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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
Status: Member
Member Since: July 01, 2009

Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!

I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.

I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.

10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04

Bella makes the decision to leave Phoenix forever after a tragic accident. Seeking a fresh start, she heads to the small town of Forks to live with Charlie. The cold numbness that has imprisoned Bella's heart begins to subside when she finds herself falling for the only person at Forks High School capable of tearing down her walls.

Canon pairings, AU for loosely following Twilight original plot. Some angst -- especially in the beginning.

Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Tyler, Victoria
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 110901
[Report This] Published: March 21, 2009 Updated: October 27, 2011

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Seven Turns Part II

That is great that Bella is considering Edward to be a best friend...this is gonna be one emotional ride but can't wait...

Author's Response: Thank you AJ!! Hope you continue to like it!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Returning to 4136

I love the story so is rather heartbreaking for Bella to have to do this alone, but know it will give her closure which is what she will need in the future.

Author's Response: Edward's friendship will definitely help her heal, for sure. Thank you for the kind review and I'm so glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Three Little Birds did he know...LOL I do believe Edward has a little bird of his own that can tell him what was going on

As for the pace I believe in letting the author set the pace...your havn't lost me yet so I do believe your doin great

Author's Response: lol -- Alice is useful to him in many ways :) I'm so glad you've enjoyed so far. I will say the pace picks up where I left it off now (Ch 16), so I'm hoping you'll still like it when you catch up to that point. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Cranberries and Lemonade

Uh Oh i do believe we may have a couple of nomads loose...

Author's Response: You are very right!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Sanctuary

The meadow seem was so sureal and comforting...wonder when it will all come out for those two

Author's Response: A few more chaps and you'll be all caught up! The next chapter (one you are probably reading now) is in EPOV. I hope you like it!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: A Face You Know

Oh Hell I think this is funny and Bella's choice of songs was just hysterical!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Building a Mystery

Bella reliving her last couple of weeks sure cleared up a number of questions...thank you...

Author's Response: You're most welcome! I hoped to clear up those missing links..

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Suddenly Simple

Ahhh it is really great everyone trying to help Lauren out the best they can... I am thrilled to be taking this I mentioned before there are may sureal moments that I absolulty adore...

Author's Response: Thank you so much for that compliment! I'm glad you are enjoying the journey and glad you liked the twist of events with Lauren. I think she got a slight bad rap in the originals, she's human after all and even the catty girls can have a tough life :)

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Crush Part I

Havn't ever heard Crush before so tracked it down on YouTube at your suggestion...I LOVED IT!!! There is something so passionate about the way they sing the song...could feel it...

I love music that can move lets me feel...Thank you so much for that...

 I can't wait to see what happens next for our dynamic duo...

Author's Response: YAY!!!! That was my goal -- to expose at least one person to that song that would come to love it. I love DMB and Crush was always a favorite of mine. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and I really hope you keep liking the story!! Thank you for the reviews!!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Crush Part II

AAAAAAAAHHHHH This does not bode well for everyone...Like Bella I am dying to know...What the hell just happened? Is Edward Ok? Did the others catch up with Bella after the dance? Wow this is going to be suspensful.

Author's Response: Hi AJ! All will be told in the next chapter -- I promise to try and be quick with completing it and updating. Thank you so much for the review -- keep guessing!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Cracklin' Rosie

Mmmmm that was a great recap! I am so relieved to know what happened though I still shudder at the image of Edward getting torn apart. I just love that Rose kept her promise and Wow those conversations between her and Bella were Awesome!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Redemption Song

Wow that was a revealing chapter. I love how Jake has helped put things in perspective and am thrilled the tribe has extended an even greater honor to the Cullen's. This is going to be an exciting night for Bella and can't wait to see her get in touch with Edward on a deeper level after all of this.

Girl Afraid by agoraphobiantic Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 329]

Edward moves to Forks with his father during his senior year, where he meets Bella Swan. Gorgeous, confident, and non-malicious hater extraordinaire. She hates Edward, for no apparent reason, and an already unpleasant life at Forks becomes unbearable.

But there's more to her than Edward guessed at, and more to her antagonism than meets the eye...

*Banner by the generously talented m81170, who is made of awesome.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 64264
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2009 Updated: August 16, 2009

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Phenomenon aka "Ride"

No wonder Rose is not exactly being very friendly to Edward...can imagine what she thinks if she already knew her mama had a thing for Edward's dad. LOL...this could be epic.

Bella seems to be a little psycho when it comes to her behavior...can't wait to see how it all turn out

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - "Dead Fish"

Ok just discovered this story and it has me extremly curious as to Bella's back story...sounds like the girl has some issues

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - "In Twos"

Ohh even more is added to the mystery that is Bella Swan...riveting

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Open Book aka "You Make No Sense"

Well its a nice change that Bella can be the one to dazzle Edward. LOL...gotta give the girl her props. Bella however is a mystery and I intend to read and find out whats up with this girl.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Invitations aka "One of THOSE Days"

God Edward is such a fucking gonner...Jasper baffles me but I imagine once everything is explained that his actions will make more sense. AAAhhh why the hell is everyone telling Edward to be careful...there has got to be more to this story than meet the eye, 

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - "You Probably Have Better Places To Be"

Ok, four things I have decided at this point...

1. Edward needs to grow a pair and ask Bella what the hell is going on

2. Jacob is a dick

3. Jasper is a jackass (hopefully that changes)

4. Did I mention Jacob was a dick?


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Scary Stories aka "Moments"

Damn that girl is gonna give that boy a heart attack!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - "Cold and Wet"

LOL...god Bella is gonna have Cullen so fuckin messed up he won't know which way is up or down...Ohhh to late...


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - "Christmas"

Ahh hell...Bella is gonna drive me nuts as well!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - "The Morning"

James that rat Bastard!!!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Nightmare aka "Don't Hate Me"

Ahh Hell you've got me in tears...

Renee that fuckin messed up bitch...Phil should burn in hell

James that fucked up rat bastard needs to burn in hell as well...

Japser needs to fuckin let go...

Bella has had one hell of a life and now knowing what happened has helped to understand her better and why she did the things she did...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Mind over Matter aka "Murphy's Law"

Ahhh Hell more tears in my eyes... you have a knack for making me cry. One more chapter to go...I've watched the characters grow and develope and it will be sad to see them go but I've enjoyed this journey and even though it has to end I do not regret walking with you as you' ve shared this fabulous story.

Author's Response:

The story wouldn't have been worth writing if it hadn't been for readers and reviewers like you. Gah. Thank you for coming along. You rock.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Epilogue: An Occasion aka "The Part That Comes After"

What an awesome ending! I am happy to see they both worked things out and Edward is ready for forever...

I am thrilled you will be writing more and will definatly keep you on my favs list so I can keep up with you! I have enjoyed this journey with you and can't wait to start the next one. Until we meet again...



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