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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Tangled Web by m7707 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 657]
Summary:

 

Edward, Jacob, Demetri, and Felix are members of the Volturi Elite Guard. Their team tracks beings that have either violated the Volturi Code Of Silence or have knowledge of the existence of mythical beings. When the team is assigned to investigate the human Isabella Swan, Edward's unalterable world is altered.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 110683
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: January 26, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Merrily Did Sing

*Bows at your brilliant feer and thanks you profusely*

Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to light up my evening. I loved the first meeting with everyone and am thrilled everyone is glad for Edward's return. Rose and Emmett's bed story had me rolling in my seat...I laughed so hard. Again thank you for brightening my day with your fabulous story.



Author's Response:

It just makes my little heart go pitter-pat when I hear you're enjoying this - it really does - so thank you!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Spider Before The Fly

Whoa what a time...definalty must find out more

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Walk Into My Parlour

Eeekkk I am just to excited...What an awesome street scene.

 
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Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Within My Pantry

*stares at screen not knowing what to say...*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Call Another Day

Ahhh so they finally meet face to face. LOL...those boys are sure working for thier paychecks this time aren't they...tickles me pink.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Many Curious Things

LOL them elite gaurdians are probably wondering what in the Effing got into Edward...I loved it...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Behold Yourself

Bounces around like Alice...Oh if only poor Edward knew. I loved the line about his body recognizing his mate while his mind argued...so like Edward. I can't wait to see how you have this night play out.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Sweet Creature

Then let us snoopy dance together as I am enjoying reading your story; It really is quite exciting

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Soaring Up So High

Awww I just love Carlisle...I feel for Edward; its such a big step in admitting you love some one. I love how you portray Edward's struggle; it really brings out his humanity

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: How Brilliant Are Your Eyes

*Gasp* Oh no Edward the executioner...please say it isn't so...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: That Cannot Be

*Stares in stunned silence* This was a breathtaking chapter, so many emotions, Edward waring with himself and winning...Hazaaa!

 
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Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Dismal Den

Wow this story was so mesmorizing...I am in awe...

 

PS know how it is with the snow...I live in Wyoming. =)



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying - and yeah, being in WY you'd know about snow, too!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Subtle Web

LOL...squirrel and bunny population beware...about falls off chair laughing. I was so thrilled to see Alice, Jasper, and dear lord Carlisle!

I think you could blow Edward over with a feather when Bella told Edward she wanted to be changed...oh can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Got to get the family together - just wouldn't be the same... And yeah, deep down he wants to change her, but he's fighting himself so hard that he never expected her to come right out and say it!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Upon Your Bed

*Keeps fire extinguisher handy cuz I think my screen is goin to burst into flames* Woohoo if it is that intense for those two without acutal sex it's gonna be mindblowing when they finally get together. That was one intense chapter my dear. I love that Bella's fiesty side is coming out and putting Emoward in is place. I am happy to see Edward giving Bella a choice in deciding her fate even with his reserves...so excited for what is to come.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Prove That Warm Affection

LOL...I have to admit the age talk had me crackin up...Bella a deviant...LOL LOL

I am thrilled to hear they are talking, so much to happen still. I am thrilled with the idea that Bella will meet the rest of the Cullen's soon, that is one family meeting I can't wait to read about.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and sending the reviews - I had a ball reading them!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Diamond Bright

I love that Edward showed his intentions...sigh...it was swoonworthy. LOL...Jacob's and Demitri's comments had me laughing; seems Bella is capable of turning quit a few immortal heads. I can't wait to see how it turns out...wonder if Aro will try something before they can make it to the States. Excitedly waiting for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

It may not be according to his "plan" but he's learning to go with the flow!  And I just couldn't make her not want to marry him - I mean, really, come ON - who wouldn't?

They'll be heading home soon, but will that go according to plan?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Come Hither

Wow that was Awesome!! LOL...the champ sure showed everyone what he could do alright...Emmett must have been on cloud nine. Awwww i think the way Edward proposed was just the sweetest thing...sigh...Le Amore...



Author's Response:

Don'r know why, but that line is a particvular favorite of mine. You show 'em, Edward! Glad you liked the proposal, that was a difficult scene to write - get the emotions down without seeming over the top...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Fiercely Held Her Fast

OH WOW they met Charlie and got married within the same chapter...dang honey you work quick. LOL...I loved it!



Author's Response:

Lots going on in a short amount of time, but that's where the story is at - they have to get a move on before the Volturi! Thanks for letting me know you liked!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Within His Little Parlour

Wow...I know this is really hard for Edward but that is one amazing change. I wonder what Bella's thoughts are on this particular time when she felt Edward's teeth slice. Emmett sure knows how to lighten a mood with his comments. I find Edward's crimson eyes fascinating and since Bella will have crimson eyes maybe it will be a bit easier for her to see.



Author's Response:

Love Emmett's character - it's such a great one for making humourous points and comic relief!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Pretty Fly

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!

You are most generous by expanding your story, I feel extremly lucky.

I loved that Edward could hear Bella, I've always thought that myself that the physical connection would allow Edward to hear. I am happy you made that happen. I just LOVE IT!!!!



Author's Response:

It's so very nice to know there is such enthusiasm for more, so thank you so much for letting me know. It's also cool to know you feel the same about their connection, too!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Take A Lesson

Holy Freakin Hale that was FABULOUS!!!

I am so excited that you gave Bella mimicking abilities, this is so exciting. Ohhh the possiblilites of a Volturi showdown has got me vibrating with anticipation...



Author's Response:

Hope the showdown lives up to everyone's expectations - be sure to let me know!

 
Summary:

Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice.  The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to.  Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.

 

Thank you so much for the banner Selita!  You rock my socks!!

The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition Banner

michelleab09 from ff.net made me this fantastic banner!!! 

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michelleab09 is at it again with another lovely banner for the waterfall!!

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The lovely Selita made this blinkie for me! I'm so very proud of it! :D :D

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 119037
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: November 11, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Wakey, wakey Belly. (texasprincessaurora)

Holy Fuckin Hale that was an AWESOME STORY!!! I will be sure to track down this sequal as I will be excited to see where you take these two crazy kids next...



Author's Response:

Hey AJ!  I waited until you were completely done to respond to all your reviews.  You were reading so quickly and I didn't want to give anything away.  LOL!  I'm so very happy that you loved the story so much.  The sequel is already posted.  We're three chapters in to it on Twilight and four on ff.net.  You can find it under my profile. 

It was fun to read all your reviews!  Thanks for leaving them!  I can't wait to see what you think of where these two are now! :D :D

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: It's the best invention yet.

Sigh...yes even though she had to leave Charlie, Bella is finally (I hope) going to get some peace and have someone take care of her for a change.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story

OH honey I would never pelt you with rotten veggies over this on the contrary I want to hug you and thank you! Charlie is getting what he deserves..Bella doesn't need that crap from someone who supposedly loves her.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Look at what sleep got me last time.

Wow this was AWESOME!!!! I love how Alice put it...Bella goin to extremes to bring the men in her life together...lol...so Bella. I loved that Edward didn't leave her side; so sweet

 




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