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Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

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Edward is a FBI agent and is assigned to a strange case where he will need the help of his fellow agents and friends. His only problem? He has been assigned a new partner...


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 101843
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2009 Updated: December 20, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Game Plan

Stakeout....Fantastic....

I am however wondering what Edward's full story is, so many hints have me salivating for more info...



Author's Response:

Hi :0)

Thanks.  Yeah, the stakeout is going to forward A&J and (especially-*fanning myself*) E&R.  We will have E&B revealed very soon. Bella has a good idea now of what Edward's medicating himself for based on the vitamins he's using. I'll say that a combination of what he's using goes to replenishing the nervous system in the brain. The OCD points a little at it as well. I can promise that the E&B development is definitely the heavy plotline. Once Bella's secret is out, it's going to be drama-rama. They will be able to look at one another and really connect over the struggles they've had in their lives. In writing them I'm actually really glad that the other characters are there to be of some comic relief.

Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm on a mission to make the updates more frequent this month. Thanks for sticking with me on this. :0)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Set Up

Sorry but got behind on my reviewing. RL really is a downer sometimes. So things seem to be going very well with all couples mentioned. I loved Jasper's enthusiasm it was just to cute. Ohh i can't wait to read about the stakeout.



Author's Response:

Hi Lady!

I completely understand--life gets busy. I'm glad you're back, though.  You are our resident chemicals specialist, so you gotta tell me if I'm describing it right. :0)

I got such wonderful feedback with Jasper--he definitely lights up when Alice is in the room.

Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Stakeout

LoL...I loved the stakeout it was brilliant and oh my gosh i can't get over how much like 12 year olds those three boys act. Wow...Emmett sure has a magic don't you think...eyebrows waggle. This was just the ticket to brighten my day, Thank You.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you AJ!

I'm glad it made your day brighter.  Em and J are a trip; that interaction was seriously playing out and I caught myself laughing a lot with it.  Em likes to poke fun and J makes himself too big a target. LOL!

Thanks for reading! Much love.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Ghosts

Lo Siento, Dear lord what a devastation for Bella. Uggg as much as I want to hate Garrett i guess I can't blame the man for wanting more and being honest about it. They would have had a miserable marriage because of it. It does make me wonder though how long Garrett waited after he dumped Bella to find Kate and start a family...



Author's Response:

Hi AJ!

Yep--exactly! That really was the goal; their relationship ended and it hurt like h*ll but at least it didn't end later on far more painful terms.  It was interesting to me that Bella's past came out before Edward's but it was more of a surprise.  I knew that E&B would be the heavy plotline but boy, the light-heartedness of everyone else really has to outweigh the drama sometimes.  When Edward called J, I was thanking goodness--I needed to hear Emmett's voice.  I needed someone to crack a joke! Anyone... ;0)

Thank you so much for reading!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 -- The Shuffle

Oh Mike better watch himself or he's going to be on the receiving end of Emmett's fist. Lol...that would be awesome!

Awww Edward is just to sweet in getting Bella some daisies. And OMG Jasper and Alice are just to cute.



Author's Response:

Hi AJ!

Thank you. :0)  Yeah, this was a inetrmediate chapter but still has things going on. I'm glad you enjoyed. Next chapter the case rears back into the picture and the action kicks up.

Thank you so much for reading, rating and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Revelation

OH I Loved Charlie's subs...Those soldiers bring to mind massive eye candy and yes they deserve praise for what they do. I loved it!

LMAO...oh I just love Emmett and Rose...them getting together was great...although I am dying to know what happened in that bedroom...eye wraggle...Please update soon.

And Emmett cracked the mystery with a lil sweat...I can't wait to find out!

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi AJ!

OH, I kiss your feet for the stars--thanks!

I swear that the jump forward was intentional.  It's going to be fun to see the guys pry details out of Emmett.  I'm so glad you enjoyed.  Em & Rose are the physical couple, so it was agreed (PR's good feedback) that the culmination of their relationship be along those lines. 

The deets on the chemical are next chapter.  *hehee* We get all the boys back together in the same room.  *yay--I get major job satification out of that...*

Thankyou, thankyou for reading, rating and reviewing! 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 -- The Response

Wow whoever it is really wants to keep that chemical under wraps, christ they broke into the FBI building no less. I can't wait to see what happens next...



Author's Response:

Hi AJ!

Oh, thank you!  I know, right?  Who in heck got in the building?!  Not to sound cliche but, "the plot thickens."  I'm dying to pick J up off the floor...he's not going to be happy when he comes around. :0/

Thank you so much for reading, rating and reviewing! I'm so grateful for the stars! Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou! :0)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10--Hidden Enemies

Ahhh crap...there is no way Bella could do that. My guess is gonna be Jane. I know random but that is what popped into my head. It is so sad that Edward is so quick to think Bella betrayed him. Damn what happened to him to make him so cynical...



Author's Response:

Hi AJ04!

Yeah, we had to throw it out there that she had the opportunity.  Hmmm... *biting lips shut*  All of your questions (all but one...) are answered with chapter 11.  Yeah,  I thought Edward was being a jerk until I took into consideration his past.  He questions his own judgement a lot but there is a reason for that.  And unfortunately he gets worse than Jasper next chapter... :0/

Thank you so much for the review!  Love hearing from you! :0)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Shooting

*tears threaten to fall* OMG its no wonder Edward is so cynical. To lose his father like that must have been devastating.

Eepp that shoot out was intense! But I am relieved Edward wasn't hurt worse than that and Alex is back safe and sound.

I am also thrilled that Edward opened up to Bella...that is a major step forward...



Author's Response:

Hi AJ04!

*Hands AJ a hankie*  You know, we were about to hanky-alert the chapter but it really toed the line.  I definitely felt the bottom lip quiver and my heart broke for Edward.  It does put his attitude in better perspective.

Thank you for the stars and the review!  The shoot-out was intimidating!  I was freaking out because I saw Edward taking the bullet.  But, we broke the eggs and have the connection as the result.  :0)  I don't think Edward will doubt Bella ever again.

Thanks!  Next chapter is Em, Rose and the chemical...  *rub hands together*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Behind Closed Doors

OH dear lord...landsakes Alive...Heart is pounding...adrenaline is spiking!

What is that sick bastard/beotch goin to do to Alice! You are going to kill me with an cliffie like that. It is fascinating what you have revealed and oh so interesting. I've always wondered if the reaction of the bodies was based on molecular interactions with living cells...you've just confirmed my suspicions and I am so excited by what this could possibly mean.

Please update soon as the suspese just may kill me...Alice they have to get to ALICE!!



Author's Response:

Hi AJ04!

Ooo--sorry for the heart palpitations! Oh, I'm so glad I didn't screw up the chemical description--you're our resident chemicals specialist, so I'm glowing with pride that you approve!  I'm on the next chapter--I promise to not leave Alice hanging on too long.

I thank you reading and bow to you for the stars!  Thanks, AJ!!

 
In The Blood by fragilefoxes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

After 91 years, Bella returns to Chicago to find a mate. Edward mourns the loss of his humanity and his abandonment by his maker. Can they overcome their dark pasts and forgive? Rated M (violence & lemons). Edward, Bella, Emmett, Rosalie, Carlisle, & Esme. AU/OOC.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 89840
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2009 Updated: April 15, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Time May Change Me

Hmmm this is definatly a new Bella and am curious as to how her search turns out.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Choosing A Path

Ohhh did Bella change her beautiful boy and never know it? I wonder what will happen if they meet again?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - City of Night

Huh, Emmett? I wonder how you are going to play this all out

 
Summary:

Crossover with The Witches Of Eastwick. The girls toast to being royally screwed, and wish for their dream men. The next day, three strangers move to town, and the girls find themselves with three horny devils instead of just one.


Categories: Crossover Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 74912
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Royally Screwed

OH I am so going to love this...I love watching the Witches of Eastwick. That was  a fav amoung me and my five sisters.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Masen Mansion

*Raises Glass* To being Royally Screwed!...Hey a girl can dream can't she. =) I can't wait to see what tomorrow brings.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Library encounters

Holy freakin Hale!!! Damn that Jasper can sure get the blood flowing...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Garage Foreplay

Hot Damn Emmett is so freakin HOT!!! That garage scene had me wishing for a cold shower. I'm being a bad girl as it is reading this on my break...LoL... well worth it!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Revenge Is Sweet

*Grrr*  That Lauren is a bitch and then some!!! Bella is an artist...fascinating. I can't wait to see what happens at the party...Karma is a bitch but there are some days that it is justified in Lauren's case.



Author's Response: Hi, Thanks for your review. Karma certainly is a good thing where people like her are concerned. Glad you are enjoying the story so far. I should be getting another chapter ready for being up soemtime next week. Thanks again. Chelle

 
Here's to Strategy by Lumedog7 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 407]
Summary:

Thank you so much to MistressElektra for my new awesome banner! xoxo

 

 

HTSv1

 

(Thanks so much to Selita and Liz for the AWESOME banner!)

 

Isabella Swan is the president and CEO of a major marketing firm in Washington. She’s worked long and hard to get there, and as a result, she’s a bit of a bitch. When her VP hires a fresh new manager, lured away from a competing firm, Bella expects perfection and more money. But this guy seems to think he’s the best thing since sliced bread, and Bella will not tolerate insubordination. It doesn’t matter how good he is. Two people used to being in charge and getting their way are bound to clash, and it’s a battle of wits. Who’s going to win?

 

Rated NC-17 for language and later lemons.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 144508
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2009 Updated: September 16, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Time is money, honey.

Hmmm so was cruising the recents and wouldn't you know this lil synopsis caught my attention...sounds like fun...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Baggage

Wow Bella sounds seriously jaded

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: First Day

Whohoo so now we meet Mr. Cullen...ohh the angst is just to funny

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Boss from hell

OMG I love that Carlisle and Edward are brothers...such an interesting twist...lol...oh I can't wait to see how this goes...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Are you kidding me?!

What a mess indeed...I can't even imagine what is going to happen on monday..can't wait to find out.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Damage control

Sigh...Bella is really being bitchy but I'll hang in there...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Let's try to get along

Woot Woot...now thier gettin it! It only took a month and a half of being at each others throats to sort some of their differences...lol

 




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