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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Sway by Hibbleton Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 719]
Summary:

Single mom Bella finally has life under control again when a new PD starts working at the same radio station and teaches her that she doesn't have to be alone to take care of her responsibilities.

Epilogue posted!

Sway

Huge thanks to Shug for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 194808
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Hurricane Warning

LOL... I love how Bella is putting up one heck of a mental fight against Edward...sigh...though don't think that will last to long. We get to meet Max! EXCELLENT!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I don't think it'll last either.  The crash and burn has already been , so it's coming soon!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Hurricane Warning

LOL... I love how Bella is putting up one heck of a mental fight against Edward...sigh...though don't think that will last to long. We get to meet Max! EXCELLENT!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Meet Max

Awwww Max sound like an absolute doll...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Intimidated

LOL...Edward is such a goner, I'm still curious about Bella's past so I do hope you sprinkle some more of that. Also wondering about Edward's family.



Author's Response:

Chapters 8&9, then a little more detail throughout the story.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Hometown Celebrity

Oh Wow Charlie is just the greatest. I am so glad he is so protective; seriously glad he is not going to push the Jake thing and can't help but cheer as Bella sticks up for herself



Author's Response:

Yeah, I can't do a bunch of love triangle stuff, so I had to introduce the backstory and pretty much kill it in one chapter.  I just needed to show that she had options if she had ever felt the need to have someone in her life romantically, but she wasn't about to settle and once she decides to let someone in, it's because she wants him to be there not because she needs someone to take care of her.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: How to Burn Water

Wow I just loved the group time...Edward did learn some important info and hopefully has more to go on now. Sigh...Max really is just to cute



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's pretty confident but even confident people need someone to step up and let them know they're on the right track every once in awhile. 

Thanks for all the reviews!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Can't Be Mine

Hmmm Lauren really is a jelous bitch; thank god Peter stepped in. I sometimes wonder if Bell is overthinking this Edward thing, but honestly can't blame her in a ways. Have little one of my own and when it comes to them I definatly overthink things.



Author's Response:

The upside of all the over-thinking is that when she's finally ready to let go, she can be confident with her decision since she's already thought through the pros and cons rather than trying to figure it out on the fly.

Thanks again for all the reviews!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: The Flasher

yes Lauren needs to be bitchslapped for sure...ohhh if Rose got to her it would be perfect...

Awww aint Edward the sweetest



Author's Response:

Rose will get to Lauren . . . but not in any way anybody will expect.  Actually, she (Rose) doesn't expect it either.  You'll find out next chapter what I mean.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Epiphanies and Clarity

Can a girl hope Bella jumps Edward so soon after clarity...LoL Edward wouldn't know what it him.

LOL oh dear lord Rosalie will be Lauren's supervisor. There is a god in heaven. That will be great to read about!!!!



Author's Response:

That'd make a good alternate version for an outtake -- running from the laundry room, down the hall, into the living room and TACKLE!  LOL!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Everybody Knows

All I have to say is Crash and Burn Baby...Crash and Burn! I loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm sure you can tell, they won't last long at work, LOL!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Losing Track of Time

Well thier date certainly went well and i think I was grinning just as much as Bella. I love how these two are coming together.



Author's Response:

Thank you! So glad you liked it!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Exclusive

Major score with Peter ok with Bella and Edward's exclusivity...definatly going to make work better.



Author's Response:

Yep, good to have the boss on your side!  And in the next chapter, you'll hear why! LOL

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Leaps of Faith

Yay they are out of the closet and i couldn' t be more thrilled!! I am so excited.



Author's Response:

It was only a matter of time--they weren't doing a very good job at hiding and would've been found out by the masses in no time, LOL.

 
The Cullen Girl by evieeden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1103]
Summary:

Bella's family is attacked by vampires when she is young, leaving her the sole survivor. Rescued by Dr Carlisle Cullen, she is adopted into his 'vegetarian' family, consisting of him, his wife Esme and their three sons Emmett, Edward and Jasper. Struggling with her trauma, Bella finds herself developing special bonds with each of the Cullen boys.

This story has no Alice or Rosalie (or at least, not as vampires or Cullens).

The Cullen Girl Banner

Thanks to m81170 for the banner.

Cheers to the lovely ms_ambrosia and CatMasters for the gifs.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 61118
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2012


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Better

Oh this was so sweet. I loved that Esme got to play mommy to a baby, although it must have been a bit hard for her to let go. Vera sounds like a doll and a great friend for Bella. I can't wait to see how everyone takes to Rosalie...especially Emmett. I loved it!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh the fear of this poor child...to have seen her parents murdered as well...so terrifyingly heartwrenching...



Author's Response:

And there will be consequences for her seeing such a thing, but yes, it's a harrowing thing for a child to go through. Thanks for your review :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: I Know What You Are

Oh poor Bella...I am thrilled with Edward's self control and hope that Bella can be at peace soon hopefully she'll know that she will be safe with the Cullen's. That poor girl has been thru alot in such a short time.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Good Doctor and His Wife

LoL...oh those Cullen boys are a hadful...I love Emmett's big brother love and Jasper's acceptance. I feel for Edward for having a singer so close by will be hard for him...poor Bella...this is going to be so hard to take in. I am grateful for the Cullen's taking her in and protecting her...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Sinking Deeper and Deeper

Such emotional turmoil...it radiates with each word...I am riveted...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Something's Got To Give

OH that is so exciting...I can't believe Bella was out for four months!! That in itself is amazing...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: How It's Going To Be

Wow...I never would have imagined Bella crying for Emmett to help her with Esme...that is just whacked out crazy...This is so exciting. I wonder if Bella feels if she don't listen to Jasper, he'll eat her...it will be interesting to find out more...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Human in the House

LMAO...I was wondering when this particular conversation would take place. Oh dear lord the trouble of living with vampires...snicker...this is great...I can't wait for more...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Blood Red

Awww I loved it! That was truly a lovely moment between Bella and Esme. I am glad they had something to bond over...LOL...oh dear lord the idea of Jasper with cramps is just way to freaking hilarious. PMS would be even better...snicker...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Breaking and Entering

Awww I am so happy...the guys obsconding Bella's bear for her is just so sweet. I am glad Esme thought to send the boys over for a few momentos for Bella. Now that poor girl can keep her parents with her always...

I'm glad the Volturi ripped those sick bastards apart...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: First Day

Jesmond...starting at a new school is hell, and Bella has already been to the 10th level of hell and back...I feel for her...I wonder what happened.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Elephant In The House

Wow...this is just so much fun to read. Poor Bella having to live with such whinny kids. Those girls should be ashamed of themselves for trying to get to the boys thru her...Sigh...not unheard of though. Its to bad thier mama's aren't teaching them any better.

I sure hope things look up for Bella...with such awesome brothers though...things will...

 




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