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Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

Edward is forced to leave his playboy life behind in Chicago and come home to Washington. When he is stripped of everything he knows, will he change his ways or risk losing everything? All human, cannon couples, OOC.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 27704
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2009 Updated: May 24, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ohh I love how you put it in the form of a newspaper article...it was very enlightening. James and Edward are cousins?!? Whoa this could get very interesting...

Just found this story so it is a treat...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Homecoming

No worries about the crack remark...I don't do it either but I imagine it's just as addicting like fanfic is for me. I love this already and can't wait to see what awaits Edward in Forks...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Reality

LOL...Carlisle is right...Edward is acting like a spoiled brat. That man needs to suck it up and grow up. Oh how I would love nothing better than to see some sense pounded into Edward. *Snicker* Fiesty Bella is exactly what someone like Edward needs...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Annoyance & Amusement

LOL...oh how I love how Bella's devious little mind works. I bet Edward has never had a woman throwdown with him like that. Silence is golden is it not? It's ok Edward needed to be brought down a peg or two regardless of what a crappy day he's had. I can't wait to see what happens next...Please update SOON

 
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Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Sweet Unexpected Meetings

LOL Oh My Stars! This is going to be one hell of night. I just love how Bella antagonizes Edward. Serves that boy right, he needs someone to kick him in the ass every now and then.



Author's Response:

Haha...thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Dinner Party: Round 1

LMAO!! Ok so the dinner is going spectacularly. Oh if Edward only knew how much Bella is a part of the family. Damn man is just to stubborn to realize what a good thing is in front of him. Bella has her work cut out for her. I can't wait to see what happens in the aftermath of the Best Man/Maid of Honor announcement...

 
Immersion by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary:

...Immersion...

 

Suppose that vampires "imprint" based on smell and the connection is immediate and irresistible. What will happen when vampire Bella Swan meets her mate at Forks High?

 

 

 

Immersion: involvement in something that occupies all the time and energy available.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 37435
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2009 Updated: November 21, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Kathie!

Tis me Marie! Finally was able to track down this story and already loving it. Been crazy on my end with Holloween and all...

Hmm delicious scents, debate team, and mind reading OH MY! I can't wait to read the rest, from what the girls have said it's going to be great!!



Author's Response:

Hey Marie...sent you an e-mail...hope you got it! 

Here's your preview of Chapter Two...Bella's POV:

That scent wafted over me again in the hallway, but there was a mass of teenage bodies around me and I couldn’t pinpoint it. Although I did decipher that two of the facets that made it up were something like that men’s cologne Old Spice…and leather. There was a third element that I couldn’t quite identify in the small whiffs that I could catch.

Alice passed me in the hallway when it was time for third hour. She smiled widely at me but her mind was busy with Gregorian chants…in Japanese? I didn’t even know she could do that! When I looked a question at her, she just blew me a kiss and mouthed, later.

The effect of her blowing the kiss to me set the small minds around me on fire. I just laughed to myself. At least the kiss would change the rumors up a bit. They were always the same: We were SIBLINGS, and several of us were INVOLVED. Boring! Now at least those that had seen Alice and Jasper together were now linking the three of us. Well, at least it was different.

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Thanks for reading!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ahhh Kathie,

Another wonderful chapter...sorry havn't commeted sooner. RL got in the way and had the worst Holloween ever, which ended with chemical burns on my right eye so havn't been able to see squat for couple of days. will tell you more when I have a chance...



Author's Response:

Hope your eye is better by now, sweets!  Sorry it took so long to get back to you...I had health issues last week...

Here's your preview for Chapter Four...which is already in the queue:

My sexual experience was minimal.  I had kissed Sandi once.  We had looked at each other and wondered, briefly, if there was something more there.  Our kiss had quickly let us know that, no, there wasn’t.  The laughter that followed, on both our parts, had kept our friendship from becoming weird.  We agreed to never speak of it again.  That was my only close contact with a girl. Well, besides the time those two girls had accosted me in the hallway after school.  And that encounter had just been disgusting…nothing sexy or romantic about it at all. 

When Bella and I started kissing earlier, that helped the ache in my body and soul.  Her tongue touching mine had eased the ache even more. That’s when I started to suspect that this soul mate thing was going to get even more physically demanding before too much longer.

Thanks again for reading.

Kathie

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aww Kathie,

You truly are brilliant my dear. I just love reading your stories...



Author's Response:

"Brilliant"...wow! Thanks!

Here's your preview for Chapter Four...which is already in the queue:

My sexual experience was minimal.  I had kissed Sandi once.  We had looked at each other and wondered, briefly, if there was something more there.  Our kiss had quickly let us know that, no, there wasn’t.  The laughter that followed, on both our parts, had kept our friendship from becoming weird.  We agreed to never speak of it again.  That was my only close contact with a girl. Well, besides the time those two girls had accosted me in the hallway after school.  And that encounter had just been disgusting…nothing sexy or romantic about it at all. 

When Bella and I started kissing earlier, that helped the ache in my body and soul.  Her tongue touching mine had eased the ache even more. That’s when I started to suspect that this soul mate thing was going to get even more physically demanding before too much longer.

Thanks again for reading.

 
Second Chance by christib Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 148]
Summary:

What if Edward had not returned to Forks after his first encounter with Bella in Biology? They have both finished high school and find themselves attending the same University. Bella doesn't know yet that Edward is a vampire and he wants a second chance.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 12915
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2009 Updated: December 09, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 "Stalkward"

Fascinating...I like where your going so far. Hmm I wonder if Mike is going to throw a monkey wrench into the plans. How soon is her turning soon...lol...well I guess Edward does have two years worth of catching up to do...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Fateful Encounter

Whahooo who wouldnt love a playful Edward...mmm I love the dream!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Fateful Encounter

Whoa this is interesting to say the least...

What on earth has Edward been doing these past few years? LOL...I can't help but wonder if Alice has been giving Edward "reports" over the last couple of years. Will anxiously await your next update.



Author's Response:

You'll have to check back to see Alice's role in this...  You'll find out soon enough!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Dazzled

Whoa sounds like Edward has had two years of wondering about Bella Swan and by golly he seems anxious to pick up where they left off. I wonder if Alice and Bella will become the best friends they were supposed to be. Hmmm also wonder what exactly Edward has up his sleeve. *Bounces around excitedly* I can't wait for more...please don't leave me hanging to long...

 
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Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Out on the Town

Oh dear lord my mind took one leap off that space needle into the gutter...

LOL...Mmmm know I can't wait for dinner.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- What's on the Menu?

I would imagine the date went *ahem* very well. I would seem to me that they are both going to be making up for lost time. *snicker* Mike is a total tool and hope Bella tell shim off soon. Can't wait to see what happens next

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Almost There

Yep this is going along nicely...

I agree with Alice, this will work and Edward should be happy. Lord knows he's worked long enough for it... =)

Carlisle is such an awesome dad encouraging the way he is...

 
Summary:

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Edward is a FBI agent and is assigned to a strange case where he will need the help of his fellow agents and friends. His only problem? He has been assigned a new partner...


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 101843
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Case

LOL...OMG Rose so took Emmett down and it was great! I laughed so hard had tears in my eyes. The case Edward and Bella are working on sounds fascinating. I am so excited for another chapter...



Author's Response:

Hi! I have to admit, the "pressure points" scene was written very simply in my outline and when the chapter came out on screen, it really unfolded into this great interaction--er, introduction--between the two of them. I always liked the way that Rose's character is strong, but also shrewd, and she feels deeply. The next time we loop back to Em/Rose they will (ahem) be getting to know one another better. *hehee* I'm excited to get moving on the other two couples as well. The chapters will kind of alternate between their stories with the case being the place that all their paths cross.

I'm glad it made you laugh. I was hoping to insert some comedy in with all the drama.

Thank you so much for reading! :0)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Partners

Well my dear here I am again and must say this sounds right up my alley. I am happy to have found your stories.



Author's Response:

Hello! Welcome! I am so glad you are here. Gosh, you honor me, you really do... I am very lucky to have you. 

This story is a different theme but the plan is to have fun with each of the couples and to solve a crime. I'm excited to write it. Thank you so much for reading! :0)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Complications

LoL...it was Brilliant, and I forgive you for the wait. Rosalie fixing Emmett's shoulder had me laughing so hard, I could just imagine his face and dear lord it was a riot.

The dead petrified bodies is intriguing and I have theories of my own seeing I do hold a degree in Molecular Biology myself. =) I can't wait to see how you weave this story it is truly fascinating.



Author's Response:

Oh, wow!  Now I really need to research! LOL! I have got some real minds reading this, so it had better be accurate!  I'm so glad your enjoying the interaction between those.  Those two have so much chemistry--they won't be serious no matter how hard I push. :0) I was trying not to be too gross with our body, but he's kind of funky.  Thanks so much for reading!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Game Plan

Stakeout....Fantastic....

I am however wondering what Edward's full story is, so many hints have me salivating for more info...



Author's Response:

Hi :0)

Thanks.  Yeah, the stakeout is going to forward A&J and (especially-*fanning myself*) E&R.  We will have E&B revealed very soon. Bella has a good idea now of what Edward's medicating himself for based on the vitamins he's using. I'll say that a combination of what he's using goes to replenishing the nervous system in the brain. The OCD points a little at it as well. I can promise that the E&B development is definitely the heavy plotline. Once Bella's secret is out, it's going to be drama-rama. They will be able to look at one another and really connect over the struggles they've had in their lives. In writing them I'm actually really glad that the other characters are there to be of some comic relief.

Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm on a mission to make the updates more frequent this month. Thanks for sticking with me on this. :0)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Set Up

Sorry but got behind on my reviewing. RL really is a downer sometimes. So things seem to be going very well with all couples mentioned. I loved Jasper's enthusiasm it was just to cute. Ohh i can't wait to read about the stakeout.



Author's Response:

Hi Lady!

I completely understand--life gets busy. I'm glad you're back, though.  You are our resident chemicals specialist, so you gotta tell me if I'm describing it right. :0)

I got such wonderful feedback with Jasper--he definitely lights up when Alice is in the room.

Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Stakeout

LoL...I loved the stakeout it was brilliant and oh my gosh i can't get over how much like 12 year olds those three boys act. Wow...Emmett sure has a magic don't you think...eyebrows waggle. This was just the ticket to brighten my day, Thank You.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you AJ!

I'm glad it made your day brighter.  Em and J are a trip; that interaction was seriously playing out and I caught myself laughing a lot with it.  Em likes to poke fun and J makes himself too big a target. LOL!

Thanks for reading! Much love.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Ghosts

Lo Siento, Dear lord what a devastation for Bella. Uggg as much as I want to hate Garrett i guess I can't blame the man for wanting more and being honest about it. They would have had a miserable marriage because of it. It does make me wonder though how long Garrett waited after he dumped Bella to find Kate and start a family...



Author's Response:

Hi AJ!

Yep--exactly! That really was the goal; their relationship ended and it hurt like h*ll but at least it didn't end later on far more painful terms.  It was interesting to me that Bella's past came out before Edward's but it was more of a surprise.  I knew that E&B would be the heavy plotline but boy, the light-heartedness of everyone else really has to outweigh the drama sometimes.  When Edward called J, I was thanking goodness--I needed to hear Emmett's voice.  I needed someone to crack a joke! Anyone... ;0)

Thank you so much for reading!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 -- The Shuffle

Oh Mike better watch himself or he's going to be on the receiving end of Emmett's fist. Lol...that would be awesome!

Awww Edward is just to sweet in getting Bella some daisies. And OMG Jasper and Alice are just to cute.



Author's Response:

Hi AJ!

Thank you. :0)  Yeah, this was a inetrmediate chapter but still has things going on. I'm glad you enjoyed. Next chapter the case rears back into the picture and the action kicks up.

Thank you so much for reading, rating and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Revelation

OH I Loved Charlie's subs...Those soldiers bring to mind massive eye candy and yes they deserve praise for what they do. I loved it!

LMAO...oh I just love Emmett and Rose...them getting together was great...although I am dying to know what happened in that bedroom...eye wraggle...Please update soon.

And Emmett cracked the mystery with a lil sweat...I can't wait to find out!

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi AJ!

OH, I kiss your feet for the stars--thanks!

I swear that the jump forward was intentional.  It's going to be fun to see the guys pry details out of Emmett.  I'm so glad you enjoyed.  Em & Rose are the physical couple, so it was agreed (PR's good feedback) that the culmination of their relationship be along those lines. 

The deets on the chemical are next chapter.  *hehee* We get all the boys back together in the same room.  *yay--I get major job satification out of that...*

Thankyou, thankyou for reading, rating and reviewing! 

 




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