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Real name: Monica
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Second Chances by lislar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 743]
Summary:

 

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Renee is a mess and constantly on the move, dragging fifteen year old Bella around with her from one dump to another.  Her life takes a turn for the worst and Bella is sent to Forks to live with the father she never knew existed.  Charlie enrolls Bella into a support group to help her deal with her past.  The support group doesn’t just change her life, but her intense attraction to her mysterious doctor and their subsequent relationship indelibly shapes the course of her future.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No Word count: 198415
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2012


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Meeting Charlie

Oh the poor dear...it is heartbreaking to read Bella feeling so unloved. Rennee really did a number on her...the guilt Bella has alone is just so sad.



Author's Response:

It is hard to imagine how difficult it would be to rise above the damage inflicted upon Bella by Renee.  Children who are neglected and psychologically abused often feel responsible for the things that happen to them as if they deserve them.  Bella has a long path of healing ahead of her.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Welcome to Forks High

Well that was one heck of a first day...I love your goth Alice!



Author's Response:

I love my Alice too!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Travelling Ink

Jesmond...poor Bella. The is definatly no anonimity at Forks High. I was so excited to meet Jasper...Alice seems like just the ticket to help Bella...so excited.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story!  And thank you for the reviews!  I appreciate each and every one of them!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: A Reason to Live

Holy Freakin Hale!!! Wow...I wonder what Jasper's story is? Everyone's story was interesting...I think James and Victoria are a bit shallow but definalty have issues. Interesting...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: No Turning Back

*Silent tears fall* That was so emotionally charged. Charlie was looking for his baby girl. I am touched by his devotion...I hope one day Bella can accept his love...it would be healing for both of them.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Looking Forward (sixeightshuffle)

Yipes...almost like sensory overload...Bella has definalty had to aclimate to alot over the last week. I am excited about her writing class though...I love native americal lore so her project fascinates me.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Morsel of Knowledge

You know i wonder what Edward's opinion is in all of this and I have to wonder what her feels for Bella. I'm pretty sure he's guarded because of her age but I still wonder. Jasper seems like a real caring friend and wonder what her thinks as well. I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

AJo4 Your thoughts and observations are all so fantastic!  I was so happy to get home from vacation today to see that you had left reviews for each chapter!  I can't tell you how much I love to hear readers thoughts and comments and to know especially that you are enjoying the story.  I love writing it, but sharing it with others is even more rewarding!  I hope you don't mind that I don't respond to each review as I am planning on pushing forward with the next chapter today and I'm eager to get to it!

Thank you again and happy reading!  I will be back to answering reviews as soon as I get some writing done. :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Fresh Revelations

Dang there are no words other than I am having fun reading.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Gifts

Ok sitting her crying my eyes out...Its amazing how much we take something as simple as love for granted...just the simple things nobody even thinks twice about. It was a beautiful day for Bella and I am glad you wrote it like it was...that poor girl needed it.



Author's Response:

I did hope that readers would feel this way!  That we should all be thankful for the simple things in life- friends and family who love us and show us everyday how much we mean to them.  There is always someone who is worse off, someone who doesn't have these things (like my poor Bella) and we all deserve to be loved. 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Sacred Spaces

Oh am exstatic that Bella is realizing that there is more to life than what she has been given. I am in awe just reading about Alice's room...

EGATS!! Edward is here....



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked this wordy chapter.  Alice's room is pretty amazing, isn't it?  I have such a clear idea of who she is as a character that it is easy to imagine all these details.  Thanks so much for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Stages of Grief

Yay! Bella is slowly opening up...so thrilled. I feel for her breakdown but am so happy that happened amoung friends. Emmett is just to cute...I love him.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story.  I really love all these characters; I'm thoroughly attached to them.  Emmett is adorable and he's a great person too - you'll find out more about him later.  Thanks again for reading and leaving a review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Forging a Path

OMG what did the jackasses give Bella! Oh I am so worried!! Damn...she was havin such a good day to until the end. Thankfully Victoria helped when she did or...cringe...I don't even want to think about it.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Shedding Guilt

Wow Bella's morning after really was a rollarcoaster of thoughts and feelings. What in the world is she going to think of Dr. Hale's visit? I do hope Rose can get her talking...

I am completly riveted and will anxiously await your next update.



Author's Response:

I love hearing that I have you riveted!  I will be polishing up the next chapter today!  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little story!  I really appreciate the praise!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Painful Confessions

*Silent tears are sliding down* Rosalie's story is so SAD! I feel for the poor woman. I can't believe they made it seemed like she asked for it...no one should ever deserve to be beat and raped like that. I hope one day that Royce gets his ass kicked. I sure hope Bella confesses and continues with her healing process...

I love that Edward is concerned enough to send Rosalie.



Author's Response:

I think that quite often women who are raped are considered as "asking for it." No woman, despite how she acts or dresses ever deserves to be violated or victimized in this way!  Rosalie's story is sad, but it is also a story of hope.  These men who raped her did not destroy her, but inadvertently made her stronger, helped her to evolve.  She is a strong, brilliant woman who overcame something horrible.  She is a model of the resiliency of human beings to rise above trauma and not just survive, but prosper.

I do love this Edward - he is as protective as he usually is, but also ridiculously sweet and caring.  Yum!

Thank you for the review!

 

 

 
Summary:

Edward is forced to leave his playboy life behind in Chicago and come home to Washington. When he is stripped of everything he knows, will he change his ways or risk losing everything? All human, cannon couples, OOC.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 27704
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2009 Updated: May 24, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: I Fought the Law

Eeewwww oh dear god not Jessica...god that girl is like a Hoe and half.

LOL I love how Edward's body realizes what his mind wont let him think... I can't wait to see how the dinner turns out.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ohh I love how you put it in the form of a newspaper article...it was very enlightening. James and Edward are cousins?!? Whoa this could get very interesting...

Just found this story so it is a treat...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Homecoming

No worries about the crack remark...I don't do it either but I imagine it's just as addicting like fanfic is for me. I love this already and can't wait to see what awaits Edward in Forks...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Reality

LOL...Carlisle is right...Edward is acting like a spoiled brat. That man needs to suck it up and grow up. Oh how I would love nothing better than to see some sense pounded into Edward. *Snicker* Fiesty Bella is exactly what someone like Edward needs...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Annoyance & Amusement

LOL...oh how I love how Bella's devious little mind works. I bet Edward has never had a woman throwdown with him like that. Silence is golden is it not? It's ok Edward needed to be brought down a peg or two regardless of what a crappy day he's had. I can't wait to see what happens next...Please update SOON

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Sweet Unexpected Meetings

LOL Oh My Stars! This is going to be one hell of night. I just love how Bella antagonizes Edward. Serves that boy right, he needs someone to kick him in the ass every now and then.



Author's Response:

Haha...thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Dinner Party: Round 1

LMAO!! Ok so the dinner is going spectacularly. Oh if Edward only knew how much Bella is a part of the family. Damn man is just to stubborn to realize what a good thing is in front of him. Bella has her work cut out for her. I can't wait to see what happens in the aftermath of the Best Man/Maid of Honor announcement...

 
Immersion by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary:

...Immersion...

 

Suppose that vampires "imprint" based on smell and the connection is immediate and irresistible. What will happen when vampire Bella Swan meets her mate at Forks High?

 

 

 

Immersion: involvement in something that occupies all the time and energy available.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 37435
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2009 Updated: November 21, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Kathie!

Tis me Marie! Finally was able to track down this story and already loving it. Been crazy on my end with Holloween and all...

Hmm delicious scents, debate team, and mind reading OH MY! I can't wait to read the rest, from what the girls have said it's going to be great!!



Author's Response:

Hey Marie...sent you an e-mail...hope you got it! 

Here's your preview of Chapter Two...Bella's POV:

That scent wafted over me again in the hallway, but there was a mass of teenage bodies around me and I couldn’t pinpoint it. Although I did decipher that two of the facets that made it up were something like that men’s cologne Old Spice…and leather. There was a third element that I couldn’t quite identify in the small whiffs that I could catch.

Alice passed me in the hallway when it was time for third hour. She smiled widely at me but her mind was busy with Gregorian chants…in Japanese? I didn’t even know she could do that! When I looked a question at her, she just blew me a kiss and mouthed, later.

The effect of her blowing the kiss to me set the small minds around me on fire. I just laughed to myself. At least the kiss would change the rumors up a bit. They were always the same: We were SIBLINGS, and several of us were INVOLVED. Boring! Now at least those that had seen Alice and Jasper together were now linking the three of us. Well, at least it was different.

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Thanks for reading!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ahhh Kathie,

Another wonderful chapter...sorry havn't commeted sooner. RL got in the way and had the worst Holloween ever, which ended with chemical burns on my right eye so havn't been able to see squat for couple of days. will tell you more when I have a chance...



Author's Response:

Hope your eye is better by now, sweets!  Sorry it took so long to get back to you...I had health issues last week...

Here's your preview for Chapter Four...which is already in the queue:

My sexual experience was minimal.  I had kissed Sandi once.  We had looked at each other and wondered, briefly, if there was something more there.  Our kiss had quickly let us know that, no, there wasn’t.  The laughter that followed, on both our parts, had kept our friendship from becoming weird.  We agreed to never speak of it again.  That was my only close contact with a girl. Well, besides the time those two girls had accosted me in the hallway after school.  And that encounter had just been disgusting…nothing sexy or romantic about it at all. 

When Bella and I started kissing earlier, that helped the ache in my body and soul.  Her tongue touching mine had eased the ache even more. That’s when I started to suspect that this soul mate thing was going to get even more physically demanding before too much longer.

Thanks again for reading.

Kathie

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aww Kathie,

You truly are brilliant my dear. I just love reading your stories...



Author's Response:

"Brilliant"...wow! Thanks!

Here's your preview for Chapter Four...which is already in the queue:

My sexual experience was minimal.  I had kissed Sandi once.  We had looked at each other and wondered, briefly, if there was something more there.  Our kiss had quickly let us know that, no, there wasn’t.  The laughter that followed, on both our parts, had kept our friendship from becoming weird.  We agreed to never speak of it again.  That was my only close contact with a girl. Well, besides the time those two girls had accosted me in the hallway after school.  And that encounter had just been disgusting…nothing sexy or romantic about it at all. 

When Bella and I started kissing earlier, that helped the ache in my body and soul.  Her tongue touching mine had eased the ache even more. That’s when I started to suspect that this soul mate thing was going to get even more physically demanding before too much longer.

Thanks again for reading.

 
Second Chance by christib Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 148]
Summary:

What if Edward had not returned to Forks after his first encounter with Bella in Biology? They have both finished high school and find themselves attending the same University. Bella doesn't know yet that Edward is a vampire and he wants a second chance.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 12915
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2009 Updated: December 09, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 "Stalkward"

Fascinating...I like where your going so far. Hmm I wonder if Mike is going to throw a monkey wrench into the plans. How soon is her turning soon...lol...well I guess Edward does have two years worth of catching up to do...

 




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