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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Completed: Yes Word count: 482203
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears

*Tears in the eyes...threatening to fall....oh hell thier falling* I really loved Mama Bear Esme and cheered her on thru her entire rant...God I love that woman. Edward's declaration of his love for his mom had me trying to hold back afore mentioned tears to no avail. I am definatly anticipating the nearness of the prologue. Sigh...

 
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Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Underneath It All

OMG OMG OMG OMG...It is time! I a so excited!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss

*Looks at screen with a mix of horror, shock, and grief in her eyes* This is by far one of the most exciting fics I have read...I am astounded by how you write to elicit such feelings. I have so many questions concerning some clues that Trager has let out...but at moment just stunned that Edward has been shoot and Trager is down. Oh dear lord please update SOON!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Focus Fluctuations

*Breathes a sigh of relief* All I can say is Thank You that Edward will recover in less than a year. This whole chapter was a rollarcoaster of emotion for me. The angel kiss flashback was priceless, I loved it...I LOVE IT ALL!

 
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Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Declarations

OH. MY. GOD!!! That was incredible!!!!

Oh wow Christmas was just so beautiful. I cried like a baby when Bella gave Charlotte the figurine, tried to cool the fuck down after reading about Christmas eve with those two, cheered when Edward proposed and then swooned, and laughed so hard when the boys were fighting over driving the viper. It was a day to remember that was for sure.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: The Name Game

I am so glad you are deciding not to run with Swamsen cuz then I would have to disown you...LOL...

I think it's cute that Edward is already considering his future childrens name. I am curious to see what Bella's reaction is to all of that. Next up New Years...Excellent!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Outside the Bubble

Oh thank you so much for this. Your right if I didn't know what was brewing underneath, and you'd slap us with all at once, I may just have thrown something.  It sounds like there is just so much going on and when our two little love birds find out, well I wonder if they just may throw something...lol. Emmett is just a great big brother and for the sake of his sanity I do hope his and Rose's first is a boy. I can just picture him sitting on the front porch with a gun and making his little girl were a "My daddy is SWAT" t-shirt.

I am so happy for Carlisle in that the Cullen name will live on. Oh Esme is just the sweetest. Snicker...that woman amazes me. I find it down right hilarious that she can already see the twinkle in Edward's eyes...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares

Wow...Bella is definatly meant to work with kids. I mean the repore she has with them is simply amazing. If my kids needed a doc i would sure hope it would be someone with her compassion. To many times have I taken my kids to see a doctor only to be met with a heartless wretch. I have learned long ago to request someone who gives a damn.

It sounds like the wedding will be splendid and I can't wait to see how Bella's dress turns out...

 
One Step at a Time by chloey24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 120]
Summary:

Bella and Jacob were married for six years and have a daughter.  One day - out of the blue - he decides to leave her.  When she goes to meet her lawyer, she discovers that it’s her uncle’s best friend, whom she had a crush on when she was in high school.  Sparks fly and the rest is history.

 


 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 15896
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: November 09, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Begining of the End

Wow...WTH is going on? Must find out...

 
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Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Awakening from the Dark

Oh no that adulerating bastard didn't! Jake and Leah?!? I think I'm gonna be sick!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Bring me to Life

LOL...OMG the three stooges was great! I laughed so hard at the thought of the girls running away from them. You really had a similiar experience, you poor soul. *snicker*

Sounds like those three girls have been burning a torch for those boys for awhile.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: I hate my life

I just love the game "Never have I ever" God the things I've learned just playing that game. I know own some of my friends...LOL

I love you for puttin that in your story...its a riot.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Dirty Little Secret

God to many cheesy lines to think of...

All time corny one for me is "Baby are you from Tennese cuz you are the only 10 I see..." lame I know but this moron actually thought I'd go for it.

Poor Bella it would seem that karma was just spewing a little there at the club...LOL

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: R.E.S.P.E.C.T

Oh that Bitch Leah! How could she tell a child that?! Oh I so want to kick Jake's ass...for god sakes he lost his daughter cuz he was feeling up that tramp...GGGRRRRR Poor littl Nessa, I do feel for her.

WAY  TO GO BELLA!! Loved how whe took care of Lauren and told off Leah.

LOL...on a lighter note...I have no doubt Edward wants to make Bella's fantasies come true.

 
Summary:

Bella is a nurse working in the NICU who tries to take care of everyone before she will admit that she is missing something. Until she meets the new doctor at the hospital, only then does she realize that she was missing something.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 43106
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: May 31, 2010


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Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Nightmare

OH my I am speechless about Charlie...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Daydreaming

Just found your story and it really does sound interesting...will follow

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Masquerade

WhoHoo that was one hot dress!!! No wonder Edward couldn't stop staring. Wow it has been weeks and it's great that the saying absence makes the heart grow fonder has been the ticket for Bella and Edward. Wow New Year's is definatly starting off with a bang...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Appeal

Ok Edward messed up good so I hope to see some really sweet gestures, and some major groveling. Sigh...When will that boy learn? Although I am curious as to what Edward meant when he explained to Emmett about what Tanya said... fascinating.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Reunion

LoL Ok I forgive you now after that whole Edward yelling at Bella for no reason thing...really his words were harsh. I am glad Jake is going to be around to maybe stir up a little jelousy that may light a fire under Edward to get his act together.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Rude Awakenings

Oh no he DIDNT! I know Edward is grieving but seriously did he have to do that to Bella... 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Still Dreaming?

Wooo Hooo who wouldn't love to hear Bella singing. The song was perfect. It definatly is a small world, who would have thunk Emmett and Edward would be college buddies...lol

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Tests

Well Holy Hale and then some...that was awesome...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Stay

Hmmmm what a way to say you are...that boy definatly has a gift for making a girl melt into a puddle of goo. Although I am with Bella in not talkin to him...lets face it he said some very hurtful things... I feel a little softening to him and his attempts to make it up to Bella...sigh

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Double Shift

WhoHooo I just love me some Jake, he really is a good friend. Edward has been warned but i don't dout Edward will more than make up for it. Can't wait to see what happens.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Some Explanations

Grrr that James was a world class ass I would happily beat the hell out of him as well.  Edward better try his damn hardest to make up for his cruel words.

 




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