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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Summer of Salt by lola_pop Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 776]
Summary:

The heat wave lingers. Sweet, savory and slick.  Jasper, Rose and I wade through the humid days, content in our relative isolation. We spend June through August at our family lake property, and this summer is like any other.

Until it's not.

An unexpected guest, new neighbors and a few stiff drinks collide to make the year we turn 19 sometimes better, often worse, but infinitely more interesting.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 84353
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Crush

Wow...what the hell is Tanya to Edward? Is she the sort of girlfriend? Oh I can't wait to find out.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!  Hope you enjoy what's to come...there's some turmoil in there but just wait!  

 
That Girl by u2shay Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1078]
Summary:

That Girl

 

Summary: Bella told Edward in Eclipse that she wasn't that girl...but what if she was? 

It has been four and a half months since Edward Cullen left Bella Swan.  Abandoned by friends and family, she has been left to pick up the pieces of her life alone.  Desperate and with no other options, she seeks out the one man she believes can help her: Carlisle Cullen.

Set in New Moon and beyond.  Characters may be a little OOC.  Rated M/R for Language, Adult Concepts, and Lemons.  Romance with some Angst & Humor. Canon Pairings.  Edward/Bella 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 158902
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2009 Updated: August 01, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18--Vampire Games

Awww that is just to sweet of Edward to help Bella dress...Lord knows when I was pregnant I needed help dressing just so i wouldn't fall over...LoL...

The music was splendid and they way you write about it I could hear it in my head and it truly is breathtaking.

Snicker...I can just imagine how horrified Bella must have been to be stopped by Carlisle. That was just way to funny...



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thanks for rating and reviewing, Sis!

LOL!  You know, I told another reviewer that Edward helping her dress was "sweet with benefits"!  Don't doubt for one second that Edward has a few self-serving motivations for helping Bella get dressed! HaHa!

I'm glad you could hear the music in your head...because that was just what I was going for!  AH, success! Yay!

Horrified! Bella?  Oh, yes she was!  No doubt about it!  I couldn't resist writing that, though! ;D

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21--Visitors

LOL...would i not love to have been there to see the look on the Denali clan...Can't...stop...laughing... oh it would have been priceless! I can't help but wonder what Laurant would be up to; my spidey senses are tingling...woooo I can't wait for the next update  =)



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Nothing like wide, golden eyes and gaping vampire mouths, is there? 

You have good spidey senses, BTW!

Shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22--Preparations

Oh my goodness I am so excited!!! *bouncing around wildly* Thier finally going to get married!!! did I mention how excited I was! I can't wait for your next update!!



Author's Response:

Marie,

Thank you for your review, girl!

I do love a good wedding, what can I say?!?

Shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20--Unexpected Surprise

Ahhh Tosha I am so a happy to see your story again. My computer has kept me out of TA since Christmas and I keep getting randomly kicked out because my internet is going psycho. But what can I say other than your a genius!! I loved how Bella was so protective of Edward...even though I love Jake...it was still awesome to see Bella get vampy on him. I loved it...



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thank you for reviewing and rating BB!!!

Darn computer!!!  I think you need some Cullen Family Tech Support! (AKA an extended shopping trip with Alice!)

I have to admit...when Bella went after Jake in BD...I was thinking...."DO IT, BELLS...end the dog NOW!"  (but that's probably because the whole imprinting on a baby thing, creeped me out beyond words!!)  How dare SM tease us like that and let little Seth get hurt...maybe I can take him home and kiss it all better! :P

Talk to you later, BB

Shay

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1--Paging Dr. Carlisle

Ahhh Tosha I find you at last...I am trying to catch up on all the goings on over on TA and the girls mentioned your story so of course I went looking for you. I must admit this first chapter is intriguing and can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve



Author's Response:

Well howdy, Marie!

It's good to hear from you girl!  Thanks for reading my little (sometimes naughty) foray into FF.  It has quickly become an addiction!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2--The Best Laid Plans of Vamps and Men

Oh the agony of separation...sigh...if only those two would see how miserable they really are. Two soul mates should never be separated like that.



Author's Response:

Marie,

LOL!  Don't worry, I can't sustain agnst for a lengthy period of time.  It will get sweet and romantic soon enough!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3--All I Want For...

Who cares if Bella was dreaming or not...that was hot!!!

Ok so it would probably be better if it wasn't a dream (for Bella), I can't help but think though that if it was real, Bella would be tormented by not having that. Sigh...again the agony of separation.



Author's Response:

Marie,

Thank you for going through this and reviewing it all!  I really appreciate that!  The rating is nice too! LOL!

HaHa...yep, hot!  Do you know that I originally started out writing this story for TA, but alas when I hit this chapter the PG-13 rating went out the window and Kathie encouraged me to write some of what you get in the next chapter...that's right, blame it all on her!  LOL!  I'm just kidding...but she did have a hand in that chapter and a huge influence over this story in general!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4--The Best Gifts

Oh wow it wasn't a dream!!! AWESOME!!

Wait! Then what the hell was Edward thinking leaving after all of that. Oh boy...



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) LOL!  Edward wasn't thinking...he was overreacting, as usual! Ha!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5--Is There a Doctor In the House

Holy Freakin Hale!!! Edward is gonna have a freakin heartattack when he gets home. Oh dear lord I sure hope your Edward doesn't become all tortured soul and stuff. I always thought he should have been just a slight bit more happier about Bella's pregnancy in the books but understand why he was terrified. Ohhh I am vibrating with excitement now!!!!!



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thank you!

HaHa!  "Holy Freakin Hale" When I read this review I knew for positive that it was you!! LOL!

It's a good thing for poor Edward that his heart doesn't beat! ::snicker::

Well, Edward is, at heart, a tortured individual, so I can't exactly throw that portion of his personality out of the window, but perhaps Bella would be willing to exorcise his...ahem...demons!  I'll see what I can do!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6--On the Rack

LOL...Alice just cracks me up but it is good to see her return more to her usual self. Grrr...Edward just hasn't thought about what his death would do to his family...makes me want to smack him...



Author's Response:

Marie,

LOL!  Smacking Edward...Hmmmm...could be a Fanficking contest!  We could all write stories in which Edward gets his emo butt kicked!!

Oh, you know it isn't a story with Alice Cullen in it, if there isn't shopping! LOL!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8--A Dog By Any Other Name

Tosha,

My dear this is heavenly...I love that Bella is having an easier time with her pregnancy. Her sharpened skills are awesome...still vibrating wih exitement...



Author's Response:

Marie,

:)!

At least you didn't nail me for this chapter!  For some reason everyone really hates my Jacob! LOL!  And (though he isn't my favorite character) I thought I wasn't too mean to him--by that I mean, I could have written him to be VERY unlikeable...::smirk::

Oh, we will be getting some insight into her new ninja vampire skills (and libido) soon!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9--Adrift

Excellent! Bella is pissed...

"My eyes narrowed determinedly and I shook her head. No, I was going to have Emmett kick Edward’s idiotic ass for me!"

I so loved this line. It had me laughing for like five minutes...the mental image alone is priceless. I can't wait to see everyone's reaction.

 



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) 

Oh, you know Bella...she, unfortunately, doesn't stay angry long...aka Jake in Eclipse!!

I loved that line, but then, there are many lines I loved writing in this story!  Em is...um...something...throughout this entire story!  I hope you enjoy him!  It will take a while for him to really come into his own, though!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10--Home

Ok way to excited..sorry not leaving a long review but I am way to jazzed to get to the reunion



Author's Response:

marie,

Shoo!  Off with you now!  Get to that reunion! LOL!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11--Tracking

Holy Hale Honey! Ok Jake is just a bit off his rocker but can't blame him one bit. I do hope he stops to view the entire situation before he goes and offs Edward...this is going to be Epic!



Author's Response:

Marie,

LOL!  What can I say...we won't see psycho-Jake again until, I think, chapter 20! 

What can I say...Edward's Vanquish was just a little bit too pretty in my mind! :)

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12--I'm Back

Oh dear Lord!!! This is spellbinding!!!



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thank you for your ratings and reviews!

Bad Cliffy...I know!  Aren't you glad that you don't have to wait?

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14--Vow

Wow their engaged....though it is killing me to wait for the baby talk; I will try to be patient. Your right they have alot to talk about. Brilliant work my dear.

PS...looks down shyly...my sis mentioned that i may want to point out that this is Marie. I don't think I've ever mentioned my penname on TA and I've commentin to you thinkin you know who it is...lol...



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) LOL!  I figured it was you!  Actually, I looked up your name on TA and it popped up a thread where you shared that info with Val...before that the "holy hales" clued me in...the search just confirmed my sneaking suspicions! :)

Glad you are enjoying the story so far!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15--What's in a Name

Awww it was so sweet to read Edward reacting so positively to the pregnacy. His tenderness is just to heartwarming...



Author's Response:

Oh Marie,

There shall be plenty of tender Edward...I'm just a sucker for such things, so I can't help but write it!  Edward is happy about impending fatherhood...but Bella--and his over-the-top worry for her--will always be foremost in his world! LOL!

Tosha

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16--Yes, Drill Sergeant

Wow Tosha this story is definatly worth staying up past midnight to read...sigh...I just love Jasper.

Uh Oh Edward is starting to get a glimpse into Bella's dietary needs...Lol...this should be an interesting conversation that is coming up.



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thank you for rating and reviewing!

Glad you are liking the story!  It was a real pleasure to write and working with Kat was amazing!  Jasper and Alice are definitely my favorite Cullens...can you tell?

Edward and Bella will have their little conversation with Carlisle in Chapter 19.

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17--The Little Things You Do

Wow...ok lemonade or not that was still *scorching* LOL...I have a very active imagination my dear and when you write like that will lets just say my mind fills in the blanks....

Our dear little Bella really is a minx...poor Edward is just out of luck...not like he's complaining.



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thanks for rating and reviewing!

LOL!  I think that Kris and Kat refer to it as "lemon bones"...haha!  I have a few of those in the story, since I feel that full on sex scenes can get somewhat repetitive and run of the mill and I like to mix things up a bit! :D  And LJ is right, sometimes it's just better to leave things in the imagination of the reader!  So, viva la imagination!

Bella...a minx...yup!  You have know idea!  I kind of see it as her having an inner wannabe succubus--with Edward as the sole beneficiary of her seductive prowess! LOL!

I was reading through some reviews and saw that you were reading "Tangled Web" by M7707.  Isn't that a fabulous story?  I adore it!

Tosha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19--Theory

Wow Tosha!

This is awesome!! I've always wondered if it was possible for venom to cross the placenta...sorry the scientist in me if rearing it's ugly head. I love your twists...they are magnificent. I wonder what will happen after the baby is born. I can't wait to see what you pull out of your bag of tricks....



Author's Response:

Marie,

Thanks for rating and reviewing, Chica!

We might have to get together one of these days for a science talk...how are you on theoretical physics???  Genetics???  I have a story in the works that I might need some help on!

Oh, yes...what ever could possibly happen after the hybrid kids is born...hmmm....I wonder...LOL!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23--Forever

*Stares at screen with tears threatening to fall*

That was absolulty beautiful! There are no words for just how beautiful...



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thank you for rating and reviewing, girl!!

Don't cry!  Please, don't cry!! :)

Glad you liked it though!

Shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24--Almost Home

Holy Freakin Hale! That talk was definately needed, I just hope Edward takes the words to heart. I can't wait to see what happens and am excited for Renessme's arrival.



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thanks BB!

Yeah, Edward needs to know just how Bella feels about him...they boy is under such self-hating delusions!!

Shay

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25--At Last

Wow Tosha!!! I think I need a cold shower after all that. It was freakin HOT!!! I am so happy to see Edward letting go more.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26--Remorse

Sigh...oh Tosha that was indeed a brilliant chapter. Edward does need the encouaragement and i am glad Bella is setting him on the straight and narrow. You are just a fabulous writter my dear.



Author's Response:

Marie,

:) Thanks for rating and reviewing, babe!

Thanks honey.  This chapter in particular is very close to my little FF heart! :)

Shay

 




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