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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

It's been 6 years and Edward hasn't returned. Bella is now living in Seattle as a homicide detective. The homicide rate has shot up in Seattle and when Bella's life is put on the line, she sees the person she was hoping she'd never see again. OOC.

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Excerpt from Chapter 7:
“I have to get out of here,” I said.
I walked right past Edward but stopped when I felt something cold and hard grab my wrist.
“Don’t touch me.” I said it in a way I was surprised how it came out. It came out in more of a plea.
“Bella, please…let me explain…” Edward pleaded loosening his grip on my wrist.
“No,” was all I said. I started to pull and realized my vision started to blur and I could feel a few tears fall. “Edward, please let me go!”
“Edward. Let her go,” I heard Carlisle calmly say. Edward slowly, and somewhat reluctantly, let me go and I quickly turned around and opened the door.
I ran out and down the steps of the porch.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 37717
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2009 Updated: December 02, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: What I Wouldn't Give

Holy Freakin Hale! Bella's been Shot! Wait...what the hell is Carlisle doing in Seattle?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Trouble in Seattle

Jamie is just to cute and WTH...vampires in Seattle?!?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: What I Wouldn't Give

Hmmm just found this story and find the first chapter very interesting...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Keep Holding On

O Hell Yeah!! We are soon to meet vampy Bella!

A new oneshot in EPOV!!! you are Awesome!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Two is Better Than One

Wow you sure ended with a bang!! It sounds like thier eternity will be filled with many more surprises...sigh...fabulous.

While I am sad this has come to an end the journey has been well worth it...

 
Summary:

Bella feels she is doomed to a mundane life with Jake. Her only solace is her writing while listening to her favorite radio DJ. Edward doesn't know where his life is going, settles for a job as a DJ. What happens when he finds out he is Bella's muse?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 6061
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: November 21, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 I Will Survive

OH Hell Yeah!!!! *Waves a little Team Bella Flag*  That was awesome and I can't tell you how happy I am that Bella is starting her life for herself. This was a very satisfying chapter...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much I love reviews they make me giddy, I'm working hard on chapter 5.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Song Sung Blues

Hmmm just found your story and it does seem rather intriguing. Uggg to be trapped in a relationship that sucks just well SUCKS... I hope Bella grows a pair soon and cuts Jake free. Jake WTF SHE. DOESN'T. WANT. YOU. Take a freakin hint!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review I think you will like chapter 4.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Enter Sandman

Yeesh Tanya after our dear Edward again...sure hope he meets Bella soon and helps her out of her horrible relationship...

Just have to know how these two make out...



Author's Response:

Sometimes I feel bad for Tanya in fics, but I just couldn't resist. I hope you will keep reading.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Misery

Jesus Freakin Christ! Jacob Black is a dense idiot! Aaaacckkk someone needs to save Bella ASAP. I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review I think you will enjoy chapter 4.

 
Becoming Bella by msbond Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 118]
Summary:

After an emotionally abusive marriage Bella finally finds the strength to leave. With the help of her friends and a new mysterious stranger she starts to discover who she really is. Will she allow her past to keep her from true love or will she risk heart again?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 92425
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: April 03, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Winner Takes All

*Dances around excitedly* I just loved it! LOL...the pool showdown was just to hilarious and I am kinda glad Edward won. I was rolling during the shots those two took and the described look on Jessica's face. It was priceless.



Author's Response:

I'm gladhe won too, Edward deserves a break don't ya think? I'm so glad you liked the chapter and I really think you will love what I have coming up next. I can't wait to hear what you think.

Thanks bb. Mwah! MB

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Ctrl Alt Delete

All Right Bella!!! You go for it honey!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks honey! I'll have the next chapter posted really soon. I hope your up for date night!!!

MB

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Burning Embers

LOL I think the first part of the date is brilliant...

I agree with Edward; James in an ass. I would love to read about Bella playing and singing more.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Destiny Be Damned!

Lets all hear it for kickass friends who tell us how it is!! I just love Alice and Rose...they are just what Bella needs. *Sigh* I love that your Edward is pretty persistant cuz otherwise Bella would be hiding forever. I can't wait for pool on friday!



Author's Response:

WOOT for Alice and Rose!  They are indeed what Bella needs.  They give her the push and keep it real for her, otherwise she would do nothing but wallow.

Edward is never changing...persistent is his nature and we wouldn't love him any other way.

Just submitted the next chapter today.  I can't wait to hear what you think.

 

XOXO~MB

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

*Waves team Bella flag* What a way to begin a story...just found it but am intrigued so will be following along.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review and i'm glad your enjoying the story!  I submitted a new chapter today so a new chapter should post in the next couple days.  I can't wait to hear what else you think!

 

XOXO~MB

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Baby Steps

It woudl seem Bella's journey back to herself has begun and can't wait to follow her on her journey

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Breathe

Whoa a smitten Edward...YES!

It would seem he has his work cut out for him...Bella has been jaded...sigh I sure hope he can pull her out of it



Author's Response:

I've been a bit fail the last coul=ple days at review replies. Sorry its taken so long.

 

Edward is defenatly smitten with Bella and certainly has some work to do. He has a lot of damage control to do to repair what James did. You are right! He does have his work cut out for him.

Mwah! MB

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Third Time's A Charm

Ok I like where this is going...have my suspicions.

I wonder if jackass James is at the heart at the vandalism...ohh I can't wait to find out



Author's Response:

I can't wait to hear all your theorys!! hehehe

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Three's A Crowd

Wow it was great to see what was going on in Edward's head... His need to make Bella complete...sigh...we should all be so lucky. I LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Edward sees so much more than others, he is very observent and intuitive. I really needed everyone to see things from his point of view, how he thinks, feels...

Mwah! MB

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Hide and Seek

Holy Hell Edward has his work cut out for him because Bella has got some fucked up thinking going on there. I can't wait to see what comes next; I am hoping Edward steps up his game. Aaaacccckkk Jessica really is a bitch in sheeps clothing; hope Edward sees that.



Author's Response:

Yes ma'am - 

 

Edward has a huge deal or work to do in regards to Bella.  She is very jaded and is terrified of getting hurt again. 

 

Jessica is just a royal bitch.  Because of her fame she is used to getting what she wants and Edward is not falling all over her like most men do.  She is not liking that at all.

 

Thanks for the review bb!!

 

MB

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: What The Heart Wants

Holy Hale Honey I rate that date a solid 10!! It was sweet, romantic, and even a bit of seriousness sprinkled in. It really was brilliant!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you said that! If I were to go on a date I think I would want it just this way, of course I think my control would not have been as great as Bellas was. I would have jumped him in the sand and said screw it!

 

Thanks again bb!

 

XOXO

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: According To Him

OH Hale No!!! That bastard James is such a fucking moron. UUUgggg i hate his overbearing ass!

By the way thanks for making the villian so hateable. ;) I am so glad Edward was there and three cheers for kick ass friends who take care of their own. I just love Alice and Rose.

 



Author's Response:

It was so easy to make James hateable, and I so love to hate him.

Edward showed up just at the right moment, its just too bad he was not there to witness the damage being done. But if he was then it may have very well fueled his fire and it would do no good for him to be getting into trouble. Alice and Rose, well they always have Bella's back and will do whatever it takes.


MWAH!  MB

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Bibbity Bobbity Boo

Yay... let's ALL celebrate Bella's coming out! I am so proud of her as well.

Grrr after listening to what those jackass of officers had to write in thier reports....AAAAAHHHHHHHH I hope James, Victoria, Jered and any other of those jackass's get nailed to the wall!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm proud of her too! She has grown so much.

James and his croonies wil ALL get what coming to them, and I cannot wait to here you thoughts when ou see the direction i'm taking this.

Thanks so much for always reviewing!!

MWAH

MB

 
Summary:

When a completely innocent Bella has her life turned upside down, she finds herself hardened, angry, and refuses to take it anymore. She used to pine for Edward, but is now indifferent.  Edward, once a slightly cocky jock who set out to humiliate Bella, finds some truths to the loss of his parents, making him slightly rebellious, stand-offish, and completely detached.

 

Will they fall in together, and find a way to mend each other? Or will it all fall to pieces?

 

 

 

As such, the sun was up before the night was down, and I couldnt pin my eyes open and empty any longer, my lips searched for words, but they only found yours, I was broken, alone...

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 59253
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Asphyxiated

What the hell! Things were just looking up too. Bella has just had one hell of a time and can't blame the girl for just wanting to forget just for a little bit. Sigh...ok so anticipation is building...please update soon.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry. I'm sorry, I'm sorry...next Chap I can tell you, you're going to hate me...then you are going to love me :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Russian Roulette

How could Charlie do that to Bella! Dear lord that girl has had the day from hell. I sure hope Charlie is ready for the repercussions of his decision.



Author's Response:

haha keep reading :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Claustrophobic

Ha Bella is freakin Awesome. I love how she shut down Alice's makeover idea...I would have loved to have seen Alice's face.

 




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