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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009

Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!

I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.

I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.

10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Dutiful Son by Eclipsedofsoul Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 241]

Jasper Whitlock and his two best friends, Edward Mason and Emmett McCarty, are attending college and living the life, as all students do. Things start to get complicated when they meet a trio of amazing girls, as these three boys are hiding one huge secret...



Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 22795
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2009 Updated: May 26, 2010

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awww Emmett is just cutest thing...*ding...Waitress I'll have me an order of Emmett McCartney to go please..ding...ding* I have a funny feeling Alice has obsconded Jasper...lil pixie is sly


"After a few moments, I peeked through my wet eyelashes. My parents, both bone-pale and lifeless, lay at his feet. A squeak of terror escaped my lips. The man's head snapped up. His strange crimson eyes focused on my face, a wicked-evil grin stretching across his perfect features."

"So this has been your plan all along? Killing everyone I care about, then leaving me no reason to live? Having me almost welcoming death?"

"Such a shame they had to die, isn't it?"

"Yes, such a shame."

"'Bella, angel, don't you see? I care about you . . . so much. I feel the need to protect you from anything and everything that could hurt you in any way,' he murmured, so softly no one but the two of us could hear."


Vampire Edward & Human Bella.

Isabella Marie Swan is not your average teenager. When she was just the age of seven, she watched as her parents were killed in front of her young, innocent eyes. As far as the public knew, her parents committed suicide, but Bella is the only one who knows the truth. She had to watch as her parents were murdered by a monster - a vampire.

Ten years have gone by since the night that changed Bella's life in the most awful of ways. It seems as if Bella is finally getting over her parents' death, despite the nightmares that make her terrified to sleep. Having the help from her older brother Emmett and his girlfriend Rosalie, she is expected to make a full recovery. Just as it seems that everything is falling into place for the damaged family, everything changes when a new coven of vampires moves to Forks, Washington and into Bella and Emmett's old home-the home where she experience the most tragic night of her life.

When the past comes to finish what it had started, what must Bella do to prevent history from repeating itself?


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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 44127
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2009 Updated: April 29, 2010

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Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fingerprint Bruises

Wow Emmett really flipped his lid didn't he. LoL...was glad that Alice and Jasper were able to hold Edward back. I am so excited about were you are taking this, ohhh I can't wait for the Cullen's to catch up with that sadistic SOB James.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Beginning of The End

Oh the poor little girl...what tragedy to have to see at such a young age...

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Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: New Kids On The Block

Hmm I just found your story so not sure about the original, but this has me riveted...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Voices In My Head

What the Hale?!? That sadistic bastard of a vamp scarred her...

No wonder she flipped her top

Author's Response:

Haha, this made me laugh and put a smile on my face. Thanks for reading my story and reviewing! I love each and everyone of my readers for taking the time to read my story:]


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Visions Of The Past

Well James certainly is one sadistic do that to a 7yr old is beyond tramatizing. Now that Bella is reaching maturity it won't be long before James wants to pay her a visit.

Hmmm Edward can read Bella's mind...does that mean that she won't possess her shield if she is changed?

Can't wait to discover more...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Memories From The Grave

It was nice to look back and get to know the Swans a bit...the flashbacks are magnificently written...

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Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Emerald Necklace

Again you flashbacks are very insightful and help me understand Bella seems like a friendship with the Cullen's especially Edward will take some time...

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Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Journal

Yay for journals...still wondering about the Cullen's.

Sorry patience is not something that is coming easily for me today...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Nightly Visitor

Wow that was amazing...

Sorry it took so long to get back to you...I've had Computer issues and occasionally a story gets bumped from my list and I have to track it back down. I'm not sure what happens but occasionally my puter spazes.

That evil vamp is just a cruel sadistic bastard playing a sick game. This is just crazy on how heartless he is. I sure hope Edward and Alice wail on him.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Giving Up

Wow so much to take in....

James is just sick sick sick. His powers are truly sadistic. Still hoping he's gonna get his butt kicked before you end your story. Are you by chance going to change Emmett and Rose in this story? This is getting really exiting.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Recovering

Wow...Godparents are awesome!

EEEeekkkk James is just sick sick sick...

To think he want's Bella for a mate...what a sick way to acquire one if you ask me. I wonder what Edward was thinking when they walked in after James had left. Makes me wonder of Alice can James...interesting...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: A Bump In The Night

Wow I'm floored...that was a very good twist. I can't believe those sick bastards were doing that to Bella and Rose. They better not meet up with Emmett of Edward later cuz they will be black and blue....

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Night Terrors

WEll that was indeed fascinating, the dreams Bella has makes me cringe myself. If Edward can read her thoughts is it safe to assume he can see her dreams? It sounds like it but would like to make sure...

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Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Beautiful Nightmare

To be honest Bad Bella was fun to read but I had a hard time containing my gag reflex as James showed he in love with him....yuck...

As for the new story...I DEFINATLY WANT TO READ!!!! The snippets I read were fascinating. If you do post here please let me know!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Stand By Me

Oh thank God Bella will have someone to talk to about Psycho James...That vamp is one serious nut job. So glad Edward was nearby cuz poor Bella was in a bad place. I will be anxious to see what James tries to do next; I am intrigued as to how James's ability works.


Would it kill you if I said I would really like to see Forever Fated? I was really excited about the snippets you posted but I know RL can be a bitch so I will leave it up to you. Should you ever decide to do it please let me know =)


Bella Swan moves to Forks, Washington in middle school after the tragic death of her mother. Jasper Hale had recently lost his father and began to distance himself from his best friend, Edward Cullen. Bella and Jasper meet and bond over their loss and become best friends, leaving Edward in the dust. As junior year of high school begins, Edward hates Bella for corrupting his ex-best friend and for just being a bitch. Unfortunately, Edward's sister, Alice, decides that she wants to reach out to Bella and become her friend. Edward is dragged on for the ride and discovers more things about Bella Swan...and himself. Canon Couples eventually but a little non-canon in the beginning.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 97047
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2010

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Special

*tears fall freely* OH MY GOD that was so beautiful...runs to get tissues.

This moment was pure poetry in motion and touched me.

Author's Response:

aww i'm so glad you liked it. it was one of my favorite parts to write :D

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Sleepover

Holy Hell Ya I like how you twisted it at the end...I do believe things are heating up nicely between those two...

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Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Partners

Wow the drama level just went up

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Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Revelations

LOL love the way they each have to take themselves in hand so to speak so that they can keep thier minds in the right place...

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Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Shopping and Pianos

I find the whole angst thing very entertaining...thanks for the story

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Stars

Artemis should have kicked Apollo's ass

Glad to see Bella getting along with the Cullen's...that girl needs all the friends she can get... 

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Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Plans

Split personalities to be sure....LOL...that's Bella for you

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Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Complicated

Holy Hell, that was one I wasn't quit expecting...

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Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Party Bitch

LOL...Oh my God Edward's gonna wet his pants this is so unexpected. The look on his face would be priceless.



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