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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Tangled Web by m7707 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 657]
Summary:

 

Edward, Jacob, Demetri, and Felix are members of the Volturi Elite Guard. Their team tracks beings that have either violated the Volturi Code Of Silence or have knowledge of the existence of mythical beings. When the team is assigned to investigate the human Isabella Swan, Edward's unalterable world is altered.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 110683
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: January 26, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Pretty Fly

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!

You are most generous by expanding your story, I feel extremly lucky.

I loved that Edward could hear Bella, I've always thought that myself that the physical connection would allow Edward to hear. I am happy you made that happen. I just LOVE IT!!!!



Author's Response:

It's so very nice to know there is such enthusiasm for more, so thank you so much for letting me know. It's also cool to know you feel the same about their connection, too!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Take A Lesson

Holy Freakin Hale that was FABULOUS!!!

I am so excited that you gave Bella mimicking abilities, this is so exciting. Ohhh the possiblilites of a Volturi showdown has got me vibrating with anticipation...



Author's Response:

Hope the showdown lives up to everyone's expectations - be sure to let me know!

 
Summary:

Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice.  The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to.  Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.

 

Thank you so much for the banner Selita!  You rock my socks!!

The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition Banner

michelleab09 from ff.net made me this fantastic banner!!! 

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michelleab09 is at it again with another lovely banner for the waterfall!!

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The lovely Selita made this blinkie for me! I'm so very proud of it! :D :D

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 119037
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2009 Updated: November 11, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Wakey, wakey Belly. (texasprincessaurora)

Holy Fuckin Hale that was an AWESOME STORY!!! I will be sure to track down this sequal as I will be excited to see where you take these two crazy kids next...



Author's Response:

Hey AJ!  I waited until you were completely done to respond to all your reviews.  You were reading so quickly and I didn't want to give anything away.  LOL!  I'm so very happy that you loved the story so much.  The sequel is already posted.  We're three chapters in to it on Twilight and four on ff.net.  You can find it under my profile. 

It was fun to read all your reviews!  Thanks for leaving them!  I can't wait to see what you think of where these two are now! :D :D

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: It's the best invention yet.

Sigh...yes even though she had to leave Charlie, Bella is finally (I hope) going to get some peace and have someone take care of her for a change.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story

OH honey I would never pelt you with rotten veggies over this on the contrary I want to hug you and thank you! Charlie is getting what he deserves..Bella doesn't need that crap from someone who supposedly loves her.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Look at what sleep got me last time.

Wow this was AWESOME!!!! I love how Alice put it...Bella goin to extremes to bring the men in her life together...lol...so Bella. I loved that Edward didn't leave her side; so sweet

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: For the better or for worse?

Awww Hell Charlie is really starting to piss me off...

Sorry have been MIA, RL kicking my butt and got behind in my reviews...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: That's why I need you.

Holy hell must read next chapter ASAP!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: For the love of God

LOL...yep that is what Edward gets for being selfless. I can't help but wonder how things will work out for these two. I also have to wonder just what in the world Charlie is thinking half the time, I do hope for both his sake and Bella's he puts aside some of his prejudice and work out something with Bella

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Okay, that's not sexy.

Akward is a little bit of an understatement when it came to the talk with mom and dad. LOL...This weekend should be quit entertaining...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: And I plan on giving Bella plenty...

Wow this is definalty an interesting plot...will be sure to follow as I am curious as to how your will have thier relationships play out.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.

Dum dadadum... Edward mentioned Bella playing with fire but I don't think Edward comprehends that he is the one actually playing with fire...LOL

Hmmm our dear Bella can be quit inventive when she knows what she wants

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: How could you ask me to do something like that?

Holy Freakin Hale!! Edward admits all his fears...for a bit there I seriously thought that he was just gonna let Bella go. *Still starring at screen in stunned silence* His last two conditions certainly do seem suicidal...can't wait to see how it plays out

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: He's got a knife in his hand!

Ahh hell honey a cliffhanger! It's a good thing I just discovered this story cuz this particular cliffhanger would have killed me. I love how you are weavin things so must cut this review short and see what happens with Charlie...ASAP

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Remember your window, Juliet.

Wow the talk with Charlie was INTENSE...now I don't usually condone back talk but I can understand why Bella was fighting so hard. I had a similiar experience with my father; when I first started dating a boy my father didn't like years ago my father basically forbid me from seeing one of "those" people. Aaaackk I could only take so much until I basically told him with no uncertain terms that I was making my own decisions from then on. Funny how i was 17 at the time too...LOL and you know what? I married that boy and we are still together...we've been together almost 13 years now... =)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Lalalalalala

LOL...possesive is one of Edward's best boyfriend qualities within reason. Charlie is playing with a double edged sword so I hope he doesn't cut to deeply...can't wait to see how this settles with Bella

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Oh no...no, no, no...not good.

Aaaacckkk Charlie is royally starting to piss me off and Jake is no better...takes in a deep breath. I am so cheering Edward on when it comes it his encounters with chief Swan. Edward is doing all he can to keep Bella happy and sane when it comes to the Chief and it warms my heart.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry it's taking me this long to get to your reviews!!  I'm really glad you're liking the story!  Charlie, Jake, and Billy all suck and it's only going to get worse, so be prepared. :D  Edward is ah-mazing.  hehe  All he wants is for his little girl to be happy and he'll stop at nothing to do that.  I love that about him. :)

Thanks for reading and all the reviews!!  :D :D

 
Summary:

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

 

Outtakes Now posting on Twilighted.  This banner by yours truly :)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Completed: Yes Word count: 482203
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Sympathetic Solitude

I am so glad you explained Edward because i just about had a fit and wanted to throw something at him. I love Emmett for going over and setting Edward straight. It sounds like Bella is going to do brilliantly at peds...

Yay!! Can't wait for the next update.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Warmth In The Darkness

Wow Michelle was a royal Bitch Extraordinaire!! I am so fuckin proud of Bella throwing her out the way she did. That sister sure did lie to her and know Michelle will pay the consequences of her own reckless behavior...LOL god help her if Bella runs into her again.

Awww them being codependent on each other is just to sweet. Yes I am happy Edward is awake and excited to see what happens from here on.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Reaching Into The Darkness

Oh wow this is FANTASTIC!!!! Poor Bella still has alot to go thru as does Edward but I love how you are having them save each other from the darkness. This is just fabulous!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Crankward

Congrats on making Top 10 my dear...you totally rock!!

Ok I thank you for explaining that little bit of a cliffie as I am about ready to throw something at Crankward expecially after the crappy ass day Bella has had. I can't wait to see what happens next...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores

OMG I just love the fact that you put in one of my favorite show!! I love Psych!!! Thank you Thank you Thank You!!! Your Bella is an amazing person and Edward is just so damn suportive that it warms my heart. I cant wait to see how this all works out for them. One question though...how did Trager know Tanya was pregnant?



Author's Response:

YOu learn that answer to that mystery next chapter :)  Glad to see another psych lover!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Home

Oh God Edward is finally out!!! I am glad Edward was given the green light because any more hospital time and he'd have gone batshit crazy...lol

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: For The Love Of Esme

Wow I just love Mama Esme, hearing her story was so heart touching. I just love it. No worries about sick babies I completly understand. ( Have three of my own) I will patiently await your next update, and i do agree this chapter definatly can stand on its own.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Truth Revealed

Thanks for the clarification that all is not completly well with dear old mum...I was thinking it was all to easy for Edward to accept considering he's a pretty complex guy. It is rather sad that Elizabeth self destructed like that but with the loss of a loved one its not easy, I am so glad Bella was there to help.

Can somebody tell me Friday's a coming...Oh hell Ya!

 




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