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Penname: AJ04 [ Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!
I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.
I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.
10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)
1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Summary: It's been 6 years and Edward hasn't returned. Bella is now living in Seattle as a homicide detective. The homicide rate has shot up in Seattle and when Bella's life is put on the line, she sees the person she was hoping she'd never see again. OOC.
Excerpt from Chapter 7:
“I have to get out of here,” I said.
I walked right past Edward but stopped when I felt something cold and hard grab my wrist.
“Don’t touch me.” I said it in a way I was surprised how it came out. It came out in more of a plea.
“Bella, please…let me explain…” Edward pleaded loosening his grip on my wrist.
“No,” was all I said. I started to pull and realized my vision started to blur and I could feel a few tears fall. “Edward, please let me go!”
“Edward. Let her go,” I heard Carlisle calmly say. Edward slowly, and somewhat reluctantly, let me go and I quickly turned around and opened the door.
I ran out and down the steps of the porch.
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Word count: 37717
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2009 Updated: December 02, 2009
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed 
Date: November 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: The Huntress
OMG!!! Oh honey how could you leave me hanging like that...OH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE....don't leave me like this for to long...
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Bliss
No worries...your makeup kiss was pretty scintilating...
And here we go with the newborns...Emmett is sure to have a field day...can't wait!!
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: What I Wouldn't Give
Uh oh don't tell me Victoria is following Bella...sigh...never a dull moment is there. =) I was totally blown away that Jasper volunteered to guard Bella but am thrilled that he did...like Emmett said Party at Bella's house!
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: I Don't Want to Want You
First off LOVED NEW MOON!! I have seen it a couple of times myself and whoa baby...the wolf pack is just divine!!
Ok all I can so is Hell ya! The wolves finally meet the vamps and the show is about to begin...can't wait.
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: What I Wouldn't Give
Why does it not surprise me that it is Victoria that is causing all the problems...sigh. LoL...I just love Jacob's enthusiasm for the hunt...he's funny. I still don't trust Cullen but at least he's off to a good start in trying to work towards forgiveness.
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: White Horse
Ok I may be a heartless bitch but I am so proud of Bella for not falling into Edward's arms...he did a monstrous thing in telling her he no longer loved her so this is just a small price to pay for his stupidity...
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: What I Wouldn't Give
Eeepp...Oh that boy is so gonna get it...*imagines Emmett and Jasper pummeling Edward for his stupidity*...Whoops sorry daydreaming of some possibilities. I am so happy that Bella could at least get some closure with the rest of the Cullen's even though i know she hasn't completly forgiven them.
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Stand My Ground
Oh dear lord Alice knows...looks around nervously for Edward...damn Even I am still not ready for him to make an appearance...
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: What I Wouldn't Give
Hmmm as much as I like Edward I am still seething...I mean come on it's been six years! I can't believe it.
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: What I Wouldn't Give
Holy Freakin Hale! Bella's been Shot! Wait...what the hell is Carlisle doing in Seattle?
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Trouble in Seattle
Jamie is just to cute and WTH...vampires in Seattle?!?
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: What I Wouldn't Give
Hmmm just found this story and find the first chapter very interesting...
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Keep Holding On
O Hell Yeah!! We are soon to meet vampy Bella!
A new oneshot in EPOV!!! you are Awesome!!!
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Two is Better Than One
Wow you sure ended with a bang!! It sounds like thier eternity will be filled with many more surprises...sigh...fabulous.
While I am sad this has come to an end the journey has been well worth it...
Summary: Bella feels she is doomed to a mundane life with Jake. Her only solace is her writing while listening to her favorite radio DJ. Edward doesn't know where his life is going, settles for a job as a DJ. What happens when he finds out he is Bella's muse?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 6061
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: November 21, 2009
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 I Will Survive
OH Hell Yeah!!!! *Waves a little Team Bella Flag* That was awesome and I can't tell you how happy I am that Bella is starting her life for herself. This was a very satisfying chapter... Author's Response: Thanks so much I love reviews they make me giddy, I'm working hard on chapter 5.
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Song Sung Blues
Hmmm just found your story and it does seem rather intriguing. Uggg to be trapped in a relationship that sucks just well SUCKS... I hope Bella grows a pair soon and cuts Jake free. Jake WTF SHE. DOESN'T. WANT. YOU. Take a freakin hint! Author's Response: Thanks for the review I think you will like chapter 4.
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Enter Sandman
Yeesh Tanya after our dear Edward again...sure hope he meets Bella soon and helps her out of her horrible relationship...
Just have to know how these two make out... Author's Response: Sometimes I feel bad for Tanya in fics, but I just couldn't resist. I hope you will keep reading.
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Misery
Jesus Freakin Christ! Jacob Black is a dense idiot! Aaaacckkk someone needs to save Bella ASAP. I can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Thank you for the review I think you will enjoy chapter 4.
Summary: 
After an emotionally abusive marriage Bella finally finds the strength to leave. With the help of her friends and a new mysterious stranger she starts to discover who she really is. Will she allow her past to keep her from true love or will she risk heart again?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 92425
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: April 03, 2010
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Winner Takes All
*Dances around excitedly* I just loved it! LOL...the pool showdown was just to hilarious and I am kinda glad Edward won. I was rolling during the shots those two took and the described look on Jessica's face. It was priceless. Author's Response: I'm gladhe won too, Edward deserves a break don't ya think? I'm so glad you liked the chapter and I really think you will love what I have coming up next. I can't wait to hear what you think.
Thanks bb. Mwah! MB
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Ctrl Alt Delete
All Right Bella!!! You go for it honey!!! Author's Response: Thanks honey! I'll have the next chapter posted really soon. I hope your up for date night!!!
MB
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Burning Embers
LOL I think the first part of the date is brilliant...
I agree with Edward; James in an ass. I would love to read about Bella playing and singing more.
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Destiny Be Damned!
Lets all hear it for kickass friends who tell us how it is!! I just love Alice and Rose...they are just what Bella needs. *Sigh* I love that your Edward is pretty persistant cuz otherwise Bella would be hiding forever. I can't wait for pool on friday! Author's Response: WOOT for Alice and Rose! They are indeed what Bella needs. They give her the push and keep it real for her, otherwise she would do nothing but wallow.
Edward is never changing...persistent is his nature and we wouldn't love him any other way.
Just submitted the next chapter today. I can't wait to hear what you think.
XOXO~MB
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
*Waves team Bella flag* What a way to begin a story...just found it but am intrigued so will be following along. Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review and i'm glad your enjoying the story! I submitted a new chapter today so a new chapter should post in the next couple days. I can't wait to hear what else you think!
XOXO~MB
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Baby Steps
It woudl seem Bella's journey back to herself has begun and can't wait to follow her on her journey
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Breathe
Whoa a smitten Edward...YES!
It would seem he has his work cut out for him...Bella has been jaded...sigh I sure hope he can pull her out of it Author's Response: I've been a bit fail the last coul=ple days at review replies. Sorry its taken so long.
Edward is defenatly smitten with Bella and certainly has some work to do. He has a lot of damage control to do to repair what James did. You are right! He does have his work cut out for him.
Mwah! MB
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