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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

Bella Swan was always awkward and never quite knew where she fit in, but she always had a best friend in Alice Brandon.  Edward Cullen was hopeless since the first grade, branded a geek and bullied every day of his life.  It's years later and Bella has just returned to Forks after graduating college.  She's desperate for a job and grabs the first thing she can find working at Forks Pharmacy with none other than Edward Cullen.  Follow their budding friendship as it evolves into something more, where Edward and Bella discover a little something about themselves as well as each other.  In the end, can Bella find where she belongs, and can Edward find someone who accepts him for who he really is?

Thanks to monamour for the banner!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 126299
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2010 Updated: August 26, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well damn honey, Edward has gone some mad talking skills. I am so glad he was able to calm Bella's fears and talk her off the edge so to speak.

I am just dying to know what the hell happened in New Hampshire and wonder if I should start hunting down that bitch Jane.

LoL...oh I am so happy Bella found a happy ground when it comes to sleeping by her "starfish"

 
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Date: March 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh honey I am sitting here in stunned silance...that was one HELL of a chapter! I mean just WOW! I am anxious for the reveal but I am a little confused on what has Edward so freaked out about telling Bella. I will anxiously await your update.

PS: I hope RL mellows out for you honey, sounds like you've been busy....

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG...thank God Emmett beat the hell out of those pricks because I would have done the same! That bitch Jane better get nowhere near Forks, because Bella would decimate her! That is just one cruel haze and to think poor Edward was the victim. Ahhh I don't understand the mentality of torturing people...its senseless.
I am relieved that everything is out in the open and ILY were said. Maybe now true healing can begin.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh author honey, I am delightfully stunned stupid for lack of better words. This has been one heck of a day for those two and I have enjoyed every bit of it. I am thrilled dinner went well but have to wonder what the concerned looks were given by Mama and Papa Cullen...

Those declarations from Edward gave me goosebumps and it was sweet to see how he has loved Bella throughout the years. It was so sad to see how he was picked on...kids can be so cruel. It warmed my heart that his was never taken from him...what brought majoy fuzzies.

Snicker...I can't believe they are covered in mud but it may get them in the shower together...wink wink. I guess practice can commence ey...

I am just having so much fun watching them grow close...I will anxiously await the next chapter...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OH MY GOD Honey!That was brilliant! I can't help but wonder what happened to Edward or his family but it sounds intriguing.

I so melted into a puddle of overly stimulated goo when he asked to keep her...damn it's hot in here. I just about fell off my chair when Bella showed up that snot nosed punk and laid a good one on Edward...Damn that girl is lucky! Oh just can't wait for more, and will have happy dreams tonight thinking of a jean clad Edward...double Yum

NO worries on the updates...have three young'ins of my own and RL can be a bitch sometimes.

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OH god author honey...i have no words other than that was BRILLIANT! There is something to Edward being naked and have to wonder if some jackasses traumatized Edward. He is learning to trust and learning to be with Bella. Edward is a sweetheart and I am just thrilled Bella is giving him the attention he so rightly deserves. Damn for that boy being a novice, he has made skills...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awww second grade Bella was just a sweetie! I love how she defended Edward and it cracked me up to no end that she gave Tyler a little payback. That was great!

Ohhhh I am so excited for these two. They are absolutly perfect together! I will anxiously await your next update!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow so we have Hurricane Bella. Edward really does sound awkward but I have a funny feeling these two would get along great. Just found your story and am intrigued.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LOL...I don't think i would want Jessica shaping my childs mind either...hell to the NO! Wow...Edward definalty has potential and I am glad that Bella sees that he doesn't really have to change. I can't wait to see what happens next

 
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Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LOL...omg Bella sure knows how to make a first impression. It miffs me that Lauren and Jessica still laugh when Bella falls, sigh...some things never change.

Oh I can't wait for the first day, makes me wonder if Edward is scared of Bella. What a concept...snicker.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LMAO...ok so the first day didn't go quite so well but dear lord I was smiling and snickering the entire time. I loved it!!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ewwww James is uber creepy and I hope Bella never gets stuck with him. It doesn't sound like Edward likes James much either. I hope the next few days are less accident prone. =) I can't wait for Saterday!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow that was fantastic! Thank god for Alice and her talking Bella down from the edge. There is definatly something to Edward and it is exciting that Bella is learning about him. It was so cute to see Edward holding on to Bella. I have to wonder thought what happened to the Cullen family...so intriguing...

I can't wait to see what happens with the Mr Crowley incident...snicker..I have to wonder if protective Bella will be back in full force.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Score one for Bella! Whohoo! That's right Bella baby you tell that jerk Crowley off! It was brilliant and just so damn justified. I was happy Bella tried to be civil but went a bit mama bear when it comes to jerks trying to assault her and Edward.

It was definalty a good way for Bella to bring Edward out of his panic attacks down by the dumpster though...lol...what a place to do that. Things were definalty hot in between those two cans...I loved their declarations.

Whoa...the Cullen house and the parents! I don't blame Bella for being nervous at first but I have a feeling Edward's words have assured her of her doubts. They are so cute together.

LOL LOL LOL...Carlisle's response to Bella and Edward holding hands was just to dang funny. Eyes like satallites was one of my favorite lines. It was great! It makes me wonder what Edward has been thru to have mom and dad so surprised to have Bella and Edward together, I can't wait to find out more...oh dear and Edward fainting, well that was just the icing on the cake. =)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Holy Freakin Hale! That was brilliantly played my dear. Wow...thier first O's together was simply brain melting...so hot! They are learning so much together but after ease dropping with Bella I am beyond curious as to what has happened to Edward. He's thrown so many cryptic remarks I am spellbound. I can't wait to see what you reveal to us next...I'll anxiously await more...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

LMAO...I can't believe Alice came down the stairs procliaming the merits of Jasper's dick...way to funny. I am glad Edward and Alice got along well.
Ahhhh Tanya is such a bitch and I wouldn't put it past her to be the one to have taken the extra Oxytocin and have a party with James in the back. You know what they say about Karma though...snicker...it would be hilarious to have Bella do a smackdown on Tanya...whohoo.
O lord and now E/B will be going back to his place...damn Edward is so hot!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Holy Freakin Hale! They didn't make it all the way into the apartment...that was HOT!
I am horrified that Mike was such a douche when it came to Bella and her virginity. That was cruel and I would like nothing more than to hunt him down and kick his ass.
Gasp! No sex? I wonder what Edward will think.

PS no worries...I understand this is fiction and I think some of my fellow readers should chill. I am a Molecular Biology major but I don't flip if my authors take creative license...snicker

 
Summary:

Bella and Jessica had been best friends since 8th grade. But when Jessica is found dead, Bella's life is turned upside down. Bella is the only person with the proof to bring Jessica's murderer to justice.  When Agent Edward Cullen is brought in to investigate, Bella has to convince him of what really happened. Will he believe her? Can she trust him? OOC, AH, AU, NC17 for future lemons and violence.

**thank you to Becca aka Readergoof for the WONDERFUL banner!**


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 63703
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2010 Updated: June 16, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Gasp! Where is that low life two timing loser...I hate to hear that my authors are treated that way! Grrr I would love to go Leah Clearwater on his ass...

I am sorry RL is being a bitch but glad to hear you are doing better. I am glad you took the time to get it together for yourself. know that if you ever need to take a break from writing that we will be here when you return.

I loved the chapter by the way and those two finally giving in was a relief...I mean the tension between those two were killing me ;) Whohoo!



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you for the offer my dear! If you're ever in Arizona, let me know ^_~ And I'm very glad to have that sexual relief put out there for all of you ^_^

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Eeeppp oh NO! There is something evil going on and now Bella is involved! Oh dear lord! This is a blood pumping revelation. Poor Bella has to deal with loosing a friend and now the possibility that this psycho Barlow is after her makes me quesy...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow...I just found this story and it sounds like a whirlwind of a start...Jess and Bella's friendship has been solid and i love how they were there for each other in the past. I am saddened that Jessica is gone...she sounds like a friend that would have been there for life...

I can't wait to find out what happens...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I know its their jobs but it still irks me that Bella was arrested! Sigh...it's so hard to know who to trust and in this day and age well you can't trust nobody right off the bat.

But wow baby does she the daddy of them all for bodyguards...Hello Officer Cullen...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I just feel so sad for Bella and Alice...they were such good friends with Jessica. Le...sigh...

Kirby sounds like a character and he sounds adorable...

Will Alice get her own Agent McHottie Pants...lol

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Aww isn't Edward sweet to be comforting Bella. I had tears in my eyes reading Bella's dream...it was so heart wrenching.

Drool...self defense with Edward...swoon! That was great!

 

PS so excited to read you come to Wyoming, I'm in Laramie and its fun to talk to people who have experienced this state...



Author's Response:

YAY!! Another WY girl in the house! I grew up in Gillette. That is so nifty! ^_^

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Dear Lord that was a fascinating look into the mind of Agent Cullen. Thank You so much for that. I just loved it. LoL...it would appear our hot agent is just as attracted to Bella as she is to him...I can't wait to see how self defense goes... =)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh Gosh Kirby is adorable...just googled Morkies...I want one now. =)

LoL...I must admit Bella knockin Edward down had me in stitches. I bet he wasn't expecting that. I loved thier sparing session.

I feel for Bella...to have lost such a good friend. I hope she can go to the funeral as hopefully it will give her closure.

 




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