to the outcome of events that effect the here and now. Will be interesting to see what happens next.

Epilogue:  Would like to see a bit from Esme and Carlisle's point of view. In that maybe a day with Elizabeth and them sharing thier feelings on Bella/Edward being together (which I am rooting for) while they babysit thier granddaughter and the joy she brings them.



Author's Response: I truly feel Carlisle was right. Everyone contributed to this. Edward played the most obvious role but certainly not the only one. Love your epilogue idea! Definitely a good one! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Happy Birthday my dear and as for a Cullen and presents...ponders...I would say a different Cullen for a day for the entire day to do with as you please.

I loved daddy daughter time...it was hard on all but now healing has began, I love it...still counting down until Bella is reunited with Elizabeth and Edward...please don't keep us waiting to long as the suspense is killing me.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B now!  Chapter 41, here we come… It's not THE conversation, but it's the first time they all see each other.

Thanks so much for reviewing and for the birthday wishes!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Esme was as sweet as pie and gave Charlie the words he needed...way to go mama Cullen!

And Jasper...well Jasper was fucking brilliant as always in his own way. His speach to Bella about going avoid-o-rama or psycho banshee had me cheering...cant wait for more!



Author's Response: Esame and Charlie are both feeling helpless. They needed to talk. Jasper just has a way of simpling things up in his oh so elegant way! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

Egats! Yes I know there is alot to heal but I never bet against Alice. All will be okay in the end. Sigh...Emmett is just the greatest and I love him even more for just being himself and asking for forgiveness.

What I see for Edward and Bella is many tears, and dear god do I hope for Bella punching Edward for being so dumb. I know it won't physically hurt but some indication of her hurt will come thru. I anxiously await this reunion. 



Author's Response: Alice really tried hard, and Bella did a good job giving her a chance to explain. Emmett is just lovely. Hang in there! The next one is rough but remember it will be okay in the end! Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

*tears that have threatened to fall finally do...* Again another beutiful chapter. I don't know what to say other than this is just a breath taking story. The love between father and daughter was so palpable. Oh the joy of Bella finally meeting her daughter. Sigh...it is a start and maybe now the healing can begin.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you feel I did this chapter justice!  Your support of me and this story is astounding.  I am grateful to you.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

It's great to hear that Edward is going to man-up and try everyday to gain back Bella's trust. *Go Edward!* Ahh Bella, Bella, Bella, poor girl has alot to deal with. So much pain, and not enough self confidence. I do believe she will do right by Elizabeth and at least let Edward try to be there but it definatly will take time.



Author's Response:

They have so much healing to do.  Both of them have a lot of work ahead.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43 - The Highway

OH my Lord Child are your trying to kill me? I cant believe Bella is saying that to Edward but sadly I understand how badly battered her heart is and is so afraid of getting hurt. I do hope those insecurities get resolved as it breaks my heart to see such pain,



Author's Response:

Hang in there!  I’m not done with these two yet!  This is just where she is now...

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44 - Fight

OH MY GOD! YOUR A FEAKIN BRILLIANT GENIUS!!!

I am in total awe of Jasper and If i knew Alice wouldn't kill me I'd so totally kiss that boy! I love how they are helping Edward realize a few truths along the way. This is genius!



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

Ok so I am bordering on little to no sleep these past few days but when I got my notice this was up I just had to read...who needs sleep right?

I thought it was fabulous...Edward is such a good daddy...I do hope this works out for them both



Author's Response:

Daddyward.  *sigh*  What's not to love?

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49 - The Vase

*Grabs a freakin box of tissue cuz the tears keep falling*

I just can't tell you how beautiful this is, how those two are slowly coming together. Sigh...it is magnificent in it's simplicity and I just loved the broken vase analogy.

Jasper of course can still make me laugh and I love him for it or else i'd be crying the whole time...



Author's Response:

 

I am glad you thought the vase analogy worked!  I hope the tears are happy!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50 - My Forever

*A silent tear slips over cheek* Wow oh Wow...This was such an emotional end for me. It is a great story and I am sad that it is ending. However I am happy that both Edward and Bella are left on the road to healing. I couldn't ask for a better ending...Thank you...



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Have a wonderful holiday!

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet

Sorry computer going psycho but just had to write that this was fabulous...I am so happy that the Cullen family is finally complete....



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  It's about time they all came together!

 

Happy New Year!

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

LoL...the curse of being a parent...interuptitis is very common. Ohh but reading how well Edward is with Elizabeth...sigh. Hot damn was that hot!



Author's Response:

Daddyward is both sweet and schmexy with her, hunh?

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary: Feature

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"I used to think I was average, you know, dull and boring.  Then I found out I was a shape-shifting, reincarnated death goddess with a knack for vengeance, the boy I'm obsessed with is my immortal enemy, and my friends are werewolves.  So much for average." 

Bella Swan is thrilled to finally be moving back to her hometown of Forks, Washington to live with her father (and best friend), Charlie.  However, when Bella arrives she begins to have disturbing dreams of becoming a monster, and even more disturbing cravings for her lab partner Edward Cullen.  As Bella transforms into a dangerous entity, will she be able to control her hungers and find love with Edward, or will she leave a swathe of destruction in her wake?  Rated NC-17 for sexual situations and some violence.  AU, canon pairings.  Somewhat OOC.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 87342
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2009 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Preface and First Flight

How intriguing...did she turn into a carniverous swan?  I am definatly captivated...



Author's Response:

Thanks bb!  Hope you continue to enjoy!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Predator

Wow what a first meeting...Bella is so striking it's eeerie. I love that she has a dark side to her....



Author's Response:

Thanks, bb!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Other White Meat

Wow this is so captivating....

What in the world did Tanya do and what does she know? Ooooohhhh I can't wait



Author's Response:

:-D  I'll let you keep reading... but I'm so tempted to give it all away, lol, I'm terrible

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Ghosts of Bella's Past

Holy Crow! Charlie is the owl...no wonder he stopped her from eating that human. This is magnificent news...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Not a Fairytale

Oh my god this is so tantilizing...I love the story! Please continue...I so want to know where you are going with this =)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Trust me, there's soooo much more to come ;-)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: We Can't Be Friends

Wow...Alice and Lyssa are one and the same. Will Bella realize that the curse is real...I am so EXCITED!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Satisfied and Empty

This is such an intriguing story...I am totally riveted..

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: The Way We Were

Ahh now I see how Bella's past is coming back to haunt her...

Did she really change Edward?  

Trully a work of art...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Served Cold

AAAAGGGggggg not a cliffie! I love this story...will Edward admit Bella changed him? I am literally bouncing around just thinking of the idea.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Best Policy

It is heart wrentching to live thru all the new revelations Bella has to experience...she has had a hard past. I wonder who Zues is and why that rat bastard has not been punished. I can't wait to see how you weave this story...it really is spellbinding...



Author's Response:

Thank you!  And thanks for reviewing through the chaps!  I love to read reactions when someone actually gets to read the chaps. back to back... and your reviews made me kind of glowy :-D

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Bursar of Happiness

Rose as Helen of Troy...ya best to keep that under wraps or else her ego will explode...I sure hope Lyssa and Issy get back together and be the sisters they truly are



Author's Response:

Ah, Rose, lol... the girls are at least going to try to be cordial for now... we'll see what happens ;-)

 
The Cold War by gleena Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 275]
Summary:

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In 2026, the Cullens realize that Aro desperately wants to possess Edward in order to use him in a barbaric experiment. Now, the Cullens must evade the Volturi while protecting one of their own as well as Aro's unwitting human pawn. 100% Canon.

Won Best Volturi at Round 2 of the Sparkle Awards!
2nd place in the 1st round Sparkle Awards for Best Post-Breaking Dawn (http://thesparkleawards.yolasite.com/ )

Made it to the Last Round of the Indie Twific awards for:
Best Canon WIP, Best Original Character WIP

Twilighted Beta: myimm0rtal (current) and Admittedly Obsessed (through Ch. 18)

Banner by edward-bella, ebhg.  She is a treasure!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 112625
[Report This] Published: April 27, 2009 Updated: December 15, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Joshua

Hmm very interesting...



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you think so; I have misgivings about how slowly the story starts.  It's the way it was in my head, though.

 




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