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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

When Edward abandons Bella to discover a human life for herself, the resulting damage is something that neither of them could have imagined, and neither can heal alone.

The story begins under the streets of Volterra, and follows Edward and Bella back to Forks as they begin to sift through the wreck left in the wake of his lie.

Edward and Bella in forest with text "Doubt thou the stars are fire, doubt that the sun doth move, doubt truth to be a liar, but never doubt I love."

Thanks to Mkystich for my banner! I love it! The poetry is from Shakespeare's Hamlet, Act 2, Scene 2.

 

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 89595
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2010 Updated: July 06, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow...The family is laying it all out there. Poor Jasper to have to experience all of that. I am so relieved it is getting out there and Edward better let his family help dammit!

 
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Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

LMAO...oh god a sex talk in the Cullen household is just so funny. I absolultly loved it!

 
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Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

*Fans herself...where the hell is my ice when I need it!* Damn honey that was intense! I am thrilled Edward finally claimed her...it was great! Oh dear...Jacob is gonna totally flip!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow...I bow to your brilliance! This was a hard chapter to read...so many things discussed but by god they needed to be put out there! The healing process here is so much more profound...I am in awe...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am intrigued to say the least and I anxious to read the tale you are weaving...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am glad writing for you was cathartic. Reading has that effect on me so on a particularly bad day I will be lost in my fiction. I thank you for writing as reading this story will be my way of letting go...

 
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Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well its about damn time Edward! Dear lord what I wouldn't have given to knock him around some...I mean he still thought he should leave! Some men are just so dense! How could not have thought about the pain this would cause Bella. If that was Jasper projecting Bella's pain than I am glad...Edward need a good dose of what Bella was feeling.

 
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Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Still with you honey and completly riveted.

 
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Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It's perfectly understandable why Bella reacted the way she did...it still makes me mad that Edward won't simply talk to Bella and actually believe her that she wants to be with him for eternity. How i would love to  knock some sense into Edward...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am relieved Edward is realizing a few things...he relys to much on his ability to make a truly informed decision when it comes to Bella. i am anxious as to where these revelations take him...

 
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Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh jesus Edward...look how much you have made Bella doubt herself. I hope to hell that boy is going to do some serious groveling...

 
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Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I sure hope Edward takes Esme's words to heart...his idealogy has definalty got to change. How could he not give Bella the chance to choose for herself. That in itself is the problem.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'll bet Jacob was livid and about ready to hunt down Bella and Edward. I can't help but wonder what will happen next...Ohhh i wonder when they will decide that Bella is to be changed. No wedding stipulations here...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ohhh this is getting complex. I can't wait to see what happens with the wolves...excitedly skips to next chapter...I'm loving it!

 
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Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

As much as I loved the declarations in the begining...I am stunned stupid at the turn of events Vicky has set in motion. What the hell just happened...again stunned stupid here...

 
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Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Holy freakin Hale! Jasper is gone and now so is Alice...Oh my GOD! I feel for Jasper and can't believe this happening. While Victoria may be dead I have no doubt that crazy red head had a contingency plan. Cringe...I dread what may lay in wait for Bella

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

*Crys silent tears* I know this had to happen but it was still hard to work thru. It was devastating that Bella had to loose her best friend and her father all in one day. I find it hard that Bella and Jacob cannot be friends but understand why. In a way this is more of like what I thought the relationship would be like when reading SM stories. RL is alot harder and differences seperate people alot more than in stories...sigh.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

*Falls off her damn chair...stunned beyond stupid now...* Damn first the arguement about Bella's change and now Alice makes a decision to ensure Jasper's future...

Damn honey...hooked like an addict and dying for the next hit...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Holy Hell...this is fantastic! I am at a loss for words other than I am again in awe of your work...

 
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Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

*Fuck you  just love me in a state of stunned stupid! * Dammit I knew Victoria left a contingency plan...I can't believe it's after midnight but I swear I will not stop until I am caught up...

 
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Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Hell so driven for more I can't think straight!

 
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Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh thank god! Alice was there to thwart that little prick Riley. Damn Victoria to the deepest depths of Hell! How could Riley let Charlie believe such things...again curse Victoria for her evil ways.

*adrenaline is pumping...damn so much for being coherant at work tomorrow*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

*breaths eratically...oh god...Riley broke her!* That evil little bastard...himm and Victoria would have been like two peas in a pod...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh god...this reader is spent...i cringe at what could have been...I feel...feel...so much...I can't even begin to tell you how much I am in a state of awe...words are incomplete...my mind reels...I never thought I would feel like this from words alone.

My mind is in overdrive...i feel strangly at peace, this hell of a week as columnated like the suspense in this story...All i can say is thank you for the peace.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I want you to know that this journey has meant more to me than I thought it would. I am going thru some major turmoil in my life and to watch these two find themselves reminds me that life has pain...yes...but from that pain comes the knowlege that this to will pass. Bella just said goodbye to that broken girl in the woods. I will quickly come to that point. I am in a ways broken by love but one day I hope i too can say goodbye to that broken girl and embrace a new life.

Thank you so much for sharing...this journey has brought me to my knees in some ways, I am honored to take it with you...

 




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