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Real name: Monica
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

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A Final Nominee @

Edward Masen was changed in the early nineteenth century (1817) by Carlisle Cullen in England. Later on, he separated himself from the Cullens and moved to Washington, USA.

Bella Swan’s parents die in an accident, and she has to move to the small, village-like homestead township of Forks Prairie with her uncle, Charles Swan. Fate brings her to Edward’s doorstep, and the dreaded monster rears its ugly head. Will she survive the monster?

THIS STORY IS ON A HIATUS TILL JULY 2010.

NOTE- This story is getting updated over at FF.net as well. You can visit there if want to - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4900151/1/


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 119711
[Report This] Published: March 06, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Damn a cliffie!!!

I am intrested to see the development between these two characters but it makes me wonder how Bella will handle the sexual issues to come. Obviously her first time didn't exactly go very well...cant wait to see what happens next...and it is a relief to see you will be updating soon. I shall wait with great anticipation



Author's Response:

Thanks for the all the lovely reviews you've written. :)

Isabella is a naive girl, yes, but she's not a weakling. Her character is yet to show its full potential, so just wait. Edward's going to have his hands full. haha

Her sexual awakening will happen, and then both of them will enjoy their intimacy. Her first time didn't go well, and I don't think it could have gone well when you're having sex for the first time with a vampire. I've read it in fics time and again, and even in Breaking Dawn. I couldn't believe it, honestly. I mean, either he's not very well endowed, or well, perhaps she's done some extreme physical exercise to make her girly parts more accommodating. lol

So I've tried to keep it as realistic as possible.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I can't help but laugh at Jasper's insight to some things. He really is a good guy. Gotta love Alice's attempts at easing things around her, expecially if her meddling ways help clear things up.

Don't worry I intend to stick with you till the bitter end Epilogue and all. I can't wait for your next update...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow that was marvelous! I am glad that those two have finally come together in the most intimate of ways and couldn't help but smile at the inclusion of the feathers in your story. It was beautiful. I am just excited beyond words that you updated

 
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Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Dear lord that was AWESOME!!! I love seeing your Edward so affectionate to Bella. Maybe his walls will come down and truly let her in. I can't wait for the next post!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well I would have been prone to believe the demon possesion theory back then. I sure hope Bella doesn't believe the whole philandering theory but unless Edward tells her the truth she is going to drive herself crazy...

I can't wait to see if Edward will finally tell Bella something.

 
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Date: March 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Ok so I may not kill you for your cliffie but i am tempted to tie you up and tickle you without mercy until you give...

I was amused by Bella's rantings and couldn't help but cheer her on as she tried to get an answer from Bella. Serves Edward right for having his own methods of persuasion turned against him. ;) I wonder if he really will tell her or if she will be threatened before he admits what he is. Ohhh I can't wait for your next update!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

MMmmm Edward and Bella seem to be havin some good lemony times...

I wonder who in the world the wolves tore apart and just what was he doing there. Edward would have flipped if that one got to close to Isabella. Good thing the wolves took him out.

LMAO...oh the idea of Rose, Emmett and Jasper having to eat real food is just to funny.

 
Commission by SpikeIsHotter Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 301]
Summary:

Winner of the Indie Twific Judges Awards for Special Merit.

After Bella's sister Alice is murdered, she can't find peace while the killers walk free.  At the end of her rope, she seeks out a hitman, a mysterious man named Edward, to offer him a commission. 

Edward is a vampire whose conscience has caught up with him - he is tired of hunting humans, but drinking human blood isn't something he can just give up.  When a woman named Bella walks into his life, he finds that he may not have to.

Rated for dark themes, graphic violence and drug use.

Wicked cool banner by angelvamp

 

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 60619
[Report This] Published: March 08, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow that was spellbinding...I read it twice I was so riveted. Your vamp is definalty different but I can't help but love him even more for his differences. He really is magnificent. I love that he is slowly trusting Bella and I can't wait to see what the day brings them....



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much!  I'm always surprised to find that what I write can be so engrossing for other people.  Glad you like my take on vampire weaknesses too.  Seems unfair for them NOT to have a couple.  Thanks for sticking with the story, even though I only manage to update once in a blue moon.  Hope to not keep you waiting as long for chapter 15.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

With so little human memories its no wonder that Edward doesn't understand what his feelings are telling him. I was in awe to see them together and Edward just be there for Bella. Sigh...it was great.

To be honest I love EPOV's and find his mind fascinating in how he thinks some things.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It's great to see them slowly come together and help each other. I have to many questions to list but slowly you are revealing the answers, so I will try and put two and two together as I go. I really am having fun with this story...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

You just love throwing me for a loop don't you, but must admit I do love it...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Holy Hale and then some!! A cliffhanger!! Dang! I loved how you made Jake gay...LOL...still can't stop laughing over that little twist. I wonder why Edward came looking for Bella and what the hell is in the bag?!?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hmm after listening to Edward explain some things makes me wonder about the vampires in your world...it is all so intriguing. While I am glad Edward stayed to help Bella I can't help but wonder why he likes to push some of Bella's buttons...lol...though I am thrilled Bella stands up to the challenge.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hmmm I wonder how Edward is going to explain this one to Bella...lol...that is going to be one interesting conversation. Well at least now I know why Edward didn't recognize Bella in the alley. One thing I wonder is who turned Edward? It is curious that he didn't learn anything from his creator...but seeing as they are not with Edward it makes me wonder.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Excellent...you have a brilliant mind and I love how you have Bella figuring out a way to fight back. I wonder if Edward knew she was there? Though you've changed some of his abilities, I would wonder exactly what Edward is going to do with Bella. LOL...tis an interesting concept.

 
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Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh the heartbreak...Alice was pregnant. Not only did Bella lose her sister but a niece/nephew as well. The guilt and pain must be tearing her apart...*looks at screen sadly*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ohhh Bella so broken, so forsaken, it was a beautifully dark written chaptr.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think I need a drink...how could those bastards kill Alice.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Prologue, part 2

Wow what an intense chapter...lots of realizations for Edward.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue, part 1

I love the twist in this story. I have just found this story and it is really interesting. Edward definatly seems like a tortured soul.

 
Surrogate Love by shwriteme Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 237]
Summary:

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Bella is a sexual therapist with unusual methods that get results, but when she goes on sabbatical to write a book, Dr. Hale calls in a favor and sends her a new patient. When Edward, a shy, eclectic scientist and inventor who has social problems comes for counseling, Bella must put aside her training and follow her gut instincts to help him overcome his difficulties. But will she be able to maintain her professionalism and continue in her career in the face of her intense attraction.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 50901
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2009 Updated: February 01, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well tis an intersting twist...anxious to see where you take this

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

*wink* I agree he's got some major homework to do...was laughin really hard after reading his reaction to his homework.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Reading about shy, virginal Edward makes you just wanna lock him in your room and teach him a thing or two...LOL Good to see his first phone sex experience was a gratifying one ;)

I just hope he doesn't flip his lid when he has to see Bella tomorrow

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hell no would that man leave me after something like that...I repeat locked doors would be involved ;) Sounds like Edward is really making progress but both are in such denial about thier feeling for each other. *sigh* when will they ever learn

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am going for OS...to see Edward blush like that would be priceless...

 




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