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Real name: Monica
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Nineteen Canvasses by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 994]
Summary:

Bella thinks she finally has it all together after a life altering accident, but when she meets Edward, a once successful artist who has lost his inspiration, everything she thought she knew changes.  Rated NC-17 for a very good reason.

Many thanks to my amazing and talented beta xrxdanixrx for the wonderful banner!!!

Nineteen Canvasses Blinkie

Many thanks to the incredible MizzezPattinson for the amazing new blinkie!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 148145
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: November 24, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14(shabbyapple)

Wow...that's all sorts of fucked up for Edward! Damn that was Angela?!? Talk about an impression...lets just say I'm glad Edward got away from that one...

I was absolulty thrilled that Edward got to Bella before that bastard James could do anything to Bella...



Author's Response:

Hi again!  Oh Angela...didn't anyone ever tell you not to drink that much?  Glad you are enjoying!  Cheers, Leslie

 
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Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15(shabbyapple)

OMG! Thank god for shooters! This was an epic break thru! I am so excited right now I can't even begin to tell you how much! I loved every gut spilling minute of it!



Author's Response:

Ah yes!  Shooters!  So glad you are enjoying!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
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Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

That was BrillianT! I couldn't be happier with the way things are going...I sure as hell hope that Edward shows her how he feel, but without the added benefit of Bella flippin out. LoL...oh god I can just imagine the earful Bella is gonna get from Jake...can't wait for that conversation.



Author's Response:

Hey there!  Glad you enjoyed - yeah, Jake's not going to be too happy - Cheers!

 
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Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)

Ok what a chapter...lol oh I think Edward is going to freak when he finds out about James. James...jesus that is one creepy fuck. Don't even get me started on Jane....full body shiver.

I am anxious for the evening... so racing over to read...



Author's Response:

:)-Hi Again!  James and Jane...they are quite a pair aren't they?  Up to no good those two.  Glad you enjoyed!  Cheers

 
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Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18(shabbyapple)

*Thump!...My inner self runs over...WHAT THE FUCK!...Looks at reader...look at author...What'd you do to my girl!*

Reader finally stirs...Jesus honey! I am in shock! I never would have thought that Edward would finally start standing up and making a change in is life...I am in awe *Inner self in background...WEll why the hell did you fall off the chair?* Looks bashfull...well I was in shock...jesus



Author's Response:

:)  LOL - Hope you didn't hurt yourself!  Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review - it really does make such a difference! 

 
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Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19(shabbyapple)

Holy Hell I think I'm a puddle of goo on the floor...Inner self screams at me...You better not be or I'm gonna wipe the floor with you...

Sigh...my inner self can be a lil snipper at times...but I love her.

Anywho...I just loved the chapter...so much itensity...wow Edward is hot when he paints!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Edward is definitely intense - its like he enters another personality when he paints...hot indeed!  Glad you enjoyed!  Cheers

 
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Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20(Shabbyapple)

"Oh is it freaking hot i here? *Looks at her inner self...what did you think? I'm standing here with my head in the freezer trying to cool down!" she shrieks " How do you think I feel!"

I just have to laugh...author honey I think you got my inner self hot and bothered...I love how Bella and Edward toy with each other...

Although it looks like massive cockblock I am thrilled they are laying thier cards on the table...this is fabulous. I am doing a happy dance that Edward is being honest. I can't wait to see what you have coming for them next...

PS: I don't trust James or Jane for one second...



Author's Response:

Hi there!  You're amazing - if I could reach through the computer and hug you, I would.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing-I don't know if people realize the difference it makes.  Edward has finally opened up and she's starting to, so a major breakthrough for these two.

PS-You're right to not trust them...bad news those two.

Lots more written and on the way.  Hope you continue to read and enjoy.  You've made my day hun!

Cheers and hugs, Leslie

 

 
Summary:

 

What if Edward finally found his mate only to discover her only goal was to kill herself?  Could he help her move beyond her dark past? Could she help him to find faith that he wasn't a monster?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 51180
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2010 Updated: July 29, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Learning More

Oh jesmond...I feel so bad for Bella. She is dealing with so much and I feel the Cullen's fustration with not being able to help. I am intrigued by what little we know of Bella. Who the hell is Seth? Is Bella using a fake name? What happened to her? Oh the questions just keep coming.

Hmmm I wonder what the lil pixie is hiding...

I can't wait for Bella to meet Edward!



Author's Response:

there is a lot there, sooooooo many quesstions, I know.  I promise they will all get answered, I'm just not saying when. LOL  Caue I'm mean.   Thanks for the review!!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelations?

OH the things going thru my mind as to what is troubling Bella are just as dark and I shudder to think what it could be...

I am thrilled the Cullen's are mobilized and being proactive...



Author's Response:

the mind does shudder about poor Bella and it will be quite a while before you learn it all, but she will have the Cuellens, seriously would that make your day?  *sigh* thankis for the review!!!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Returning Home

Hmmm very very interesting...



Author's Response:

thanks for the review, I hope it's a good interesting!

 
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Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Learning What's Wrong

Ohhh poor Bella is definalty a tortured soul...i am fascinated by what her story is...



Author's Response:

she is a tortured soul  :(   I wish I could say her story is soon in coming, but alas it isn't.  It will be told eventually, I promise.

 
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Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The One the Sings

Holy Freakin Hale...that was a very well written, heart wrenching chapter. I feel for Edward having to deal with his singer and am so thrilled he will still attempt to help Bella.



Author's Response:

thanks!  it was hard seeing Edward meet his singer, but he made it through, that's the important part!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Lunchtime Observations

It really is heartbreaking to see Bella i such pain. Sigh...

She does however intrigue me...I'm dying to know her story...



Author's Response:

I feel guilty already,  Ger story is a long way off, she is way to broken to open up to anyone for a long time.  but that doesn't mean Edward and her won't be building a relationship.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Recon

Yeah Bella is a walking contradiction, but I have a feeling Edward wouldn't have it any other way...This is great



Author's Response:

she is and her contradictions will drive that poor vamp crazy!!!!   he doesn't know what's about to hit him!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - If My Heart Could Race

Oh dear lord what I wouldn't give to knock Jessica the fuck out! GRrr that girl is a fluzzy and a half...seriously some girls are just so vapid. Poor Edward...lol...if he only knew what he was really feeling. I guess since he's never been in love would explain why he is a little slow in pickin up on certain things. Smiling...Alice may need to point him in the right direction before to long here...



Author's Response:

Jessica, yeah, I wish I could say we're done seeing her but alas we aren't.  Bitch will be coming back, but don't worry I promise it will be all good.

Edward, I also wish I could say that he gets a clue soon but again I can't.  He remains clueless and in denail for a LONG time.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Breathing Her Scent

Oh do I ever love Emmett. He is such a goob but a lovable one at that. His camo had me cracking up...does that man take anything seriously...lol...well he wouldn't be our Emmett of he were serious all the time.

Eeep...heart beats eratically...Bella's tortured cry had me shaking. It really was heartbreaking to read. To know she is in so much pain is sad. What is her story? Will it be coming soon? I can't wait..but will do my best to try...so I will anxiously await your next update. =)



Author's Response:

No Emmett doesnt' take much seriously.  He is a goof and a freak and I LUVE him!!!!

Bella's story is heartbreaking, very heartbreaking but it is a LONG and I mean a LONG way off so you need to hold tight for quite some time!  Sorry to say!

 

Thanks for the GREAT reviews!  I very much appreciate them!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - So We Meet

Yay...they have finally met! I was thrilled with the outcome...boy oh boy does Edward have it bad ;)

Grrr...Jessica must pay! I so wanted to pummel her myself, what the hell was that bitch thinking? I sure hope Rose and Edward come up with something to put that skank in her place.

Aww Edward is just so cute when he's protective. Gives me warm fuzzies that he wants to ease her fear. please update soon I am having a ball reading.



Author's Response:

I am super glad you liked their first meeting.  I admit it was scary to write because it was so anticipated, so I'm glad the chapter was good for you!

Jessica, yeah, I am with Rose, she needs her junk roto rootered!  Witch!  Honestly when I planned the chapter I had NO Jessice in it, as I was writing, she literally wrote herself into the chapter.  She's a pushy B!

I love protective stalkerward!  He's awesome!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Working Together

LoL...love how Edward still baring his teeth at Jessica. It was great. I lov Bella being with Edward even if she is freakin out about it.

Snicker...men are dense aren't they. I love Edward but it cracks me up that he doesn't understand how he feels. I wonder if it will be pointed out to him while he's up in Denali. This weekend away from Bella may be hard for him...I wonder what will happen



Author's Response:

LOL med are dense I am admit I made Edward a bit denser than normal for my purposes.  To be fair he has reason to be dense and I do wish I could say he would get a clue soon, but alas he won't.  He's stubborn.  To be fair though, I think that New Moon, showed that Edward was very resistant towards his feelsing to Bella, or he wouldn't have left.  I know he "did it for her" but I think part of that was denying hiw own feelings as well.

Jessica.  Yeah Edward is making sure she behaves!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Mental Meanderings

Oh they are going back...sigh...poor Edward is so stinking clueless about him being mated already...men!

I will happily await for your big reveals...I am sad to hear about Bella's dark past but feel you are leading this story down a more realistic past than I have read in other fics. Things like rape are so dibilitating and take time to get over...can't say I blame Bella for shutting down and withdrawing the way she does...

I can't wait for the Cullen's to get home and help Bella, that poor woman needs them...



Author's Response:

hee hee, men are clueless.  I say that even though I love my husband. 

I'm glad you're willing to wait.  I know some people get impatient and want answers quickly, and I'm sure before I reveal you'll be getting antsy as well but I am trying to eb realistic.  Bella's been keeping her secrets for a long time and isn't ready to open up to anyone. 

All the Cullen's will be there for her.  Not next chapter but coming up!  i love the Cullens!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

Oh god, poor Bella. The pain she feel just radiates off the screen. I am beyond intrigued at what we have learned so far. I can't even imagine what she went thur, the horror show going on in my head has me shuddering in dread.

I can't help but be encouraged by the slight softenings of Bella towards Edward. That poor soul needs all the comfort she can get...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind review.  Bella is in pain.  That's true.  I promise she will be healed by the end of the story. 

She is softening towards Edward but has a long way to go!

 
Entwined by La_Tua_Cantante_83 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 524]
Summary:

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Six months ago, Edward Cullen left Forks, trying to escape the bloodlust that was sure to be his downfall. Now he's returned, only to find that he can never truly escape what the Fate's have destined for him. Together with the one whose fate is twisted with his, he must find a way to protect what matters most. Rated Mature. Vamp, AU.    


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 220424
[Report This] Published: February 28, 2010 Updated: November 18, 2012


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Misadventures of Missed Calls

Ohhh this is an interesting beginning. Edward ran and never came back until now...There is so much I want to know and am excited that I have a few chapters to race thru and find out.

I am sadden that there was an accident. I sure hope it is not Charlie in the drivers side...but alas I propably is.

 
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Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Beast, Without

Oh that was exciting...for a few agonizing minutes I found myself screaming internally...Change her! Don't let her go!...I can't tell you how relieved I was to see him take that bite...phew...

 
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Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Dear Father, I Pray for Your Forgiveness

Oh I hope Edward's self hatred doesn't last long...it is heartbreaking to read of how much he loathes his actions.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: No...

That was one hell of a family meeting. I just wish Rose would chill the fuck out...like Carlisle said it wasn't so long ago that she was in a similiar position. I feel for Edward and his uncertainty...I can't help but wonder what Bella will think of all of this...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Burning Questions

Wow i am amazed Bella remembered so much but thrilled none the less for it. Emmett is just adorable and his thoughts are just incredibly simply and loving...I love it. I can't wait to see how thier first hunt goes.

 




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