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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

Diseased Affair

When Charlie is diagnosed with cancer, Bella decides to move to Forks to help him through his treatment and recovery. What happens when the resentful son of the new cancer doctor meets up with the reason he was dragged to this small town? AH. E/B.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 99780
[Report This] Published: March 20, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Storm Brewing

New here to these parts but...Wow what an opening chapter! Can't wait to read more!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Candy Everybody Wants

Ohhh this is fabulous...riveted

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Save Room

I loved that Bella could her own when it came to the cars! This is a great story can't wait to read more... 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Colorful

This chapter was awesome...lame isn't even remotely close in discribing this...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Just A Friend

I hear you with the I love you...lost some of my family not long ago and it was a serious wakeup call...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Absolute Beginners

This story is simply amazing...I am anxious to see how this plays out...Thank you for such a wonderful story

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Disarm

Oh wow...you had me in tears with the Charlie speech...I am at a loose for words...Great job!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Lightning Crashes

This is such a great piece of work...have encouraged all my friends to read it. This is so heart felt I can't thank you enough for sharing it with us

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

*So many tears falling...* I don't have any words except, Thank you. Thank you for such a beautiful story.



Author's Response:

::hands you a tissue:: You're welcome. Thank-you so much for reading!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Christmas Time Is Here

I am with ya till the bitter end my dear and yes I totally forgive ya for any time lapse between chapters...don't I know it that real life can get in the way; tis to be expected.  I loved how Bella got to spend time with Charlie Christmas Eve...so can i take it that Renee is Charlie's other gift? Lovin it all



Author's Response:

I was hoping Renee was a nice surprise for everyone. I also had to give Bella and Charlie the best Christmas they could have in a hospital room. :-) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: I'll Be Home For Christmas

Aaawww I did cry but it was well worth the tears. I loved spending christmas with them all...kind of reminded me of our family christmas when i was growing up...



Author's Response:

I was listening to the Charlie Brown Christmas Soundtrack while I wrote this. I also have the sudden urge to bake! I will stick with the seasonal zucchini bread for now.

The beginning of this story was so tumultuous, that I thought we could all use a chapter like this in which we can take a deep breath and relax.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Have You Ever

Wow...Edward really needs to get a grip on things...well actually both of them do. *sigh* Looks like they need to learn how to talk to each other a little more...

What a way to end a chapter! I will anxiously await your next update...hopefully you get your thousand so we can share in an extra chapter. =)



Author's Response:

We must remember that Edward is an average teenage boy. They aren't always rational and understanding. He has had a live in girlfriend for two weeks. Though she has been busy visiting Charlie, she is still there when he goes to bed, and there when he gets up in the morning. They have just had a fantastic Christmas together, and though he knew this day was coming, it hit fast. He reacted poorly, to say the least, but know that he is a good enough person that he will realize it.

For now, he is the head cashier at the jerk store. ;-)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Just Like Heaven

Wow...Edward is one lucky SOB

I so enjoyed this chapter...the poems were beautifully placed and so lovely. I'm glad Edward was beat just a bit for being an ass. Sigh...here's to hoping he learned from his mistake. Until we meet agian...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: That's How You Know

Sigh...they made up and it makes my day. I love that they are working things thru; it's so sweet that Charlie and Sue are getting together

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Peaceful, Easy Feeling

No worries about the delay honey...I know RL can be bad. Me myself have been dealing with kids that have picked up the swine flu at school. AAAaacckk! I was delighted to get a notice saying a new chapter was up. I am glad those two kids are working things out and sounds like a shift in thier relationship is emminant. I can't wait to see where this is going.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Storm Brewing

Ahhh first love...it's the greatest isn't it? Was glad Emmett was there to talk Edward off the preverbial edge...he's an awesome big brother. Hmmm the passion is now building between Edward and Bella; brings back memories of my first love. Hopefully it wont' end just as tragically...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: I Could Not Ask For More

Aww Edward taking care of Bella was the sweetest thing ever...sigh...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Just Might (Make Me Believe)

Awww it warms my heart that things are going so much better for Bella and Charlie. I am sad that this is almost over but have enjoyed the journey imensly.

 
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Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: I Could Have Danced All Night

Ah this is a bittersweet ending. I will miss this story more than you know. Sigh...alas until we meet again for the end.

 
Summary:



Bella makes the decision to leave Phoenix forever after a tragic accident. Seeking a fresh start, she heads to the small town of Forks to live with Charlie. The cold numbness that has imprisoned Bella's heart begins to subside when she finds herself falling for the only person at Forks High School capable of tearing down her walls.



Canon pairings, AU for loosely following Twilight original plot. Some angst -- especially in the beginning.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 110901
[Report This] Published: March 21, 2009 Updated: October 27, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Phoenix Parting

Wow that is just to tragic...



Author's Response: Awww, it's okay AJ, I know -- but keep reading, I think it gets better :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Blunt Beginnings

Poor Bella...what will she do when her comatose state is shattered



Author's Response: I know -- but she snaps out of it :) Thank you for reviewing!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Stone

Lost in herself; lost in thought...will she ever return from her dark abyss?



Author's Response: She'll work through it :) Thank you for the review!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Stairway to Heaven

A full flight of stairs...Bella honey do we have to have this conversation agian? I mean you and gravity arn't exactly the best of friends...



Author's Response: She's not quite as gravity challenged as the original, but well, she did just face plant on steps...lol.. it was worth it to see Edward :)

Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Interview with the Vampire

HA! 7 questions...EXCELLENT



Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like how it plays out!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Seven Turns Part I

I sure hope they can be friends...it may be what helps heal Bella



Author's Response: Awww, I hope you keep reading, I think you'll like it :) Thank you for the review!!

 




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