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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Here's to Strategy by Lumedog7 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 407]
Summary:

Thank you so much to MistressElektra for my new awesome banner! xoxo

 

 

HTSv1

 

(Thanks so much to Selita and Liz for the AWESOME banner!)

 

Isabella Swan is the president and CEO of a major marketing firm in Washington. She’s worked long and hard to get there, and as a result, she’s a bit of a bitch. When her VP hires a fresh new manager, lured away from a competing firm, Bella expects perfection and more money. But this guy seems to think he’s the best thing since sliced bread, and Bella will not tolerate insubordination. It doesn’t matter how good he is. Two people used to being in charge and getting their way are bound to clash, and it’s a battle of wits. Who’s going to win?

 

Rated NC-17 for language and later lemons.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 144508
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2009 Updated: September 16, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: The B Side

Oh hell NO Bella honey...don't do this to yourself! Aggg I hope Esme has some tricks up her sleeve cuz she's gonna need them...

 
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Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: In (P)reparation

Oh...swoon...melting...I can't help but laugh at those two..they are so clueless.

 
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Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Stuck together

*stares at screen in stunned silence* Wow he actually quit

 
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Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: War and peace

Well at least Bella is finally being honest with him, and i can't help but wonder what Edward will do with this information...it will be interesting to find out.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: A walk and then...

Well that is definalty progress! So excited to see where it goes from here...

 
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Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen: The mason

*happy DANCE!!* I am so happy for this progress...I am dizzy with silliness...



Author's Response:

I love getting these reviews! Hope you keep reading and letting me know what you think. ;)

Hugs,

Lumedog

 
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Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: Sex and sandwiches

Dang...the temp in here just shot to well above normal! That was HOT...HOT...HOT!

 
Summary:

 

I had known him my whole life, but it had only been five months, two weeks, and six days since I’d realised I was in love with my best friend, and I still hadn’t worked up the courage to tell him.

Bella & Edward are next door neighbours, and since childhood best friends. Bella is the shy and clumsy girl at school, picked on by the other students in her class; Edward the popular jock with flocks of girls who like him. How can Bella ever express her feelings of more than just friendship for him?

AU/AH Canon Couples.

 

Thanks to Ellashy for help with the banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 43391
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2009 Updated: March 08, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Emotion Overload

W.O.W! I am so excited that Edward has loved Bella for even longer than Bella has loved him. Cripes if would only admit this little tidbit to Alice, Alice would definatly work her magic. While I feel sad for Lauren, I just don't tolerate her being an evil bitch just to get her way. She should learn that just because she is being treated unfairly doesn't give her the right to make others miserable.

I can't wait to see what you do next... =)

PS my breakfast generally consists of coffee and a muffin; all I really have time for.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Late Night Walks

When I can't sleep I get up and read...then depending on the material, i fall asleep to dream of it.

What an interesting way to start a story, I just love the whole love you from afar twist. Yuck, Lauren definatly sounds like a bitch, why on earth is Edward with her?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Frogs

Unfortunatly I've never had that type of reaction in Biology, I grew up in Wyoming with a dad who used to be a cop. So I was shown how to handle firearms by the time I was 8/9. I got my hunter's safty license by the time I was fourteen and had even skinned a deer and other critters before then. Call me Annie Oakley but I loved it...so by the time I was old enough for those Biology classes I was well prepared.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Captured My Soul

Bella may not want to grin evily but I'm grinning like the cat that ate the canary. I sure do hope Edward follows thru with getting rid of Lauren. It doesn't sound like anybody really likes her as it is...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Settling Disputes

Ugg I don't trust Lauren one bit and it kills me that her and Edward are still together. I get a bad feeling from all of this...

Stupides BFF fight: Hmm I guess that would have to be over this boy we both were lusting after. It's a good thing we realized early that he wasn't worth our friendship. Smartest thing we ever did as he turned out to be an ass anyways.

New Moon: OH dear lord I about fell out of my chair seeing the wolf pack...DAMN THEY WERE HOT!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Breaking News

ALRIGHT EDWARD!!!!

I am thrilled Edward finally got a small glimpse at what Bella has been having to deal with. Sigh...a date with Mike on friday...involuntarily shudders ewwww.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Sweet Dreams

Wow!! Edward coming to Bella's defense was insanely awesome!! I do wish it didn't end with Bella mortifying herself as having erotic dreams really is nothing to be embarrassed about. However I can honestly say I've had a similiar experience with my best friend, and it was embarrassing but we both got over it and are still really good friends to this day.



Author's Response:

Hehehee, thank you so much for reviewing each of the chapters!! I loved reading your responses. :) :) :) :D :D :D

I promise, the next chapter is already waiting to be validated. So it should be up by tomorrow, hopefully.

Thanks again, I'm really glad you're liking the story.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Games of Evasion

LoL...those two are definatly going to dance around each other arnt they.

Sigh... this should be an interesting party...I can't wait.

Sorry to hear RL is treating you roughly but I do hope it eases up on you. =)

 
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Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Get This Party Started

Oh wow, Bella is in for a real treat isn't she...LoL...I find it amusing that she doesn't like birthday parties. Oh well I guess I don't either as they are just to much work. I'd rather hang with my closest friends and have cake. My best Bday present was my Ipod. I love music and purple so when I got my purple Ipod I was exstatic!

 
Summary:

It's been 6 years and Edward hasn't returned. Bella is now living in Seattle as a homicide detective. The homicide rate has shot up in Seattle and when Bella's life is put on the line, she sees the person she was hoping she'd never see again. OOC.

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Excerpt from Chapter 7:
“I have to get out of here,” I said.
I walked right past Edward but stopped when I felt something cold and hard grab my wrist.
“Don’t touch me.” I said it in a way I was surprised how it came out. It came out in more of a plea.
“Bella, please…let me explain…” Edward pleaded loosening his grip on my wrist.
“No,” was all I said. I started to pull and realized my vision started to blur and I could feel a few tears fall. “Edward, please let me go!”
“Edward. Let her go,” I heard Carlisle calmly say. Edward slowly, and somewhat reluctantly, let me go and I quickly turned around and opened the door.
I ran out and down the steps of the porch.

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 37717
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2009 Updated: December 02, 2009


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Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: The Huntress

OMG!!! Oh honey how could you leave me hanging like that...OH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE....don't leave me like this for to long...

 
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Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Bliss

No worries...your makeup kiss was pretty scintilating...

And here we go with the newborns...Emmett is sure to have a field day...can't wait!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: What I Wouldn't Give

Uh oh don't tell me Victoria is following Bella...sigh...never a dull moment is there. =) I was totally blown away that Jasper volunteered to guard Bella but am thrilled that he did...like Emmett said Party at Bella's house!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: I Don't Want to Want You

First off LOVED NEW MOON!! I have seen it a couple of times myself and whoa baby...the wolf pack is just divine!!

Ok all I can so is Hell ya! The wolves finally meet the vamps and the show is about to begin...can't wait.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: What I Wouldn't Give

Why does it not surprise me that it is Victoria that is causing all the problems...sigh. LoL...I just love Jacob's enthusiasm for the hunt...he's funny. I still don't trust Cullen but at least he's off to a good start in trying to work towards forgiveness.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: White Horse

Ok I may be a heartless bitch but I am so proud of Bella for not falling into Edward's arms...he did a monstrous thing in telling her he no longer loved her so this is just a small price to pay for his stupidity...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: What I Wouldn't Give

Eeepp...Oh that boy is so gonna get it...*imagines Emmett and Jasper pummeling Edward for his stupidity*...Whoops sorry daydreaming of some possibilities. I am so happy that Bella could at least get some closure with the rest of the Cullen's even though i know she hasn't completly forgiven them.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Stand My Ground

Oh dear lord Alice knows...looks around nervously for Edward...damn Even I am still not ready for him to make an appearance...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: What I Wouldn't Give

Hmmm as much as I like Edward I am still seething...I mean come on it's been six years! I can't believe it.

 




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