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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Becoming Bella by msbond Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 118]
Summary:

After an emotionally abusive marriage Bella finally finds the strength to leave. With the help of her friends and a new mysterious stranger she starts to discover who she really is. Will she allow her past to keep her from true love or will she risk heart again?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 92425
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: April 03, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Third Time's A Charm

Ok I like where this is going...have my suspicions.

I wonder if jackass James is at the heart at the vandalism...ohh I can't wait to find out



Author's Response:

I can't wait to hear all your theorys!! hehehe

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Three's A Crowd

Wow it was great to see what was going on in Edward's head... His need to make Bella complete...sigh...we should all be so lucky. I LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Edward sees so much more than others, he is very observent and intuitive. I really needed everyone to see things from his point of view, how he thinks, feels...

Mwah! MB

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Hide and Seek

Holy Hell Edward has his work cut out for him because Bella has got some fucked up thinking going on there. I can't wait to see what comes next; I am hoping Edward steps up his game. Aaaacccckkk Jessica really is a bitch in sheeps clothing; hope Edward sees that.



Author's Response:

Yes ma'am - 

 

Edward has a huge deal or work to do in regards to Bella.  She is very jaded and is terrified of getting hurt again. 

 

Jessica is just a royal bitch.  Because of her fame she is used to getting what she wants and Edward is not falling all over her like most men do.  She is not liking that at all.

 

Thanks for the review bb!!

 

MB

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: What The Heart Wants

Holy Hale Honey I rate that date a solid 10!! It was sweet, romantic, and even a bit of seriousness sprinkled in. It really was brilliant!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you said that! If I were to go on a date I think I would want it just this way, of course I think my control would not have been as great as Bellas was. I would have jumped him in the sand and said screw it!

 

Thanks again bb!

 

XOXO

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: According To Him

OH Hale No!!! That bastard James is such a fucking moron. UUUgggg i hate his overbearing ass!

By the way thanks for making the villian so hateable. ;) I am so glad Edward was there and three cheers for kick ass friends who take care of their own. I just love Alice and Rose.

 



Author's Response:

It was so easy to make James hateable, and I so love to hate him.

Edward showed up just at the right moment, its just too bad he was not there to witness the damage being done. But if he was then it may have very well fueled his fire and it would do no good for him to be getting into trouble. Alice and Rose, well they always have Bella's back and will do whatever it takes.


MWAH!  MB

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Bibbity Bobbity Boo

Yay... let's ALL celebrate Bella's coming out! I am so proud of her as well.

Grrr after listening to what those jackass of officers had to write in thier reports....AAAAAHHHHHHHH I hope James, Victoria, Jered and any other of those jackass's get nailed to the wall!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm proud of her too! She has grown so much.

James and his croonies wil ALL get what coming to them, and I cannot wait to here you thoughts when ou see the direction i'm taking this.

Thanks so much for always reviewing!!

MWAH

MB

 
Summary:

When a completely innocent Bella has her life turned upside down, she finds herself hardened, angry, and refuses to take it anymore. She used to pine for Edward, but is now indifferent.  Edward, once a slightly cocky jock who set out to humiliate Bella, finds some truths to the loss of his parents, making him slightly rebellious, stand-offish, and completely detached.

 

Will they fall in together, and find a way to mend each other? Or will it all fall to pieces?

 

 

 

As such, the sun was up before the night was down, and I couldnt pin my eyes open and empty any longer, my lips searched for words, but they only found yours, I was broken, alone...

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 59253
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Asphyxiated

What the hell! Things were just looking up too. Bella has just had one hell of a time and can't blame the girl for just wanting to forget just for a little bit. Sigh...ok so anticipation is building...please update soon.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry. I'm sorry, I'm sorry...next Chap I can tell you, you're going to hate me...then you are going to love me :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Russian Roulette

How could Charlie do that to Bella! Dear lord that girl has had the day from hell. I sure hope Charlie is ready for the repercussions of his decision.



Author's Response:

haha keep reading :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Claustrophobic

Ha Bella is freakin Awesome. I love how she shut down Alice's makeover idea...I would have loved to have seen Alice's face.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Blank Paper

OHHH What a way to begin a story...completly have my attention

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Cherry Sopranos and Onyx Tenors

First off I'm sadden you had a lousy birthday and hope the next one treats you alot better. Happy Belated Birthday my dear! I completly understand about "husband issues" as mine sometimes has me wondering why I said I do some days. =)

I can't tell you how much i bow down to your brilliance. I loved the long chapter and can't thank you enough. Your beta rocks in that she let you post it. I bow to her as well. I loved it!!! *dances around exitedly* They said the L word, it was perfect!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I think I'm pretty happy about how it turned out.  I just couldn't bare to split it into two different chapters so, you get one big ass one lol

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Dead Man

OMG that fuckin dirtbag hurt Bella!!! God help him if Carlisle finds him...bring it on!!

I loved how Edward is helping Bella...lol...though that crack about Bella testing thier virginities had me rolling.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Nightingale

Well Hot Damn!! Dadlisle was getting giddy with Esmom! LOL...go Dr. C! I just loved how protective and proactive Carlisle is about Bella, really is made of the right stuff that man.

Alot has been goin on with Bella and Edward and I just cracked up with them and the sharpie counting out the days...ahhh young love...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Cliche Boombox Serenade

OMG that was BRILLIANT!!! Oh thier first time was so sweet and loved filled, it couldn't have been more perfect for either. I just loved that she is now Bella Masen, it was just perfect. I can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: April 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: October is for Witches & Harlots

That was brilliant! I just loved how they are moving forward with thier lives. Wow Bella Masen, makes me wonder how Newton new about that. I am enjoying this to no end and can't wait to see what you throw at them next...

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella Playing Chess

 

Best friends, a freak snowstorm, and a blackout.  Throw in some board games and nice sheets, and who knows what will happen?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 106661
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa that was one hell of a snow storm! Dear me oh my that was a great beginning. To think they have know each other all thier lives. I can't wait to find out more...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yay Jacob has found Ren and was an awesome friend to Bella in her time of need. Lol...Jasper is a great older brother and you just gotta luv Alice for pointing out the obvious to Edward...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Awww Edward is just the sweetest thingtaking care of Bella while she is sick...Gasp...Was Bella was hit by Renee? Oh dear lord...there is definalty more to that story. I can't wait to learn more.

LoL...I wonder what the conditions were to Carlisle and Esme's bet...that is going to be fun to find out.

 
Summary:

Small Fair

Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH, AU, OOC,

Rated M for later, they are adults & will do adult things!

Canon Couples 

My BFF is Twitter: Mrs_Robward


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 92216
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10, Walls, Tears, & Words

*Silent tears fall* Oh what a chapter. First off is Mike being the jackass that he is.

The biggest blow however is Esme passing away. I don't know what to say. This is just too heartbreaking. I do hope to see the ray of light on the other end of the tunnel.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

*CRYING uncontrolably* That was beautiful and oh so sad at the same time. It sounds like their life was filled with love and many good things. I can't help but cry over it all as it was so moving and emotionally charged. I am honored to have taken this journey...

Until we meet again...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1, Bella

Wow I am finally able to get to this! I found this story a few weeks ago, but RL has been kicking my ass so I've been slacking in getting all my stories read. I am thrilled to finally get to begin this one. It sounds fabulous.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2, Edward & Ethan

Oh Wow! You have captured my attention honey!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3, Friends

Aww Ethan is just the sweetest thing ever!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4, Duckies

LoL...it was good to see both of them let loose for an afternoon. Both seem to need it. It was heartbreaking to hear about Bella loosing her little one.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5, Mr. Whitlock, Rose, & Esme

That was just heartwarming. Esme is just a treasure trove of strength and I fell in love with her immediately.

 




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