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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary: Feature


He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?

OOC, canon at heart.
Banner by FatApolloLove


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Short Ended Stick

Word association: Twilight,   Intoxicating

Edward needs to learn to talk to that girl before he screws it up big time!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Truths

O positive...I am a giver

Will they ever work it out? Again that Bitch Tanya must pay!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Party Favors

Best costume: mid-evil maiden for a real celtic celebration...it was eerily cool...

I almost feel sorry for Tanya but the girl should have know better than to screw with people like that.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Angles

A cliffie....how could you torture me so...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Hunting

Fav leftover: Pizza

Well holy hell they finally figured out they our each others life lines...LOL such a relief...can't wait to see what pretty boy and spark do next.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Seeking

AAAhhhh so cookie cutter of James to make Bella sound like a jukebox. I sure hope some rules get broken...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Call Time

Had an accident on the mountain side while hiking...was in and out of conciousness for awhile before rescue crews arrived but my boyfriend stayed with me the entire time and amongst his tears he whispered for me to stay with him because he loved me...

Little minx is an understatement for Bella, I am so happy her debut to a large crowd went well. James is such a douche for trying to outdo Bella. If I were in the crowd would be laughing at him as well.

Will Bella still sing with Breakin Dawn... can't wait to find out

Edward said those 3 little words first...*sigh*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Hidden

I like chili and onions and cheese...

WTF that Victoria is just a vicious bitch...not that her asshole of a boyfriend is much better.

I sure hope Edward gets Bella outta that closet before Bella goes insane...

A cliffie...what a delicious torture...until next time

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Overture

Favorite slushy: Blue coconut...I love it?

Damn I'd be dancing to if i were all of them! Holy Hell Bella gets to sing with Breaking Dawn!! It's absolutly fabulous!!!

Don't feel a bit sorry for James or Victoria...they should know better...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue in Review

Tropic of Gemini! Oh Hale ya!!!!!

This was such a great ride...Thank you

I will axiously wait for any more stories you care to share with us...

 
Summary: Feature

OOC Banner

 

Bella is devastated by the loss of her mother and is forced to go live with Charlie, her Mom's best friend, when there is no one else to take her in. She gives up on living, too lost in her own anger to let anyone close to her. Enter Edward, the handsome teenage vampire, and the beginning of a complicated love-hate relationship. Neither can deny the connection between them, but can their love survive the fear that rules her and the secret he hides from her? AU and OOC, Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 292396
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: December 25, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Decsion

OMG i was seriously stressed in the beginning because he was just gonna let her go...thank god Charlie talked some sense into that boy.

Wow I am seriously getting swept up in the emotion of it all...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Retrograde

Wow the emotions and the fears...trully spellbinding...I find myself completly absorbed...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Fracture

Ahhhh this helps explain a few things....



Author's Response:

Well good! I always like my readers to be well informed! Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Escape

Bella is seriously messed up but completly understand it all...I've been there and have gone beyond my levels of sanity as well. It is a relief that Jacob is able to bring her out of that if even for a short respite.



Author's Response:

Bella is pretty messed up, but I, too, think it's understandable. She's been through a lot. Sounds like you have too. We have that in common. Beyond this chapter, Jacob will only appear one other time. He's just like a breath of fresh air or a smile at the right time. Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Defeat

The clear victor indeed...Bella 1   Culllen 1

It was great to see Edward stumped...



Author's Response:

I have to agree with you. I loved the fact that Bella handed Edward his ass so to speak. Edward really did need to be taken down a peg so he would understand that he's not always in control. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Triumph

Bring on the Chocolate...I'd much rather go that way as well



Author's Response:

*nods profusely in agreement* Chocolate would be a hell of a way to go LOL. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Discernment

Wow that is intense...I don't believe Edward is that kind of monster...I hope he proves me right



Author's Response:

Edward is very good at doubting himself, but don't worry. He will prove you right. He's not a monster. Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Attachments

Such a torturous way to analyze things...hopefully those walls can be taken down but have a feeling it may be one brick at a time...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Overreaction

Wow Edward is definatly getting an earful from Alice...Oh please relay to us what she yelled at him...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Falling

LOL...sometimes i feel like I get whiplash between these two's emotions...it is deliciously sinful...can't wait to see what happens next

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Shift

That was positively scintilating...I wonder if Bella will remember that first kiss cuz Edward never will. How amusing that the hate they feel turn to love, but will acceptance be forthcoming?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Ignorance

Ohh the craziness of it all...if Bella only could remember what she said she'd be mortified!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Reminders

Yikes that was intense...the walls are slowly coming down and I can't wait for Edward to bring in the wrecking ball...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Rubicon

I am a biology major myself and no I've never looked at biology the same way after reading Twilight. I tutored all biology classes and even microbiology though...did well in genetics but was fustrated with microbial genetics. I feel slightly vidicatated that SM used biology as the class backdrop for her story...see biology can be sexy too...LOL

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Questions

Awesome...Edward is finally gettin it...LOL about freakin time

 




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