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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: August 06, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

Oh yay they are gonna talk



Author's Response:

I know, right!

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough

Alright they are mobilizing!!!!



Author's Response:

It's about time!  Hopefully they will get there in time.

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

What the hell! that was some cliffhanger



Author's Response:

And a tough chapter to boot.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Damn Angela is the best!



Author's Response:

She really does rock - and has a mean right hook!

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

A long Freakin drive is an understatement

 



Author's Response:

Yup.  A very very long one.

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - Hang On

*tears running freely* Your a freakin awesome author



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!  That was a difficult chapter to write.


Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - No

Oh God NO!!!!



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, it's ugly.  This is probably the most painful chapter yet.

Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

This is such an awesome story...I can't wait to read more.

I hope Bella and the Baby will be ok



Author's Response:

The next chapter of the story should be up really soon!  You'll get at least part of your answer.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

OH SNAP your the Best! She's here...baby Swan-Cullen. I am still worried about Bella but thank God the baby is safe. Now time for daddy to meet her and take care of her. Not sure I wan't to venture my theory of a name just yet...LOL



Author's Response:

Bella has quite the fight ahead of her!  But the baby is here and she is okay!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

I can't stop cryin over the beauty that is this chapter. The words of this chapter bring me joy and sadness. I hope to all hell that Bella survives...gets to meet her daughter; that Edward can make ammends. Little love...*sigh* such a sweet sentiment and so perfect for this brand new girl in Edward's life. You are oneawesome writer!



Author's Response:

It is sad, but now there is hope.  A hope that will infect the rest of the story!  And Bella will be okay.  Just believe!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

*silent tears fall*

I can't tell you enough how this story is touching me...it is so beautifully written. I know Edward wants Bella to name the baby but maybe this will help heal his heart and help him let go of his guilt just a bit. I wonder what is going on in Bella's mind right now...did she hear Edward's voice. I sure hope so. I understand the not posting prob and with this lovely chapter, you are totally forgiven. I can't wait to see what Edward names his daughter...



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!  You're right.  Edward doesn't want to do this, but he will.  And he will do it well.

Actually, you will get another glimpse into Bella's mind shortly.  It's a tough read, but I think it will help make sense where she is emotionally.

Thanks so much for your patience and your review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 - Classics

Oh his little love has been named! *bounces around excitedly* It is a beautiful name that I am sure Bella will adore. I hope she heals fast I am just dying to for her to meet the child she faught so hard to keep and be reunited with Edward...way to keep us all on our toes.



Author's Response: I am so glad you approve! More on Bella next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

* A delicious shiver runs down my back* ANY damp, shirtless Cullen you say....What a delightful image............................. *snaps out of daydream*

Ok back to business...Bella is waking up and I so can't wait to read about the reunion between her and Edward and not to mention little Elizabeth. the anticipation is mounting and I couldn't be more thrilled! I understand the need for Edward not to be there in the beginning but dang it all my curiosity is getting the better of me...Love it!



Author's Response:

Yup.  ANY damp, shirtless Cullen:)  YUM!

Yes, Bella is resurfacing and a whole world of questions and answers are about to come to light.  I am so glad that you are enjoying the story!

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34 - Deals

Was wodering when Edward was gonna get himself cleaned up...LOL

I can't wait until Bella, Elizabeth, and Edward reunite...can't blame Bella for possibly making Edward suffer abit I mean he did leave...but hopefully the misery will only be short.



Author's Response:

The boy hadn't bathed in a WHILE!  Glad Jasper pointed it out!  LOL!

Bella will be awake in the next chapter, but it will be a little while before they reunite.  Bella needs some time.

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

OH MY GOD Bella is awake...oh will she let Edward back in but first and foremost I can't wait for her to meet little Elizabeth... Much love to you!

BTW discovered Becoming the Swan and am already anxious for more...



Author's Response:

She's back!  Neither she nor Little Love are stable enough to be moved, but it's coming!  Not much longer now!

And YAY!  Glad you like ... Becomes the Swan!  We submitted the next chapter today!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth

Any movie you say....Well hot diggity dog...*ponders for awhile*

I guess I would have to say I'd love to reenact the lightning kiss seen at the end of Sweet Home Alabama with Edward...*SWOON* that would just make my decade....LOL

The story...OH MY GOD...it is beyound words...the emotion of it all just takes my breath away...



Author's Response: Great Cullen/movie combo! I am so glad you are still enjoying the story! Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up

Aww watching poor Edward break down made me teary...I agree with Carlisle in that they all had an active part in making mistakes that are attributed to the outcome of events that effect the here and now. Will be interesting to see what happens next.

Epilogue:  Would like to see a bit from Esme and Carlisle's point of view. In that maybe a day with Elizabeth and them sharing thier feelings on Bella/Edward being together (which I am rooting for) while they babysit thier granddaughter and the joy she brings them.



Author's Response: I truly feel Carlisle was right. Everyone contributed to this. Edward played the most obvious role but certainly not the only one. Love your epilogue idea! Definitely a good one! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Happy Birthday my dear and as for a Cullen and presents...ponders...I would say a different Cullen for a day for the entire day to do with as you please.

I loved daddy daughter time...it was hard on all but now healing has began, I love it...still counting down until Bella is reunited with Elizabeth and Edward...please don't keep us waiting to long as the suspense is killing me.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B now!  Chapter 41, here we come… It's not THE conversation, but it's the first time they all see each other.

Thanks so much for reviewing and for the birthday wishes!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Esme was as sweet as pie and gave Charlie the words he needed...way to go mama Cullen!

And Jasper...well Jasper was fucking brilliant as always in his own way. His speach to Bella about going avoid-o-rama or psycho banshee had me cheering...cant wait for more!



Author's Response: Esame and Charlie are both feeling helpless. They needed to talk. Jasper just has a way of simpling things up in his oh so elegant way! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

Egats! Yes I know there is alot to heal but I never bet against Alice. All will be okay in the end. Sigh...Emmett is just the greatest and I love him even more for just being himself and asking for forgiveness.

What I see for Edward and Bella is many tears, and dear god do I hope for Bella punching Edward for being so dumb. I know it won't physically hurt but some indication of her hurt will come thru. I anxiously await this reunion. 



Author's Response: Alice really tried hard, and Bella did a good job giving her a chance to explain. Emmett is just lovely. Hang in there! The next one is rough but remember it will be okay in the end! Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

*tears that have threatened to fall finally do...* Again another beutiful chapter. I don't know what to say other than this is just a breath taking story. The love between father and daughter was so palpable. Oh the joy of Bella finally meeting her daughter. Sigh...it is a start and maybe now the healing can begin.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you feel I did this chapter justice!  Your support of me and this story is astounding.  I am grateful to you.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith

It's great to hear that Edward is going to man-up and try everyday to gain back Bella's trust. *Go Edward!* Ahh Bella, Bella, Bella, poor girl has alot to deal with. So much pain, and not enough self confidence. I do believe she will do right by Elizabeth and at least let Edward try to be there but it definatly will take time.



Author's Response:

They have so much healing to do.  Both of them have a lot of work ahead.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43 - The Highway

OH my Lord Child are your trying to kill me? I cant believe Bella is saying that to Edward but sadly I understand how badly battered her heart is and is so afraid of getting hurt. I do hope those insecurities get resolved as it breaks my heart to see such pain,



Author's Response:

Hang in there!  I’m not done with these two yet!  This is just where she is now...

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44 - Fight

OH MY GOD! YOUR A FEAKIN BRILLIANT GENIUS!!!

I am in total awe of Jasper and If i knew Alice wouldn't kill me I'd so totally kiss that boy! I love how they are helping Edward realize a few truths along the way. This is genius!



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

Ok so I am bordering on little to no sleep these past few days but when I got my notice this was up I just had to read...who needs sleep right?

I thought it was fabulous...Edward is such a good daddy...I do hope this works out for them both



Author's Response:

Daddyward.  *sigh*  What's not to love?

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 




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