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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4552]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

Thanks to Sleforever for below banner!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: United

AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! *crying uncontrolably

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Family

OH MY God! I can't wait to read what you have next! I love this!

I sure hope Edward does't marry Tanya...what a disaster that would be!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: England

Wow England was Hell on Earth. I am relieved like Jasper any of those damn boys never got to her. Bella has been thru enough. I like Alice would easily take a page from Rose's book and would have beat the living snot out of Victoria.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Say What?

Oh Edward WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU THINKING! I THINK I"M GONNA BE SICK. That Tanya is so vile...oh PLEASE let him figure this out before he marries that bitch from Hell. I am shocked to say the least and now am extremly anxious to see how this all turns out (will be waiting at the edge of my seat until the next posts)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Planning

NNNNOOOOOOOooooooooooo!!!!!!

A cliff hanger! How could you do this to me!

Ok so enough whinning from me...I love how the girls are getting together to get rid of Tanya....the delicious evilness of it is so exhilirating!

I Can't wait for this all to come to light!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Barbeque

That was a major score for the "Cullen Girls"

Rose, Alice, Bella: 1         Tanya: 0

I can't wait to see what else happens next...and James better stay away if he knows what's good for him unless he gets caught harassing Bella and then a butt whooping from the Cullen boys will be in order...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Next Day

Uuugggg WHY WON'T EDWARD LISTEN! The boy has serious issues...

I have to wonder if Bella will help Rose and Emmett get together...hmmm matchmaker Bella sounds divine. I am anxious to see what's up next for Tanya. James is creeping me out as well...

Am enjoying the story emensly...you have a talent for insighting my emotions so I feel everyone's emotion...it is quit exciting

 

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Halloween

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG !

*Cant breath* That was one heck of a cliffie!...takes deep breaths

I knew James was evil but never thought he'd stoop so low as to assault Bella in her own home. That poor girl is going to be traumatized for sure now. I could only pray to god that it was Edward or even Emmett that found James on Bella. I'm looking forward to James getting his butt kicked. Poor Bella. Things were looking up as well with her trying to get Rose and Emmett back and the whole Tanya thing was going well. By my count at least with references made in the story the score stands at:

Cullen girls: 8            Tanya: 0 (no surprise there)

I will anxiously await your next update....

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Aftershock

THAT SICK RAT BASTARD!!!! *not so silently fuming*

I can't believe James! I was freakin elated that the Cullen boys beat his sorry behind...*scoffs* He got off pretty lucky if you ask me. I definatly would have gone all Leah Clearwater (phase and all) on his no good for nothing, sleazy, evil, douch-bag behind.

Cullen Boys: 8 (dang good hits)       James 0 (couple of failed attempts)

I sure hope Edward takes a good look at Tanya for what she is after her horrid display and was so glad that Rose punched her (cheering like crazy)

Cullen Girls: 9                                   Tanya: 0

Poor Bella...

I will anxiously await your next update...soon I hope? 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Cullens

I sure hope the new things Edward has heard opens his eyes up to what Tanya is really like. This chapter was a major score for the Cullen Girls...

Cullen Girls: 11(Gave extra point for Rose's awesome right hook)

Tanya: 0 (royally screwed, Thank god for prenups)

Poor Bella to think all of this is her fault..*silently ponders how to bring about James's demise*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Secrets

*Dancing for joy!* Rose is a pure genius to have captured that on tape!

Cullen Boys:9 (Gotta give Edward props for the prenup)

Cullen Girls: 13 (Double points given for Rose’s brilliance with the recorder)

Tanya: 0 (Tyrannosaurus Bitch is about to become extinct)

I feel so bad for Bella in that now that she has realized she is in love with Edward; the pain may be more than she bargained for. I feel weird knowing James is in jail; I have a funny feeling he's going to be uber pissed once he gets out. There are so many things that come to mind but will try and be patient to see how this all plays out...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Revelations

Oh our dear Rose has alot to learn. Isn't ironic that both her and Emmett have been so close yet so far. I do hope she takes what Mandi and Bella have said to heart. They were definalty made for each other.

Ahh Edward, just what in the world are we going to do with you? Although I am exstatic that he's finally pulled his head out of his ass.  *Squee!* He'll find his way soon enough I think...boys has alot to atone for to a number of people.

Esme, well what can I say? I just love her tender mother's heart. She is definalty a jewel. I hope one day I can be as wise as her with my kiddos...Sigh.

PS: I think you will know which summery I'd pick...lol ;)

I will anxiously await your next update and will email ya soon, provided my computer cooperates.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Truths Revealed

Ok first off, i am thrilled that Emmett took Bella's advice and just threw Rose over his shoulder and had his wicked way with her...wink wink. LOL dear lord and then Edward tossing Bella over his shoulder just to make her sleep. He's such a sweetheart even if he was a bit lost there. I am excited beyond belief that T-rex is gone...*sings ala Wizard of Oz...T-rex is gone, ding dong the wicked Rex is gone* I can't say I blame Bella for not wanting to sleep, gosh her nightmares are horrible. Maybe now Edward can help her sleep better cuz lord knows that girl could use some serious sleep.

OMG I don't know what to say other than I am honored at my summery being chosen. *does a little happy snoopy dance* My email is jtrs98@yahoo.com if you want to drop me a line to talk about the character. 

I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings us...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Lives Altered

Holy Freakin Hale!! You sure know how to get a girls heart pumping. I think Edward is sweet to be there for Bella, but think he might consider getting Alice and Rose on his side cuz it sounds like they are putting some interesting things in Bella's head. Edward has his work cut out for him, let Operation GBRILH ( Get Bella to Realize I Love Her ) commence. I do believe Agent Edward should start with recruiting his sisters to help and getting in some serious one on one time with Bella.

*Tears appear* Holy freakin Hale!! I am thrilled that Jasper proposed!!! *Edward are you taking notes?*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Confrontations

LMAO...oh Bella grabbing Emmett's boys had me gasping for breath...took me about five minutes to wipe the tears from my eyes and continue on.

Snicker...Edward picking the locks...gotta give the man his props for persistance. I just hope lil spitfire doesn't incinerate him when she wakes up...lol

PHew is it hot in here...I do believe a certain southern gentleman and sprite are heating things up...runs to find a cool glass of limeade...

Sorry to be MIA recently...took a trip to Washington DC and became massively behind in all my stories...I now have a few chapters to go thru to catch up and am exstatic...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: New Beginnings

I am thrilled that Edward and Bella are talking some things out. I am all for beating James's ass all over again. I would love to see Bella get in a couple of good shots in too. I think Bella's breakdown and confession to her siblings will help her begin the healing process...

Holy freakin Hale! Emmett and Rose are heating things up in a whole new way...damn!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Fluff and Stuff

Congradulations jfk06!

Oh author honey, I am beyond thrilled at the progress Bella and Edward are making...lol...although Edward may think it is rather slow. She is finally gonna get some sleep! I was feeling so bad for Bella, damn James and the nightmares he has brought upon her.

God I just love Emmett and his big brother love...he's a great big brother. Yay now I am caught up! I will patiently await the next update...bounces around in exhilaration...

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: To Europe

OMG! Tanya is such a freaking thoughtless, careless, money grubbing Wrench! Not to mention she is not the brightest bulb in the bunch. To think she actually thinks Edward is going to take her back...Pshaw! Snicker, inner Bella's thoughts are a work of kick butt art...I loved it.

That's right Tanya honey, Bella has more money than you think and she will crucify you financially. Glad to see Edward's light bulb go off on a few more things relating to Tanya. Raggamuffin my ass...Tanya has no class.

Wow...ten weeks in France? That's a long time to be away. I am excited to see how you have them both spend those ten weeks apart...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Goodbyes

Wow Honey! I am so excited.
First off I would like to ask forgive my epic fail for reading and reviewing. I have major RL fail and my computer dying didn't help. I have gotten so far behind on a number of projects I can only hope to catch up on everything. Please be patient with me.

As for this...I am awed. I am glad Bella is getting out and the girls are getting her to do things...sigh...I know it will be tough on Bella but I have every faith she will be fine. Can't blame the girl for missing Edward...I miss him to. Now as for the douche at the club...well he deserved that and so much more!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Just Duckie

Woohoo! I applaud Bella's groin kneeing manuevers and am glad everyone telling her she was in the right. I am so excited! If Bella is going to France over spring break then I am going to be on cloud nine! I am just so excited thinking about it!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 37: We Agree

Alright! So the ducks are lined up and thier going to FRANCE! I am so excited I am pulling an Alice and bouncing in my seat. To top it off, Edward is having a spring break himself! Yes, Thank You Spring Break Gods!
*Happy Dance time!*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: France

Holy Freakin Hale...talk about walking on my own little cloud...thier in FRANCE!!
LMAO...Alice jumping Edward was just way to entertaining. Definatly Queen Energizer has made her presence know. Sigh...and Bella gettings some much deserved sleep in Edward's arms...Le Sigh...hot damn that was a welcome relief.
*reader has goosebumps* Whohoo and the kiss at the end has my heart rate up and the adrenaline spiked! Way to build the anticipation honey!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Wishes Fulfilled

*Fan Girl Squeal!* Oh good god they admitted they love each other! I am absolutly flying high. This has been a long sad week fo rme and your story just made it a hell of alot better. Thank you for bringing a bit of relief to my chaotic bit of the world...

This was fabulous!

 
Summary:

Edward is a US Air Marshal working to protect our country from air attacks. Bella is a flight attendant on one of the flights he's monitoring. What happens when he can't get her off of his mind? Can he protect her and an entire flight from imminent danger?

Thank you MrsC for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 47909
[Report This] Published: September 08, 2008 Updated: May 07, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG OMG OMG!! That was intense...dear lord I am on pins and needles at this point...Is it hot in hear! My heart aches for Edward and what he feels. I can only hope to god they can get the plane to safety...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh that James rat Bastard is goin to pay!!! GRRRRRR!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO! This review cracked me up! Thanks for that :-D

 




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