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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

When Edward abandons Bella to discover a human life for herself, the resulting damage is something that neither of them could have imagined, and neither can heal alone.

The story begins under the streets of Volterra, and follows Edward and Bella back to Forks as they begin to sift through the wreck left in the wake of his lie.

Edward and Bella in forest with text "Doubt thou the stars are fire, doubt that the sun doth move, doubt truth to be a liar, but never doubt I love."

Thanks to Mkystich for my banner! I love it! The poetry is from Shakespeare's Hamlet, Act 2, Scene 2.

 

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 89595
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2010 Updated: July 06, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I want you to know that this journey has meant more to me than I thought it would. I am going thru some major turmoil in my life and to watch these two find themselves reminds me that life has pain...yes...but from that pain comes the knowlege that this to will pass. Bella just said goodbye to that broken girl in the woods. I will quickly come to that point. I am in a ways broken by love but one day I hope i too can say goodbye to that broken girl and embrace a new life.

Thank you so much for sharing...this journey has brought me to my knees in some ways, I am honored to take it with you...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

OH honey it is I who am honored to have taken this journey with you...

Bella is magnificent and just a ball of fire...although the Cullen's have thier hands full, Bella will be a Cullen for eternity. I am relieved that Charlie got his goodbye letter and that Jacob is still somewhat intact. It is kind of sad that he left but a relief that he is still alive and well. It was a beautiful story of love, pain, and renewel.

I wish you well on your future endeavors and know you've have made a friend. Live, Laugh, and Love my dear...you deserve it!

 
Seeking Asylum by crazy1 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 415]
Summary:

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Bella Swan never thought she would return to Forks after leaving in 9th grade when her parents divorced. She remained in Arizona for college, medical school and residency, pushing herself towards an unknown goal. When she heard that Jacob had died in a motorcycle accident, Bella returned to Forks and to a world of old ties and new opportunities. The Cullen Retreat was recruiting for a new psychiatrist and Bella found herself accepting the job. Perhaps returning to her roots would be just the asylum Bella needed to find herself. But the founders of this mental health respite were quite a mystery to Bella and the people of Forks. The most intriguing part of the job was not the opportunity itself, but the benefactor’s youngest son Edward.  He seemed to ensnare Bella’s thoughts and decisions from the moment she arrived....


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 110127
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2010 Updated: January 27, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Tangles and Tips

What NO! Jesus Edward...DON'T RUN! No offense but men are so uterly senseless at times. I am so sad to hear about Tanya but really that is not Edward's fault. I hope he doesn't push Bella away...sigh

I will anxiously await your next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks AJ!

He's been wallowing in the guilt for a while, but perhaps Bella can pull em out of it.....

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Frustrations and Fear

Holy Freakin Hale...those have been two weeks of strain on poor Bella. Aaaccckkk having fiver overprotective guys, while appreciated, would drive my nutters as well...geesh guys give the girl some space.

Ohhh creepo makes an unwelcomed phone call...now I want to pound him, I mean he just interrupted some really good loving between those two. Agggg!



Author's Response:

AJ

IKR? Just when we thought Bella and E could take out some frustration, cockblocked again.  I promise, it wont be too long though.



Author's Response:

AJ

IKR? Just when we thought Bella and E could take out some frustration, cockblocked again.  I promise, it wont be too long though.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: April 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Java and Jitters

Ohhh so sad to read that Jake is no longer with us in this story. Tis an interesting start to a story.



Author's Response:

Thanks AJ!

I was irritated by the love triangle from the twilight saga, so I took the Jake part out from the beginning! haha

I suppose it was my way of working out that frustration.....

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: April 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Blue Eyes and Buzz Cuts

Hmmm...lol...well certainly made an impression now did't she...snicker

I wonder what happened with the previous doctor?



Author's Response:

Nice catch!  The intrigue of the previous doctor, or lack there of, is part of the mystery yet to unfold!

;)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chats and Challenges

Oh Hell yeah is right!!! You go get him Bella!!



Author's Response:

Haha!

Thanks for the feedback!

xoxox

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Neighbors and Noise

Hmmm... I must admit Edward is a bit of an ass right now...I wonder what his malfunction is?



Author's Response:

its getting there....promise!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Pricks and Pythons

LOL...oh hell yeah...Edward has met his match!! LOL...those two are just to funny. I wonder if Alice will get the snake? *full body shiver* I hope not those things give me the hebee jebees



Author's Response:

You mean a literal one? Or Jasper's? hahaha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Madness and Melodies

Well damn! I'm sure I would have died to get that picture as well. That Bella will have her hands full with that one...lol...let the games begin!



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's definitely 'dazzled' her ;)

Thanks for the reviews AJ!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Recreation and Revelations

Well what in the name of Hades is Edward up to? I am more curious than ever about Edward and his drama? I sure hope Bella doesn't "combust" but I don't think Edward is going to make this easy...lol



Author's Response:

He feels like she is better off without him,

that he is bad for her......

the history behind that is coming soon!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Time and Titillations

Ohhhh I am so happy...Operation Catch a Chef is officially on and I am rooting for Alice 100% Poor Jasper, that lucky bastard is not going to know what hit him...lol

As for Edward, well he seems interested but I'm with Bella, his mood swings are giving me migraines as well. Yuuuckkk James is uber creepy and just a freaking pig all around.



Author's Response:

Bella is challenging Edward's choice to remain miserable the rest of his life...

He's got to break soon......

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner and Ditchers

Oh what is it that has Edward's attention like that! Dear lord I am dying of curiousity!! If he doesn't return at least let him explain himself...as the suspense is driving me mad. I can't wait to find out what is going on. Poor Bella must be on such a rollar coaster of emotions. I really feel for her predicament. Please update soon!!



Author's Response:

Thanks AJ!

I'm glad you were able to feel Bella's angst.  I was hoping to portray how difficult this is for Bella to handle!  How she wants him so strongly, but is terrified of him leaving/never wanting her, because she doesnt feel good enough.

Canon Bella, anyone? haha

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Idleness and Insomnia

Accck that sucks! Edward has been gone for a week and yet still hanging here...what on god's green earth is Edward hiding? This is about to drive me as batty as Bella. That poor girl is about to have a nervous breakdown herself. I thank you like crazy for bringing Edward back or else our poor Bella would have soon had to become a patient herself. LOL...I don't doubt Bella will be over to tend to Edward's snake...she'll definalty be there before the two minute marker...lol...



Author's Response:

Yeah,

This Bella is spastic enough, but with the mixed signals from E, she's capable of combustion!

haha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Resolution and Restraint

Oh honey you are delightfully wicked...MWAH! I loved Bella's resolve and her determination. Edward hasn't a clue as to what he wants and his self imposed exhile at times makes me want to scream. A determined Bella will get her man and I am so excited!

LMAO...that mushroom crack at the end had me in stitches...



Author's Response:

Thanks AJ!

Bella doesnt give up, thats for sure! More to come....

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Strength and Seduction

Slowly but surely wins the race right. I love that Bella as been tormenting Edward just a bit. I do believe his resolve is weakening albeit slowly. That's ok as I have enjoyed the interactions between these two. I have to wonder what will happen if Tanya is found though.

Eeeppp I hope psycho Tanya doesn't find Bella or else...twilight zone music plays...that could be bad...



Author's Response:

AJ

haha

I heard the shower music in my head! LOL.  He IS breaking, I promise! VERY soon ;)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Pity Parties and Pissed Pants

SSSSQQQQQUUUUUUEEEEE!!!

OH I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!! James got caught with his pants down...that sick bastard even had the gaul to ask Bella to join them...ewwww The look on his face when Carlisle came in was just priceless (in my mind anyways) I could not be more thrilled with him getting busted...truly a work of art there my dear...it would be a masterpiece. Hope the douch is gone for good now...lol can't wait for Monday.

*Happy Dance!* Edward is home and at her door...Oh I am on cloud nine!



Author's Response:

HAha AJ!

Glad you liked the scene, Creepo does seem sick, right?

wonder just how sick he is? (evil tease laugh)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Wonder Woman and Whackos

Ok so took a trip to Washington DC for my birthday and got so far behind in my reviews that it may take me awhile to catch up...but on the bright side I have a small stalk pile of chapters to read.

Dear god in heaven is James delusional...maybe he needs to be committed if he thinks Bella did all of this to be with him...EEEEEWWWWW!



Author's Response:

AJ

thanks for catching up!
D.C. was prolly hot this time of year. Hope you had fun.  Thanks for the feedback!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Vexes and Vandalism

Ohhh poor Ms. Hiller...I hope they can help her out.

Awww isn't protective Edward just the cutest thing...Egats! My theory is James was the artist of Bella's car and he's an ass for doing it...



Author's Response:

well...you probably know by now, but yes James did it ;) (the car)

and yes, he's a creepo!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Crime and Comfort

Ewwww...James is one sick twisted bastard. I feel sorry for the nurse he was caught with, that poor girl is so regretting her choices. I still feel quesy that he went so low as to pee on Bella's care. That's all kinds of wrong there.

So glad Edward was there...phew.

Go Chief Swan! Way to kick Edward's butt into gear...lol



Author's Response:

well somebody needed to!

(get E in gear!) lol

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is an anomaly as far as Bella Swan is concerned, defying all her preconceived notions about the whorishness of hockey players. Through incessant stalking and persistence, can Edward wears down Bella's resistence and teaches her to embrace her inner hockey hooker? A ridiculous love story.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 14519
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2010 Updated: August 19, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot

Holy Hale Honey this is going to be Fuckin AWESOME!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

Dear God this story has me laughing like crazy...I can't believe Bella literally climbed on Emmett, that was hilarious!! God I love you my dear, you know how to make me smile...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

Damn honey Hockey whores Rock!!! I am happy to see Edward so gentle and wont'lie to you....cracked the fuck up over you whole Hulk out of cooter analogy. I can't wait for next Wed. !!!

 
Summary:

A geeky Edward is convinced that when it comes to best friend Bella, he doesn't stand a chance... until he finds a magazine article that begs to differ. Going back to school after Spring Break he has an all new image, but is it enough to win Bella's heart!

 

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Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 24348
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2010 Updated: June 08, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awww I wonder if Edward even remembers that Bella is still out there. It was kind of sad to see Bella so disappointed about not talking to Edward. I can't wait...only two more days until they get back to school.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Helly Edward!! LoL...I find Edward's enthusiasm humorous but must admit I do have a soft spots for geeks so I have to wonder if Bella does too. I know she can see the diamond in the rough. Ohh i can't wait for your next update, this sounds like it will be fun.

 




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