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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

Bella is secretly infatuated with her best friend's older brother, Edward. This infatuation continues unnoticed by all--even Bella--for 5 years before anything happens between them. Their immaturity and inexperience drive them away from each other until their paths again cross one fateful night. Will Bella still be open to allow Edward back in?

Story takes place over a 7 year span, beginning when Bella and Alice are 16.

Slightly OOC, Rated for citrus-ness and language

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 37276
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Other Side of Things

No offense but the idea of Edward with Tanya as Well as Bella with Jacob just has me feeling sick sick SICK! Please tell me they come to thier senses somtime soon. Seriously need some reassurance here. 



Author's Response:

I know, trust me. When it happened in real life with the inspirations for this story, no one was particularly pleased. However, I hope I reassure you with the following statement: I am a firm believer in HEA, and Bella--that's me--DOES get her happily ever after. In real life, it took over three years for that to happen, but for the purposes of not pissing off my readers, I'll speed it up considerably. So, please know that there is a HEA around the corner. I promise!!

Thanks for sticking with this story!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: My Best Friend's Brother

Interesting way to start off a story...Hope you don't mind another reader tagging along for the ride :)

Hmm are you by chance going to fill in the last 5yrs? Ohh can't wait to find out...



Author's Response:

as if I would mind another reader!! I welcome you! I'm glad you've found this story, and hope you enjoy the rest of the ride!!

(and the previous 5 years are when Bella and Alice were 10...lol)

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: More Than The Movie

Hmm as happy as I am that our dynamic duo have found each other...still have that nagging feeling that your gonna pull the rug out from under them...figuratively speaking...



Author's Response:

haha what makes you think that??? hehehe

Thanks for reading and reviewing

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: A Clean Break?

And there it is...the rug out from under them. Sigh...Carslisle's words will be profetic in that Edward is letting something good slip thru his fingers. Oh Edward, when will you ever learn...



Author's Response:

haha you were right, indeed! :) and yes, Carlisle tends to be right about a lot...

hehehe thanks for the review!

~Fatima

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Advice

Accccckk I so hate that they have to do this. Edward needs to get over himself and his issues. I applaud Bella for trying to move on in order to save her sanity, though I imagine it will help her grow up and be stronger for it.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Assumptions

Oh Bella honey... I think your' kiddin yourself when it comes to Edward. Trying to push the pain away by goin out with Jacob will not heal your heart. Sigh as much as I was rooting for Jacob, this just feels wrong. Edward is a moron for making assumptions. Grrr I do hope they both realize their mistakes before permanant damage is done.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Not-So-Shocking Developments

*Silently has a panic attack* NNNNOOOooooo

Ok I know your not trying to kill me but this thing with Bella and Edward has my mind running 100+mph. I don't want Tanya to get her claws in Edward and I know Jacob is just not right for Bella-she doesn't love him! Oh this is just getting way to messed up...I will anxiously await your next chapter...



Author's Response:

I agree completely about getting Tanya's claws into Edward...I'll try not to do that... ;) and you are right about Jake not being right for Bella, at least in my opinion as well.

Thanks for reading, and sharing your insights! Stay tuned!

~Fatima

 
Summary:

The much anticipated sequel to A Lesson in Release.  Jasper has won the girl of his dreams and they are beginning a new life together at college.  But what happens when fate intercedes?  Will he be able to hold onto her or will fate return her to Edward?

A Lesson in Fate


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 171842
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Pick Up Trucks

I am glad Edward is starting to read and understand  Bella better

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Whitlock

No offense...i love Jasper and all but seriously what the fuck was he thinking?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: The Tale of Two Weddings

YYYYEEEESSS now Bella gets to plan Alice's wedding...Your brilliance amazes me.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Duet

Oh the Felix better keep his hands off of Kelly if he knows what's good for him

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Hello Again

Well if Jasper finds someone then all is well in the world...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36: Ohio State vs. Michigan

Game on! Such a wonderful statement full of promise...just loving the story

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37: At Last

Awwww this wedding is definatly one for the books...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40: Morta

What the hell Jasper...I mean seriously WHAT THE HELL!

I like Jasper and all but Bella better kick his ass when she wakes up...how could he do this to her!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue: Girls' POV

Wow this was an amazing story...and the lessons learned will carry on...

 
Bright Like the Sun by Dryler Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 973]
Summary:

BLtS Banner 2

 

*Banner by time_lights over at Livejournal*

 

When Bella goes to live with her father in Forks, things go much better than she expected. At least until a slick parking lot, a careening van, a broken arm, and her weird lab partner from biology get in the way...


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 112401
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2009 Updated: December 17, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: SWCIFD

OH lord Jessica sounds kind of pathetic...

I love AF that is just way to funny but true none the less...



Author's Response:

Thank you

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Bella

LOL...Jake making strangled noises...oh if only Bella knew the effect she was having on Jacob...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: New Town, New School

Lol...so I'm liking your Ethan Church story so much I hunted down another of your works her on twilighted...sheepish grin breaks out across my face...hope you don't mind me stalking your work...lol



Author's Response:

No, I definitely don't have a problem with that.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Pyromania and Other Fun Topics of Conversation

Aww this an interesting thing to see Edward openin up little by little to Bella even if Bella doesn't understand it.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Questions, Anger, and Answers

All right..we have some of the dirt scooped on the Cullens...but yeah...Jessica definalty needs help

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Playboy Bunnies and the Dichotomy of Apples

LOL...raising a few eyebrows now aren't we...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Kitchen Supervision, Stubborn Decisions, and the Dread Beep

Ohhh I just love Steve...lol I'm glad you name the cars in this story...it's GREAT!  My sister and I also name our cars...she has a red van named Rosie Applebottom and my lil white car is Bianca Blanca (Bianca White) Our two girls definatly have character...lol



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Bright like the Sun

LMAO...I think i like doped up Bella...her verbal filter is affected and it is hilarious



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Cold Snaps and Bone Cracks

Holy freakin Hale that was intense! What the hell happened? I mean other than the obvious van going to squish Bella...

 




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