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Real name: Monica
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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That Girl by u2shay Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1078]
Summary:

That Girl

 

Summary: Bella told Edward in Eclipse that she wasn't that girl...but what if she was? 

It has been four and a half months since Edward Cullen left Bella Swan.  Abandoned by friends and family, she has been left to pick up the pieces of her life alone.  Desperate and with no other options, she seeks out the one man she believes can help her: Carlisle Cullen.

Set in New Moon and beyond.  Characters may be a little OOC.  Rated M/R for Language, Adult Concepts, and Lemons.  Romance with some Angst & Humor. Canon Pairings.  Edward/Bella 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 158902
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2009 Updated: August 01, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19--Theory

Wow Tosha!

This is awesome!! I've always wondered if it was possible for venom to cross the placenta...sorry the scientist in me if rearing it's ugly head. I love your twists...they are magnificent. I wonder what will happen after the baby is born. I can't wait to see what you pull out of your bag of tricks....



Author's Response:

Marie,

Thanks for rating and reviewing, Chica!

We might have to get together one of these days for a science talk...how are you on theoretical physics???  Genetics???  I have a story in the works that I might need some help on!

Oh, yes...what ever could possibly happen after the hybrid kids is born...hmmm....I wonder...LOL!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23--Forever

*Stares at screen with tears threatening to fall*

That was absolulty beautiful! There are no words for just how beautiful...



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thank you for rating and reviewing, girl!!

Don't cry!  Please, don't cry!! :)

Glad you liked it though!

Shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24--Almost Home

Holy Freakin Hale! That talk was definately needed, I just hope Edward takes the words to heart. I can't wait to see what happens and am excited for Renessme's arrival.



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thanks BB!

Yeah, Edward needs to know just how Bella feels about him...they boy is under such self-hating delusions!!

Shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25--At Last

Wow Tosha!!! I think I need a cold shower after all that. It was freakin HOT!!! I am so happy to see Edward letting go more.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26--Remorse

Sigh...oh Tosha that was indeed a brilliant chapter. Edward does need the encouaragement and i am glad Bella is setting him on the straight and narrow. You are just a fabulous writter my dear.



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thanks for rating and reviewing, babe!

Thanks honey.  This chapter in particular is very close to my little FF heart! :)

Shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28--Feeding the Monster

Whoo that hunting trip was scintilating to say the least. You have made one of my side note fantasies come true...Thanks Tosha!

There is so much going on in the background that I am just to excited!! I do a happy snoopy dance everytime I see you've updated!



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thank you for your review, babe!

It is so nice to know that I'm not the only one out there that wanted to see this! 

Snoopy dance?  That's awesome because I do one when I see your reviews! :)

shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29--So It Begins

Oh the day of Renesmee's arrival is soon approaching, I am excited and a bit scared as well. I remember my own little one's arrivals. Those days will forever be ingrained in my mind. I can't wait to see how it all works out for them.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30--Labor Day

OMG Renesmee is here!! *Bounces around excitedly* That was beautiful!! I am so happy Edward was able to help her. LOL but I have to wonder how much longer Edward will be able to keep the rest of the Cullen's at bay.



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thank you for rating and reviewing!

I'm glad that you thought so!  This is my favorite chapter in the whole story!

Keeping Cullens at bay is like holding back the tide...impossible! LOL!

Shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31--Lull

Wow, Bella and Renesmee have had an interesing first day. Charlie is probably beside himself over everything and Renee well I wasn't surprised by her reation. Renee is a mom so she can take it. =)

Tosha this really is a magnificent story.



Author's Response:

Hey Marie!

Thanks for the review and rate, girl!

Charlie is having a bit of a hard time!  Renee does have some good qualities every now and again! LOL!  Glad you are liking it!  Buckle your seatbelt for the next 2 chapters! --this is were I smirk evilly!--

Shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32--Unknown Factor

Holy freakin Hale Tosha!

That was Spectacular!



Author's Response:

Hey Marie,

Thanks for rating and reviewing! :)

I live to keep my edge girls entertained! :)

Shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33--Choices

Ohh Tosha that was so heart touching. I am amazed that your Renessme is antivenemous and a brilliant gift to give to her. I see our Edward is still as sad about Bella's change as ever , but that's Edward for you. He will be so much better once this is over. I cant wait for your future updates as this story totally floors me, LOVE IT!!



Author's Response:

Hey Marie,

:) Thank you for rating and reviewing, hon! (I hope things are getting better on your end of things!)

I wanted to mix it up...I do have a sequel in mind, after all! LOL!

Yes, Edward struggles with how selfish her change makes him feel.  I don't think he will ever get over it!  Updates cometh...and well, hold on to your boots, because I've got something coming that no one has guessed yet! LOL!

Shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34--Transition

Whoo sounds pretty painful...I am so relieved it's over.



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thank you for rating and reviewing, bb!

I think that it was...and no, uh...."I just don't remember" Bella's here! LOL!

Shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35--Going Vampy

Yay!! I am so relieved that Bella came out on the other side just fine. With all that was discovered about Renesseme's venom and all, well lets just say I was a little worried but had confidence you wouldn't leave our dear Edward to suffer to long without Bella. I can't wait for the reunion with Renessme.

You my dear Tosha are just an awesome writer!!



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thank you for sticking in there and reading all this!  And thank you for all of your beautiful reviews! :)

I'm not much of a sadist...so I don't torture the reader...too much, anyway! LOL!

There is some nice, fluffy vamp time coming up...then back to the destruction of E & B's newfound happiness! I'm terrible...I know!

Shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36--Taking Care of Baby

Ahh Tosha my dear, that was FABULOUS!

I love that they are hunting together though must admit Bella like to play with her food. Lol I can't wait for her to reunite with Renessme, I know she will be fine.

Hmm makes me wonder what the wolves are up to, I know they are not going to be happy to hear that Bella married Edward.

 
Second Chances by lislar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 743]
Summary:

 

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Renee is a mess and constantly on the move, dragging fifteen year old Bella around with her from one dump to another.  Her life takes a turn for the worst and Bella is sent to Forks to live with the father she never knew existed.  Charlie enrolls Bella into a support group to help her deal with her past.  The support group doesn’t just change her life, but her intense attraction to her mysterious doctor and their subsequent relationship indelibly shapes the course of her future.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No Word count: 198415
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: March 13, 2012


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: An Ending and a Beginning

OMG! What a beginning. It was so sad to see Isabella struggling with her mother, she even blames herself for not keeping her mother alive. That is just so sad...I will be sure to read more as I am curious as to how Isabella reacts to her new life...



Author's Response:

I'm so happy to have a new reader!  I hope you continue to enjoy the story and thank you so much for the review!  

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Meeting Charlie

Oh the poor dear...it is heartbreaking to read Bella feeling so unloved. Rennee really did a number on her...the guilt Bella has alone is just so sad.



Author's Response:

It is hard to imagine how difficult it would be to rise above the damage inflicted upon Bella by Renee.  Children who are neglected and psychologically abused often feel responsible for the things that happen to them as if they deserve them.  Bella has a long path of healing ahead of her.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Welcome to Forks High

Well that was one heck of a first day...I love your goth Alice!



Author's Response:

I love my Alice too!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Travelling Ink

Jesmond...poor Bella. The is definatly no anonimity at Forks High. I was so excited to meet Jasper...Alice seems like just the ticket to help Bella...so excited.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story!  And thank you for the reviews!  I appreciate each and every one of them!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: A Reason to Live

Holy Freakin Hale!!! Wow...I wonder what Jasper's story is? Everyone's story was interesting...I think James and Victoria are a bit shallow but definalty have issues. Interesting...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: No Turning Back

*Silent tears fall* That was so emotionally charged. Charlie was looking for his baby girl. I am touched by his devotion...I hope one day Bella can accept his love...it would be healing for both of them.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Looking Forward (sixeightshuffle)

Yipes...almost like sensory overload...Bella has definalty had to aclimate to alot over the last week. I am excited about her writing class though...I love native americal lore so her project fascinates me.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Morsel of Knowledge

You know i wonder what Edward's opinion is in all of this and I have to wonder what her feels for Bella. I'm pretty sure he's guarded because of her age but I still wonder. Jasper seems like a real caring friend and wonder what her thinks as well. I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

AJo4 Your thoughts and observations are all so fantastic!  I was so happy to get home from vacation today to see that you had left reviews for each chapter!  I can't tell you how much I love to hear readers thoughts and comments and to know especially that you are enjoying the story.  I love writing it, but sharing it with others is even more rewarding!  I hope you don't mind that I don't respond to each review as I am planning on pushing forward with the next chapter today and I'm eager to get to it!

Thank you again and happy reading!  I will be back to answering reviews as soon as I get some writing done. :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Fresh Revelations

Dang there are no words other than I am having fun reading.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Gifts

Ok sitting her crying my eyes out...Its amazing how much we take something as simple as love for granted...just the simple things nobody even thinks twice about. It was a beautiful day for Bella and I am glad you wrote it like it was...that poor girl needed it.



Author's Response:

I did hope that readers would feel this way!  That we should all be thankful for the simple things in life- friends and family who love us and show us everyday how much we mean to them.  There is always someone who is worse off, someone who doesn't have these things (like my poor Bella) and we all deserve to be loved. 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Sacred Spaces

Oh am exstatic that Bella is realizing that there is more to life than what she has been given. I am in awe just reading about Alice's room...

EGATS!! Edward is here....



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked this wordy chapter.  Alice's room is pretty amazing, isn't it?  I have such a clear idea of who she is as a character that it is easy to imagine all these details.  Thanks so much for the review!

 




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