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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Overtime by Dreamrider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2250]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.

Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?

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Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Going Home

LOL...what luck to have the family almost catch them...not to mention Bella having to hide in the closet...tears of mirth in eyes...

 
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Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Almost Time

LOL...oh dear lord drill sargeant Alice is just to funny...

 
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Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

Well there is always snooty cousins in every family...

Awww just loved Edward's toast...

 
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Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - Christmas Surprise (v)

Cripes that is the craziest thing ever! Oh sorry the wedding was indeed a beautiful event and so romantic. I am glad fro Rose and Emmett and also glad that Bella and Edward started talking. I can't wait to see how things go with Bella's parents and thier awkward first meeting. LOL...laughed so hard.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Morning

Oh Wow! I just love Christmas with the Cullen's it was so sweet. You gotta love Alice's enthusiasm and each gift was perfect for the recipients. I am thrilled that Edward and Bella said the L word to each other...sigh

 
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Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)

Whoa things are heating up...

Did I ever mention I love your story...LOVE IT!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - A Night to Remember (V)

Grrr I have a bad feeling That evil good for nothing miss priss Tanya is behind the rumors. I would like nothing better than to pummel her myself.

Aye Carumba! You don't screw around when it comes to drama. I can't wait to see what happens in the next few chapters. I just loved Alice's protective streak and can just imagine what she is going to do so that Bella does not leave.

 
Dutiful Son by Eclipsedofsoul Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 241]
Summary:

Jasper Whitlock and his two best friends, Edward Mason and Emmett McCarty, are attending college and living the life, as all students do. Things start to get complicated when they meet a trio of amazing girls, as these three boys are hiding one huge secret...

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 22795
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2009 Updated: May 26, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoohoo what a way to begin...

 
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Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Whohoo the girls sound like a riot! I can't wait for more.

 
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Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow things sound stressful for poor Jasper. Edward and Jasper's jobs sound fascinating. Yay it's party time!

 
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Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow what a crazy way to start a party...Jesmond Edward is having a heart attack about Jasper. I sure hope he lightenes up just a smidge.

 
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Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow what a crazy way to start a party...Jesmond Edward is having a heart attack about Jasper. I sure hope he lightenes up just a smidge.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awww Emmett is just cutest thing...*ding...Waitress I'll have me an order of Emmett McCartney to go please..ding...ding* I have a funny feeling Alice has obsconded Jasper...lil pixie is sly

 
Summary:

"After a few moments, I peeked through my wet eyelashes. My parents, both bone-pale and lifeless, lay at his feet. A squeak of terror escaped my lips. The man's head snapped up. His strange crimson eyes focused on my face, a wicked-evil grin stretching across his perfect features."

"So this has been your plan all along? Killing everyone I care about, then leaving me no reason to live? Having me almost welcoming death?"

"Such a shame they had to die, isn't it?"

"Yes, such a shame."

"'Bella, angel, don't you see? I care about you . . . so much. I feel the need to protect you from anything and everything that could hurt you in any way,' he murmured, so softly no one but the two of us could hear."

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Vampire Edward & Human Bella.

Isabella Marie Swan is not your average teenager. When she was just the age of seven, she watched as her parents were killed in front of her young, innocent eyes. As far as the public knew, her parents committed suicide, but Bella is the only one who knows the truth. She had to watch as her parents were murdered by a monster - a vampire.

Ten years have gone by since the night that changed Bella's life in the most awful of ways. It seems as if Bella is finally getting over her parents' death, despite the nightmares that make her terrified to sleep. Having the help from her older brother Emmett and his girlfriend Rosalie, she is expected to make a full recovery. Just as it seems that everything is falling into place for the damaged family, everything changes when a new coven of vampires moves to Forks, Washington and into Bella and Emmett's old home-the home where she experience the most tragic night of her life.

When the past comes to finish what it had started, what must Bella do to prevent history from repeating itself?

DISCLAIMER: I OWN NOTHING.

Proud member of Project Team Beta!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 44127
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2009 Updated: April 29, 2010


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Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fingerprint Bruises

Wow Emmett really flipped his lid didn't he. LoL...was glad that Alice and Jasper were able to hold Edward back. I am so excited about were you are taking this, ohhh I can't wait for the Cullen's to catch up with that sadistic SOB James.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Beginning of The End

Oh the poor little girl...what tragedy to have to see at such a young age...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: New Kids On The Block

Hmm I just found your story so not sure about the original, but this has me riveted...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Voices In My Head

What the Hale?!? That sadistic bastard of a vamp scarred her...

No wonder she flipped her top



Author's Response:

Haha, this made me laugh and put a smile on my face. Thanks for reading my story and reviewing! I love each and everyone of my readers for taking the time to read my story:]

-Emily

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Visions Of The Past

Well James certainly is one sadistic SOB...to do that to a 7yr old is beyond tramatizing. Now that Bella is reaching maturity it won't be long before James wants to pay her a visit.

Hmmm Edward can read Bella's mind...does that mean that she won't possess her shield if she is changed?

Can't wait to discover more...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Memories From The Grave

It was nice to look back and get to know the Swans a bit...the flashbacks are magnificently written...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Emerald Necklace

Again you flashbacks are very insightful and help me understand Bella better...it seems like a friendship with the Cullen's especially Edward will take some time...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Journal

Yay for journals...still wondering about the Cullen's.

Sorry patience is not something that is coming easily for me today...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Nightly Visitor

Wow that was amazing...

Sorry it took so long to get back to you...I've had Computer issues and occasionally a story gets bumped from my list and I have to track it back down. I'm not sure what happens but occasionally my puter spazes.

That evil vamp is just a cruel sadistic bastard playing a sick game. This is just crazy on how heartless he is. I sure hope Edward and Alice wail on him.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Giving Up

Wow so much to take in....

James is just sick sick sick. His powers are truly sadistic. Still hoping he's gonna get his butt kicked before you end your story. Are you by chance going to change Emmett and Rose in this story? This is getting really exiting.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Recovering

Wow...Godparents are awesome!

EEEeekkkk James is just sick sick sick...

To think he want's Bella for a mate...what a sick way to acquire one if you ask me. I wonder what Edward was thinking when they walked in after James had left. Makes me wonder of Alice can James...interesting...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: A Bump In The Night

Wow I'm floored...that was a very good twist. I can't believe those sick bastards were doing that to Bella and Rose. They better not meet up with Emmett of Edward later cuz they will be black and blue....

 




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