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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
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Bella is devastated by the loss of her mother and is forced to go live with Charlie, her Mom's best friend, when there is no one else to take her in. She gives up on living, too lost in her own anger to let anyone close to her. Enter Edward, the handsome teenage vampire, and the beginning of a complicated love-hate relationship. Neither can deny the connection between them, but can their love survive the fear that rules her and the secret he hides from her? AU and OOC, Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 292396
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: December 25, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Rescue

How glorious is first love...it sucks Bella got hurt but it was worth the little bit of pain...

 
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Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Turnabout

Hmmm wonder if Alice is still having her visions why they don't change?

 
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Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Subjugation

Bella crying in such great pain...please don't let it be because Edward left....

 
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Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Spectacle

Oh Hell yes!! Privacy with Edward would be at the top of my list as well...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Extracurriculars

LOL...I have a very entertaining image in my head of Edward talking with Carlisle about his relationship with Bella...wonder if Carlisle's advice will mirror my own...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Intuition

LOL I bet you anything Edward's eyes are about to fall out of his skull...definatly not the reaction he would be expecting...all in all this chapter is poetic in a ways and I find myself getting lost in the story...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Acceptance

Ahh poor Edward...his demons eat at him as much as Bella's eats at her...I wonder if he will ever connect how alike they are when it comes to that...

LOL...wouldn't mind Mike getting another busted lip...still laughing over that one

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Doubts

Sick Bastard indeed...but who can blame a guy if he's Edward Cullen...Nope wouln't mind getting caught getting closer to someone like him...LOL

Alice is such a great friend...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Picnic

Wow...things are starting to get a little strained...will Bella listen or will Alice's vision come true...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Disclosure

*tears slowly coming down my face* I cannot fathom the pain it is in losing a parent that way...it was a very moving chapter...it was beautiful...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Connection

Damn Bella ya still don't quit believe? LOL well I guess I can't blame ya for wanting Edward to convince ya more...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Conflicted

Ok this is gonna sound silly but...EEEEEeeeeeeeePPPppppp!!!

They finally gave into each other...ahhh young love...

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Sagacity

Du Dun Dun...a bad feelin from Alice can only mean one thing...TROUBLE!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Indulgence

Well that has got to be the most scintiliating Biology class ever...can't ever say my classes got that good...LOL

She is ready for the secret but is Edward ready for her to know his secret...can't wait

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Misdirection

Well that little bugger...giving me a heart attack so he could surprise Alice...LOL Isn't Jasper the greatest!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Nightmare

Wow I mean just Wow....

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Disaster

That is just so heartbreaking to read how Edward is feeling at this moment...I hope he dosn't do that for to long...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Awakening

EEEEEPPPPPP this is just to exciting! I sure hope she catches him and lets him know how she feel...

It will be a bit difficult for her to understand what she saw but I am enthralled with how you write...getting caught up in the story...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: Jeopardy

Alright the letter has made an appearance! I sure hope it helps Edward with his feelings...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Juxtaposition

Aaaaahhhhhh a cliffhanger...must know more

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Endings

Holy Hell that was intense, awesome, and mind blowing...

There are really no words for this...it was just mesmorizing. It seem that Bella is still with us and I couldn't be happier...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Beginnings

Well I appreciate all the words and will patiently await the new chapter...

I am having so much fun reading this story...crying with the characters, cheering on others, yelling at some who don't seem to have any sense, and silently craving more. Thank you for this wonderful story.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 46: Salvation

Damn honey...I don't smoke but that scene sure had me wondering where I could find a cigarette...fans hersef...is it hot in here?...Looks around to find the thermastate and turns AC on. That was intense but in an oh so good way...anxiously awaits next update.

 

PS: Hope your move is going well... =)



Author's Response:

*grins* I'm glad you liked it! We are T minus 10 days and counting with the move. It's exciting and I say proudly (with a knock on wood to soothe my superstitious side) that I'm well on top of things so I'm feeling very prepared for it. Thank you for the well wishes and for the review. Your enthusiasm made me giggle.

 
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While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse.  When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help.  But of course, fate has plans for this man.  Canon Couples.  AU.  DARK Themes.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Hunt

I can't quit figure out why she thinks Emmett is the one that is a pile of ash?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Basement

Oh my God this is absolutly mind boggling! I love how you wrote this chapter...its beutiful

 




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