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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
Status: Member
Member Since: July 01, 2009

Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!

I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.

I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.

10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.


Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:



Outtakes Now posting on Twilighted.  This banner by yours truly :)

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Completed: Yes Word count: 482203
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy

Damn it can't that poor girl ever catch a break! Bella sure has had it rough...Edward better treat her right or else he's going to be in a world of hurt...

I laughed so hard reading about Damon getting a knee. Holy Hale that was AWESOME...serves him right the two-timing bastard. I agree with the girls and hope it is not to late for Edward and Bella. Trevor...I hope...gets his ass kicked for being such a slimy asshole.

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Date: October 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

Well to be honest I love how you are writing these interactions. I do agree with Emmett in that rage is good...rage is something we can work with. It will be hard to see those two go thru what is necessary for a HEA but it will be interesting to see it happen. I don't like Trevor...I get a bad feeling about him. For some reason I can see Bella walking in on him and nurse slutty getting it on...

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Date: October 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Roommates and Baby Steps

This story is awesome! Andy is a godsend and Edward couldn't have taken better advice. His little lunch speech had me forgiving him (well slightly) for him being such an ass. Thier baby steps to an actual relationship is just to much fun to read about and at times find myself cheering for opposing teams...Team Bella one moment....Team Edward the next. I can't wait to see how thier first date goes...

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Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Be Careful What You Wish For

Cripes! what a tragedy. I was crying when I read about the mother and her child. Having children of my own...well the horror of not knowing what happened to them would devastate me. Bella had an extremly long night but was so happy to see that Edward was there waiting for her in the end...swoon....

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Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection

Wow that first date was completly perfect for those two. LOL..I have to laugh about the sexual tension...Edward is so gonna bust something now that he has found this sexy little vixen as he puts it. He'd never have thunk to look at what's in front of him...

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Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum

Aww Hell Edward has me completly won over and has me forgiving his sorry ass for everything he's done. He really is laying everything out on the line and his vulnerabilty has me rooting for him and Bella's relationship. God that bald bastard is Deluca's cousin, damn what rotten luck. Loved Emmett's take on Bella being a Danger Gravitational Field. LOL...that's our Bella.

4 days is all they have left to figure out something for the girls, Jasper I know will be racking his brain as well seeing Alice is involved. Grrrr that Trevor bastard must be in some seriously bad things if he has James working for him in those girl pick up scams...I hope that doc gets his ass kicked.

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Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Bonding and Plotting

Aww Hell now you have me worring like the mother I am. Dear lord that Deluca family has their hand in just about everything. Sounds like the new Doc is the new boss, WTF!?! Knew that tool was bad news. Christ this is getting intense and exciting and I find myself anxious for your next update...PLEASE don't leave me hanging for to long...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: New Heat and Old Flames

Jimminy crickets! You most certainly left me hanging there...LoL honestly though I am enjoying the story. It brings a smile to my face and i get excited everytime I have a notification that a new chapter is up...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: The Unexpected

Holy Hale that was magnificantly written! The whole last date had me turning into a puddle of mushy goo and cripes that last night had me fanning myself and wondering where the hell my significant other was. I love it and can't wait for more...

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Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Missing and Misunderstandings

Oh my God! *looks at screen in stunned silence* While I understand that Tanya was just an old friend, I am still upset that Edward didn't take one of the guys with him so no misunderstandings could take place. Bella must be devastated! Oh lord this is not going to be good.

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Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Runaway Rollercoaster

*Lets out the breath I didn't know I was holding and takes a much needed sigh of relief* I am thrilled that those two worked something out and that Bella is safe. I really feel for Tony and hope that somehow the guys can keep Tony's son safe. It would be heartbreaking if Trager did kill him. The tension is mounting and I can't help but wonder if we are getting closer to the epilogue scene.  I am on edge wondering what will happen next...

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Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation

*dancing about the room like a mad woman* I am SO HAPPY! Maybe now that they are talking things will get better for them. James still creeps me out and hope the decoy works. Mel and Jacob should be quite cozy locked up together for a week...snicker. I am thrilled that those two are together for the week cuz it sounds like they are going to need each other.

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Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Getting Reacquainted

*Mwah* Ahh my dear such a magnificent chapter...I loved how you made Tanya such a lovable person. In most stories she is painted as the other woman so it is nice to finally meet a decent Tanya. I am excited to see what  comes about with Elizabeth and did you mention Friday? Dear lord I'm going to be bouncing around my desk until you write about Friday. Hmmm better go find some more distraction as your chapter put a few dirty thoughts in my lil head.....

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Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Empowering and Contentment

Annie Oakley returns and it was AWESOME! My favorite gun to tote around as a kid was a 30/30 Winchester lever action rifle. I loved shooting that thing and being I live in Wyoming there were plenty of opportunities to play. I loved the chapter!

Ohhh Friday is coming...*in preacher like voice* Can somebody say that Friday is a coming...let me hear you say AMEN! Can't wait...

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Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: For the First Time

*Looks at screen worried it's going to burst into flames!* Dear Lord honey that was one HOT HOT HOT HOT NIGHT!!! Is it warm in here? I see snow out my window but do believe it's warm. That first time was definatly worth the wait

Author's Response:

LOL...I'm glad you approved.  I couldn't drag out their sexual tension for so long without coming through for them when they finally got around to getting to business!  LOL!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

HOLY Fuckin Hell that was one awesome battle of the bands!! It was awesome and listening to your playlist while reading really put me in the mood to Jam as I read. Thank YOU!!!

Author's Response:

that was just a taste...the battle doesn't come until much later and turned out pretty good if I do say so myself :)  Most chapters I feel iffy about when I'm done with them, but the battle I didn't feel that way at all :)  Right now they are just promoting the idea to gain interest.

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Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears

*Tears in the eyes...threatening to fall....oh hell thier falling* I really loved Mama Bear Esme and cheered her on thru her entire rant...God I love that woman. Edward's declaration of his love for his mom had me trying to hold back afore mentioned tears to no avail. I am definatly anticipating the nearness of the prologue. Sigh...

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Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Underneath It All

OMG OMG OMG OMG...It is time! I a so excited!

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Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss

*Looks at screen with a mix of horror, shock, and grief in her eyes* This is by far one of the most exciting fics I have read...I am astounded by how you write to elicit such feelings. I have so many questions concerning some clues that Trager has let out...but at moment just stunned that Edward has been shoot and Trager is down. Oh dear lord please update SOON!

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Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Focus Fluctuations

*Breathes a sigh of relief* All I can say is Thank You that Edward will recover in less than a year. This whole chapter was a rollarcoaster of emotion for me. The angel kiss flashback was priceless, I loved it...I LOVE IT ALL!

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Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Declarations

OH. MY. GOD!!! That was incredible!!!!

Oh wow Christmas was just so beautiful. I cried like a baby when Bella gave Charlotte the figurine, tried to cool the fuck down after reading about Christmas eve with those two, cheered when Edward proposed and then swooned, and laughed so hard when the boys were fighting over driving the viper. It was a day to remember that was for sure.

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Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: The Name Game

I am so glad you are deciding not to run with Swamsen cuz then I would have to disown you...LOL...

I think it's cute that Edward is already considering his future childrens name. I am curious to see what Bella's reaction is to all of that. Next up New Years...Excellent!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Outside the Bubble

Oh thank you so much for this. Your right if I didn't know what was brewing underneath, and you'd slap us with all at once, I may just have thrown something.  It sounds like there is just so much going on and when our two little love birds find out, well I wonder if they just may throw Emmett is just a great big brother and for the sake of his sanity I do hope his and Rose's first is a boy. I can just picture him sitting on the front porch with a gun and making his little girl were a "My daddy is SWAT" t-shirt.

I am so happy for Carlisle in that the Cullen name will live on. Oh Esme is just the sweetest. Snicker...that woman amazes me. I find it down right hilarious that she can already see the twinkle in Edward's eyes...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares

Wow...Bella is definatly meant to work with kids. I mean the repore she has with them is simply amazing. If my kids needed a doc i would sure hope it would be someone with her compassion. To many times have I taken my kids to see a doctor only to be met with a heartless wretch. I have learned long ago to request someone who gives a damn.

It sounds like the wedding will be splendid and I can't wait to see how Bella's dress turns out...

One Step at a Time by chloey24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 120]

Bella and Jacob were married for six years and have a daughter.  One day - out of the blue - he decides to leave her.  When she goes to meet her lawyer, she discovers that it’s her uncle’s best friend, whom she had a crush on when she was in high school.  Sparks fly and the rest is history.




Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 15896
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: November 09, 2009

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Begining of the End

Wow...WTH is going on? Must find out...



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