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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
Status: Member
Member Since: July 01, 2009

Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!

I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.

I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.

10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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A Kick in the Balls by mutt229 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]


Bella is entering her senior year of college with her two best friends and roommates, Alice and Emmett. Her final year in college is going to be one for the recordbooks, as Bella and her crew invite two new roommates to share their house with them.


Rated M/NC-17 for adult themes and lemons. AH/OOC


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Claire, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Gianna, Heidi, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 147307
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2009 Updated: August 23, 2011

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: At The End of The Day (born2speakmirth & shabbyapple)

Awww poor Bella, this trip definatly is one emotional rollar coaster for her. I am happy that Edward was there for her as she needed the support and I just love him all the more for wanting to finish the lullaby for her.

Numb by Tyranny Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 666]

Numb by Tyranny


Bella has spent her life abused and betrayed. Now she feels nothing. When she meets the new boy in school she starts to feel again. But is the pain worth the possibility of something better? NC-17 for violence, language, possible lemons in later chapters.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 113960
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2009 Updated: August 12, 2013

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Sigh...I am happy to see Bella taking to Alice, dear god it seems that child has been through so much.

Author's Response:

She really has, and unfortunately has miles to go before she sleeps. Metaphorically speaking anyway. Thanks again.

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Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh dear, that poor girl...

Sounds like an interesting read...

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

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Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

*eyes water and tears are definalty on the horizon* Oh dear...why Charlie choses to do that I'll never know but I feel for how wrong it all is. Bella certainly does not deserve her lot and I can only hope that Edward shows here that she doesn't have to live like that.

Author's Response:

Unfortunately those feelings are pretty deeply ingrained, but Edward will certainly try. Thanks for the review.

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Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Doesn't every high school have a Lauren? Unfortunatly my high school Lauren was none other than my Stepsister...AAackkk high school totally sucked.

Author's Response:

I'll bet it did. Hopefully no one expected you to be like her. Thanks.

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Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awwww isn't Edward cute? sure will be fun to see what this guy does to try and remain calm. Sigh if he only knew just how skittish Bella is, wow I can't imagine what he will think when he learns of Bella's situation.

Author's Response:

It will be very interesting once Edward knows. Keep reading hun, it's coming soon.

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Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Gasp! Oh Bella honey you've been thru so much. Grrr if I got ahold of Charlie that man would be black and blue, I am a very protective mama bear and the thought of someone hurting a child like that has me seeing red.

Author's Response:

I completely agree. Luckily, these are my characters and so I can do that sort of thing. Did I say too much? Nevermind.

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Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Sigh...Charlie is such an ass and can't help but feel he's taking so much out on Bella. I just hope he doesn't put Bella back in the hospital. Christ that man is so insensitive.

Author's Response:

Unfortunately, it's gonna get worse before it gets better. Thanks for the review.

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Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OH god I could just hug Alice. She really is a great friend and it thrills me that she will break down the walls Bella has built.

Author's Response:

With a sparkly pink sledgehammer. Thanks.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 heart breaks for Bella and all she has had to endure...

Author's Response:

I know what you mean. Thanks for the review.

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Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ohhh Jess is still there, in the shadow but still there.  *tears build up* I can't believe Charlie was so mean to do that to her. Men like him should be strung up by thier toes and beat.

Author's Response:

I can think of some other parts I'd like to string them up by. Thanks for the review.

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Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh that poor girl, however I will begrudgedly offer a thanks for Charlie letting Bella go over. I just hope it goes well for Bella, that girl could use what joy she can get. I do have to wonder though what happened to Renee? Does she regret leaving Bella behind?

Author's Response:

We will be seeing more of Renee later and she'll get to tell her side. Hopefully she'll be able to give Bella some peace. Thanks.

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Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh my dear I thing this story is FABULOUS!!! I just love seeing them come closer together. It really is sweet to watch Bella open up to her new friends.

Author's Response:

And I think I love that I got a FABULOUS. Thanks, hun. You make my day.

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Date: March 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow dinner went's such a shame that Bella has never had a decent family dinner. I wonder if Edward's touch will awaken Bella's ability to feel. While I am thrilled she can feel Edward I hope for her sake she won't be able to feel Charlie's touch...shudder. I think if Edward found out about Charlie's "affection" he would go balistic.

Author's Response:

I'm not giving anything away, but the key to Bella feeling again is in someone else, probably someone you won't expect. Thanks.

Loner by Nilla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9908]

Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?

WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.



Banner by steffyxxface

Thanks to steffyxxface for the lovely banner!

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011

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Date: November 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Oh jesus christ almighty! Jacob is beyond douche material. I have needs?!? What the fuck kind of lame excuse is that. He left her and didn't respect her, and then he had the audacity to want to kiss her goodbye. How clueless was that. To be honest I am so fucking proud of Bella for hitting Jacob. I feel so sorry that she had to endure that but luckily she has Edward to call. I will anxiously await the outcome of all of this...

PS author honey don't be afraid that was brilliantly written.

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Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Awww Charlie was on good behavior and I hope Edward didn't flip internally.

Hmmm I guess is shouldn't suprise me that Tanya was just atrociously forward. I wonder what Edward thought of Bella's jelousy. I can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: You'll find out what he thought soon. :) Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: February 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Wow...I'm with proud of Edward! He has come such a long way in such a short time. I love the healing process...Emmett is heavan sent-love that boys honest loving ways. Alice is just a treat in how she handles him.
EEeppp and Edward is trying with Bella...god who could ask for more? This was a fabulous chapter and lent warm fuzzies to my heart. =)

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Date: August 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

I'm on cloud nine and above! Damn! I am so proud of Edward for the progress he has made. Wow...he let Esme hug him...stunned and elated! I can't wait to see how therapy goes. I am just thrilled!

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Date: August 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Ok so I was stunned stupid by that last little bit...who the hell is Edward talking to? I sure hope its not Jessica or Lauren and if it is...What the Hell? Mike is such a douche to spread around that it was him who rebuffed Bella...what ever! I will anxiously await your next update.

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Date: January 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Oh my stars! I feel like doing a jig or something equally as ridiculous as an end zone dance...Edward had lunch in the cafeteria! That was AWESOME! I loved that he was able to sit and interact with everyone so well. The story about Newton had me cracking up to no end...what kind of rumors was that? Some kids have overactive imaginations.
Aww and Edward bringing Bella ice cream was so sweet. I am just all gushy thinking of how sweet he can be....

PS...his tingles were giving me tingles to ;)

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Date: March 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Holy Freakin Hale! Poor Sam. It amazes me what someone older, who should know better, will do to a little kid. People wonder why children's innocence are stolen at a younger age. Its because of sick people like that who harm children that are making parents warn them of dangers they shouldn't have to worry about...sorry for the rant but it makes me heartsick to hear what some people of had to live thru. Granted these are fictional characters, but I have no doubt that those people exist.

I am thrilled Edward is willing to listen and learn how to deal with his pain...I anxiously await your next update.

PS I understand that RL can be cruel and a royal pain in the ass, just know that I am anxious but will patiently await the next update...

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Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Awww Bella, that is just so heartbreaking. It must be very hard on her to lose the last link to her mother. I can just imagine how hard it is for Phil, but I can totally understand Bella's reaction to the news. Sigh...

I am floored that Edward is taking the initiative to take Bella's hand. I wonder if he realizes this must be about her Mom. I have to wonder and can't wait until the next update! I am so excited.

PS: no worries if you can't get back to my reviews, I understand that there is not always time and I am very happy with you updating instead =)

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Date: January 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Oh Hells NO! Oh dear oh my...Edward is not taking this well. I think I had a mini anxiety attack as Bella started this conversation but I am on the verge of nervous breakdown just thinking of how Edward is taking all of this. I know he is freaking out but he needs to hear the rest of the story. I think once he realizes that she didn't go thru with it will he calm down. This was one hell of a cliffie honey...I won't throw stone cuz your right this did have to happen but please for the love of all that is holy, Please don't leave us hanging for to long.

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Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

jumpin up and down for joy...he is doin it....really doing it....god i am so proud of him. happy dance time

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Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Well Edward has done well considering its his first day without Bella. Granted he blew up once but damn that boy makes me proud with how much he is realizing and trying to change. =)

Oh no why is Bella crying? Awww this has got to be so hard for her to go back to that house. I can't wait to see how this all plays out...



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